Penname: tsykes2005 [Contact]

Real name: Tanya

Member Since: 22/07/10

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Love a Second Time Around by Dsmoothone
Rated: 17 and older
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Thanks to Minx for the lovely banner!

This is a story about Taylor Fleming and Matt McKenzie.  They have history and he's regretted how he ended their previous relationship.  She's a workaholic who has put her past to bed thanks to therapy.  They were once engaged and ended their relationship before they made it to the aisle.  Now they are thrown back together thanks to a working relationship.  He's ready for love a second time around, but is she?



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: Kerrington & Associates
Chapters: 24
Completed:Yes
Word count: 36919
Read Count: 62651
Published: 28/07/09
Updated: 02/10/09

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Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

this girl is bad at her job, good pr don't handle a situation  like that. anyways this is a good story, you over exaggerates alot, but with help from a good editor, this story could probably be published

Author's Response: Tsykes, thank you for reading my work, I really appreciate it. It's fiction which is why some of it is overexaggerated. It's not meant to be realistic. I haven't had my work edited for publishing. I just write for enjoyment and the stories that live in my head. But I do appreciate your reading my work.

 Reviewer: tsykes2005 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 05/08/10
Finding a Good Thing by Dsmoothone
Rated: 17 and older
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A part of the Kerrington & Associates series. Donovan Williams is a rookie in the Miami Dolphins Football Organization. He's lonely and praying for love to find him. Kendra Davis is a rookie in some sorts as well to the Dolphins organization as an athletic trainer.  Will she and Donovan become fast friends and later lovers?

Another lovely banner created by the Magnificent Minx!!! Thanks!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Fluff, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: Kerrington & Associates
Chapters: 22
Completed:Yes
Word count: 36599
Read Count: 47438
Published: 04/10/09
Updated: 14/03/10

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Title: Chapter 4: Miami Nightlife

good story, but... you need to have someone edit your work and remember don't write how you would talk that is annoying especially when you are writing about educated people, 

Author's Response: Well thanks for reading it.  Thanks for your constructive criticism.

 Reviewer: tsykes2005 Signed starstar
Date: 03/08/10
Mambo Italiano by DameRouge
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 237]
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Broke and in debt from college, Mary Oluwanke gets a job at one of Chicago's most popular Italian resturants, Mambo Italiano. The resturant is a family buisness. And like all families this one has a great deal of problems.

Buon cibo e buona compagnia vanno di pari passo. Faccio buon cibo, così ho prendersi il merito per la buona compagnia"*

*Translation: Good food and good company go hand in hand. I make good food, so i take credit for the good company.

 



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Mystery, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Crackfic, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 15
Completed:No
Word count: 23316
Read Count: 44503
Published: 02/01/10
Updated: 01/09/11

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Title: Chapter 2: Capitolo Un

sweetheart that is not how you say thanks welcome in Italian "thanks" is grazie and welcome is benvenuto your are making black people look bad honey, your are using spanish words

edit please 



Author's Response:

Sorry honey, but like i said i dont speak italian, but i do speak a little spanish thats why i get messed up. LoL yeah my editing is awful, I'll try to correct some errors in the next chapter. Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: tsykes2005 Signed
Date: 05/08/10
Title: Chapter 1: Caratteri di Mambo Italiano (Cast of Mambo Italiano)

the story is going along good, i like the couple, you need to update

also google translater is good for when you use Italian words 

 Reviewer: tsykes2005 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 06/08/10