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Summary:

 

A Modern Vampire Tale 

Nahla Richardson is just a quiet sorority girl - Until her 21st birthday. Her life then becomes one hell of an adventure... and the ride is anything but smooth.



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Categories: Movies, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Graphic Violence, Original Characters
Challenges: The Chamber Grindhouse 3
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 6937
Read Count: 6913
Published: 16/04/09
Updated: 06/05/11


Title: Chapter 3: Chance encounters

OK, never really been into vampire stories before but this one is very intriguing. Please update soon. Thanks for sharing

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Date: 06/10/10

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Tiny, muffled footsteps bounded towards me. Faith stood no taller than three feet which I personally thought was petite for a four-year-old. Most of her cashew nut colored skin was covered by the oversized t-shirt she had draped over her shoulders. I giggled at the disheveled state that her dark brown hair was in. The curls hung loosely and frizzy all around her head; her curls extended at least a foot from her head. I briefly was reminded of Huey Freeman from The Boondocks. Some of her features matched mine exactly and some clearly didn’t. One feature was her big, smoky, blue-green eyes that stared up at me with innocence. They seemed to be framed with a few splashes of freckles. She would probably never know how much her eyes haunted me at times.


Sequel to And So They Fall . . Jake and Liandra's story continue.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 12638
Read Count: 10363
Published: 24/05/09
Updated: 28/08/09


Title: Chapter 9: Eight.

I am really getting into this story. I can't wait to see what happens next so please up soon.

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Date: 03/09/10

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At seventeen years old, Leah Henderson is homeless and pissed off as hell at the world. Pick pocketing is a trade she's become accustomed to and used as payment for what she thinks society owes her. However, her most recent victim is definitely no push-over or willing to let a "criminal" out of his sight until she is behind bars where she belongs.

Officer David Greenburg is a kind-hearted man with a loving temperament and wholesome family that, in his opinion, could use another addition and the young lady soaked to the bone sitting in front of him seems to be the perfect candidate. David's eighteen year old son is less than thrilled and more than happy to see her go, at least that's what he keeps telling himself.

Disclaimer/Credits: All characters and original storyline are the property of Renee Banks. I am in no way associated with the creators of any media franchise included in the story. No copyright infringement is intended. Photo found on gettyimages.com



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 13411
Read Count: 22561
Published: 31/05/09
Updated: 22/12/10


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Thanks for the update, I found this chapter very intriguing plus the Leah and Owen need to just get it on already the sexual tension is just too much. LOL Looking forward to the next chapter. Please update real soon.

 I wonder what Leah knows that has that guy looking for her, and since he doesn't seem to want her dead, how are they truly connected. Makes me wonder what Leah is all about.

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Date: 07/12/10

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[Reviews - 59]
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Tristan Danes is young, good-looking, and unemployed without a reasonably useable degree.His life gets turned upside down with the death of his grandmother and the inheritance of her small New York based coffee shop along with the mountains of debt that came with it.

Kira Moore just graduated from Boston University with a Biology degree. Her life looked good so far with the exceptions of a troubled law breaking sister and the inability to find a job. So what do these two have in common, besides 11 years of friendship they're technically married, well only technically. 



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 26320
Read Count: 10120
Published: 21/08/09
Updated: 22/07/11


Title: Chapter 5: The New Start

Really enjoying this story very much, Its getting interested between Tristan and Kira, two people that married for a coffee shop but I have a feeling that things are going to be heating up real soon. Please up date real soon.

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Date: 03/09/10

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Second chance banner 2

 

To become King of the Lycans, Ulrich has to marry. Between two of his own kind, Sabine, a human, catches his attention and his heart. except on the night of their marriage,she is murdered. 500 years later, Sabine is alive and no longer human but that is only just the beginning of their problems...

*banner by me* i was lazy on the first one and wanted to remake it...

 

All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Horror, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:No
Word count: 45707
Read Count: 60694
Published: 01/09/09
Updated: 17/09/10


Title: Chapter 20: author's note

Thanks for answer in some of the questions you could always do a lycan/vampire in love with a human hint hint..LOL you know Sabine and Ulrich have a child...I guess a little girl (mixed raced in more ways then one) and falls in love with a human (white boy) Just a thought. I am someone that isnt too into the supernatural stuff but for some reason this story caught my eye and I wait at the "window" for updates.

 

Yes I thought this was an update and got all excited. LOL But I cant wait to read the next chapter and thanks for updating.

Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17/09/10

Title: Chapter 19: the truth

Thank you for the update, this is one of my favorite stories and I never really like the vampire thing. But I love the relationship between Sabine and Ulrich. I hope Ulrich makes that bastard pay for what he did to Sabine. And I am looking forward to what develops between Ulrich and Sabine even though she is pissed off at him at the moment.

Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed
Date: 16/09/10

Title: Chapter 18: A gift

Ulrich and Sabine have so intrigued me and I usually don't do the supernatural thing. But the fact that he has loved her for so many years and missed her is a true love story for the times. I hope Sabine begins to get her memory back and falls in love with Ulrich again. Can't wait to see what happens next. Please update soon

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Date: 03/09/10

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Jonathan Denson isn't what you'd call the life of the party but when he enters a room, he commands attention. The only problem is, the attention he craves isn't the attention he's getting. It's just too bad that the only person he ever truly wanted isn't ready for what he has to offer. Left with no other option, John decides that he's sick of leaving romance up to fate and takes his love life into his own hands.

Disclaimer: All characters and original storyline are the property of Renee Banks. I am in no way associated with the creators of any media franchise included in the story. No copyright infringement is intended    

Huge shout out to KKMonroe, formerly CPM09, for my title. This story would have been called something I wasn't completely satisfied with if not for her genius. Thank you, lovely lady :)



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 12160
Read Count: 25862
Published: 03/05/10
Updated: 22/12/10


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

So I am going to need you to update this one a lot more often, because where you left it has me wanting to stalk you until you update again. LOL

John and Rochelle are just not meant to be, I think it was more so of the idea then it was the actual hooking up. I mean I feel like John never had anyone else and because Rochelle was already their he fell for her. But him and Kaleesa are a different story they are something that neither one expected and they make for a very interesting couple. I mean the man is burning toast for god sake. LOL

Looking forward to the next update.

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Date: 23/12/10

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Lay Me Down

 

Life is hard. James knows this for a fact in which she picked a bad time to quit smoking. Working long days as a housekeeper and taking online college classes just adds more stress. With a troubled childhood and a dark past looming over her shoulder, James is untrusting of others therefore lets very few people into her life.

That is until she stumbles -- literally -- into Tristen, a computer software engineer who won't take 'no' for an answer. He's different, kind, and fun. And French. He wants to get to know her, but will her past drive him away like the others and if he does stay, can he endure damage of her skeletons tumbling out of the closet?



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content
Series: City of Lights
Chapters: 15
Completed:Yes
Word count: 63166
Read Count: 67190
Published: 22/09/10
Updated: 06/08/11


Title: Chapter 5: Lesson Learned

That was a really great chapter, but I can't stand Pearl and I think it is about time that Pearl get a taste of her own medicine. James needs to stop letting her mother ruin her life and be happy. If Tristen is what makes her happy then she should have it and screw her mother for thinking she has the power.

 

It is time James took the power back and showed Trigger and her mother just what they have done to her, she needs to give it back to them 10 fold. James is strong but her mother makes her weak. I would love to see Pearl beggin James for something and James tell her she had to teach her a lesson.

 

Thanks for sharing and I can't wait for the next chapter.

 



Author's Response: I like that idea of James telling Pearl that she had to teach her a lesson, I'll definitely take that into consideration. In this story, no good deed will go unnoticed and no evil deed will go unpunished, I can promise you that! Pearl and Trigger will be punished for what they have done, but the real question is how? Melvin already told James that he had some friends that could help, so I wonder if James will tell him to go through with it. Only time can tell. :) Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/10/10

Title: Chapter 2: Life is hard

I liked the first chapter. James is kinda what you expect when someone has a hard life the way it comes off of her. The only person I don't like is Pearl, and I dont even really have a clue as to what she did to her daughter but I get the feeling whatever it was Pearl needs to be kicked in the teeth for it.

 I am really intrigued by Tristen and James. I cant wait to see how their relationship developes. I really just have one question is James her actual name or is it short for something else. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Thank you for sharing.



Author's Response: James is her actual name. It wasn't until after I had written and posted the story did I realize that my username is Missus James, LOL. James isn't my real name though so I guess that's okay. As for Pearl, I can't say right now what she did exactly, but I will say that it's the worst thing a parent can do to a child.

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Date: 23/09/10

Title: Chapter 4: Why a Songbird Sings

Thanks for another great chapter. I am liking the build up between Tristen and James. I hope Pearl and Trigger stay out of the way but that aint going to happen so I will just have to wait and see what you come up with next. Cant wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you. :) There will be a lot more Tristen and James in chapter four, but there will also be Pearl and Trigger. Those two are kind of like that nagging secret you can't get your mind off of and it refuses to go away until you slowly break down. That is what James is dealing with, but on the flip side, she has her best friends, Marvin, and most importantly Tristen there to build her back up.  

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Date: 05/10/10

Title: Chapter 12: Celebrate Good Times!

WOW!!!!!!



Author's Response:

LMAO!

Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/05/11

Title: Chapter 15: Joyeux Noël (Part II)

Well, as always I enjoyed the chapter, from beginning to end. I am glad you let us see into the world of Tristen's family a little. I mean here we have Tristen and Tricia falling in love with American's in which their mother Adele has a problem with, why because of the way she was raised, Instead of seeing the people that her children love all she sees is their nationality. But at the end of the day the siblings chose their hearts over their mother. Good for the both of them. I loved how you showed us James' fear when it came to her marrying him. Basically she never had a chance at with Pearl as a role model. But as Tristen said, I don't want a good wife or a good mother I want you." Those were the most powerful words that Tristen could have said. She might not be the prefect mother or wife but Tristen doesn't want perfect he want James and James will love and protect her family the way she wasn't protected.

I loved how James felt guilty for Tristen and his mother's fight when it's really not about her but his mother's problem. Some of it might stem from the fact that Adele doesn't know James. Tristen and Tricia were both wrong in springing the loves of their lives on their mother. I think is Adele was giving the chance she might have loved Kevin and James because she got to know them. But then again it might not have made a difference. Who knows. I am glad that Tristen told James the truth about their conversation because fact is if James were left up to her own devices she might have left the ring on the night stand while Tristen was sleeping and left so that Tristen and his mother could make up. Tristen needed to tell James the truth and James needed to hear it, Tristen then showed James his heart yet again. And a little love in the afternoon never hurt anyone. Jame braiding Tristen's hair was hilarious. The niece what a suprise and the turn of event. Looking forward to seeing what comes next.



Author's Response:

"I am glad that Tristen told James the truth about their conversation because fact is if James were left up to her own devices she might have left the ring on the night stand while Tristen was sleeping and left so that Tristen and his mother could make up." <-- Let me comment on this particular statement. You are absolutely right. James would have left Tristen, so him and his mom could make up even if killed her to do so. James is that kind of person. She had a family, but she didn't have a family like Tristen. She blames herself for breaking his family apart and wants to bring it back together. She will try to mend the Molyneux family in the sequel. Thanks!

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Date: 06/08/11

Title: Chapter 6: Monsters, Songbirds, and Weaves

I loved this chapter, it is time James take her life back, he sicko mother and her rapist boy friend need to learn that you karma is a bitch and it comes back to bite you in the ass especially when you beat it down and think its not going to fight its way back up.

I hope Tristen gets better and James is by his side. I am looking forward to James showing Pearl and Trigger the type of person she truly is.

Thanks for the update. Looking forward to reading the next chapter.



Author's Response: You are so right! Karma will most definitely bite you in the ass if you keep taunting it with a bone when you think it's down. James didn't want to have to deal with Pearl and Trigger because she knew that being around them would make her revert back to her old ways, but what Trigger was pretty much the last straw and now if need be, she will revert back to the cold monster. James may appear to be obedient, naive, or even innocent, but she dealt the streets for many years and was feared by even grown men so they don't know what they are dealing with. Thanks! :)

Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23/10/10

Title: Chapter 14: Joyeux Noël (Part I)

OK, I have to say I enjoyed this capter very much. James trying to figure out how to tell Tristen that she was havingnot one but two babies was priceless because she was trying to gage his reaction. She was a little scared to tell him because having one is scary enough but two, she must have been freaking out in side. I lovve how Tristen got down on his knees and mad a promise to James belly. Those two really love each other and have been through a lot that the surprise of having twins is a gift they deserve. adele irks the crap out of me because if she took that stick out her butt long enough to get over herself she would see that her son is over the moon in love with James. Just because she had some bad experience with an American, most likely got her heart broken doesn't mean she should take that out on all Americans.

Tricia and Natalie are hilarious and what Tricia said to the child was funny as hell. Natalie should have had a come back for it. But I love how open and loving Tristen's family is to James. His mother might need a shift kick in the ass but hopefully she will come around or be told until she gets some manners her ass aint welcomed.

I might be the only one but I loved the proposal so simple but yet so meaningful all at the same time. Him asking her in French would have had me ripping off his clothes before I gave him my answer but. The surprise look on James' face after her conversation with Tricia was priceless. Tristen loves James very much and him wanting to make her his wife is a beautiful thing.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

P.S. It is Sunday not Saturday, that this was posted. LOL



Author's Response:

James was definitely trying to gauge his reaction. She was terrified out of her mind and wanted to wait until after Christmas to tell him because she feared that if she had told him beforehand that he would be so upset. Luckily, it was quite the opposite. I thought the promise Tristen made to James' belly was very important because yes, he was shocked at the news and yes, he was mad at her for not telling him earlier, he will still love his children and her regardless. Adele is a very unlikeable and misunderstood character who will be explained later on, LOL. For now, she's the evil witch.

Tricia and Natalie are definitely a funny duo. Tristen treats Natalie like a niece, but Tricia treats Natalie like a younger sister, LOL. Natalie should have given a snappy comeback, that will have to wait for later time! As for Tristen's proposal, I shed a few tears as I wrote it because it fit James and Tristen's personalities so perfect. Now we can only wait until the next update. :) Thanks, Tasha!

Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31/07/11

Title: Chapter 9: Say It Again

One of my favorite chapters so far. I love how Tristen is so open and honest with James about his life. She feared telling him she loved him, but eventually told him which is a big step for her. She deserves happiness even if it might not last forever since he will have to leave in 5 weeks but who knows maybe she will go with him, maybe she won't but I think this experience with her loving Tristen and being loved by Tristen will open James up to other adventures and things.

Looking forward to the next chapter. Update soon.



Author's Response: Thank you, Jovan. :) Yes, James finally telling Tristen that she loved him was a HUGE step for her and really opens up for more character development. I think Tristen would most likely ask for a little more time to stay in America, but you never know, James decide to go with him to France if he asked. Thank you!

Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23/12/10

Title: Chapter 13: Closure

I really liked this chapter and it so fit the chapter title of  Closure. James has been running from her past that sometimes she let it cloud her happiness with the things/peeps that are right in front of her. Little by little she has grown from a closed off woman to a woman wanting to be loved and to give love in return. The conversation with Pearl was interesting on so many levels because on the one had there is a new player in James' life her father and on the other how can one trust that Pearl is being truthful. Her forgive Pearl and Trigger is the only way James will ever be free and she is now longer waiting for her freedom but taking it.

I loved the scene between Tristen and James because she is following her happiness even though she doesn't know what Paris will bring she is willing to give it a try. James is so about the present and the future now that whatever comes her way will just be another learning block in the ways that have become her life. Now can we get a little "Office Nookie" with a naked Tristen, because I need my menz. LOL Looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

James has definitely grown throughout the last few chapters and this chapter has been a really big leap in development. All she ever wanted was to be loved by Pearl and with such a negative experience with her childhood, it shut her off trying to find love. Then Tristen found her and taught her how to open up. As James said, she still has baggage, but it's still a start for her. James' father will definitely be a player in the future, but for now the story will concentrate on James' adventures in France.

Office nookie? Oh, lord, LOL! There might be so nookie in the next chapter, watch out! LOL

Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19/06/11

Title: Lay Me Down

James is one tough cookie who will protect herself and her baby at all cost. She isn't taking crap from Trigger or Pearl anymore and that might make her stupid, but I think her strength is going to be what saves her life. That lullaby was a bitter sweet one seeing as though she really doesn't have any real good memories of her and Pearl. I think that will make her a better mother even if she is scared right now. Looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response: Yes, James is definitely not the same James as she was before and especially now that she is pregnant, she is even MORE determined to protect herself and her child from Trigger and Pearl's agendas -- whatever agendas that may be. And 'Summertime' is a very bittersweet lullaby for her, a lullaby only wished her own mother would have singed to her as a child.

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Date: 16/04/11

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Being eighteen is hard enough, but when you factor in the shape shifting, howling at the moon, and a serious craving for rabbit and deer meat being eighteen is less than easy. Meet Edison, sister to three brothers, daughter of Josephine and Tobias Banks. Her and her family, who share the same animalistic habits, have just moved to Brookesville.

When several of the local residents go missing only to be found dead in the woods, Edison suspects it more than the everyday animal attacks. All clues point to the Taylors and their less than normal son, Aiden who is devastatingly attractive, but has secrets even his beyond strange family can't explain. But when one of Edison's friends goes missing along side Aiden's girlfriend, Edison teams up with Aiden in hopes of finding whatever is snacking on the locals of Brookesville.


Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Fantasy, Friendship, Romance, Science Fiction , Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 13806
Read Count: 2542
Published: 31/10/10
Updated: 23/11/10


Title: Chapter 2: Can't Escape

I actually enjoyed the slowness of this chapter I got to know who Edison. I am looking forward to seeing the relationship between Todd, Ryan and Edison develop. And can so relate to Edison on so many levels. But I think she needs to give Todd a chance. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: YAY! I'm glad you liked how slow it was, it was a killer to actually get it presentable. I'm so happy to hear that you actually get Edison, she's quite the character. As for the Todd, Ryan, and Edison relationship it's going to be quite a ride the next couple of chapters. 

Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/11/10

Title: Chapter 3: Let's Start Over

Thanks for another great update. I am enjoying this story and can't wait to see what comes next. Edison is an interesting character and the fact that she is interested but not interested in Todd is very interesting. I love how you have defined her character because she seems to play a very important part. Looking forward to the next update.

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Date: 06/11/10

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[Reviews - 64]
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Advertising tycoon Alandra Meyer wants a child. The only problem is she doesn’t have any prospects, nor does she really want them. She’d rather cut off her left arm than rely on a man to do a damn thing for her. Men equal distractions and distractions just aren’t an option in her world. The only person she can depend to conceive the child she so desperately wants is herself…and possibly her oldest friend, Julio. However, before he agrees to be her humble donor, he has a favor of his own to ask. After a tug-of-war between the two, Alandra obliges her best friend's request. Hoping for the best but expecting the worst, she awaits said request to walk through her door that Monday morning, unbeknownst to either of them that his presence will change both of their lives forever.

Disclaimer: All characters and original storyline are the property of Renee Banks. I am in no way associated with the creators of any media franchise included in the story. No copyright infringement is intended. 



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 16062
Read Count: 20529
Published: 08/11/10
Updated: 15/12/10


Title: Chapter 2: The Beginning

OK, even though he is gay can I have Julio??? Please

That was a great frist chapter and I am looking forward to more. I would just like to say maybe writing this story will get your juices flowing to continue the others since I am in love with your stories and very sorry that they haven't been updated.

But anyway I love the friendship between Julio and Alandra they have the type of friendship that we only wish to have and I can't wait to see the dynamics that Julio's cousins plays in their lives. Looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks for sharing.

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Date: 08/11/10

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 Beautiful Banner by Missus James

 

When Mia, a beautiful southern black lady, finds herself as the personal assistant to two of the most gorgeous white men she's ever met, she finds herself in an unlikely situation that will challenge everything she thought she wanted in a normal life. 

 

Mia Shannon struggles to adjust to her life in San Francisco after moving there from the south. It's hard being the only black girl at the company she works for and even harder when she's the personal assistant to two of the most wealthiest, gorgeous men white men she's ever seen. Mia finds herself having feelings for both her bosses and realizes nothing can ever become of them except to exist in her fantasies.

Kale and Aidan fell in love with Mia the moment she walked into their office for an interview for the personal assistant position. It took them almost four years to get close enough to Mia where she was comfortable enough to be around them as best friends. Now they want more and they are determine to make Mia the only woman in their life. 

Loving Mia was first posted on Fictionpress, then later transferred to The Chamber by KatherineMadison. Please do not copy and post my story to any other sites without my permission. Thank you! This story is an original fiction completely written from my overactive imagination. 

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+, Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 25
Completed:Yes
Word count: 96215
Read Count: 229046
Published: 16/11/10
Updated: 16/02/11


Title: Chapter 18: Torn

Another great chapter. I think the chapter title fit the moment. Everyone from Mia to Kale to Aidan was torn about the what was happening around them.

I mean Aidan is so about protecting Mia that he sometimes forgets that she isn't a "China Doll" that can't handle him having a true open and honest conversation with her. He has been the protector so long that sometimes I think he forgets that he doesn't have to smoother others to make them see his way. I am glad that Mia made him realize that when she shut him out.

Kale cracks me up because for such a "Bully" at times he surely doesn't know how to handle the other emotionsthat come along with being in a serious relationship. He couldn't wrap his mind around being with Mia and Aidan not being their because Aidan is always there. Him telling Aidan to fix things with Mia or they would be over was too much. All I kept thinking was Kale would break up with Aidan but Kale would not know how to function.

Mia doesn't truly understand the powers she has over Kale and Aidan, and even other men. She doesn't see how she puts herself in certain situations where others feel like they have to manipulate her in a sense to keep her safe. Mia could probably protect herself, but I don't think she always understands who "they" are that she should be protecting herself from. She trust so openly that it makes sense for Aidan to want to manipulate her.

In the end each one of the main characters where torn and need reassurance to what was going on and in the end I think they all got it. I look forward to finding out if Mia is truly pregnant or not. But since a woman tends to know her own body she probably is. Twins by to different men, very interesting story I would have to say. ;)

Looking forward to the next update, and thanks for sharing.

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Date: 13/01/11

Title: Chapter 25: The Miracle

To answer your question, I would have Aidan all the time, and Kale when I wanted a good hard tumble in the hay. I love Kale but he would make me want to kick him in his "special" parts with bossing me around. Aidan is a manipulator but two can play that game. But then again I would want both. LOL

You are so bad its not even funny. Loved the ending but I think a sequel is in order.



Author's Response: I'm not bad, I'm a little angel...HA! Loved your answer lol. Can't have one without the other, together they make the perfect man I would think and you're right, a sequel is in order. Thanks so much for your reviews. I hope I get to see more of them. 

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Date: 17/02/11

Title: Chapter 14: Mama Ruth

That was an interesting chapter. Mama Ruth is something else. I am looking forward to the sneaking around. Mama Ruth is too much, but I think she needs to get a man for herself if her hubby isn't around any more.

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Date: 13/12/10

Title: Chapter 13: Unexpected Surprises

All I an say is Ooops. There goes their vacation "play" time with Mia since, Mama is in town. LOL

I wonder if Mama is going to look at her and know she aint a virgin anymore. Kale and Aidan you two are going to have to act the ass out of this one. LOL

 Thanks for a great update

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Date: 08/12/10