Penname: M3l4n1_C4rt3r [Contact]

Real name: Melani

Member Since: July 20 2012

Membership status: Member

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Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 11]
Summary:

Main Characters:

Seth Milton Alexander

Crystal Mae Pierson

 

L'or Bleu is a tale about love, life, but most of all, a deep friendship that sees them through many obstacles. They share a connection that reminds them life is too short to live in fear and to live each day like it is the last.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 7448
Read Count: 9032
Published: August 12 2014
Updated: August 12 2014


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Wow very interesting :)

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Date: August 15 2014

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[Reviews - 296]
Summary:

Sally McDonald is not who anyone thinks. Her life is filled with secrets. Some she doesn't even know about. But when Storm Monsello sees the terrified girl one night, he never expects how much her secrets would reveal the dark actions of the people he trusted the most.  



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Character Death, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 43
Completed:No
Word count: 133222
Read Count: 425259
Published: September 21 2014
Updated: April 26 2020


Title: Chapter 9: Runaway! Runaway!

I am new to this story but after reading to this point I absolutely love it!! It's completely different from the other stories I have read. And it's so interesting. please keep going 😊😊

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Date: February 14 2015

Title: Chapter 16: My Drug

I loved this chapter. It was super hot but extremely sweet at the same time :)

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Date: June 21 2015

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[Reviews - 15]
Summary:

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Freedom and neutrality was something Victory Red always desired.


However when your born in the middle of a war you can see how that could be difficult.


Luckily Victoria wasn't one to give up.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 7803
Read Count: 14856
Published: September 23 2014
Updated: September 14 2015


Title: Chapter 2: Midnight Prologue

Wow really interesting, keep going please. 😁

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Date: September 27 2014

Title: Chapter 3: Victoria's Dream

I like this. Keep going please :)

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Date: November 05 2014

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[Reviews - 116]
Summary:


   Caleb Garrison has been in love with Grey ever since they were children. He even told his parents while a child that someday he would marry her. However, there was one problem...although adopted, she was legally his sister.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 13
Completed:Yes
Word count: 29115
Read Count: 36915
Published: October 07 2014
Updated: November 05 2017


Title: Chapter 5: Timid

Yes. I love this 😊 !

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Date: October 09 2014

Title: Chapter 4: Erratic

This is very interesting! Please keep going.

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Date: October 08 2014

Title: Chapter 7: Jealousy* Kiss

This is so good. I love Grey and Caleb.

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Date: October 19 2014

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 17]
Summary:

My submission for the grindhouse challenge. Jessa has been living for a year in the Masion inherited to her by her now dead parents whom she never met. Finding her new gated community disturbing at first, it has grown to become her home. Jessa is about to discover how and why, herself and the two handsome brothers that live across the street, Ren and Garrett are bonded to each other. With their help, she will learn her true calling.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe, Supernatural
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Horror, Romance, Science Fiction
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female, Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Incest , Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Sexual Content , Spritualism, Strong Sexual Content , Threesome+, Work in Progress
Challenges: Chamber Grindhouse Challenge 6
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 5380
Read Count: 8287
Published: October 15 2014
Updated: November 03 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- Members of the Triquetra

Nice. I like this. Keep going please :)



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing it. Definitely will keep it going,planning to have an update by next week.

Reviewer: M3l4n1_C4rt3r Signed
Date: October 16 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 6]
Summary:

 

Keisha is trapped in a world she doesn’t know isn’t real.  Tyler is her fiancé and his years of torturing and terrorizing her never happened.  Outside forces try to bring her to her actual reality and try to help her see Tyler for what he really is…a monster.

 

Spin-off-ish story to Chasing Nightmares

 

Also...I'm an idiot because I accidently deleted this story...every chapter is the same as before...except chapter 6.  That one is revised. *face palm*



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Horror, Psychological, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Rape, Sexual Content
Challenges: Chamber Grindhouse Challenge 6
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:Yes
Word count: 10729
Read Count: 3427
Published: October 28 2014
Updated: October 30 2014


Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Good chapter.

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Date: October 28 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 95]
Summary:

 

 

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Joss just knows this summer will change her life... If she can manage to tolerate her bunk leader 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Fluff, Original Characters, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 14449
Read Count: 16599
Published: November 08 2014
Updated: May 06 2016


Title: Chapter 9: Treasure Hunt

So sexy! Got me wanting more 😊



Author's Response:

I hope I can deliver 

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Date: January 26 2015

Title: Chapter 3: Campfire Tales

Tobias is cute :)



Author's Response:

I know right. Thanks for reading

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Date: November 21 2014

Title: Chapter 5: Country Club Fresh

I loved this chapter. And I'm sorry about your house hunting situation, you'll find a better place than Portland. 



Author's Response:

Thank you. There's gotta be sometihng better right? I'll find it lol

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Date: December 10 2014

Title: Chapter 7: First Things First

Really nice chapter :)

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Date: December 31 2014

Title: Chapter 8: You & Me?

I'm happy you updated, and I love this story. I wish the chapters could be a little longer but I'm not complaining in any way a86;



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm going to at least try to update more frequently.

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Date: January 15 2015

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[Reviews - 129]
Summary:

There is such structure in life. But what happens when you break free? What exists beyond that prison?

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Accordance is a original work by CM and is intended for publication so please do not upload, distort, edit, or remove and place on any other site. Respectfully yours, thank you. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: None
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2400
Read Count: 101534
Published: November 23 2014
Updated: June 24 2019


Title: Accordance

Such a beautiful story! I love Hiroto he's so amazing. I am so angry for Hana though, she and Hisae needs a real man to take care of them (besides Roto). Minako is so funny! She is an amazing mother figure.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for commenting ^_^ I appreciate it :D Yes, Hana and her baby need a real MAN. It's nice that Hiroto is stepping up but it is not his place! It's not his job to do this. He's a child himself. Don't worry, Hana will get the love she and Hisae deserves. :D

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Date: April 23 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 67]
Summary:

UNSCRUBBED: The tale of a sleeping beauty (The Scrub Series Book 1) by [Griffin, Elizabeth]             WWW.ELIZABETHGRIFFIN.NET 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 22462
Read Count: 4646
Published: November 27 2014
Updated: January 28 2015


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Six

Wow this is amazing. I'm happy that I stumbled on to this story!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the positive feedback. I really  enjoyed writing Unscrubbed.

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Date: December 11 2014

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 65]
Summary:

He was stuck, having a midlife crisis before the ripe age of fifty. But then he met her. And she became much more than life. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 29164
Read Count: 30388
Published: November 28 2014
Updated: March 13 2015


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This is really good. You're so into depth with this story and its amazing. Keep going, this is awesome :)



Author's Response:

I thank you very much for your post! I try to connect with the readers through pain, and I am never sure if I explain things right to provoke the reader's sympathy with my characters. So your post meant a lot to me. I wanted to take it a little bit furthter and make it a tad bit more realistic. 

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Date: November 28 2014

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I love this chapter :)

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Date: December 03 2014

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[Reviews - 53]
Summary:

He was a bad boy who was used to getting whatever he wanted.

She was the good girl who refused to bow down to his ways.

Together they clashed.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Dark Fic
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 9292
Read Count: 10872
Published: December 01 2014
Updated: March 16 2015


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: The date

Please keep going I like this

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Date: December 03 2014

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: The date

Please keep going I like this

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Date: December 03 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 6]
Summary:

A young woman looking to finally get a boyfriend after spending her whole life being single catches the eyes on an obsessive introvert and a violent and dangerous womanizer.

It doesn't help any that her best friend happens to love her as well.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 1588
Read Count: 2901
Published: January 08 2015
Updated: January 08 2015


Title: Chapter 2: Prologue

Nice first chapter 👍👍



Author's Response:

Thanks, I hope to have the next chapter in to introduce all the characters within the next week or two.

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Date: January 08 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 8]
Summary:

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Reese has hid his true nature for most of his life. It’s been his constant invisible passenger, always silent but present. It waits patiently for the perfect opportunity. This new number just might be it. 

*** also posted on FFnet and AOO under EMorrowluvWordz***



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Joss Carter
Classification: Alternate Universe, Supernatural
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 1235
Read Count: 1539
Published: March 02 2015
Updated: July 06 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Smother

Interesting:)

Reviewer: M3l4n1_C4rt3r Signed
Date: March 02 2015

Title: Chapter 2: poison

This is very intriguing 😁

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Date: July 06 2015

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Summary:

Her mistake was underestimating his obsession with her.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Dark Fic
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 24639
Read Count: 40295
Published: April 23 2015
Updated: July 14 2016


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter one

Very interesting! Please keep on going 😁😁

Reviewer: M3l4n1_C4rt3r Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 23 2015

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.