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Member Since: February 28 2012

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ME&U by Elizablu
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 586]
Summary:

 

 

Mal has wanted her since the first night they met. CoCo has been fighting her instant attraction from day one. Will past dirty deeds keep these two from the one thing they both need...each other.

DISCLAIMER: All publically recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. (ME!!) The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

ME&U is an original work of fiction please do not copy or post this story to any other websites.

ME&U © 2011 by C.E. Givens (Elizablu)

###DUE TO A FUCKING THIEF KALANI ZOLDYCK, I TOOK MY STORIES DOWN###



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Kitten's Bed & Bath
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 9674
Read Count: 127256
Published: September 02 2011
Updated: September 22 2014

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Title: ME&U

Glad to see that you are back. Great update!!

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Date: February 02 2014
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The Warrior's Bride by Spiderbite
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 219]
Summary:

Lieutenant Brady Sloane was a good man, but always seemed to finish last with women, until now.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Love Is Blind
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 16076
Read Count: 24538
Published: March 03 2012
Updated: May 06 2016

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Title: Chapter 1: One

I just have to say that your writing is so genius. I love the way you express your thoughts. This story is just so marvelous. Your characters always have that chemistry needed to make a great story. Brady and Penny just melt together and I love it. I love Brady's team and how they rally around him. I cannot wait to find out more about Penny and see them grow towards love.

Please do not stop writing because you are talented and you should use that talent and spread joy as you have.

You have the most awesome Penname

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Date: March 03 2012
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Will and Ana by SafeHaven
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 450]
Summary:

 

stories/2011/images/William_Kapori.jpg        stories/2011/images/Ana.jpg

 

 

 

William Lucas Kapori was a self-made millionaire. At 40 he had everything he ever wanted, a beautiful twenty something girlfriend, a luxurious mansion, and a job that he loved. His life was perfect, so why was he pursuing Ana Kay.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 13
Completed:No
Word count: 52745
Read Count: 78020
Published: March 29 2012
Updated: April 10 2014

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Title: Chapter 7: {Seven}

Amazingly beautiful and excellent!!!!!

love the way you write

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Date: October 22 2013
Title: Chapter 8: {Eight}

I love this story!!!!! You are an awesome writer

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Date: October 22 2013
Title: Chapter 9: {Nine}

Ruth reminds me of those type of mothers who give thier child everything and think that they are perfect and can do no wrong. They always end up on some sort of medicine because they can't deal with the fact that their child is evil and crazy just like them. She is in serious denial and I hope that she gets jail time for violating the restraining order! she needs hospitalization.

Frederick just needs death. He is beyond the point of fixing and death is the ONLY cure! Monica should be the one to kill him. He forced her to help him rape Ana. I want her to kill him and Edward but leave EL alone. I think that she thinks of Ell as bad becuase she knows that if she looks at her she will see her failure and what she allowed to happen. El reminds her of what she wants to forget.

i hate Edward. I don't think that Nathan is bad. He's a Kapori there hS to be a reason that he was with other women. I hope that he gets right and beats Edward I hate this man . Trying to hurt someone to keep his job is crazy,

AWESOMEUPDATE. now DO it again !!!!!

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Date: October 22 2013
Title: Chapter 6: {Six}

Can you hate a fictional character? I mean I actually hate Frederick with just about every fiber of my being!!!!! That man is seriously delusional and he needs to die! He can't see Ana now she is just starting to grow in confidence! Make him all off a cliff or something I hate him

EXCELLENT WRITING!!!

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Date: October 22 2013
Title: Chapter 5: {Five}

Good witch Glenna I guess, she surprised me! I guess is not all bad and does have a heart! I loved the speech that she said to Ana! That was beautiful,

I love my man Will, I love the way that he is with Ana. I love that she is slowly coming out of her shell and beginning to realize what a real man is like,

question why can't Frederick die?

excellent

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Date: October 22 2013
Title: Chapter 3: {Three}

This story is so wonderful. I love Will and Ana. Please give me more of this romance. I love it so!!

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Date: April 06 2012
Title: Chapter 2: {Two}

This chapter was so moving and powerful. it was beautiful and filled with sorrow. I loved it. You are an awesome writer.

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Date: April 06 2012
Title: Chapter 1: {One}

I love this already.I love the emotion running through it. Will and Ana is already one of my favorites. well done

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Date: April 06 2012
Title: Chapter 4: {Four}

You are a romance writer witha side of I'll kick your ass!!! I love Will and Ana. I love how you write them. i love Will's protective instincts abotu Ana. he is ALL MAN. He will keep our Beautfiul Ana safe and warm. I love them.

Frederick is a freak. He has to get his comeupends soon. Are we going to meet Vincent? It would be so healing for he and Ana to talk.

Did I mention that I love this story. I know that I will go to sleep dreaming about what you are writing next and then I will wake up searching for an update. I love this story and you are an awesome writer.

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Date: May 01 2012
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Falling Stars by KarenaAngel
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 219]
Summary:

He loved to see them suffer. The pitiful humans that they desperately need to survive. Oh how she would suffer the girl who was nothing but a twinkling star, and he knew just as good as anyone that stars were never meant to stay. They were destined to fall and look beautiful as there innocence fades away.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Science Fiction
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content , Threesome+, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 23
Completed:No
Word count: 60375
Read Count: 132543
Published: July 23 2012
Updated: June 18 2014

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Title: Chapter 3: Clarity Aproachs

Scifi I love this story is very interesting please continue 



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Thank you very much.

 Reviewer: TheMaelstrom Signed starstarstarstar
Date: July 28 2012
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Domestic by AntiVenom
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 154]
Summary:

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He wasn't anyone's choice for a companion. His crippled psyche made him ruthless not better. However, to one man he was perfect....a perfect weapon to control.

 



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Categories: Movies
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Romance, Science Fiction
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Graphic Violence, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 24932
Read Count: 12827
Published: December 20 2017
Updated: February 22 2021

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Title: Chapter 3: III

Khan and Nyota are so mesmerizing. I can picture them. I am so into this story. Carol is so jealous and dangerous. Please do not let her hurt Nyota.... I don't want these two separated.... this is amazingly written

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Date: January 10 2018
Title: Chapter 4: IV

(Sigh) That was totally Awesome!!!! I love her friends and I hate coniving Carol. I love this!!!!!

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Date: January 10 2018
Title: Chapter 5: V

This is just so Lovely to read! I am loving this Romance

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Date: January 10 2018
Title: Chapter 6: VI

I am going to sound like a broken record but i completely love this story and the intrigue and background noise going on besides their denial that they are falling in love with each other. You have all your pieces in perfect position. Outstanding!

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Date: January 10 2018
Title: Chapter 7: VII

I am dying for MORE!!!!! Please update soon!!!!!! LOVE THIS

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Date: January 10 2018
Title: Chapter 1: I

I am already deep into this story!!! Khan and Nyota what??????? Loving it

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Date: January 10 2018
Title: Chapter 2: II

I love these two. The feelings that you invoke in these characters is amazing!!!! This is ROMANCE and I love ROMANCE....

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Date: January 10 2018

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.