Taylor is seriously pissing me off. When will she finally tell Christian the truth about her being a woman. She needs to come clean before things gets out of hands. Especially if the person puts a lots of trust in you. When he finds out she will have to work hard to gain his trust again. Especially if she gets caught instead of her telling him the truth herself. I still don't understand why Christian isn't able to realize that Taylor is a she and his friend did see it the very first time he saw her.  And why does Taylor dressed as a woman anyways. But seriously, she needs to tell Christian the truth.

Honestly I'm not liking Lila at all. What does this woman wants. She is sleeping with Jack, but gets jealous of Chase with other girls. Jack and Chase needs to leave her alone and try to build their relationship. They are brothers and honestly Lila doesn't deserve it. I don't like Chase he is annoying. And Lily is acting like a slut. She needs to make up her mind or leave both brothers alone.

I disagree with Henny's behavior. I totally understand that she is a little jealous and all. But she is being VERY dramatic.  And yes, she had seen her mother alone sad and depressed for her all her life. But her mother had plenty of opportunity to move on and find someone else. But she choose not to. And I think that deep down, she was always waiting for Henry to come back in her life. Now that he is back, she wants to be with him and I won't blame her. If Vanessa has forgive him for what he had done to her, who am I or anyone else to stay angry, judge her or disagree with her choice. And frankly its not any ones business. It may be unrealistic and selfish of them for wanting everyone to accept that they are back together and having a baby (who wasn't planned). But the truth is, they don't need anyone;s  accepting. Its their life. And if wanting to do with your life what you want and be happy is selfish, then yes I guess they are. Now Henny is being selfish. She doesn't want her mom and dad to be together because of what her father had done done in the past. No, I think she is being selfish because she won't be the center of attention anymore. She is jealous of her mother because she thinks that Henry wants her mom and not her. She is jealous because they are getting married and she feels left out. She is jealous because they are having a baby, and this baby will have her mom and dad together as a family. Honestly Henny is acting like a child. And Vanessa is right, Henny is a grown woman with her whole life ahead of her. She will fall in love, get married and live her life. Where does this leave Vanessa? What Henry had done to her and Henny is the past was wrong, yes. He had hurt them by choosing his parents instead of them. But Vanessa had decided to forgive him and she is still in love with him. It doesn't make it right, I know. But I always say, I respect your opinion, but I make my own choices.

Both Lucas and Alex are disgusting. Lucas may be nice and all, but he needs to learn to back off. I get that he is in love with Alex, but he needs to respect the fact that she is in a relationship with someone else. Because clearly if she really liked him he would have been with him. Its obvious to everyone that Lucas likes her. Everyone tells her that, but yet she is still insisting that its not true. She is in denial and playing stupid. As a woman, you know when a man has more interest in you than a simple friendship. And more so when everyone can see it and keeps telling you about it. We just choose to deny or ignore it when we are not interesting or when we are confuse and wants to keep play stupid.

But I don't feel sorry for Lucas either. He knows that she already has a boyfriend. So why insisting on wanting and trying to be with someone who is already with someone else, instead of trying to move on. I don't think I will every understand that. So the right thing to do is back off. Especially if he is so in love with her. It must hurt him to see her with someone who is not him, so why torture himself like this. Plus if he really considered her to be his friend and wants what is best for her, he would respect her relationship no matter how bad it may seems. Instead of giving her problems and confusing thins like he just did right now.

I'm sorry but Alex is acting like a bitch. I REALLY want Tyler to leave her. I don't care how many trust issues her partner has. Cheating is cheating. And that is exactly what she is doing right now. And clearly Tyler has every right not to trust her. She seems more concern for Lucas then her own boyfriend. Lucas is a grown man who can take care of himself. I can understand that he is her friend and that she may be concern about him. But I mean come on. Is she really this heartless? She already knows that Tyler does not trust her and Lucas together. And to top things of he walks in on them kissing each other. Instead of staying with her boyfriend and try to reassure him that the kissing was a mistake, that she is sorry and all that, she is still insisting on defending Lucas and wanting to take him home? She could have let someone else take Lucas home. I don't care how confuse Alex is, that is not an excuse. Wrong is wrong, and Alex's behavior and what she is doing right now is wrong. If she is confuse about her feelings, she needs to be honest with Tyler and break things of to clear her mind so that she can find out what she truly wants.

Maybe its just me but Tyler deserves better then Alex. I hope Tyler will leaves Alex so that she can be with the guy that everyone seems to want her to be with any way. Its obvious that she doesn't care at all about Tyler's feeling.

@ Kaye2008. No one is hating on Lana just because she doesn't want a relationship. I think you need to read most of the comments again. People are just pointing out how rude Lana was with giving him the impression that he is some good for nothing loser. Its totally fine to want to have someone more like her financially. But to offend him like she did was uncalled for.


If Lucas really wants her, he will fight for her, if not then oh well she was right for her hesitation.????? What does fighting for her entail? That Lucas has to agree to letting things remain the same so she can get what she needs, and his evolving feelings will just have to take a backseat??? There is no such thing as fighting for a person who doesn't want to be with you.


I completely disagree with the "if it was the other way around, girls would be making up a lot of excuses for why the guy doesn't want to commit and how the girl needs to be understanding while he gets himself together". I speak for myself, and I'm not like that. When someone is wrong, they are wrong. No one is is saying that Lana should be with Lucas. Nor does she owe him anything. The problem is that Lucas wants more than just a sexual relationship. And Lana knows this. It was stated in previous chapters how she is aware that Lucas has romantic feelings for her. She also knows that he wants more than just sex and that he is hurting because of this. She is not stupid or naive. She is taking advantage of him, because he trying to be everything that she wants, and what he wants doesn't matter.

We know that they have an agreement, but we are human and have feelings. If Lucas feels that he wants more he is entitled to wanting and feel that way. If Lana doesn't want a relationship, she too is entitled to feel that way. If neither are willing to compromise then they should walk away. Lucas will have to find someone else that wants what he wants. And Lana would have to look for someone who just wants sex just like her, since that is the only thing that she can give and want right?
If she knows that she cannot give Lucas what he wants then she shouldn't try to force him in to wanting what she wants. This is why some people doesn't like Lana, not because she doesn't want to have a relationship with him, but because she is trying to force him, to make him want what she wants.

To be honest I can't see Tess and Jay together anymore. I really can't. I want Tess to find another man and move on from Jay. Jays is worst then dumb. He just keep making mistakes after mistakes instead of learning from them and try to be a better man. Especially when it comes to woman Even after the incident in the supermarket he still couldn't be honest with Jamie about who Tess really is. If it wasn't because Jamie had kept questioning him about who Tess, I can bet that he wouldn't have told her anything. 

He is stringing Jamie along and to make matter worst he also slept with her. All this while he is still married. Like seriously what does this man wants? He is stupid, dumb and weak as fuck. Tess needs to stay the hell away from him. She may love him now, but she can move on. Tess needs a fresh start with a new man. One who is strong, independent and knows what he wants. Jay is all talk. He claims that he loves Tess, but his actions says completely other wise. 

He is a grown man who makes his own choices. So the story of having trauma because his father cheated on his mother is getting old and ridiculous. People go trough worst things and don't come out damage or make stupid mistakes to later blame on their trauma. Jay is pathetic. Him loosing the woman that he loves has not change him. Nor did those therapies that he went to. If they did he would know that being with a woman while your in love with another is wrong. He would know that leading a person on while you can't give them the love they want and deserve in return is wrong. Nope Jay had not change or learned anything. I really hope that Tess will choose for her and not change her mind about divorcing him. I know how hard it is when you still love the person very much. But sometimes just love is not enough. You have to walk away. 

Roxy is pathetic. Like seriously, what is this girl problem? I'm done feeling any sympathy or sorry for her. She is so damn insecure that its annoying. She is going to marry this guy and she can't even communicate like adults does. Relationships and marriage is about trust and communication, Its clear that Roxy doesn't have that. If she doesn't agree with something she should open her damn mouth and tell Griffith that. If she doesn't like and trust Rich then she should inform Griffith about that too. They are getting marrieddddd!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! He is not a mind reader, so if this is bothering her so much, she should talk to him. Why is she still so stupid and naive. And especially at this point in their relationship. When things are serious and they are getting married. Also why is she making such a big deal about the prenup? Its totally normal and understandable that Griffith would want a prenup considering his status and money. Roxy is being miserable and unhappy because she wants too. All this is unnecessary if she communicates with the man she claims to love so much. Her low self esteem an insecurities is not attractive. She has a great guy who loves her for her and wants to marry her, but she ruining that with her stupid attitude. 

I agree with kiavicmcp. The story doesn't have to be straight to the point. But we are at chapter 44 and there is still no changes at all in the characters. Its just seems as if you are just dragging it on. Long stories with a lot of chapters are fine. But there should at least be some development in the characters and some progress.I totally get that you want to take it slow. Jodi can't change over night. But in my opinion its just going too slow. 

Its up to you to decide whether you want to continue posting your chapters or not. Its your story. If you want to post it, do it. Readers will decide for themselves if they want to continue reading the story or not. 

As for me I will try to continue reading it. Its just that sometimes I feel like the story is om a stand still. Especially Jodi. I honestly do not like her at all. 

I'm sorry but this just doesn't make any sense to me. Or rather yet, Jodi's behavior doesn't make any sense to me. This is a woman who went trough a lot. She was raped and still has trauma about it. But yet she has no problem messing around with two brothers. You can't be sleeping around with one brother and then going on date's and with the other. She is leading Matt on and its not fair to him. What kind of woman would do that? Does she have no shame? I know that she has some issues and that she is a rape victim. But she is also a grown ass woman who should know better. You can't sleep around with one man and go on date's with  his brother. And the fact that she doesn't even acknowledge that is just unbelievable. Yes she and Steve are not in a relationship, and that she can do see who ever she wants. But not if that person is his own brother.  I feel sorry for what she went trough. But she is being too loose and behaving like a ho. She is turning exactly in what Kirk told her she is. 

I too agree with  CrimsonBlaze. What is making Jourdan so attractive to all those soccer player. Its to the point where it even sounds unrealistic. Is it indeed only because she can play soccer? Because I get that she is beautiful. But that's about it honestly. Her attitude and mix signals that she gives are terrible and not likable at all. She is very self centered and judgmental. She LOVES lying to David Luiz and doesn't seem to care that she may end up hurting him in the end with all her stupid lies. Its okay for her to hurt people, but when it come to her, she gets all defensive. Look at how she treats Neymar. Why is Neymar even bothering with her. I get that he likes her. But damn, be man and stop begging and running after a girl who judges you without even knowing you  and treat you like dirt. She is not worth it. He is better off without her. And so is David Luiz. He deserves better. Someone who can at least be fair and honest with him. Jourdan is none of that. If she really cherish what they have she would have been honest with him about Neymar. If you ask me, she is worst than Neymar. Before judging people, she really needs to take a look at herself.

Is this seriously the same Dominic of the previous story? Because in this one he is an asshole. He can't even be a good friend to Addy. What a douche. I'm honestly liking Dominic less and less. I don't know about Murphy, because we don't know much about him. But when it comes to Dominic, I don't like him for Addy. Addy needs to move on and let go of the feelings she has for Dom. He is not interested and barely acknowledge her. She deserves better. And even if they end up together. Addy better make him work for it big time.  But honestly, I'm just not feeling Dominic anymore. 

Well well. I really don't know what to think of Elle. She clearly has some issues that she needs to work on. Dean is a nice guy, and doesn't deserve to be treated this way. Also I get that Dean like Elle a lot. But at some point you also got to have some dignity and self respect. There is no point in chasing someone who has no regard for your feelings, treats you poorly and isn't willing to give you a fair chance. I do think that maybe Dean needs to focus on other woman. Elle obviously is not mature enough for what he wants or is looking for. Elle needs to see that Dean has other options. She needs a wake up call to make her see what a catch Dean is and what she would be loosing. Its obvious that Dean cares about her a lot. But there is only so much a person can take. Especially if you get such a poor feedback.

Tracie is something else. Its like she refused to accept the fact that she was in the wrong and that she shouldn't have let Elle go home alone drunk like that. She didn't apologized and is using her being drunk and what not as an excused. If Elle had no problem ignoring Dean and treat him poorly, then lets see how good she is with giving Tracie the same treatment. If I was Elle I would have been very pissed at my friend and give her a silent treatment. Real friends don't do that to each other.

I can't wait to read what will happen next. Dean should not let Elle of the hook just yet. She will have to work for it. He has every right to give her the cold shoulder. I know that he really likes her and all. But that still doesn't mean that he should let her treat him like he is nothing. I still think Dean can do better than her. Maybe as the story progress she will change my mind. Now lets see what she will do now.