Penname: Loop [Contact]

Real name: Annie

Member Since: May 26 2012

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Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 315]
Summary:

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Taylor Mooreland has more than her share of problems. Her mother's an irresponsible dreamer who's more interested in floating from audition to audition than she is in paying her bills. So, Taylor's got to keep the ship afloat, taking care of her little brother and working to help pay the bills while she's going to school. And if life wasn't difficult enough, now she's gotten herself into quite the mess with a guy who thinks she's a man.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction, Miscellaneous
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 16
Completed:Yes
Word count: 48727
Read Count: 130007
Published: January 15 2009
Updated: June 09 2013


Title: Chapter 11: Eleven

Ahh I love this story! Made be laugh and gasp at the end of this chapter!!! Hopefully Taylor tells Christian the truth soon. Please update quickly :-) 

Reviewer: Loop Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 17 2012

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 415]
Summary:

 

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* ON THE CHAMBER'S TOP TEN MOST FAVORITE STORIES LIST

& NOW KINDLE VELLAS TOP 250 FAVORITES LIST *

FIVE STARS ON AMAZON

When the lines are drawn, will you risk your life to cross them for love?

In the Summer of 1988, tragedy hits home for Charlene Jacobson and her father when her little brother is killed playing a game of basketball in their Detroit housing projects.  She soon finds herself living in the small rural town of Millersville, Georgia, with her estranged grandmother. Millersville is a place where time stands still and the racial divide is as prevalent as the 1950s.  Secrets, lies, and betrayal lurk in every corner. Yet, through it all she finds solace in the arms of Ryan Quinn, a white senior track star and the son of the town Sherriff.  

Will their love cross the finish line?  

EDIT:  Crossing the Finish line has been removed from this site and a revised version with added new content has been published on Amazon Kindle Vella (as of November 2022) under the penname, Shelly B Williams. To those of you who have left reviews, added me to your Favorite Authors and Story Alerts, and helped to make CTFL one of the Top Ten Most Favorited Stories on Valent Chamber, I trully appreciate all the support you have shown me over the years. I hope you will continue to support me as I begin the next phase of my journey as a published author. I couldn't  have done this without you. 

Much Love!

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Challenges: Deep, dark, and mysterious
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 5758
Read Count: 214460
Published: November 07 2010
Updated: January 09 2014


Title: Crossing the Finish Line

Hey, where's the next chapter? I started reading this a few days ago and I have to say its really addictive!!! The characters are cool and your story is well written :-) 

Reviewer: Loop Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 17 2012

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 25]
Summary:

 

Love you like a Brother.

Treat you like a Friend.

Respect you like a Lover



Table of Contents
Categories: Music, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Drugs/Drug Use, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 3478
Read Count: 6423
Published: January 10 2011
Updated: June 27 2012


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Ahhh more please :-) 

Reviewer: Loop Signed
Date: June 27 2012

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 66]
Summary:

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Shy loner white nerd developes caring and complex relationship with popular black girl at school.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Rape, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 13
Completed:No
Word count: 40411
Read Count: 25023
Published: August 02 2011
Updated: April 02 2017


Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Ahh I can't believe you're back. I was so surprised that you added another chapter haha. I re-read everything and it's still as good. Glad Rick an Marva met up after so long...Can't wait to read more, thank you 😊



Author's Response:

Sorry it took soooo long for me to update lol, but I knew I had to eventually make a return! Thanks for supporting this story after all these years <3

Reviewer: Loop Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 31 2017

Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 29]
Summary:

 

 

*Response to the Love is Blind challenge*

 

I've been living so long with my pictures of you...



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters
Challenges: Love Is Blind
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1176
Read Count: 4469
Published: March 04 2012
Updated: March 04 2012


Title: Chapter 1: Pictures of You...

Beautiful :-) And I just happened to be listening to Jeff Buckley while reading this! 

Reviewer: Loop Signed
Date: May 29 2012

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 13]
Summary:

Freaks were the names Malaika and Lucas have been called all their lives. 

Lucas was the black sheep of his family because he had too many freckles and red hair.

Malaika was teased for having dark skin and kinky hair and being from a family full of light skinned people didn't make it any better.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Racism, Rape, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Challenges: Stop Bullying!
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 828
Read Count: 2001
Published: April 29 2012
Updated: April 30 2012


Title: Chapter 1: Cast

Oh wow! I like the cast and the 1st chapter is areally good start!!! Hopefully you'll continue with this :-)

Reviewer: Loop Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 13 2012

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Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 257]
Summary:

make it nasty

 

Emery Johnson has been crushing on her older brothers best friend for years, too bad in his eyes, she will only ever be recognized as 'Darrell's sister'. Ready to change that, Emery enlists the help of a single book to snare her dream man, but along the way someone else steps into the picture, shaking up the feelings that Emery thought were tightly secured and forever stable.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 19
Completed:No
Word count: 116446
Read Count: 148588
Published: June 08 2012
Updated: September 08 2013


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Oh no a cliffhanger lol! Well I wanna read more :-) 

Reviewer: Loop Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 21 2012

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 22]
Summary:


There's no book on this. But there should be



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2556
Read Count: 2619
Published: October 12 2012
Updated: October 12 2012


Title: Chapter 1: It's not as bad as it sounds

Really sweet story. I can relate to Jessica, but being like that is a good and kinda bad thing. But anyway I liked it!!! :-)

Reviewer: Loop Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 21 2012

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 106]
Summary:

They each needed something only the other could fill. Little did they know that something would be their greatest downfall.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 21087
Read Count: 27643
Published: December 10 2012
Updated: October 26 2013


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter One

I love it!! Your cast is great (the dude you cast for Alec is a hottie), the 1st chapter was a really good start & I can't wait to read more!! :-D

Reviewer: Loop Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 12 2012

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Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 34]
Summary:

Rafael Vargas has been in love with Tomiko ever since his teens. When he hears she might be leaving for good he realizes he needs to make a move and soon. There’s only a slight problem. Tomiko is his big sister's best friend and Rafael knows convincing Tomiko to be his is not going to be easy.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Fluff, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Chamber Grindhouse Challenge 4
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 8369
Read Count: 29629
Published: January 03 2013
Updated: August 06 2013


Title: Chapter 3: Crazy Little Things You Do for Lust and Love

Love it! Love the cast and love how its going to. Hurry and post the next chapter soon 😊



Author's Response:

Thank you!! i'm sorry for the late update but it's up now! :D

Reviewer: Loop Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 28 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 72]
Summary:

gdhd

 

"The course of true love never did run smooth." 

 

-William Shakespeare



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Family, Fantasy, Horror, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Incest , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Challenges: What Lies Underneath
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 7990
Read Count: 4283
Published: February 04 2013
Updated: March 30 2013


Title: Chapter 3: Two.

Wow!!!! I love it 😃c6;your cast is really hot, Benji's dad is a a**ehole and Candi needs to go and jump in a hole! I think maybe Hunter, Benji and Arwen are linked in someway but she'd be better with Benji cos he deserves some happiness. Hurry and post more 😊

Reviewer: Loop Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 05 2013

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 89]
Summary:

Love, loss and redemption are found in the most unlikely places.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active, Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 114
Read Count: 34090
Published: February 05 2013
Updated: March 15 2013


Title: Good Grief

Awwwwww the ending of this chapter was so cute 😄 I like both the main characters so can't wait to read more about them. Nicole is a laugh that green plantains line made me laugh lol! So hurry and post the next chapter!!!! 



Author's Response:

Thanks for commenting and rating. Yea Nicole is crazy but ya gotta love her. ;) I'll be posting some new chapters soon. Thanks again. 

Reviewer: Loop Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 12 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 73]
Summary:

“A mighty pain to love it is,
And 'tis a pain that pain to miss;
But of all pains, the greatest pain
It is to love, but love in vain.”



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 28555
Read Count: 11890
Published: April 01 2013
Updated: August 15 2023


Title: Chapter 5: And She Wept

Oh Rider...I wish he knew that Chuck has deep feelings for him. I reckon he loves her, but doesn't know how to tell her??? Anyway hurry and post the newly chapter 😊

Reviewer: Loop Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 04 2014

Title: Chapter 2: And Then There Was Light...

Aww I love it :-) really can't wait to read more

& see where their relationship goes. 

Reviewer: Loop Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 07 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 209]
Summary:

Loki

What happens after Loki falls from the Rainbow Bridge? My first fic EVER. M rating for later chapters.



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies, Original Fiction
Characters: Other
Classification: Alternate Universe, Off Cannon , Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 22
Completed:No
Word count: 49769
Read Count: 40303
Published: April 13 2013
Updated: April 22 2014


Title: Chapter 10: Mocha V

Haha I love your story! So many funny parts, it's well written & I can't wait to read more 😄 thank you!!



Author's Response:

No, thank YOU! :)

Reviewer: Loop Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 19 2013

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Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 629]
Summary:

At some point, you'll have to eventually let your guard down.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:No
Word count: 192818
Read Count: 287677
Published: May 08 2013
Updated: October 03 2015


Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 19

Wow!!! So wasn't expecting Mr Walker to say that he loves Val & the big fight/confrontation that was good. And Henery has issues too, now I understand h a little better :-) Not too sure if Val going after him was good lol but I'm hoping it works out for them both x

Reviewer: Loop Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 15 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 417]
Summary:

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Benjamin Cunningham III decided to finally open the box that his adopted parents had given him which would reveal his past.  Little did he know that its contents would change his life forever.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Rape
Challenges: Through His Eyes
Series: None
Chapters: 16
Completed:No
Word count: 82948
Read Count: 53952
Published: May 15 2013
Updated: September 05 2014


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Deception and Lies

I love it!!!! His uncle/father is a nasty piece of work, I hope he gets his comeuppance!! Can't wait for more, thanks 😊

Reviewer: Loop Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 22 2013

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Moving Forward...Moving Backward

Great chapter!!!! But I'm going to say it again....Raymond is a horrid piece of work! Gah, I can't believe he's like that. He needs to get what he deserves and I hope he does lol! Keep the chapters coming lady & thank you 😊

Reviewer: Loop Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 29 2013

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 1032]
Summary:

   

 

A virtual wallflower for most of her life, what will Sasha do when she encounters the first man to ever make her want to be noticed? Dmitri is a man used to being surrounded by the most beautiful things, including women. Will he accept Sasha, a woman who is usually overshadowed by the beauty of her friends? Is he capable of noticing that while her beauty may not be as blatant, it should still be treaured? This is the story of a wallflower and the man she loves.

 

Sasha: the Wallflower has been removed from this site and is available for purchase on Amazon Kindle. Thank you all for your support!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2670
Read Count: 196744
Published: May 31 2013
Updated: November 25 2015


Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

I should have left a review earlier, but I'll leave one now. I love it can't wait to read more. I really like Sasha but Dimitri needs to get real haha! The ending of this chapter was a little sad. I'm going to read the next chapter now whoop 😊



Author's Response:

Thank you for leaving a review!

Reviewer: Loop Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 16 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 125]
Summary:

I am currently NOT working on this story and don't know when I will be again. Writing this takes a toll on me and I have kinda been posting other things here. Give them a looksie. :]

 

Kensington's battered body ached from abuse, each blow recieved slowly tearing her apart. She was drowning in the hell that once used to be her home until a mysterious stranger comes along. Will he be the one restrore Kensington's faith in the world?

Heads up: The beginning (meaning the first few chapters)  of this story is a bit DARK. If you are of a faint heart than I fear this story is not going to be appealing to you. 


 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 10114
Read Count: 12990
Published: July 25 2013
Updated: May 29 2015


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I loved it!! I read it through up to tho chapter and I want you to continue, please haha :-) Erm I'm not too sure if you should make it supernatural or realistic. Either way I'll keep reading xx

Reviewer: Loop Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 18 2014

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I still love it! Really glad you made an update :-) Kensington deserves happiness and I hope she gets it. Stan needs to go and do one. Please hurry and update soon. Thanks 😊c6;a039;

Reviewer: Loop Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 20 2014

Rated: All Ages
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[Reviews - 19]
Summary:

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"Your presence still lingers here and it won't leave me alone
There's just too much that time cannot erase
And I held your hand through all of these years 
But you still have all of me 
These wounds won't seem to heal this pain is just too real
When you cried, I'd wipe away all of your tears 
Who would knew  such pain could be held by three simple words could hold such much pain in a simple letter.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Friendship
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Character Death
Challenges: Random Letters
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 5063
Read Count: 16441
Published: August 27 2013
Updated: November 09 2015


Title: Chapter 4: First of Many Steps

I'm so happy you made an update, I was waiting ages haha. Loved this chapter and can't wait to read more 

Reviewer: Loop Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 13 2014

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Rated: Members ONLY:Mature Content
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[Reviews - 197]
Summary:

When Joss begins receiving anonymous letters, she has her suspicions as to who might be penning the ominous messages.  But as the list of suspects grows, will she uncover the author’s identity or stumble upon a greater truth?  *A response to the Random Letters prompt.*



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Random Letters
Series: None
Chapters: 15
Completed:Yes
Word count: 46306
Read Count: 37782
Published: August 29 2013
Updated: October 17 2013


Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I loved this!! It was amazing read it all in one sitting haha. Well written wasn't rushed at all. I'm so glad everything worked out in the end. X😊



Author's Response:

Thanks Loop!  So happy to know you enjoyed Joss and Eshan's story.

Reviewer: Loop Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 03 2016

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 33]
Summary:

 

 

Short story about the strange love between two very different people.



Table of Contents
Categories: Music, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General, Supernatural
Genre: Friendship, Romance, Science Fiction
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Fluff, Original Characters, Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 6963
Read Count: 8466
Published: September 15 2013
Updated: May 15 2014


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

That can't be the last chapter??!!! I really really liked this. Can't believe it ended with a note saying goodbye and sorry. Surely he can't stay away forever? And I'm sure Angela will look for him. She let him go when she wants him. Will you do a sequel?? :-)

Reviewer: Loop Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 21 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 32]
Summary:

Who knew the boy with the big dreams and kind smile would be her undoing. She may have fallen in love, but he fell along with her.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 4234
Read Count: 7641
Published: October 20 2013
Updated: December 04 2013


Title: Chapter 5: A Kiss

Ahh no, can't believe you left it like that!! Anyway I'm loving this story of yours, please post soon 😊

Reviewer: Loop Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 04 2014

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.