Thank you so much for updating. I was thinking of this story the other day because I was watching The Voice and Adam's sexy ass said something super funny. Ah those dimples. Any-who so this chapter... was great! 

I really love how your writing is very descriptive. You are able to capture the character and setting really well. Like that scene with Noodle at the sushi place.. HILARIOUS. I could picture his expression. You really have the dialogue down pack. Also the runway and her fall... Whew.. I cringed out loud. Great job and keep them chapters coming!

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Yay! Go on Matt with your bad yourself. This chapter went just right. I'm so glad Matt handled his business and broke up with her in person and put his ducks in a row. Smart move having the photos and making her sign a non-disclosure agreement. Im surprised I expected a lot more drama from Liz but that's good he nipped this in the bud. Poor Chase, maybe she has some fear of abandonment issues going on. They're going to have to talk as a family. I can't wait for Z and Matt's reunion! Nice job. ;-)

So by chance I started reading your reading story and started with this one. Wow! Amazing Just fantastic Anni G. I love how descriptive you are that I can almost see the scene unfold. Mallory is a great female lead. I already admire her strength and its more than just coping with her blindness. She seems to take life "by the balls" and I admire that. 

Umm yes!! I love Matt Bomer. I love this story. Please update soon. :)

Wow great chapter! This revelation was amazing. There was a lot of build up to what secrets Noni might be carrying and this explanation did not disappoint. Very intense and moving.

Your writing flowed really well and the charaters seem very real in this chapter. Even though Loki is a god and Noni's been through some bad sh**; you can really feel their connection.

Also I appreciated who you added the line about that was the reason she didn't really go for Danny. That answered that question nicely and it makes total sense why she would be weary of a guy who was aggresively persuing her. Man! I just want to give her a hug, for real. Cray-cray stuff has happened to her. Also very nice length to this one. :) Great job, keep up the good work!

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Oooo that was soo good. Wow Loki put down! And for someone who didn't have a lot of experience Loki sure showed us the reason he's a god. Great job on this chapter. Feel bad about Danny. I wanna know what really happened with Jake and Shanice. Poor Noni has been thru some stuff. Keep up the good work.  -p2p-

You know, there are few stories that really move me. I mean I love to read well-written stories. Get inspired by them, entertained by them, but few actually move me. I don't know what it is about these characters Val-erie and Henry Walker that I really just connect with. So real, so emotional, so human.

This chapter flowed beautifully and it was such a relief to see Henry FINALLY crack. He's been such an unaffected happy-go-lucky live in the moment mysterious sexy man. His behavior has been really disconnected, when he's with Valerie he's completely in, completely into her and just dreamy, but then he just disappears. Asshole... but charming enough to woo us back and make us fall in love with him again. Exhausting.

All this time we focussed on Valerie and her obvious issues and never looked at the secrets Henry Walker carries. This story, the Henry Walker character has been the best character development I've ever read in a story. I love how Valerie is a better position now (probably because she's already gotten help, via therapist, to tackle her issues) to help him. I really really love how the whole scene unfolded, how Peter ended up having a much bigger role in this story. It's funny how Peter and Ella both have these broken people in their lives, with such deep issues that's really very draining, but they never gave up on them. The best display of love and loyalty for family.

Ah... I love this freaking story!

The VERY best thing is seeing un update and the very worst thing is realizing you've finished reading the chapter. And then having to wait so long for an update. I know I'm the worst at having my readers wait for an update :(, so I get it, but I that doesn't mean I have to like it! Lol :) Please update soon, begging unashamedly over here. Lol

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Wow you are a really great writer! I'm not just saying that. You created that tension and struggle within Thomas just like I'm struggling to understand and like him. He obviously loves her but is full of issues. Great job on the first chapter, VERY interesting angle. I know all about doubting yourself with your writing... its a curse I think. :( But what I've learned is that we gotta write for yourself, for the love of it and people will love it too. But you definitely have the skills. That part when Ali ran away and you said the elevators opened as if sensing her pain... awesome. Just one request... PLEASE continue the story.. Im waaay to invested now. Lol Keep up the good work.

Wow such a great start! Instantly hooked. I don't think I've ever heard a story like this before... very unique. What a great twist. That part that said he tanned well, I thought, how cool would it be if he were mixed?! Lol and sure enough.

There are so many angles you can take this story. He's journey into self-acceptance and forgiveness. Confronting his bio-father, that he looks just like.

A white guy that's actually black. Wow, imagine him being introduced to this whole other world. And is there is a romance I'm sure you'll make an awesome heroine of color that will give him a run for his money. He seems like a sweet sheltered guy who just got smacked with some cold hard truths of this world. I wonder how his perfect parents will react to this whole thing. Are they being truthful when they say they don't know anything? Things that make you go Hmm.

His biological mother seems to have come a long way from that young girl. I'm happy she seems wise, strong and loving. I can't wait to see who choose as a cast. Suggestion?? Wentworth Miller (swoon) is hella fine and mixed race. I know he's not blond but wanted to throw his name in there. Please update soon! Loving it so far. :)

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Aww I love Carter... but not for Sasha. He seems like such a grounded awesome guy but more of a friend for her. I loved that he said that he admired her. Sooo spot on, Sasha really needs people like that in her life.

Sasha gets the award for "Fictional Character Most Improved" because she's come such a long way. I'm proud of you Sasha! Also what's up with Teagan? Is something going on with her? I wonder what a Carter/ Teagan match would look like. He seems to be so put together but missing that love in his life, and Teagan needs to get it together and have some love in her life too. :)

So I wonder how Dmitry will react. Will be arrogant as always or trully repentant? We got a glimpse as to what his life has been like without her, but he has a loooong way to redemption. I really hated him before, well I hated the way he treated her and the situation. But the heart wants what the heart wants. I can't wait to see how this story will go. Hopefully Dmitry will get the other award for "Fictional Character Most Improved" as well.

Please please please don't let her shrink back to her old personality in his presence. She needs to put on that "poker" face she practiced so well with Carter and address him accordingly. Gah! I love this story. Great job!

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Hello! Nice job on this story. It has a promising begininng and you have a nice writing style. The only thing big thing is that your chapters are waaay too short. When I started to get into the characters and the story, the chapter ended. :( I know you asked for feedback and it was almost like you were hesistant to write more, maybe? But don't be! What I read was really good but it was almost like a teaser or a preview not the actual story. I'm looking forward to reading more of your stories so keep up the good work!

As always Anni your writing is exceptional. Like this part, "What he was looking for was an undiluted push of adrenaline, the purest form of ecstasy that he'd had all those years ago..."

Jack sounds like one of those people (friends or family) that you can't help but love but have to watch them slowly self destruct and not be able to do anything about it. Livvy is another broken soul. Hopefully these two can mend and heal together.

I felt bad for little Damien, little kids don't understand the whys they just know something is wrong and they want their parent with them.

I'm really interested to see what happens next, how they will meet and interact. Your cast pics are hotness! Great job. :)

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Interesting story. I wonder where and why Alex left wherever she left. Who is she trying to contact or is promising to call? I get the vibe that it might be someone younger or maybe older like a grandparent. I'm speculating here but is she calling her child? I don't know why I get that vibe or maybe a younger sibling? Also you hinted at it, was she a dancer of some sort? Why is she dressed as a hooker or why did she feel she needed to pose as one? I don't know I'm itching to read more. Great update!