Penname: Jammi [Contact]

Real name: Jage

Member Since: 02/07/11

Membership status: Member

Bio:

23 year old college student with a degree in business administration and a love for interracial romances, alpha males, and the girls that can 'tame' them. I also love the awkward nerd or the charmer who highlights that sometimes a bitch isn't just a 'bitch'. 


Story Status


When Doves Cry


Chapters: 2/37


Although this story is complete, I intend on going over each chapter and doing a superficial edit to try and catch any mistakes that slipped past me in the first draft. I'm also still working on something else and with school so I'm aiming to update once a week while I get everything else together.



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Summary: Their choice of career doesn't leave much room for developing and maintaining a healthy relationship.

Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: None
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Strong Sexual Content
Series: Welcome to Harlan County
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1197
Read Count: 781
Published: 02/11/11
Updated: 02/11/11




Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I have never even heard of this show before now and I think I need to find the first season and take a gander because this was amazing, I loved your description of Raylan and the set up for your definition of swagger was brilliant.

Great story. 

Reviewer: Jammi Signed
Date: 02/13/11

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 67]
Summary:

 

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Raylan Givens' return to Harlan County creates more complications than Rachel Brooks has bargained for. Choices will need to be made and honesty about all the games that have been played will be required.



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: None
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: Welcome to Harlan County
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 14234
Read Count: 16065
Published: 02/11/11
Updated: 08/14/11




Title: Chapter 7: Two Alarm Fire

I have never watched an episode of this show though I need too, but I love what you've written so far. Even though there are certain strings that are over my head since I haven't watched the show the story-telling makes all of that irrelevant and you give enough t hta I can sort of figure out what's going on and if I can't, I can always google, lol.

I love Rachel and the fact that even though she has found herself in two difficult situations she acknowledges it and it she doesn't let it ruin her work, she's still competent and I really like that even though her love life might be a bit of a mess she isn't.

The way you're showing Raylan and Tim works brilliantly for me, I don't know who to cheer for and although Raylan should be unlikable [really, Ava and Winona?] the way you write him just makes me feel a bit sad for him. Especially since he knows he screwed up.

Tim... I feel bad for him because he seems like a nice guy but I don't know, in this case he might come in last just because he doesn't seem to spark the same feelings in Rachel that Raylan does and she keeps thinking of him as a friend with benefits while it's clear he's fallen harder.

Shoot, he's probably liked her from time.

Great chapter.



Author's Response:

Don't be disappointed when you watch. My 'verse is completely AU. Though there is wonderful chemistry between the three marshals, they haven't veered in that direction on the show. It's still a good watch. Action - packed and funny.

You're right you shouldn't like him but when you see him portrayed on screen and what I'm trying to bring to light with this fic you can't help but feel sorry for him. I honestly don't think the character knows how to do better. And that's the issue you have one where it's obvious how he feels but no matter how hard he tries he can't do the right thing. The other is making a successful effort but it's not really what the lady wants.

I'm really glad you're picking up on the conflict and enjoying the story so far. Thank you so much for reading.

Reviewer: Jammi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/10/11

Title: Chapter 9: Dubious Intent

Hmm, I wonder why the person just shot and left (I'm assuming) since they didn't go after his ex-wife.

I am really loving this story though, and I like the way you dropped itns about Tim's life. The only thing is that since we're seeing that from Raylan's POV, how would he know that about his father beating him?


Loved the opening line btw, hahah



Author's Response:

I'll elaborate more on the shooter and what happened in the next update. Promise. As far as Tim's life...there was an episode this season where they were all sitting around and he let it drop about his background and his father's abuse. So I used that little info and elaborated. Sorry if that was unclear. Glad you liked the opening line :)

Reviewer: Jammi Signed
Date: 05/10/11

Title: Chapter 11: From Conundrum to...Pt.2

Raylan, I like you but keep yourself away from Rachel. I just keep liking Tim more and more and more. I mean, someone who is dependable, gets you hot, and loves you dearly is clearly a prince. And then there's Raylan...I mean, he has a history of hreat breaking and yet there's something about him, ugh.

And Winona, I can't stand her but I do feel bad for her. She lost not only her husband but a friend who she still loves but he's caught up with someone else and now she's pregnant [maybe]. sucks to be her.

Great chapter.



Author's Response:

I know. I really like Tim too...I'm so torn...I'm so torn...

Reviewer: Jammi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/02/11

Title: Chapter 10: From Conundrum to...Pt.1

I do like Tim, I really do. And I think Raylan needs to get his shit in order before he talks about her hiding behind Tim and whatnot when he has how many women just hanging around.



Author's Response:

Not trying to give too much away but I'll further explore the chemistry and connection she has with each in the second part of this update. That's the difference between the two and you're right. He's the last one that can back her in a corner with the state of his life

Reviewer: Jammi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/05/11

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[Reviews - 12]
Summary: They both liked the finer things in life, each other

Table of Contents
Categories: Movies
Characters: Storm/Ororo Munroe
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1727
Read Count: 1085
Published: 03/02/11
Updated: 03/02/11




Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm smiling so wide right now, lol, adored this, adored them. I mean, he makes a reference to the fact that he would've raped her and it didn't phase me or bother me [all that much].

 I love the set up and the way we see it from both of their POVs. Brilliant as usual. Is it a companion piece to In His Skin?



Author's Response:

You know, I think it could be, though the timing of some scenes is a bit off. I did write this as a semi-companion, something a little more in-depth on their relationship... so yes...I think it can go as a companion.

 

I am so glad you liked it. Thank you.

 

Reviewer: Jammi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/06/11

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[Reviews - 37]
Summary:

It takes twenty-one days to form a habit, but it was only supposed to be one night. And what happens when that habit is no longer enough?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: You, Me, We, & Us
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3631
Read Count: 3605
Published: 03/23/11
Updated: 03/23/11




Title: Chapter 1: Outside These Four Walls

This was really cute, I have to say I love the way you make sexy and funny go together and neither feels lacking or out of place. LOVED this line:

[Taria found herself taking lamaze-class breaths in order to calm her coochie down, though the shit wasn't working.]

LOLLLLLL

Super cute story and I like that he realised what was wrong without having a 'you knew what we were getting into when we got together' moment. 

The flashbacks worked really well although I was hoping to see themoment when she told ol' girl she was fired, lol. 

 

Reviewer: Jammi Signed
Date: 03/23/11

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Summary:

TLAL 

It happened one night. No biggie. Right?

Until Moliere Baker realizes her one night with Simon Ford has repercussions that affect not only them and those they care about, but a brand new life as well . . .

Now there's a wedding approaching and time to come clean is running out. Is there enough love between two friends to last a lifetime once the secret's out?

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Spring Baby-Fic Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:No
Word count: 46136
Read Count: 65969
Published: 03/27/11
Updated: 02/14/14




Title: Chapter 3: Oops Upside Yo' Head

You sure know how to start a story, lol, I'm loving this so far. The humour is brilliant and I am so jealous of the way you're able to make the characters have distinct voices while the boys sound like boys.

I don't know how I feel about Aunt Mae, she's funny but knid of rough, lol, but she feels real which is good. Cooper, lmao, jerk but an amusing jerk so we shall see. 

 

Reviewer: Jammi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/28/11

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Summary:

The Demon Seed

Babies should be a blessing. But not all of them are.

Kickass banner by Missus James

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Horror
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Spring Baby-Fic Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 28219
Read Count: 42544
Published: 03/29/11
Updated: 09/03/13




Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

I'm going to take a wild guess and say not very well, LOL. He already has her thinking she's going insane as it is, the truth might come as a relief or it might throw her over the edge.

This was a great chapter and I'm glad she was able to break loose even if it made her question her mental state even more. I wonder how aware the baby is or if it just reacted to her fear.

Nic is something else, he has this appeal even though I know he's an evil person. Wouldn't want to meet him in a club though, lol.

Reviewer: Jammi Signed
Date: 05/10/11

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Oh mannnn, Nic is an asshole. I mean, if he can alter her memory he can at least make her think that the pregnancy makes sense. I dont' blame her for being so confused and I love the fact that she feels that something's wrong even if she doesn't know why.

And is he going to alter the doctors' minds since they know she's only supposed to be three months pregnant, so the fact that she's six months when she's supposed to be four is deffo going to cause her [and them] some stress, lol.

And Ana, wow, she works fast doesn't she. This story has me hooked though I do wonder how it's going to end happily, if it does. I wonder if her being a good person and human will have any influence on her son at all.

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Date: 04/17/11

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Summary:

Jake has been acting strange ever since Taria's career took a major set-back. Though she's trying to be rational about everything, she can't help but wonder . . .



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Friendship, Mystery, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: You, Me, We, & Us
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2022
Read Count: 1559
Published: 04/03/11
Updated: 04/03/11




Title: Chapter 1: Tell Me Lies, Tell Me Sweet Little Lies

Now, personally surprises, even good ones aren't my cup of tea in real life but even I would be hard pressed to be anything but pleased with this set up.

Especially when you think that it's only been five months [officially] and he's just so amazing. I love the fact that their relationship isn't perfect but it's 'perfect', if that makes sense. 

I'm also really enjoying the little glimpses we're seeing but it's still tied together. My only complaint would be that they're not all under one story so I could track each new update that way. but still, really loving this couple and I'm glad we get to see glimpses into their life.

Reviewer: Jammi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/03/11

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Summary:

It's been six months since Reese Davies had a decent date and even longer since her toes curled and her eyes rolled in the back of her head. Desperate times call for desperate measures and she accepts a last ditch effort from her brother and her best friend for a new strategic partnership. Love match or total disaster?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:Yes
Word count: 26568
Read Count: 37831
Published: 06/13/11
Updated: 08/02/11




Title: Chapter 8: A Night to Remember

hahaha, I love sexual tension, it makes it so much better when they give in. Great chapter as usual and I'm glad that the date was perfect even though it didn't actually go perfectly, haha.



Author's Response:

Thanks jammi...so glad you're still enjoying it

Reviewer: Jammi Signed
Date: 06/20/11

Title: Chapter 7: Words of Wisdom

I am loving this story so far. Both of the characters are relatable and I like that they get nervous and though they might seem put together they're not on the inside. I'm also enjoying the supporting cast and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks Jammi. I'm so glad you like it and relatable is definitely what I was going for. Thanks for your wonderful review.

Reviewer: Jammi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/19/11

Title: Chapter 9: The Debriefing

Huh, it's interesting that they both put so much of their own worth on whether or not they're in a relationship. They're both gorgeous and successful and yet they think something's lacking because they haven't had a successful relationship?

Well at least they will both appreciate the other even once the new person glow wears off, lol.

Author's Response:

I wouldn't say they base their worth on whether or not their in a relationship...that they just feel like for as much as they do everything else right...they just can't nail this particular area...but they're working on it

Reviewer: Jammi Signed
Date: 06/23/11

Title: Chapter 12: Great Minds

I really loved the way they were both missing each other in this chapter and got to see a bit of Reese's past. Lex is so adorable, haha, and her brother is something else.



Author's Response:

I didn't mean to love Markel as much as do...but you really can't help it...glad you're enjoying him too

Reviewer: Jammi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/07/11

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Summary:

For married author Dove Morgan, the trip to the big city was the first in a series of things she never thought she'd do. 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Crackfic, Dark Fic, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:No
Word count: 44246
Read Count: 20841
Published: 07/26/11
Updated: 04/08/12




Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

So far this is amazing, I love how Dove is relatable and even though she's browbeaten because of her family she's still strong and sexy even if she's had to repress it.

 

Your writing is so smooth and the characterisations flawless, I love it.

Reviewer: Jammi Signed
Date: 03/03/12

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[Reviews - 21]
Summary:

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Maggie and Aiden

Sittin' in a Tree

K-I-S-S-I-N-G . . . 

This is the story of the couple never should have been.

And what happens when neither one can let go.



Table of Contents
Categories: Music, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe, General
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Psychological, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 3523
Read Count: 4758
Published: 02/26/12
Updated: 12/08/13




Title: Chapter 3: A Sight to Behold

You have the best summaries and I love that song! Even though I've never thought of it as being inspo for a dark fic.

I'll be hoenstly, I don't know if I'll be able to follow this story through to the end just because I don't do dark but your summary hooked me, the first chapter was awesome and your voice and descriptions and characterizations are just amazing.

I feel like I'm fangirling all over your page, lol, but I really adored the tone and the voice that you've set this story up. I like how we got a snapshot of them together in the first chapter (what was that about?! It was like the aftermath of an asswhopping and even though we didn't see the fight we knew it was brutal, even if it was quick) and then in this one you can see their personality before they get together but at the same time the sort of instant chemistry/attraction they have for each other.

Also, LMAO at:

["He looks like he stinks."

Maggie Davenport's eye twitched as her best friend's mouth loudly released the Blow-Pop currently marring her speech.

"And has a little issue with the Big H."]

I've had those conversations with friends. Like "I guess he's cute but  he looks like he stinks/doesn't bathe" ...

Reviewer: Jammi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/27/12

Rated: Mature Content
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Summary:

Pretty rich boy Nikki Vera is bored of having everything he wants. When his friends dare him to sleep with Sam Rutherford, suddenly his life starts to become interesting. 

Sam Rutherford is mannish, rude, and violent. It's said that she's a gang member who's spent some time in juvie. Rumors true or not, she's not the type of girl to be messed with. Sam is more likely to break Nikki's jaw than give him the time of day. 

It's going to take all of Nikki's charm and even some help from fate for this to have a happy ending. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 689
Read Count: 1295
Published: 03/11/12
Updated: 03/11/12




Title: Chapter 1: The Bet

I'm intrigued and amused. I don't have a problem with the characters so far because you've clearly set them up to be assholes, I mean, they could be saying bare compliments but the  minute you involve bets to sleep with people you're an asshole.

I will say I was confused about their genders based on names. Not Sam so much as the spelling of Nikki. That's the feminine way to spell it and I just can't imagine a lady killer being that effective with a female name.

It'll be interesting to learn more about Sam since so far we just have someone who dresses very thuggish/manly and has anger issues,  lol.

Also, I don't mind the whoopi comments or those types of things since I think it clearly highlights the type of characters we're dealing with and they're funny.

Great start even if the chapter is super short.

Reviewer: Jammi Signed
Date: 03/11/12