Penname: M3l4n1_C4rt3r [Contact]

Real name: Melani

Member Since: July 20 2012

Membership status: Member

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[Reviews - 197]
Summary:

When Joss begins receiving anonymous letters, she has her suspicions as to who might be penning the ominous messages.  But as the list of suspects grows, will she uncover the author’s identity or stumble upon a greater truth?  *A response to the Random Letters prompt.*



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Random Letters
Series: None
Chapters: 15
Completed:Yes
Word count: 46306
Read Count: 37782
Published: August 29 2013
Updated: October 17 2013


Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

NOOOOOO!!! You are so evil! How can you end it like that :( lol just kidding

Author's Response:

Who me? *innocent eyes*  This story has an inordinate number of cliffhanger chapters.  I would promise to tried to do better, but I'd only be lying.  ; )  I will try to be prompt with the updates though.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Melanie!

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Date: September 28 2013

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

What a weird question?

Author's Response:

It'll make more sense next chapter.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Melani!

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Date: September 24 2013

Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

omg that was a great ending but i still dont want you to stop! Im so happy for them !

Author's Response:

Lol.  Thanks Melanie!  I may have a little something more for you with Eshan and Joss.

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Date: October 17 2013

Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

No! You cant end it! I wont allow you to. But this chapter was extremely sad and sahirah is a giant bitch!

Author's Response:

Lol.  I'm sorry.  I gotta do it.  Just posted the last two chapters.  Hope you enjoy.  Thanks Melanie!

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Date: October 16 2013

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Great Story! Keep updating plz

Author's Response:

Thanks M3l4n1!  My plate is fairly full right now.  But I'll be as prompt as possible with the updates.  Thanks for reading and reviewing. 

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Date: September 01 2013

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

i knew it was him! But that wasnt the scene i thought it was going to be. Very good story!

Author's Response:

Thanks Melanie!

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Date: September 13 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 160]
Summary:

What's a girl to do when there are two after you? 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Threesome+
Challenges: Give Me a Mountain Man Anyday!
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 6583
Read Count: 43900
Published: September 02 2013
Updated: July 13 2015


Title: The McRyan Brothers

Aww Casey is going to share

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Date: September 21 2013

Title: The McRyan Brothers

Hayes is so rude....but sexy though

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Date: September 18 2013

Title: The McRyan Brothers

Hayes is so rude....but sexy though

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Date: September 17 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 6]
Summary:




Everyone needs to get clean, right?


A one-shot follow up to Bad Blood.





Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1622
Read Count: 2967
Published: September 11 2013
Updated: September 11 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Me gusta !

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Date: September 15 2013

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 33]
Summary:

 

 

Short story about the strange love between two very different people.



Table of Contents
Categories: Music, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General, Supernatural
Genre: Friendship, Romance, Science Fiction
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Fluff, Original Characters, Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 6963
Read Count: 8462
Published: September 15 2013
Updated: May 15 2014


Title: Beneath Your Beautiful

Oh my god! This is SO interesting! I cant wait for you to update this, and your other stories too

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Date: September 16 2013

Title: Beneath Your Beautiful

.......This was so unexpected. But so cool. I almost had a heart attack when I saw that you updated :)

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Date: September 29 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 23]
Summary:

Snippets into the lives of different characters. A foray into emotions and interactions.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dubcon, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 9617
Read Count: 5511
Published: November 14 2013
Updated: May 08 2015


Title: Chapter 4: Seeker

This was amazing! I hate that its only a snippet. I would love for this to be a full story. 



Author's Response:

Thanks. I'm working on it.

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Date: March 16 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 53]
Summary:

Something about him was off from the moment we met. Something in my mind told me this was wrong. That he was dangerous. That we weren't meant to be. But he made me feel like I was a part of something. Like it was us against the world.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 6945
Read Count: 6514
Published: December 08 2013
Updated: December 18 2013


Title: Chapter 2: Flamingo

Ugh! No cliffhangers plz :(

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Date: December 09 2013

Title: Chapter 4: New Reality

Nice!

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Date: December 16 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Take My Hand

Interesting :)

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Date: December 08 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 63]
Summary:

Will she be able to accept his destiny? 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 21775
Read Count: 15061
Published: December 12 2013
Updated: January 21 2014


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

I like this :)

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Date: December 14 2013

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 97]
Summary:

*Revamped and revised version of former story The Assistant*

 

Marissa Jacobs is the assistant to her tyrannical boss Ron Kincaid who is going through a bitter divorce. As the holiday season approaches, her will and sanity is tested by Ron. When Ron shows up at Marissa's apartment drunk, Marissa makes it her mission to help Ron see there is more to life than just being bitter and mean. Of course, she wasn't expecting to fall in love with him.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language
Series: None
Chapters: 22
Completed:No
Word count: 28046
Read Count: 54397
Published: December 12 2013
Updated: December 24 2015


Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Ron is so demanding 😂. Its funny.

Reviewer: M3l4n1_C4rt3r Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 31 2014

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Summary:

In the wake of an ugly divorce, Natalia executes a scheme meant to move her beyond the hurt inflicted by her ex-husband, Richard.  The plan is to ease her suffering by increasing his, and her weapon, a younger man unwittingly drawn into the illicit plot. 

In the quest for revenge, will Natalia realize her goal of bringing Richard to his knees?  Or will vengeance and her weapon of choice become her undoing?

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: December's Wrap-up!
Series: None
Chapters: 40
Completed:Yes
Word count: 120
Read Count: 91987
Published: December 13 2013
Updated: May 02 2015


Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - In His Shoes

So sad 😧



Author's Response:

It is.  Thanks Melani!

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Date: January 19 2015

Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - While the Cat's Away...

This story is so awesome. Its so realistic but satisfying at the same time. If that even makes any sense....



Author's Response:

It makes perfect sense to me.  Thanks Melani!!!

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Date: February 01 2015

Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - Impatience is a Virtue

Wow. This was so exciting! I loved this chapter and I think that Rich is my favorite character 😂



Author's Response:

I'm kinda feelin' Rich myself.  Thanks Melani!

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Date: February 04 2015

Title: Chapter 40: Epilogue

I know that I haven't left many reviews on this story but as cliche as it sounds I am just lost for words. I can't explain how amazing and realistic this story was. You did such a terrific job on this. You are truly talented. 



Author's Response:

Thanks Melani!!!  

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Date: May 03 2015

Rated: Members ONLY:Mature Content
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[Reviews - 173]
Summary:

As Joss and Eshan prepare to wed, will the relationship survive long enough to see "for better" when their families become their "for worse"?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:Yes
Word count: 45613
Read Count: 29760
Published: December 20 2013
Updated: July 09 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Omg! Yes! You are writing about Eshan and Joss again :) im so happy

Author's Response:

I aim to please.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Melanie!

Reviewer: M3l4n1_C4rt3r Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 22 2013

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

This whole story was absolutely beautiful!! I loved every chapter and I cherished every second of reading it. There are no other chracters in the world that are as beautiful and Joss and Eshan. And as much as I have wanted to read about the long 'awaited moment' between Eshan and Josslyn, I would love to wait to read that in another story of yours :) Thank you for blessing me with this beautifully written story.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the awesome review, Melani!!! I'm so glad you enjoyed the story and I look forward to having you along for the next phase of Eshan and Joss's journey.l

Reviewer: M3l4n1_C4rt3r Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 09 2014

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I love Pearl! This is awesome

Author's Response:

Thanks Melanie!

Reviewer: M3l4n1_C4rt3r Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 27 2013

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.