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Dig by Madds 17 and older
  Avery "Hades" Jones is the number one producer in the metal and hardcore music game. She's more talented with any instrument she lays her hands on than most of the popular bands and every record she touches turns to gold. Then why doesn't she have the respect she so rightfully deserves? When...
Vice Grip by Just_Ni 17 and older
Erin. Your modern day girl next door who has everything she's ever needed and wanted at the prime age of twenty-four. Sassy, sultry and every man's mixed-girl dream all wrapped into one fiesty, yet spoiled individual; however, her past always has a way of catching up with her when she leasts expects...
shotgun by DaSoulVicious 17 and older
Reese has hid his true nature for most of his life. It’s been his constant invisible passenger, always silent but present. It waits patiently for the perfect opportunity. This new number just might be it.
Alexa and Brody by GeorgiaP 17 and older
She's a mess he can't help wanting to fix.
Consequence by Joelle Jax 17 and older
In the wake of an ugly divorce, Natalia executes a scheme meant to move her beyond the hurt inflicted by her ex-husband, Richard.  The plan is to ease her suffering by increasing his, and her weapon, a younger man unwittingly drawn into the illicit plot.  In the quest for revenge, will Natalia...
COLORLESS by marchpisces92 17 and older
 Camille Jackson was rejected since birth over her dark skin complexion. She has grown a tough skin and doesn’t get attached to anyone because of how some people have viewed her without even getting to know her. However Camille opens her heart to a baby in need and for the first six months...
A Heart of Darkness by katherinemadison 17 and older
The sequel to "The Importance of Being Kept" This story portrays Brandon and Kaylee's lives together along with our previous characters. Two years after the hacker's attack on his family and friends, Brandon goes back to a darkness he once tried to get out of. A darkness that he now sees as a way to...
Rainy Mornings by DarkandLovely 17 and older
 They said loving her was wrong. They said he was being taken advantage of. They called him innocent. But, they didn’t know him. They knew nothing.                          Rainy Mornings is an original work by...
The Hot Spot by FranklinsMuse Mature Content
This is a series of hot one shots featuring various IR **BW/WM** TV and Movie characters that I ship.
Cafe Called Melancholy by Dooely 17 and older
A girl and a Homeless Man with Violet eyes find a common place in a cafe Called Melancholy.

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If Only by Village Most Ages
  Taylor Mooreland has more than her share of problems. Her mother's an irresponsible dreamer who's more interested in floating from audition to audition than she is in paying her bills. So, Taylor's got to keep the ship afloat, taking care of her little brother and working to help pay the bills...
Regret by Brenda1257 17 and older
  Jayden made the biggest mistake of his life when he let the love of his life slip through his fingers.  Could he make it right and start anew?  Tamaeya had been burned by Jayden once and had no intentions of being burnt a second time, but it seemed that the heart had it's own mind.
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  Never trust a snake's tongue. No matter how good it feels.
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No matter what, I'd never forget you                     Wasurenaide is a original work by CM and is intended for publication so please do not upload, distort, edit, or remove and place on any other site. Respectfully yours, thank you. 
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Title: Denied© by SparkApCider
Rated: 17 and older starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 58]
Summary:

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This is a prequel to It's All about You, a third installment to the series Love Bears All

Two local teens meet, as strangers and discover love ashore, thousands of miles away from home.  Their love was young, tender, and holding no expectations, but simply being.  A hidden truth denied them, anger delayed them, but fate intervenes and finds them nearly thirty years later.  Will they accept the pain of their past and forge a future or have time and change washed away the love they once knew?

Oh when I look back now
The summer seemed to last forever
And if I had the choice
Ya - I'd always wanna be there
Those were the best days of my life...

--*--

Oh and when you held my hand
I knew that it was now or never
Those were the best days of my life...

--*--

Back in the summer of '69

Lyrics by Bryan Adams, from "Summer of ‘69"

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of SparkApCider (SPAC). The original characters and plot are the property of SparkApCider (SPAC), and is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended. 

Graphics by SPAC 


Category: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Crossover, General
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content
Challenges: Crash Into Me, Coming of Age
Challenge: Crash Into Me, Coming of Age
Series: Love Bears All: A Journey to Love
Chapters: 14
Completed: Yes
Word count: 36311
Read count: 9112
Published: 06/04/09
Updated: 07/31/09
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Reviewer: Minerva Vesta Signed
Date: 03/24/11 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 10

I LOVE this story. I think it is the best of the series.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing Minerva. I appreciate it.



Title: Sandpaper Kisses by Thespiandiva
Rated: 17 and older starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 78]
Summary:

The Continuation of Possession  

Olivia is in love with a man that belongs to another. Sounds simple right? Well, he enjoys taking her to the height of lust, but can never remember a thing the next day. 


Category: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Mystery, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed: No
Word count: 8814
Read count: 16074
Published: 09/07/10
Updated: 10/03/11
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Reviewer: Minerva Vesta Signed
Date: 10/03/11 Title: Chapter 10: Confessions Part 2

WOW!!! This entire story is amazing. I'm so glad I took the time to read it. Mental health disorders are really hard in relationships. I cant wait to see how Olivia will deal with everything. I am looking forward to more. 



Title: Big Girls Won't Cry by Suprina Frazier
Rated: 17 and older starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 923]
Summary:

They messed with the wrong woman this time!

FBI agent Subrina Rayelle is on a mission to take down the people that forced her best friend Leesha into prostitution and then beat her to death when she tried to escape.

Refusing to even cry one tear of grief for Leesha until all guilty parties are brought to justice, Subrina sets her sights on Nevada where the crime took place. If only she hadn’t met her soul-mate on this mission – a beloved nephew to the leaders of the suspected prostitution ring and who may also be among the guilty parties himself. 


Category: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 210
Completed: Yes
Word count: 3441
Read count: 78138
Published: 10/09/10
Updated: 04/09/11
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Reviewer: Minerva Vesta Signed
Date: 03/07/11 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 25.2

OMG !! There should seriously by a warning label for this chapter. WARNING: Content below should not be read in research labs, libraries, government buildings, or any area where voices should be used as a whisper. Now people think I'm really crazy. Poor Sun-Hee! Hope her eyes dont swell too much, okay.

Author's Response:

LOLOLOLOLOLOLOL!!!!!!!

Thanks for another belly laugh, Minerva!



Reviewer: Minerva Vesta Signed
Date: 03/07/11 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 34.2

I love the YT clip!!!

Author's Response: It was my pleasure to post it. Luv your comment!



Reviewer: Minerva Vesta Signed
Date: 03/13/11 Title: Chapter 122: Chapter 56.1

Holy cover-ups Batman!!! I was not expecting that. Well Im very glad that she isnt dead. Karianne needs Jesus; I mean seriously why are you so stuck on someone who isnt interested in women...lol Im loving the interaction with Ceasar and Bree.

Author's Response:

Holy cover-ups Batman? LOLOLOLOLOLOLOL!!!!

As for Karianne, she's simply delusional.

Thanks for the laugh, Minera! 



Reviewer: Minerva Vesta Signed
Date: 03/13/11 Title: Chapter 124: Chapter 56.3

HAHAHAH!!! I have a whole new appreciation for golf now. Man, no wonder Tiger Woods had all them chics going crazy for him.  FORE!!!!

Author's Response:

There you go again with that wonderful wit. LOLOLOLOLOLOL!!!!!

Thanks...tee-hee...for the...tee-hee...laughs!



Reviewer: Minerva Vesta Signed
Date: 03/13/11 Title: Chapter 152: Chapter 68.5

This chapter highly disturbed me being a public health worker. WRAP IT UP!!!

Author's Response:

I concur.

Thanks for weighing in on the issue!



Reviewer: Minerva Vesta Signed
Date: 03/13/11 Title: Chapter 158: Chapter 71.2

Ummm...What!!! Did this chic just say she was going to intentionally get pregnant to keep her man.   CLAWD HAVE MERCY!!

 

fyi...that wig thing aint no joke. I have had to send up a prayer or two when walking to work on a windy Florida day...lol 



Author's Response:

Yep, Subrina was having a desperate moment in this post.

As for that wig thing, I have to make sure my faux ponytails are secure for that VERY reason. I don't mind the wind whipping my hair back and forth (suddenly thinking about that video from Will Smith's daughter. lol), but I don't want it to snatch it off. LOL!

Thanks for commenting!



Reviewer: Minerva Vesta Signed
Date: 03/13/11 Title: Chapter 173: Chapter 77.1

Aww Ricky...you called her mama :)

Author's Response:

Yes, he did. It touched my heart too when he said it.

Thanks for commenting!



Reviewer: Minerva Vesta Signed
Date: 03/18/11 Title: Chapter 186: Chapter 83.2

I know some wont agree with me...but I kinda wanted to see how this all played out with her trying to get knocked up...LOL. Oh well guess I just love extra drama; like her telling the truth isnt going to be enough of an event.

Author's Response:

tee-hee. You're a trip, Minera. Psst (whispering)...I love extra drama too. :D

Thanks for the candid comment!



Reviewer: Minerva Vesta Signed
Date: 04/01/11 Title: Chapter 196: Chapter 88.2

Awww poor Leesha. If anything I would think a picture of Bree would jolt some memories. I was expecting her to be alive and well, but still pained from her experience. When (if) she finally regains her memory I wonder how she will handle all thats happened to her. 

Author's Response:

It's going to take something 'else' to snatch her memory back. Can't tell you what though. lol. Stay tuned. You'll see over the next week as I wrap the story up.

Thanks for commenting!



Reviewer: Minerva Vesta Signed
Date: 04/02/11 Title: Chapter 199: Chapter 90.1

Wow. She told him the truth. I would have been like I dont know what your talking about. I was just practicing for a play at the P-Ranch; lets go make some hot monkey love...lol Caesars reaction was calm, way too calm.

Author's Response:

LOLOLOLOLOL!!!!! Too funny!

And yes, Caesar is way too calm.

Thanks for commenting!



Reviewer: Minerva Vesta Signed
Date: 04/08/11 Title: Chapter 207: Chapter 93

Oh snap. Caesar is going to flip out when he sees her. Cant wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Yes, it is going to be quite the surprise for C. I can't wait to post it. I'm working on it right now.

Thanks for commenting!



Reviewer: Minerva Vesta Signed
Date: 04/09/11 Title: Chapter 1: Main Cast

Thank you so much for sharing this great tale with us. I loved the characters!!! Its sad to see it end but I hope that many who are not connected to the Chamber will get to experience it on print. 

Author's Response: You're most welcome, Minerva. Thank YOU for reading along with us!



Title: The Maid of Honor? by NubianBoriquaPrincess
Rated: Teen or Above starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 224]
Summary: Retired

 

 

Jacob Thomas just proposed to his girlfriend of almost two years, Kenzie Dalton. Everyone is ecstatic by the news. Well, everyone except his long time best friend, Michaela "Mickey" Robertson. She is completely thrown off, and broken by the sudden engagement. But she puts on a brave face for her best friend, knowing that her heart has just been ripped from her chest. Elijah Thomas, Jacob's younger brother, becomes Michaela's only source of an outlet, being that he's the only one who knows about her true feelings. But the situation becomes more difficult for Michaela when she asked by Jacob himself to be Kenzie's...Maid of Honor? Will she accept? If so, how will she able to handle watching the love her of life walk down the aisle with someone else?

 

"How can I pull this off, when I'm head-over-heels in love with him?"-Michaela Robertson


Category: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15
Completed: No
Word count: 37406
Read count: 47172
Published: 11/24/10
Updated: 04/09/12
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Reviewer: Minerva Vesta Signed
Date: 03/31/11 Title: Chapter 1: .The Cast

Wow great story. Im loving all the characters so far. Im rooting for Eli in this story. I know she has feelings for Jacob but I think he needs to get his priorities straight. Team Eli all the way!!!



Title: The Scar by Happy2bNappy
Rated: 17 and older starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 427]
Summary: Retired

 

The Scar

 

The Scar on her face....could never match the one on her heart. 

 

Kick ass Banner by the great Valhalla!! 

 


Category: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed: No
Word count: 47951
Read count: 44395
Published: 02/14/11
Updated: 05/15/12
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Reviewer: Minerva Vesta Signed
Date: 02/15/11 Title: Chapter 1: All The Kings Men

Absolutely spectacular. I love this story and cant wait to see what comes next. The first chapter had me in tears. And the second made me want to punch something. The Jeremy I picture while reading this does not resemble the pic on the character page. I see him more as the guy in a mid 90s grunge phase. You have some major talent!!!



Title: Withered Dreams by Penny88
Rated: Mature Content starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 389]
Summary: Retired

If two heads are better than one. Than three heads must be incredible. Follow the life of Drew, Dustin and Melody as they learn about the ups and downs of life, love, friendship and the sticky situations in between.

 

stories/1159/images/withered_dreams.png

 

Banner by Quila Cole!


Category: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19
Completed: Yes
Word count: 115091
Read count: 79832
Published: 03/09/11
Updated: 12/29/13
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Reviewer: Minerva Vesta Signed
Date: 03/09/11 Title: Chapter 1: In the beginning

WOHOO!! Another story. I’ve bought my train ticket, put away my luggage, and ready for the ride. LOL



Author's Response: WWHHHHOOOOOOPPPPPPP!!! Get ready for the ride!, it's gonna be a long one



Reviewer: Minerva Vesta Signed
Date: 03/11/11 Title: Chapter 2: Let's get married and get away from here

Whew!!! After 4 too many long islands I thought it was best to come back after a few hours and do a review. Although I kept dreaming of bears attacking people…lol

 

Ok so where to start. As always your writing is superb!!! Reading is definitely my cocaine and Miss Penny you are my pusher!  Great second chapter. Lots of questions and some speculations. I can definitely see the transition from age 5 to 10 for Drew and Dusty. Melody kinda gives me the creeps; I see a whole lot of trouble instore for this girl. Something about that chics family aint right. Drews family seems pretty normal. Im guessing she is an only child. And poor Dusty L. The little man has got a messed up family. Where are his parents? Why is he living with his grandmother? How long has he been living with her? Is she aware that he is unhappy?

 

Oh my and talk about little jealousy in third grade and Dusty with the potty mouth. I laughed my ass off when they pulled out their little penises. The scene outside basement is very good. It really tells a lot about each characters personality at 10 yrs old. I wonder if they will still be same as adults. Will Dusty try to lead Drew down the dangerous path? Is Melody going to become some crazy nympho? Will Dusty still feel the same about Drew when they become teenagers/adults? Will Drew and Melody still be friends (I don’t think so)?

 

I love the fact that they shared their first kiss!!!! And what REALY happened on his weekend away?!

Anxiously awaiting the next update!

Author's Response:

Hhahaha Love it! You pinpointed everything. There is definetly going to be drama between the three. I love how you siad Melody creeped you out even after only 2 chapters!

Little kids are bad lol. Jealousy  is prominent in third grade especially hehehehe.

The only thing I'm going to say is that Dusty is going to be a handful!



Reviewer: Minerva Vesta Signed
Date: 03/17/11 Title: Chapter 3: Blunt, Vodka and Sex

Ummmm...Im in shock...somebody please throw some cold water on me. These kids are bad. I kept thinking of Lil Wayne's PMW song while reading this...lol But real talk, this brings back some memories...LOL

Ok so we got some answers. Dusty's dad was in jail. What did he do to land him there? And where is mom? Obviously he aint down with the brown. What happened when they were 11 that Drew wont go back over the house? Does grandma know that he is beating on Dusty?

I love that Dusty admits to Drew that he was just trying to fit in when he smoked weed. And he sees her as a good balance for his messed up life. I really liked the scene on the bleachers. They were too cute.

And then the bedroom scene. I was surprised that Drew actually participated. And look at Melody...homegirl was like puff puff give...lol I knew that something was up with her. She is headed straight for the pole or infront of the small screen. I dont that chic is still a virgin. If she is is she holding out for Dustin? I was a bit surprised by her attire that she wore to school. I keep getting this feeling that her family is super strict..(echmm or in a cult :)) 

 

I like the ending to this chapter. I wonder how many other ways Dustin is going to come between them? Will Melody hook up with Dustin since they are both ready for that and Drew isnt? If so how will Drew take it?

Cant wait for the next chapter.  

 



Reviewer: Minerva Vesta Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/19/12 Title: Chapter 9: But you can dream for the both of us

great update



Author's Response:

Thanks Minerva!!!!



Reviewer: Minerva Vesta Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/12/11 Title: Chapter 8: It's me and you against the World

So glad to have you back. This was a great chapter. I'm really nervous about what is doing to happen with these two come senior year.

Thanks so much for the update and I hope all is well with you.



Title: Barrier by tpeezy22
Rated: 17 and older starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 70]
Summary:

Hearing- to have the capacity of apprehending sound.

Deaf- partially or wholly lacking or deprived of the sense of hearing; unable to hear.

Angela is an accountant who falls in love with Patrick, a Deaf man who lives in her apartment. Can they find love together even if they are different?


Category: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Fluff, Sexual Content
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed: No
Word count: 10692
Read count: 12014
Published: 03/17/11
Updated: 07/27/12
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Reviewer: Minerva Vesta Signed
Date: 03/19/11 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Great second chapter. I kinda got lost a bit when they were in the laundry room with regards to who was speaking...Patrick or Greg? Oh and what was Patrick's reaction to seeing her underwear? Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Technically...both.  Patrick was signing, but Greg was speaking.  He was being Patrick's voice.  He just interpreted what was being signed.



Reviewer: Minerva Vesta Signed
Date: 03/17/11 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Very cool!!! This story will be different from others that I have read and I am really looking forward to that. I hope you update soon!



Reviewer: Minerva Vesta Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/03/11 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Great update.



Reviewer: Minerva Vesta Signed
Date: 04/16/11 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

great update...im glad patrick is giving her a chance...looking forward to more