Penname: amlaamar [Contact]

Real name: Anne-Marie Laamar

Member Since: April 06 2012

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[Reviews - 315]
Summary:

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Taylor Mooreland has more than her share of problems. Her mother's an irresponsible dreamer who's more interested in floating from audition to audition than she is in paying her bills. So, Taylor's got to keep the ship afloat, taking care of her little brother and working to help pay the bills while she's going to school. And if life wasn't difficult enough, now she's gotten herself into quite the mess with a guy who thinks she's a man.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction, Miscellaneous
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 16
Completed:Yes
Word count: 48727
Read Count: 129981
Published: January 15 2009
Updated: June 09 2013


Title: Chapter 14: Fourteen

Yeah, you really do suck at updating...like big time....I had my doubts.....but I cant let meyself believe that you would leave us all hanging and not finish this wonderful story. So I continued hoping and I am glad I was right! Thank you for the update. I probably wont see another one for another couple of months but I understand and as a loyal reader of yours, I cant help but hope and stay true!

THANK YOU!!!!!

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Date: May 02 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 160]
Summary:

After a rough Summer Alisha Easterly believes that it can only get better with the beginning of her Junior Year of high school... unfortunately sometimes what you want and what you get don't always coincide...

 

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 16
Completed:No
Word count: 36862
Read Count: 38696
Published: February 03 2010
Updated: January 14 2014


Title: Chapter 9: If You Push Me

Im gving this chapter a 10 because of one word: Jubilee. I love her!

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Date: January 31 2013

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter Seven Part Two: ...I Might Push Back

And another 10 point for again, Jubilee and the plot.

Cant wait to read more!

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Date: January 31 2013

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter Eight: Pointe me to the Ballet

I so appreciate this scene esp. after knowing how they first met. How they felt about each other in the beginning.

You did a great job and letting that lack of relationship grow into what took place in this chapter. Nothing rushed, nothing assumed. Thak you. I like it. A lot.

 

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Date: January 31 2013

Title: Chapter 13: Chapter Ten- Kiss Me

It went from being sweet and spicey to scorching HOT in seconds with that last statement he made. THAT IS HOT!

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Date: January 31 2013

Title: Chapter 14: Chapter Eleven Part One- Tailspin

I think you are something awesome. Its like Im watching a movie, only better. I love your characters, Benjamine is something sexy and he deserves a high five for scoring with Gina...who is a riot!

And Daryl...you want to hate him....but Ali handles it so well....you portrayed the whole scene with them so well....thank you again for another wonderful reading. Im looking forward to reading more.

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Date: January 31 2013

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Summary:

*** This story will be removed for editing in preparation for publication. ***

Kendra Dentaris is scared of her luck. At twenty-nine, she's the head graphic designer of a popular gaming website, the brand-new owner of a gorgeous downtown condo, and independent to the bone. And she may be in a relationship that's actually going somewhere. That's if Chase McGuire would stop cheating on her.

According to her best friend Prince, he's totally going to propose. That had to be why he invited her out to a remote village out in western Pennsylvania for the weekend. But Kendra takes a wrong turn and the life she knew before literally disappears.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Friendship, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 48
Completed:No
Word count: 51365
Read Count: 168958
Published: September 28 2010
Updated: August 25 2014


Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Of course, DeLeon...its always been DeLeon for me. Dax is too young, too fresh-faced and eager to please. Though I loved it when he was drunk the night he saved Kendra. That was too funny.

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Date: January 08 2013

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

I personally prefer to do without the pictures...I like my imagination just fine....there's always a fifty/fifty chance of the pictures ruining the the mental image I have in mind for how the characters look like...so if you dont like posting them, fine by me...I agree with you wholeheartedly. And Im loving your story...so loving your story.

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Date: January 08 2013

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

lol! Men after my own heart. Especially Pa...Hehehe....

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Date: January 08 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Intro

I love her already.

Looking forward to reading the rest.

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Date: January 08 2013

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[Reviews - 478]
Summary:

TLAL 

It happened one night. No biggie. Right?

Until Moliere Baker realizes her one night with Simon Ford has repercussions that affect not only them and those they care about, but a brand new life as well . . .

Now there's a wedding approaching and time to come clean is running out. Is there enough love between two friends to last a lifetime once the secret's out?

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Spring Baby-Fic Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:No
Word count: 50743
Read Count: 78804
Published: March 27 2011
Updated: May 01 2016


Title: Chapter 5: Lay in My Bed

You write beautifully. I love it, just sucks you right in.

Cant wait to read more!

 

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Date: January 02 2013

Title: Chapter 16: Another Man's Treasure

WOW! This is some good s**t (as Aunt Mea would probably say).

I knew Cooper slept with Amber. I know it! And the sex scene with Simon and Mo was perfect. The history behind the three tying all of them together....its so juicy Im drooling to know how it all turns out...esp. Cooper. In spite of everything he is a good friend...a good man....and he needs a good woman. Maybe another story for another time? *hint* *hint*...hehehe... Thank you for sharing your wonderful talent of writing! I cant wait to read more.

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Date: January 03 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 163]
Summary:

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In the Sedetian Empire a Dashenka male rules with absolute power. While the female is taught submission and obeisance. And humans are nothing more than slaves. It is within this society that half-breed Aria Skal is born and must learn to accept if she has any hope surviving.  But survival seems nearly impossible when she discovers that her Vadar has sold her to the highest bidder, the son of the Ruling Male.

Oren Di-Lor is a cruel and overbearing male who hates the very air Aria breathes. He is her newly acquired mate and the bane of her existence. 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dubcon, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 41889
Read Count: 31953
Published: August 23 2011
Updated: October 15 2012


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You updated!!!! Thank you! Thank you! THANK YOU!

I LOVE your stories, esp. your Dashenka: Half Breed story. Its got me wanting more. Ive read a lot of stories on here by some of Chamber's more popular authors.  You are the first one Im posting comments for. Please continue updating. If youre published (you should be if you arent already), please give me titles. You would be an automatic-buy for me.

Thank you for sharing your wonderful stories! I'm loving where its taking me. Please continue to share.

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Date: October 16 2012

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 265]
Summary:

Welcome to the city of Baltimore, MD and into the life of Devyn McKnight. Jewelry designer and entrepreneur, Devyn McKnight, thought she was secure in the shell she built around her life, made of family, friends and her jewelry business but an unexpected encounter challenges all that she is and all that she believes she wants to be.  

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Series: Journey
Chapters: 32
Completed:Yes
Word count: 91963
Read Count: 104073
Published: December 11 2011
Updated: January 07 2014


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 2

organism??.....I just had to point that out. I had a good chuckle though.

Loving your story...keep it up!



Author's Response:

Found and corrected.....lol! I guess my spell checker didn't pick it up. thank for reading:-)

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Date: December 10 2012

Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 15

I LOVE it! The growing relationship between these two seem to grow naturally. Nothing is forced, rushed....but natural, as it should be. Their attaction is too....its like its slowing sneaking up on them...not that they have been fighting it knowingly. I dont know hot to explain it....but Im loving it.

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Date: December 10 2012

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 615]
Summary:

 

When rockstar Adam Brand makes a racist remark during a drunken magazine interview, it becomes an international headline.  Within hours his PR Agent concocts the perfect plan to revive his rapidly sinking career before it’s too late, but will Adam be able to pull it off?

 

**** STEREO has been removed for editing, refining and if all goes according to plan, publishing! I couldn't have finished it without all my readers leaving their words and thoughts--even if I didn't always like them--so THANK YOU from the bottom of my heart. <3



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:Yes
Word count: 922
Read Count: 90698
Published: March 24 2012
Updated: August 30 2014


Title: Chapter 5: Rule #1: When In Doubt, Tell him “No”

Im loving this story. Alot. And I esp. love Shaun because she comes across as a genuine person, honest....this whole "game" playing thing with Celia as the mastermind behind it is rubbing off of me in a bad way. Yes, he's a rockstar, but he's still human, with fellings. I dont know if its because you're an amazing writer and so Im feeling everying personally (because you really are an amazing story teller) or if ITS JUST ME because Im taking the story so personally.....I dont know....but it wont stop me from reading! Please update!

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Date: November 30 2012

Title: Chapter 6: Rule #2: No Booty

Im just happy you updated and even more happy after reading it. Love the phone conversation...that was hot. Nothing like humor with a splash of hotness....more please.

Happy New Year...May the new year bring forth all your creative juices in abundance...so you can post more in the Chamber and put a smile on my face. Thank you!

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Date: December 31 2012

Title: Chapter 10: “Did you just say pussy?”

OMG! That was fuckin* hilarious! And seriouly hot!

It was like I was in the room watching the whole conversation...back and forth and back and forth...like a tennis match....hehehe. It was fun. I cant wait for the next update! Thank you!

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Date: May 13 2013

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Summary:

 

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The Redtips Wolf clan wrongfully accused of hunting humans on Vampire Lord Jye's land; must give the only maiden of their pack,Sarason as concubine, to save their clan from destruction.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Fantasy, Horror, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 33031
Read Count: 32745
Published: May 31 2012
Updated: August 10 2013


Title: Chapter 6: Five~

And I thank you for posting your stories on here. Its a pleasure to read. Looking forward to reading more.

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Date: February 25 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 74]
Summary:

Once in your life you find somebody who turns your world completely upside down. You love them just as much as you hate them. You do things you wouldn't normally do but everything you do, you do it like crazy..



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Psychological, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Challenges: Love Me I’m Crazy
Series: Challenges
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 11309
Read Count: 20080
Published: June 11 2012
Updated: June 11 2012


Title: Chapter 1: Like Crazy

These two are crazy!!!! I mean WTF?!?! And I LOVE IT!

You are a writer after my own heart.

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Date: January 08 2013

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Summary:

When recent college grad, Lily Taylor became the personal paralegal to the notorious lawyer of the stars, Aiden Hawkins, she never knew that she would have her hands tied with him...literally.

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 66387
Read Count: 66274
Published: October 03 2012
Updated: July 30 2013


Title: Chapter 7: Turning Tables

Oh Yay!!!

Reviewer: amlaamar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 28 2012

Title: Chapter 7: Turning Tables

I love the chase. I love the dialogue. I love the story. Thank you and have a HAPPY AND PROSPEROUS NEW YEAR (with more stories from you *hint hint*)

Reviewer: amlaamar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 28 2012

Title: Chapter 7: Turning Tables

I had to read this again before going the next chapter. Its that good...esp. the buildup. Your quality of writing is better than most of the self-published authors Ive read of amazon.com. And your storyline and dailogue is so well executed its refreshing because it brings out the story to its fullest potential...of how it should be. If these were real people, theyd be grateful you were their creator because you tell their story beautifully, how it should be told. Thank you!

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Date: January 30 2013

Title: Chapter 7: Turning Tables

In the sex scene, 'pulmeting', did you mean "pummeling"? Just wondering.

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Date: January 30 2013

Title: Chapter 9: He Won't Go-Part 2

Now that you mention it, there were a few instances I had cocked an eyebrow when reading this chapter...the voice was kinda off. Not in a big way...just a little off...in a small way. BUT. Im still loving this story and cant get enough of Aiden and Lily. Hope everything works out for you and the must and life....all the best!



Author's Response:

thats another problem i was having. i think that because i had been going a long time without being able to write, my character instincts were off but hopefully i'll be back on my game next chapter. thanks, things are getting better and i hope you all the best :D

Reviewer: amlaamar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 12 2013

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.