Although this is a really short opening so I don't have a lot to judge yet, I have to say I am liking the voice. Although it's in third person it doesn't feel stiff.

I really, really, like this scene/line: 

"giggling a little to herself, she headbanged a little and pumped her fist out the window, yelling out a war-cry.

And scared the shit out of a deer."

It made me grin although, if she scared the deer, why would it stay standing in the road taring at her? Wouldn't it try and jump out of the way once she yelled even it had been mesmerized by her car lights?

Either way, really interesting opening. 

Wow, Chase is an ass. The thought of losing her throws you into a panic and what do you do instead of staying with her alone? You come up with the idea of a promise of a proposal. Yeah, because that's really going to make her want to stay with you. Dumbass. and let's not forget the fact that she's lost somewhere and you were passed out because you started the celebration early. Idiot.

And Dax, awwww, muffin, LOL. I guess throwing flowers at a girl will work sometimes, haha, although isn't he only eighteen?

I do find it interesting that they're all being so nice considering their town is so insular and she's not only black but she's an educated outsider from up North, lol. 

 Great chapter. 

You didn't even ease into the racism or anything, wow. I have to say your writing voice is flexible becasue this voice and the one before are totally different and yet they both work and show us about the characters, love it.

And Negro-gal? Really? Currently I'm finding this amusing because the accents are coming through loud and clear and they are so redneck but I have a feeling that once I get to know Kendra more I might not find it as amusing and Pa's 'negro-gal- comments are going to make me hella uncomfortable. 

 You also had some really good one-liners in here I have to admit.

 And I'm with Dax. Where the hell did Chase try and send her and why?

Ooh, Trixie. NEVER FALL FOR A MANWHORE/BADBOY. It only ends in heartbreak. Even if he is majorly appealing, if you haven't tamed him yet, you won't be able too.

Cat has no damn shame. Wowwwww. Leaves her kids and man at home to yell after someone who doesn't want her. Wow.

[If Pa hadn't been still drunk and eighty-six, he'd've broken the cocky sumbitch's hand just on principle alone.]

LOL!!!

And Dax is feeling nice even though nothing happened, hahah. 

Wowwww. Drama. And personally I agree with you about not putting up pictures of the cast, a lot of the time actors/actresses don't really match the image in my head [fine as he is. Have you seen the pictures of him for Thor? I'm not feeling the beard but the body is on point].

And can I say wow. Can I have me a man who knows how to make homemade icecream and has a body like DeLeon's. Wow. 

 He can keep his caveman attitude though, props to Kendra for walking out, man is acting like she doesn't have a mind of her own. 

Seriously. My stomach is all twisty. I mean, DeLeon is too cute for my LIFE. Although I do wonder why Kendra mentioned the Sheriff again. Did I miss a chapter? Did she see him again after the first time? I'd think she'd brush him off as a random and keep it moving.

I have to say, I don't like the Prince intervals, LOL. I like him fine but everytime it pops up it pulls me into a seperate mode and I like being with Kendra and DeLeon and his family.

Wowwwwwwww, honestly, I keep going back to the fact that Cat has a man and children at home. And DeLeon is dumbbbb cause if you had to get yourself checked after sleeping with her, keep it in your pants. her personality detracts from any kinda sexiness she might have.

Personally I love a slow build up, the sexual tension makes the actual sexy time that much better. And this may be a bit random but do you have an account on fictionpress as well?

 Anyway, on to the actual story:

 [When he'd first come across him laying in the middle of the goddamn road with some black woman stretched out beside him and bleeding from the skull like a stuck pig, DeLeon was sure he was going to have to feed a stranger to their pigs and blackmail the living shit out of Dax the next morning.] 

 LMAOOO! What a way to introduce us to DeLeon, hahah, on one hand he's willing to dispose of someone's body to protect his brother, on the other hand he has no intention of doing it out of the goodness of his heart, haha. 

I love that you set up DeLeon as being loyal but mean in the first paragraph before the Doctor thinks it. I am also super jealous that so far we've seen everything frmo three POVs, the voices are all distinct and yet still work with the story and don't feel jarring. 

 LOL at the way they interact with each other, love it and LMAO at Pa putting on cologne and putting his teeth in, hahahaha.

You sure know how to start a story, lol, I'm loving this so far. The humour is brilliant and I am so jealous of the way you're able to make the characters have distinct voices while the boys sound like boys.

I don't know how I feel about Aunt Mae, she's funny but knid of rough, lol, but she feels real which is good. Cooper, lmao, jerk but an amusing jerk so we shall see. 

Oh mannnn, Nic is an asshole. I mean, if he can alter her memory he can at least make her think that the pregnancy makes sense. I dont' blame her for being so confused and I love the fact that she feels that something's wrong even if she doesn't know why.

And is he going to alter the doctors' minds since they know she's only supposed to be three months pregnant, so the fact that she's six months when she's supposed to be four is deffo going to cause her [and them] some stress, lol.

And Ana, wow, she works fast doesn't she. This story has me hooked though I do wonder how it's going to end happily, if it does. I wonder if her being a good person and human will have any influence on her son at all.

I'm intrigued and amused. I don't have a problem with the characters so far because you've clearly set them up to be assholes, I mean, they could be saying bare compliments but the  minute you involve bets to sleep with people you're an asshole.

I will say I was confused about their genders based on names. Not Sam so much as the spelling of Nikki. That's the feminine way to spell it and I just can't imagine a lady killer being that effective with a female name.

It'll be interesting to learn more about Sam since so far we just have someone who dresses very thuggish/manly and has anger issues,  lol.

Also, I don't mind the whoopi comments or those types of things since I think it clearly highlights the type of characters we're dealing with and they're funny.

Great start even if the chapter is super short.