Penname: Junebug66 [Contact]

Real name: June

Member Since: 24/04/10

Membership status: Member

Bio:

I am a long time reader of romantic and erotic fiction who has finally decided to get off the pot and put my love for this genre to the test. This is a test to see if I'm as good as my sister and daughter seem to think I am and I hope to meet some like minded people who enjoy a little wine (or whatever the beverage of choice) and conversation (a little or a lot) before a couple hits the sheets, floor, beach, table (you get the picture) and get busy.


Island Interlude is on hiatus, more because it is so hot here and I can't think cool enough thoughts (even my imagination isn't up to that challenge). I might have to work backwards on that one but Gabrielle, K.C. and the rest of the St. Sebastian Gang are on my mind.


A Taste of Honey is not on hiatus but Irene and Ares are really banging on the doors expecially since I had them taking a rest for a while in favor of Percy and Damon.


I thank all of the readers who took the time to rate and review as you can see I do answer. I also want to thank the readers who have emailed me with concerns about their favorite stories because I do appreciate the time it takes when there are a lot of stories on VC that are wonderful.


I have been told by a reviewer that I am cheesy so I hereby accept the title and dub myself Queen of Cheese (Extra Sharp Cheddar and Pepperjack are my personal favorites.) and We (note the use of the Royal We) have found a suitable crown.


My Crown


 




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Big Girls Won't Cry by Suprina Frazier
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 923]
Summary:

They messed with the wrong woman this time!

FBI agent Subrina Rayelle is on a mission to take down the people that forced her best friend Leesha into prostitution and then beat her to death when she tried to escape.

Refusing to even cry one tear of grief for Leesha until all guilty parties are brought to justice, Subrina sets her sights on Nevada where the crime took place. If only she hadn’t met her soul-mate on this mission – a beloved nephew to the leaders of the suspected prostitution ring and who may also be among the guilty parties himself. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 210
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3441
Read Count: 79615
Published: 09/10/10
Updated: 09/04/11

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Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 22.1

So the mysterious mailer is proved to be Mama Avalon. Good looking out and she tried to help out Leesha while she was at the P-Ranch.

I hope when this all hits the fan that Caesar recognizes that Ricky made his choice a long time ago. Even if he had received some kind of therapy I don't know if it would have helped him. You hate to say anyone is a lost cause but there are some people deep in DeNile.

Thanks for responding to my responses and thanks for sharing your talent. This story is great.

Big Girls Rock!

 



Author's Response:

Yes, Mama Avalon was the one that sent Subrina that book AND tried to help Leesha out.

It is my pleasure to respond to ALL reader comments. I value your input tremendously. It not only encourages me, but also helps me to stay on track with the story. Thanks for the continual feedback!

P.S. Thanks for the compliments. You got me blushing, girl. lol.

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Date: 13/11/10
Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 35.3

Ohoh who put the cockroach in Caesar's chili? Is he jealous of Blaine or has something else happened that we don't know about?

DD is seeing dollar signs for days and I can just imagine what this Christmas show would look like. I wonder that he doesn't have webcams in the girls rooms to broadcast what they do with their customers. He is so evil!

Imagine not wanting the women to be healthier but when Bree says they will have more energy he perks right up.



Author's Response:

Caesar is jealous of ANYONE that he thinks wants Bree. Can't speak about that webcams thing without telling the story. Just know that you're very close to something. lol.

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 12/12/10
Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 32.4

Bree and Caesar are both so willing to go the extra mile to help people they care about. I like how they are paying it forward.

Blaine is a dog in the manager and I hope Bree keeps one eye on him cause he is not to be trusted.

Good work Suprina!



Author's Response:

"A dog in the manger?" LMBO. Too funny!!!

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 10/12/10
Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 35.2

Didn't comment on the previous chapter but wanna say I like the chapters long and strong like my men. Haha!

As for this chapter, that was a very smart move on Suge's part to keep the house insured, so that fire was a blessing indeed. I am happy Suge and Neelam will be moving forward not owing anyone.

I take it back, Ricky is a yapping puppy (YP) compared to Blaine who is the Dirty Dog (DD) but they better watch out, they might soon face Caesar who could be a Junkyard Dog (JD) when it comes to protecting 'his wifey'.

Thanks Supreme One.



Author's Response:

I'll try to do a combo thing. Some long, some short. As always, I'm let you know upfront which are the quickies. lol.

Your opinion of Ricky and even Blaine might change soon. Keep reading.

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 12/12/10
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 6.1

Girl how could you expose a man of the cloth like that! You are just all kinds of wrong for doing it! Another dirty dog who probably heaped misery on poor Leesha while she was alive. Loving the story.

 



Author's Response:

That preacher had to go down. IT was time for him to stop hurting the innocent.

Thanks for loving the story! I started on yours (Island Interlude) today. So far so GREAT!

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Date: 10/11/10
Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 21.1

That is too funny for words, don't know if Caesar's performance was as raunchy as this guy but I see why she would be laughing her tail off. That takes some serious talent to do that one handed. That link alone was worth the price of admission and the story is fabulous as well. I wonder where Caesar's other talents lie?

Author's Response:

I liked that performance as well. Some of the moves were racy, but funny. lol

Thanks for the feedback!

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Date: 11/11/10
Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 16.2

Definitely a story there. Wonder what happened to Pretty Ricky? 

Author's Response:

It's a long story about Ricky's trauma. It will be revealed later in the story. No worries on that.

Thanks for the continual feedback!

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Date: 11/11/10
Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 15.3

Ok Caesar you've played your little boy games, time to man up and apologize for being an ass. Subrina you go girl, hold him accountable and make him work for it.

Author's Response:

"make him work for it" I know THAT's right!

Thanks for the feedback!

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Date: 11/11/10
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 12.3

You make me laugh. You make me laugh a lot. I like that. The description of the kissssss was priceless!

Author's Response:

I like making you laugh. That warms my heart.

Thanks for keeping the comments rolling in. U rock!

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Date: 11/11/10
Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 14.1

Let the fun begin. One seemingly standup guy and a sleazebag, wonder who is going to win?

Author's Response:

We will ALL see whose gonna be the winner of Bree's heart soon enough.

Thanks for all the feedback!

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Date: 11/11/10
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 12.2

Now what indeed? Let's see him juggle irate ex and potential lover. I want to see if he's good with his hands. Don't let me down Caesar.

Author's Response:

C had handle a juggling act. He's VERY talented like that. tee-hee.

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 11/11/10
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 11.3

Poor Caesar, a woman he is going to have to work for. Family loyalty or not, legal brothel or not I do not like the fact that he works there. Please let him get out of this unscathed or at least only a little singed.

Author's Response:

I don't like him working there either. Neither does his mama. No worries though. I'll get C outta there before he gets caught up in the P-Ranche mess (spoiler).

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 11/11/10
Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 21.2

Well between the baseball analogies and the purring pussy I don't know what to say except-Meooooooowwww!!!!! So he is good with his hands. As for Avalon's interesting timing that all depends on what she's got to say. It better be something good. Like I've fallen and can't get up!!

Author's Response:

Did you say Meow? LOLOLOL!!!

Junebug66, you do tickle me.

Thanks for the animated feedback!

 

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Date: 11/11/10
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 11.2

I don't know who keeps saying it but... Me Likey. They are too funny and sexy together. Now the only question is who is going to  cockblock because somebody has to. 

Author's Response: I likey your continual comments! :)

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Date: 11/11/10
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 5.1

Pretty Ricky needs to go to jail so he can know what it feels like to be somebody's bitch. I hate him too and can't wait for him to get what's coming to him.

Sorry Leesha had to die but at least she talked to Subrina before so that she could know what was going on and might be able to save other women from the same fate.



Author's Response:

You said a mouthful there about Ricky, and I ain't mad atcha! I hate that Leesha had to die too.

Thanks for the feedback!

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Date: 10/11/10
Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 37

Awww. That was a nice talk between the two women and Caesar coming in after cutting down the tree was like they were a real family.

Author's Response:

I agree. It was a special moment. :)

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 13/12/10
Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 36

Wow Blaine sounds like one crazy so and so. Bree really needs to keep eyes in the back of her head with him.

Caesar being jealous was cute and I'm glad he was thinking about how this would look from the perspective of his aunt being jealous too.

Mercedes being jealous was not cute doesn't she know she doesn't stand a chance of getting Caesar?

Somebody has been very quiet on that front where is he anyway? I'm sure he's going to pop up with some mischief soon.



Author's Response:

Junebug66, you're so right about Blaine. I still can't STAND Mercedes. lol.

If you're talking about Ricky being quiet, yes, he will show back up soon.

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 13/12/10
Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 34.1

Yeah back to the grocery store, you know I love me some food and picking out fruit is just my most favorite thing to do.

I hope she gets her veggies too, the cucumbers and zuchinni are calling Bree's name as well.

I'm glad Caesar didn't immediately think the worst of Bree and decide to cut his losses. Especially since she has given him several chances already. In fact I hope he remembers that later.

Good work as usual!



Author's Response:

After being caught slipping, Bree ain't about to go anywhere NEAR the cucumbers and zuchinni. LOL!

Thanks for the feedback!

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Date: 12/12/10
Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 34.2

Ah, I really like this chapter it was sexy, funny and touching.

Thanks for that Suprina.



Author's Response: Glad you liked, Miss Lady. You're most welcome!

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Date: 12/12/10
Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 33.1

Imagine going to a brothel to get away from temptation. It's a good thing Bree really isn't bisexual or she would be in big trouble! Temptation to the left, temptation to the right whatever is a girl to do?

They really do have very similar qualities, being humble, kind, thoughtful, funny I would add smart but the jury is still out with Caesar on that. If he really cannot forgive Bree when the P-Ranch gets taken down then he is a big ole dummy.

Thanks again for this great story Supreme One.

 



Author's Response:

Yeah, that is a strange place to get AWAY from temptation. But since the only person Bree is tempted by is at the OTHER ranch, the P-Ranch was safe ground. lol.

Your comment about Caesar tickled me. Yes, the jury is still out on that one. tee-hee.

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 12/12/10
Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 23.2

Wow Caesar way to go! Open mouth insert foot.

You are damned lucky that tray has not come whizzing by to cuff you in the head yet. Nothing like anger to improve a black woman's aim and imagine just how straight Bree's hands are. Why I'll bet she could throw the tray and have it come back to her like a boomerang so she could take another shot at him.

He should know there is a reason she is acting the way she is and give her a little space. Not make dumb ass comments and in front of witnesses to boot. Has he been drinking or something?

On to the next chapter and as usual loving it!



Author's Response:

So true about C. And no, he hasn't been drinking. He might wants a drink soon though, 'cause the brotha keeps screwing these up BIG time!

Thanks for loving the story and commenting on it as you go along. I likes!

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Date: 15/11/10
Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 23.3

Should have said previously glad you are feeling better.

Well it was good that Caesar apologized for his tasteless comment and in front of everyone.

He needs to leave Ricky (to be called DD for Dirty Dog from now on) and that entire place behind because it is like a cancer and if he isn't careful it might cost him the one thing he really wants...Bree. Can't wait to see how he redeems himself.

And now you are going to have me feening until Wednesday. I've said it before and I'll say it again. You ain't right at all. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the concern for my healthy. I appreciate it.

I like that new name you got for Ricky. Very nice.

No worries on posting. Wednesday will be here in no time. I hope to post a lot that day.

Thanks for commenting!

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Date: 15/11/10
Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 24.1

Supreme One why don't you have a link to that video? Bree and Caesar having a dance-off is something I would enjoy seeing. I am smiling at the thought of this contest. 

I wonder if he knows how blessed he is that Bree would even let him get within twenty feet of her? All I've got to say is that he better appreciate.

Loving it and it is Wednesday for me.



Author's Response:

lol. You and these nicknames. Ain't gonna even ask how you came up with that one for me. lol.

As for the video link, I put it on the second part of that chapter. I hope you enjoy it.

Caesar keeps hanging around Bree and he's gonna grow all the way up as a man. 'Cause she is DEFINITELY all woman.

Thanks for the continual comments!

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Date: 17/11/10
Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 24.2

I just gave a long heartfelt sigh. They are so cute together.

Blaine is really a stinking dirty dog! Victoria needs to catch on or get herself a boytoy to give him some competition. I wonder if he'd continue to stray if he had to worry about his wife replacing him?

Thanks for sharing Supreme One!



Author's Response:

I think they're cute together too. Glad we agree on that. lol.

As for Victoria, she's one of those folks that have to run smack into a brick wall before she wakes up out of her self-imposed slumber.

Thanks for commenting!

 

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Date: 20/11/10
Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 25.1

Avalon definitely had her back, literally and figuratively since she actually got one too on her back. I wonder what Caesar is going to say about that and if she'll care. Some men don't like their women to have ink.

I've waxed my eyebrows and legs but never done anything else and depending on how Bree reacts may never attempt it either.

This should be fun. Not!



Author's Response:

Keep reading. You'll see how that wax job turns out. tee-hee.

Thanks for the continual feedback!

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Date: 20/11/10