Title: Chapter 1: The old lion.
Oh thank you thank you thank you for updating! Omg... Carla... Vita is one crazy son of a b*tch. Oh lord a mercy... It gives me comfort that Aza *whether he realizes it or not* somewhat cares for Carla. Vita is sick for raping him.. omg. Sick bastard.
How the hell is he going to use her for "breeding" like some animal?! God, I hate that word... it brings me back to the slave master days and that's exactly what Aza and Carla are to him... slaves. I only hope that they find a way out of this together...
Please update soon! Oh and your formatting is fine once you get everything together so don't let some people discourage you. It is a very good story and don't stop. Please continue, I'm hooked. <3
Author's Response: You are the writer of all my fave stories. I'm sorry I don't really look at the Author's names very often. I just look for the story....man I hope you get to update soon. I just decided to click on your link and low and behold you are one of the writers I have been waiting for. Thank you for your words, I will admit that I was a little down. I know she was just trying to be helpful. Thank you for your words they really made me happy. I mean seriously I am crying tears of happiness, because I just want to connect with people and share. Your review has been nothing but inspiring for me to write the next chapter. Thank you so much.
Reviewer: DarkandLovely Signed
Date: August 13 2012