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Real name: Rejena

Member Since: 06/09/08

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"If you pay attention, then you can draw inspiration from anywhere. So much of that is paying attention, to details and to what’s going on in your life. People say, “Where do you writers get your ideas?” and I say, “We get them from the same place everybody else does. We just notice when we’re having them."


-Neil Gaiman


*My original stories are being dusted off, revamped and recycled for later use. 


 



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A fantasy tale set in Llanview.  The world is split in two, the light and the dark, in the light are the humans that walk the earth blissfully unaware that in the darkness creatures of the night wait to strike.  Evangeline Williamson is a retired vampire slayer who all her life has had to straddle the line between the light and the dark.  Living a quiet life in Llanview she thinks she has managed to escape her secret past until she becomes the object of affection for two rivals from different vampire clans.  Drawn to both, she finds herself caught up in old vendettas and hidden agendas.  Now as a clan war threatens to break out jeopardizing all of humanity, Evangeline must make a choice: follow her head and lead a normal life in the light or follow her heart and her soul mate into the dark.  



Table of Contents
Categories: Daytime Television, One Life to Live
Characters: Evangeline Williamson, Layla Williamson, Original Character(s), Other
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Fantasy
Story Status: None
Pairings: Jovan (One Life to Live), Tangeline (One Life to Live)
Warnings: Dark Fic
Series: When Night is Falling
Chapters: 20
Completed:No
Word count: 38229
Read Count: 6320
Published: 06/29/08
Updated: 08/28/08
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Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Oh I liked this chapter.  Todd and Evangelne's little dance is so hot and I'm liking Yul.  Todd's reaction to Blair made me laugh out loud.  Great chapter.



Author's Response: Glad you like Yul, he's not going to be a very nice guy but he is DAMN sexy LOL! 

Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/29/08

Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Hugh is a smart guy.  I feel for him and Evangeline pretty much lied to his face about her reaction to Todd.  Have to wonder why she doesn't do the decent thing and just let him go so he can find someone that can make him happy. 

 Still on the Tangeline train by the way.  Nice update.



Author's Response:

I'd like to think that Evangeline is lying more to herself than Hugh when it comes to her feelings about either Todd or Caleb, though she may be intrigued and attracted to them, given her history and being a slayer she is very clear that she doesn't want to be involved with either of them, she kind of has a war raging inside of herself I think and it won't be getting any easier.  I think Evangeline does love Hugh and I hope that this comes across in my writing, I think she would like nothing more than to be with Hugh and have a normal life but she struggles with knowing that she will never be normal.  Evangeline has pretty much always been alone other than Layla who's on the other side of the ocean so I think she is selfishly hanging on to Hugh because he's the only one that she has and next to Layla he knows her as well as anyone (save the all the vampire stuff).  Obviously there's a price to be paid for trying to have your cake and eat it too though. . .

Sorry BlackMa, the tangelines are going to step aside for a minute though because it's Caleb's turn to bat hahaha.

Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/30/08

Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Well you know I loved this backstory section.  Like how we got a peek into Evangeline's head here as well.  Caleb and John's interactions were very real and I love the moment Caleb discovered his father's secret life. Great, great writing.

Author's Response: Thank you BlackMa, for reading, reviewing and your encouragement when I was hitting a brick wall, can't say that enough.  Evangeline is going to have a lot to consider when all is said and done I think.  I had fun writing John and Caleb's interaction because I really wanted to use that as an opportunity to contrast them and distinguish Caleb as his own man with an interesting history.  And I enjoyed writing another slayer scene!

Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/28/08

Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Nice.  Loved all the mythology behind the vampire clans.  Mahdokht was very cool and girl you put the magic word in there.  "Lilith."  (Please, please?) Anyhoo, so the plot thickens and we've got a clue as to what might go on in Llanview.  An army of the dead eh? Nice.  Great update, and waiting for more. 

Author's Response: Thanks!  I worked really hard on hammering out the mythology combining real life folk lore with my own made up stuff.  Mahdokht is a very interesting vampire, and in upcoming chapters you will see her role more clearly and how she mentored Caleb for a specific purpose.  So yeah the point finally emerges, it only took 20 chapters hahahaha.  Battle lines are going to be drawn and Evangeline is going to have to decide whether she is going to stand on the sidelines or pick a side and by the time Todd's story is revealed her choice won't get easier.  Thanks for the review and stars!

Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/28/08

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 54]
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This is a re-imagining of the Spanish movie Sex with Lucia but with some major changes and a different ending.  In London, writer Oliver Convery falls into a whirlwind relationship with the vibrant Kylie Winters, a Canadian ex-patriate working as a waitress in Brixton.  After a tragic series of events Kylie finds herself escaping to the small island of Madeira. While there, she’s drawn to Alex, an American surfer and free spirit who seems to represent everything Oliver is not.  She also becomes enchanted by Lalita, an alluring but cynical woman also seeking solace on the beautiful island.  As Kylie seeks to unravel the mysteries surrounding Oliver and the last novel that he was writing, she finds herself learning more and more about the web of secrets and lies that ultimately led to his downward spiral.  Where will the truth lead her: back to man of her dreams or into the arms of the man who has offers her a new reality?



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:Yes
Word count: 34851
Read Count: 4391
Published: 06/30/08
Updated: 08/20/08




Title: Chapter 3: Kylie and Oliver

“Are you going to have sex with me Ollie?” The corners of his lips turned up in a smile, he pulled him towards her and held on to her.

“We’ve got a lifetime for that Kylie.” He shut his eyes and within moments they had both drifted off into a deep sleep, as though neither of them had slept for years, as though subconsciously their bodies had known that they were missing.

I loved this part.  Great chapter.



Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/02/08

Title: Chapter 5: Love in Reverse

He was talking to his friend Johnny and he says 'most people hate their pain, I don't. I thank God for my pain because it reminds me that I'm still alive and as long as I'm alive –'"

"-it's never too late to start over." Oliver finished the line from his book, surprised to hear someone else quoting his own words back to him.

My favorite part. Very nice chapter greatO.



Author's Response: I'm glad you liked that part, I liked this chapter as well because I wanted to hopefully shed a little light on how Ollie was/is and how he's going to change throughout the story as a result of some things that happen.

Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/03/08

Title: Chapter 6: Strangers, Friends and Lovers

I really liked this chapter.  The conversation was very well done and I really liked that part about not quoting Shakespear.  LOL.  Claudio is so right--it's almost tragic to read Oliver's denial.  

Great chapter.



Author's Response:

Hahaha I'm glad you liked the line about Shakespeare, it seems like something an artist would say doesn't it?  This, just so you know, is a major departure from the film, but as I was watching the film and the story between the original two characters I wondered how it was that no one told them that perhaps they weren't being realistic, I think everyone needs a friend that gives them a reality check every now and again.  I also wanted to shed some light into Ollie's past to provide some understanding of maybe why he is the way he is and how he ends up where he does.

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/03/08

Title: Chapter 16: The Beginning of the End (breakdowns and breakthroughs)

Okay, great chapter.  Man I missed this story and I'm going to be sad when it's over.  You've done an amazing job.

Second, I loved the interaction with Alex and Kylie.  Seriously, all I coudl think when I read it was how much she deserved a guy like that, who obviously respects her and wants something for the long hall.  It's like she's just realizing that loving someone doesn't have to hurt all the time.

I'm glad Ollie is finally getting a clue.  I think he needs to do a 12 step of sorts where he makes amends for all those people he's hurt in some way over the years. 

That said---while I'm still rooting for Alex, most of all, I'm rooting for a happy Kylie.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much BlackMa, that means a lot!  It feels really good to put this story to bed but it's also a little sad for me as well.

Yes Kylie is learning that there is more to love than drama and pain and Alex is a guy that really helps her to feel more young and alive and hopeful.

And Ollie is getting a clue hahaha only took a near death experience to get there!  He still has a ways to go but I have faith he'll get there.

Thanks for the review and stars, hope you like the ending!

Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/16/08

Title: Chapter 17: Down the Rabbit Hole

Yay! That was a great ending.  Loved, loved, loved every chapter.  Kylie and Ollie's talk was great.  I figured Mya's death didn't happen exactly the way in his book but it was still heartbreaking all the same.  I think my favorite moment had to be Lalita jumping down the rabbit hole. It was beautiful.  Well done greatodin and I though the ending was absolutely perfect. 

Author's Response: I'm glad you like the ending BlackMa!  The death was heatbreaking, I was really happy to be able to give Lalita that reunion with her daughter.  Thank you so much for reading and all the fantastic reviews.

Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/21/08

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 135]
Summary:

A Doctor Who/Supernatural Crossover: When Dr. Martha Jones hits a rough patch in her life (her fiancée's been stepping out on her and her confidence in her job performance is waning) she calls on her best friend, The Doctor, to sprint her away, losing herself in promises of far off galaxies and fantastic new worlds. It’s a trip she’s taken before. Only this time, she’s suddenly ripped away from the TARDIS and tossed into a strange car with an even stranger (though admittedly very attractive) man at the wheel, ranting about his missing brother and evil demons. Which was all very ridiculous, because everyone knew that demons weren’t real.

Were they?

Dean Winchester was having a pretty good night for once. He and his brother Sam had killed a nasty demon in record time, and he’d been settling in for an evening of cold beer and hot women. So when his brother disappeared inside some kind of bright light, to say he was irritated would definitely an understatement. He had no idea where Sam was, or how to find him. And now he had some crazy (though very hot) British chick yaking about aliens and time machines, like that stuff was real.

It’s not, is it?



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Dr. Martha Jones
Classification: Crossover
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Drama, Horror, Science Fiction , Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: Martha/Ten (Doctor Who)
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 15
Completed:Yes
Word count: 66449
Read Count: 49608
Published: 07/01/08
Updated: 11/05/08




Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Three

*sigh* I love this story.

The library sequence was great.  Sam having the two shadows made me very, very nervous. But as the Doctor said, why did they leave him alone?  This chapter was classic for Dean. His Ruby convo was funny as hell.  Loved Martha's quick thinking and the addition of the pictures was a great idea.    Update it soon. I demand it.



Author's Response:

I love the Library, it's so creepy.....

I thought I should add pics for those who may not have seen the shows, because I'm not the best at detailed description (I know and accept this about myself...)

Thanks for reviewing, and the stars...they are very bright.

Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/17/08

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Five

Okay once again in fangurl heaven.  Love Donna and her family.  Her grandfather getting his good hat had me LMAO.  And poor Sam.  He really is clever.  He's just no Martha.  Loved Jack's entry, it was classic. 

Bobby and Deans argument over the snoring made me LOL.  Then there was that sexy ass kiss with Dartha.  Yummy.  I hate her and I love her all at once. 

Finally, those closing scenes with the master in hell are always creepy perfect.  I LOVE it.  Great as always!



Author's Response:

Oh, I geek out everytime I write this. I always wonder if I'm a bit too enthusatic though, if I'm jamming too much from the shows in one story. Especially Doctor Who, I'm in overload right now I think.

Bobby and Dean could argue all day if it were up to me, I love those guys. And I kind of hate Martha for the kiss too, and she's in my head.

I love crazy and I love the master going crazy. Never underestimate the power of the creepiness....

Thanks for the stars Black!

Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/04/08

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Six

First off, thank you so much for updating.  I didn't realize how much I missed this fic.  Love Martha's snarky exchange with the demon and Dean is so gone on him some Dr. Jones.  Bobby is a favorite as always and kudos for the Harmony Vamp pic.

Jack had me LMAO, whining about being sent to America.  I'm thinking he's going to show up when Martha leasts expects it.  That line about the Doctor asking him to let her know he's coming was just so...awwwww.   Sam is great and it's interesting he chose to stay with the Doc rather than return to his brother.  Someone's getting dazzled by the Tardis I think.  Donna is awesome as usual and her line about information being shared before "the bloody recap" was funny as hell.

Excellent.  Just bravo.

P.S.  Gordon's back? Whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy



Author's Response:

Thanks Black, I missed it too. Which is why this last chapter when on a bit longer than usual I suppose. Got a bit excited.

Wanted Martha to adapt to the Supernatural world a bit, get a little physical and snarky. Glad you like the Harmony pic, I miss Buffy something awful.

And Jack just wants back in the TARDIS, it's what he always wants I think. And I wanted to get a bit more in The Doctor's feelings for Martha in this one, so I'm glad you enjoyed that. Sam loves the TARDIS and it's starting to love him back, like a real companion.

And yes Gordon's back. Suck it up.

Thanks for the review Black. :)

Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/14/08

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter Eleven

Awesome chapter. Best one yet. Love that the gangs all here. My favorite had to be the awkward meeting between the Doctor and Dean.  Loved the Doctor calling Dean on hi shit and Dean giving back as good as the Doctor dished out.  Ruby's possession by the Master was creepy goodness. Loved it.  Can't wait for the finale. I know it's gonna rock. Great job.

Author's Response: Thanks Black! Will update this again sooner this time, must finish before the hair falls out. :)

Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/19/08

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 64]
Summary:

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Jason Morgan got his memory back after recovering from a gunshot wound and remembers How It Use To Be. His first priority is finding his first, love Keesha Ward. This is my version how it happened.:)

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Daytime Television, General Hospital
Characters: Keesha Ward
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: Jason/ Keesha (General Hospital)
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 1700
Read Count: 4139
Published: 07/03/08
Updated: 08/13/08




Title: Chapter 1: Destination

Okay, you are killing me with these little Jason and Keesha snippets.  You cannot stop there.   What is he going to say?  How is she gonna react?  You said Keesha was seeing someone else.  Is she just going to drop him for Jason?

Pleeeeease write more. 



Author's Response: Lol:) I will definitely try to update soon.

Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/03/08

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 52]
Summary:

jason keesha 

General Hospital: Jason/Keesha

Someone is framing Sonny and Jason for the murder of Manny Ruiz. Jason turns to Keesha for help in clearing his name. Will she find the real murderer in time or will she have to arrest the man she Adores?

:) 



Table of Contents
Categories: Daytime Television, General Hospital
Characters: Keesha Ward
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Jason/ Keesha (General Hospital)
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 7643
Read Count: 8975
Published: 07/03/08
Updated: 10/12/08




Title: Chapter 5: Smile

Nice update AshAli.  I was surprised Mac agreed to let Jason come along. For real, Keesha deserves to be fired after that little stunt.  Love makes you stupid I guess.  Am I suppose to feel sorry for Deacon cause I do.  

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review. I think Mac let him come along because he trust Keesha, he's just mad as hell at her. LOL

Love is definitely a culprit sometimes. She needs to take her blinders off:)

Deacon is in love much like Keesha is. The just love different people. 

Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/14/08

Rated: Most Ages
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Summary:

CSI: Miami fic. Alexx knows this scenario well, but it's never been quite like this . . .

 (Spoilers up thru the earlier episodes of season 6.)



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Alexx Woods
Classification: Cannon
Genre: Drama, Friendship
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 720
Read Count: 1309
Published: 07/05/08
Updated: 07/05/08




Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Excellent job.  I love how you incorporated the fear theme. It was seamless.  I actually don't watch this show on a regular basis so feel as though I'm getting fresh insight into Alex's character.  Thank you for posting this and I hope you post more.

Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/06/08

Rated: 17 and older
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Days of Our Lives: When her marriage falls apart yet again, Lexie Carver decides she’s had enough. Tired of trying to live down the DiMera family name, and the sordid history that comes along with it, she decides to live her life the way she wants, on her terms. And when a very sexy and very young Philip Kiriakis confesses a long held crush, Lexie makes the impulsive decision to throw caution to the wind. And after all, it’s just one night.

 

No one has to know.



Table of Contents
Categories: Daytime Television, Days of Our Lives
Characters: Lexie Carver
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: Lexie/Abe (Days of Our Lives)
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:Yes
Word count: 22408
Read Count: 7736
Published: 07/06/08
Updated: 09/24/08




Title: Chapter 4: Three

Oooooooooooooh, Lexie. In the parking lot?  Oooooh.  That was majorly hot.  Philip's got it bad and Lexie isn't fighting him of by any means.  Love EJ's appearance.  Kayla is boring as hell but whatcha' gonna do.  She is a Brady after all.  Nice chapter!



Author's Response:

What's wrong with parking lots? They can be hot right? :) Glad you're digging the Phil/Lexie action, and I loved bringing EJ into the mix. And Kayla is a Brady, so....

 

 

Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed
Date: 07/27/08

Title: Chapter 8: Seven

Well, that definitely was an eye opening chapter.  I'm not an Abe fan by any means but he was dead on with what he said to Lexie.  I'm all for getting yours but what kind of mother doesn't answer her phone when she's got a small kid out there somewhere because she's too busy getting her rocks off?

A Dimera apparently.  (And she killed me with that stuff about Sami and EJ-how obnoxious was that?)

It is good that she finally admitted that's what she is and she's never going to be anything else.  I'd be interested to say how hard she fights Abe for Theo, seeing as how she's pretty much thrown all that out the door.  And Phillip---well we know what he's concerned about. 

Little Phillip---who's very, very happy right now.

Great chapter TBG.  As always you rock.



Author's Response:

Um, a bad one?  Lexie's not the greatest mom in the world at all. She's embracing her selfish nature a bit, which is bad for Theo. But good for Philip. Very good for Little Phil.

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/13/08

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[Reviews - 94]
Summary:

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In this story, I've paired Keesha Ward and Nikolas Cassadine from "General Hospital."  I wrote this in 1999, although the story takes place in 2004.  Keesha is living in Barbados, after a broken engagement to A.J. Quartermaine.  Keesha is happy with her life in Barbados, but when Nikolas arrives looking for Robin Scorpio, Keesha finds herself falling for the handsome prince and is also reminded of her past in Port Charles.

Other settings include Port Charles, New York, and Simsbury, Connecticut.

The Main Characters: Nikolas Cassadine, Keesha Ward, Jason Morgan, Carly Morgan, Michael Morgan, A.J. Quartermaine, Eve Lambert-Quartermaine, Cecily Quartermaine (Eve and A.J.'s daughter), Stefan Cassadine, Lucky Spencer and Elizabeth Webber (aka L&L2), Emily Bowen-Quartermaine, Ned Ashton and Alexis Davis, with the possibility of others being added later as the story progresses.



Table of Contents
Categories: Daytime Television, General Hospital
Characters: Keesha Ward, Original Character(s)
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 39
Completed:Yes
Word count: 147459
Read Count: 8111
Published: 07/10/08
Updated: 09/15/08




Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Okay, first off, please forgive me for letting this story slip through my fingers. I kept meaning to come back to it and I'm so glad I did.  This is the GH I used to love, with Stephan and Carly and Jason and Michael.   Loving the addition of Keesha to the mix and her interaction with Nic has got me all kinds of intrigued.  However, the Robin convo can end at any time. For reals....chick is dead.  Moving on....LOL

Author's Response: Hi!  Thanks for your review and the stars! :-)  Glad you enjoyed the chapter.  I understand about Robin, LOL, but she'll be mentioned sporadically and may have a tie-in to some things that may happen.  Sorry!!

Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/03/08

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 155]
Summary:

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This is a General Hospital fan fic that takes place in 2014.  When Keesha Ward left the show in 1998, she returned to Philadelphia to tend to her sick father.  In my story, Keesha also found out she was pregnant by A.J. Quartermaine.  She gave birth to a daughter, Julianna Mae Ward, and has remained in her family home all this time.  She studied to become a nurse and had a successful career until a diseased liver brings her closer to death than life, and she decides it's time to let A.J. know he has a daughter.

Other PCers are also in this story.  Sonny and Carly Corinthos have died.



Table of Contents
Categories: Daytime Television, General Hospital
Characters: Keesha Ward
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 64
Completed:Yes
Word count: 151015
Read Count: 195841
Published: 07/14/08
Updated: 08/25/08




Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ha! I love that reaction.  I'm guessing that's Julianna who slammed the door in AJ's face.  Sorry it took me so long to get to this one.  However, I always though AJ got a raw deal on the show so I'm happy you're giving him the story he deserves.

Author's Response:

Hi, BlackMamba! :-)  Thanks for reading, reviewing and the stars! :-)  Yep, it was Julianna.  LOL!  I wanted to write a story for AJ and Keesha, especially because of the way Keesha/Senait was treated on the show. :-(  I wanted to try to keep her going through fan fic. :-)

 

Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/08/08

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oooh, so he knows that she could be his daughter.  Julianna's kinda rowdy.  Liking her a lot.

Author's Response:

Thanks again!  I'm glad you like Julianna. :-)  She was fun to write for, even with the rollercoaster ride she took me on.  LOL!

 

Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/08/08

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Oh, you killed Sonny.  Brava! I do like Carly, but she can annoying so it's all good she was in the limo.  Jason and Courtney are under a rock I hope.  So AJ just didn't call Keesh? Heh? Kinda cold.  I can see why Julianna isn't to keen on meeting him.

Author's Response:

Hi!  For the purposes of this story, Sonny and Carly needed to be gone.  LOL!  Now, Jason and Courtney are another matter.  LOL!  Yeah, more will be explained about what happened with AJ, but that's what Julianna knows.  Her father didn't care about her mother, so, too bad for him. *grin*

 

Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/08/08

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Noooooooo!!! This is so sad. Keesha had to trick her little girl to get her out of the house.  I wonder why she kept the secret all this time.



Author's Response:

Hi!  Yeah, my poor Keesha. :-(  But she'll keep on fighting!! :-)  Hopefully, the details will make sense to you as you read the chapters about what happened between AJ and Keesha, or should I say what didn't happen. LOL!

 

Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/08/08

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Oh nice.  So Julianna's friends with Michael but doesn't know their shared history.  How cool.  I like your Michael so much better than the one on the show.  He was a little ass (excuse my french). 

Author's Response:

Yeah!  Their history/circumstances worked for what I wanted to do with this story. :-)  LOL about Michael.  I know what you mean.  I felt I needed to make him a lot different than how he's portrayed on the show, especially since he's older in my story and there were certain things I wanted to have happen. :-)

 

Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/08/08

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Oh, this chapter got me choked up.  That description of Keesha and AJ seeing her for the first time was just so sad.  Nice to see AJ doing good things with his life.

Author's Response:

Thanks! :-)  Yeah, that was a hard chapter for me to write.  I still wanted the *idea* of AJ and Keesha to be there, but I also knew I had to try to portray Keesha realistically for the story to make sense.  LOL!  Luckily for me, the characters cooperated with what I wanted to do.  LOL!

 

Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/08/08