Penname: Nita Roberts [Contact]

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Member Since: September 06 2013

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Straight out of Maryland!


I haven't written for myself in a long time so this is me giving it a shot. You know what they say go hard or go home. But I do write from home so....




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Summary:

  

 

Lila James knows that her friendship with seventeen year old Chase Almeida is extremely inappropriate, but she still isn't prepared when his older brother Jack decides to tell her just how inappropriate it actually is-- inadvertently igniting a fire that had been burning quietly inside of them for years.

*****Lila's Thunder has been removed for editing, refining and if all goes according to plan, publishing! I couldn't have finished it without all my readers leaving their words and thoughts--even if I didn't always like them--so THANK YOU from the bottom of my heart. <3



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:Yes
Word count: 670
Read Count: 64086
Published: October 07 2011
Updated: September 09 2014


Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

When I thought I had seen it all you shut that notion down completely with that update. This is the most volatile love triangle I have ever read and the fact that it involves a therapist is astounding. At this point I don't know whose worse but Jack is pulling in for a close first place. Dude took the pictures??? I thought he'd be the last person I would pin this on being that he was supposedly sleep when the pictures were placed on her door but I was wrong! Chase with his outta body experience I always think he's one broken nail away from jumping off a cliff. She said no and he keeps making advances. I am so happy he finally had a moment of clarity. I'm still in awe man. I feel kinda bad for him, he really needs friends his own age. LILA takes the cake and so does that quack that offered her the job. I can't believe she got the position after her mental break during the interview. I cannot and will not feel sorry for her. She has played the fiddle between two brothers and now she has to pay the piper. It worries me that her peter pan syndrome has driven her to pit Chase against his brother and fall in love with him over the course 7 years. That shit aint natural. Chase at the root of it is rightfully resentful toward his brother but all this rage was manufactured by Lila. You are awesome sauce man, come back to us and give us another dose. Those last few sentences were really a dun...dun...DUN!!! moment well done!

Reviewer: Nita Roberts Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 05 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 117]
Summary:

Dr. Tyler Elijah Lenz Solomon Weber is a psychologist who works as the head of Human resources at a law firm. His life seems to be perfect. Not only he has the perfect job but he also is a visiting professor in many Universities for his innovitaive research in developmental psychology. He has a fiancée, Alexandra, who loves him unconditionatly.
However, under the surface lays a man that has been affected by his life experiences and cannot fully trust others. This is his story, and that of Alexandra, and Lucas, the man Tyler fears will take his woman away from him.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Psychological, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 19
Completed:No
Word count: 49503
Read Count: 16177
Published: December 26 2012
Updated: February 21 2014


Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 16

I don't know how you did it but you completely vindicated Alex for me in less then ten sentences. You Go Glen CoCo!!! I glad the guys are protecting themselves and Alex needs to tell her parents off! Job well done



Author's Response:

Aww, thanks. Of course it was the right thing to do. There comes a time in some people's lives when they need to be selfish enough to love themselves more than others. 

Reviewer: JacqueseGabrielle Signed
Date: October 06 2013

Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 15: Everything Goes My Way

PAUSE HOW THE HELL IS HE A PSYCHOLOGIST AND HE HAS THAT MANY ISSUES! LOL

Reviewer: JacqueseGabrielle Signed
Date: September 23 2013

Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 15: Everything Goes My Way

I really try to avoid stories like this, love triangles are the worst they always remind me of One Tree Hill. No matter what I always felt bad for Brooke and in this situation Tyler is Brooke, Alex is Lucas and Lucas is Peyton. I don't agree with Alex's family and friends disregarding Tyler, what he did in the beginning wasn't that bad he never said he didn't love her he said the engagement was premature. I feel like throughout this story Tyler has been fighting blood sweat and finally tears and I'm glad he's choosing himself. Now him having her followed was wrong but all the times Alex lashes out at him about him hurting her it has underlining issues with his mother. Stuff like this makes me sad. I have to go to work tomorrow at 530 and I'm still reading this. lol. You are a gifted storyteller I just wish someone else had Tyler's back that it wasn't so one sided. I mean I like Andre but the 8 year old isn't cutting it for me anymore. The Christmas party was the worst I have been in the position of having a boyfriend care about someone else' well-being than mine so my heart ached for Tyler. Oh and that flashback when Lucas returned her cell phone and they practically flirted was too much for me. Mark my words because this thing with Lucas is gonna take it's turn for the worst mainly because that's how it usually happens in fiction stories. lol This chapter really hurt the worst mainly this line “After we broke up the first time, when I met Lucas I wished I didn’t love you. I knew I could have easily fallen in love with him if I hadn’t been in love with you.” she admitted. Now I have to call bullshit every time Tyler hurt her (BTW: even though he never cheated, verbally abused or hit her just gave her great sex) I am officially TEAM TYLER even if he doesn't end up with her he needs to get his mommy issues solved and get closer to his family cause it sucks that everyone love Alex but treats him second class. I love you Tyler! Now, because I have to see how it ends and your writing skills are so awesome I am going to have to track this story I hate love triangles...you suck lol. 



Author's Response:

Took me 3000 years to answer your review. I just want to say thank you for the kind words and for your opinion. I hate love triangles too, and that is why I wanted to write about one, if that makes any sense at all. 

I'll be more quick at answering reviews and posting, I promise.

Reviewer: JacqueseGabrielle Signed
Date: September 23 2013

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 733]
Summary:

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Jayden made the biggest mistake of his life when he let the love of his life slip through his fingers.  Could he make it right and start anew?  Tamaeya had been burned by Jayden once and had no intentions of being burnt a second time, but it seemed that the heart had it's own mind.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 4965
Read Count: 107594
Published: February 06 2013
Updated: April 19 2017


Title: Regret

This update was gold as usual no surprise there. At the rate you're going Nancy is gonna mess around and come up with a whole family. I'm happy for her I just want her to embrace this! Well done! I'm also worried about Dana and the way she delivers Gods message it's a little blunt. Or example the way she revealed the woman was still purging it worries me that someone could snap on her one day in violence because of her gift. It was such a treat to read this! Thanks! 💞

Reviewer: Nita Roberts Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: January 31 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 59]
Summary:

“A mighty pain to love it is,
And 'tis a pain that pain to miss;
But of all pains, the greatest pain
It is to love, but love in vain.”



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 24611
Read Count: 9049
Published: April 01 2013
Updated: March 02 2014


Title: Chapter 7: Instant Gratification

Wow that was everything I never expected to happen in this chapter. I thought you would tease us for a while longer. The ending quote breaks my heart dude Charley deserves better than what I expect to happen. Shit...

Reviewer: Nita Roberts Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 02 2014

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Summary:

At some point, you'll have to eventually let your guard down.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:No
Word count: 192818
Read Count: 210941
Published: May 08 2013
Updated: October 03 2015


Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16 PREVIEW

How dare you not deliver a full chapter! Do you know how in love I am with this story to the point that I reread this to no end. I have so much I want to say but I have to go back to work. The overall complexities of the characters and their humanity is just amazing I love your work.

Reviewer: JacqueseGabrielle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 11 2013

Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Damn.....

Reviewer: JacqueseGabrielle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 11 2013

Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Don't leave me in limbo like this!!!

Reviewer: JacqueseGabrielle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 07 2013

Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 18 pt 3

I had to crack my fingers for this one. I don’t know where to begin, your story is life changing. As much as I love watching your story snowball into this epic yet “simple” love story you leave me floored at every turn. When I see that you have updated my heart literally flutters and drops all at the same time. I never know what tear drop size turn you have made that will ripple the ocean of characters you have. The people you have built are so real to me, so authentic to the point that I remember her tears in my life. I have cried those same tears and felt that same anguish. Valerie is my Heroine and she will win all the battles I lost. Battles I lost because I didn’t fight hard enough or was too scared of loosing to know when it was okay to let go. You are an amazing story teller and I am in awe of your efforts. I want to be the writer you are, how you take your readers on adventures out of their own lives even if its but for a short amount of time and I always strive to do that.


 


On to the story, I have been eager to review for the last three chapters first but I wanted to get the full picture first. Valerie is so brave but I wish she would share more of her struggles and be honest OUT LOUD about what really happened between her and George. I feel like we keep getting these bits and pieces of a horrible person but some of his “good” qualities that can be seen in Henry also. I don’t think that Valerie is a sad person, she has been beat down her entire life she doesn’t know how to win. It worries me how Henry can tell her anything can tell her anything but I love you and then leaves her high and dry when he KNOWS she has been hurt before. These two have to grow to be who they need to be for each other or they wont make it at all as a couple. That growth is going to come with pain and tears before we get to the rainbows and smiles. Valerie needs this so she can learn she is all she’s needs to make it.


 


Trust and believe your work is worth far more than publication and I would buy it. I know on your tumblr you post pictures of the characters, is there a way we can see that Ella, Peter or even that scumbag George looks like. When you update I am inspired to keep writing, thank you. BTW when do you think we will know the full story about Val and George, for some strange reason I feel like he may have died. I don’t know why I would think that, not that you eluded to that or anything lol. If not will he ever appear in the story? You probably had no intentions of doing this but can you tell Henry’s side of things at least for a brief moment in time. I just want to get inside his head to see what he’s thinking. One girl on fanfiction.net wrote a story in pov that was so HAUTE she had to write another in the other character’s pov. I don’t know if you want to do that but it’s just an idea. Happy Hunting!

Reviewer: Nita Roberts Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 03 2014

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[Reviews - 1006]
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A virtual wallflower for most of her life, what will Sasha do when she encounters the first man to ever make her want to be noticed? Dmitri is a man used to being surrounded by the most beautiful things, including women. Will he accept Sasha, a woman who is usually overshadowed by the beauty of her friends? Is he capable of noticing that while her beauty may not be as blatant, it should still be treaured? This is the story of a wallflower and the man she loves.

 

Sasha: the Wallflower has been removed from this site and is available for purchase on Amazon Kindle. Thank you all for your support!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2670
Read Count: 194441
Published: May 31 2013
Updated: November 25 2015


Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

Job well done again! I'm excited about what's to come! Yeah I feel like Sasha is gonna experience both sides of the spectrum on an extreme level. The fact that Dominic and Nadia were talking about Sasha's mistreatment is wild. Have my eyes tricked me to has Jaelyn done some growing up? Can't wait to read the next installment! 

Reviewer: Nita Roberts Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 01 2014

Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23

I have been waiting for this momen for a long time! I had faith in both parties! What happened in the hospital between Sasha and Dmitri needed to happen in order for both of them to love the other the way they deserve. I was holding my breath when she and Carter ended things. I thought  to myself as I read this is how a man should love and treat a woman even if the feelings aren't reciprocated. I never had a problem with the pictures you posted that was set three years later. I don't think you should have explained yourself at all. If you really thought you should have I believe you did that when you explained her toned appearance. With Dmitri being as fine as he is it'll be hard to explain that. Lmao. Once again you were magnificent. May Love and Peace surround you.

PS: Can grandpa come to the wedding???

Reviewer: Nita Roberts Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 02 2014

Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

I really enjoyed this chapter! The way you've built Carter made me so happy. I like that he's strong, kind, sympathetic, and playful. What more could you want in a man? Which by the way makes me sad because he's just a casualty in the inevitable. The game they had set up was wonderful it really had me giddy. What I don't get is why she wont let go of her bitterness and anger with her parents, the girls and most of all Dmitri. She won't be able to move on with Carter if she doesnt let it go. Im excited that Dina ia getting her own story which will be a masterpiece I'm sure!

Reviewer: Nita Roberts Signed
Date: January 30 2014

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[Reviews - 116]
Summary:

 

Quitting love is never easy; no matter the situation. That saying seems to follow Jake Ryder in the once vibrant form of Sierra Lewis. The cycle doesn't seem to stop, or maybe he just doesn't want it to.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content
Series: Impossible to Kill
Chapters: 13
Completed:Yes
Word count: 43800
Read Count: 19351
Published: June 08 2013
Updated: May 27 2014


Title: Chapter 10: Here Comes The Tide.

I almost didn't believe it when I saw the update! That was a fast paced chapter I feel like everything hit boom: Monica confrontation; boom: Aut Neema; boom: almost attempted suicide then finally the Jake/Sierra reunion which I didn't see as a completely positive thing because they aren't confronting the real issues. Both are indulging in physical comfort which I wouldn't have a problem with expect for the fact that Jake is still with Monica. I knew where she was coming from when she went after Sierra but it doesn't excuse the fact that she did it. I just want That butthole to go down! Vic needs to get a switch from a tree and take his whooping like a man. 



Author's Response:

Lol! I couldn't agree more! My fingers are itching to get to Viktor. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Nita Roberts Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 02 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 18]
Summary:

From the first part of the story, Solana found out that she is pregnant with Matthew's first child at such a young age. Now that this sequel starts off with Solana six months pregnant and preparing for the birth of her first pup. 

With a pup on the way in a matter of 3 months, Matthew has to make sure that Solana is healthy and heavily guarded. More drama and danger awaits for the Alpha pair. 

Sequel to Blue Moon

 

Disclaimer:All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Fantasy, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 22559
Read Count: 4592
Published: August 07 2013
Updated: October 31 2015


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Rockin update! Last story I kinda stumbled upon and it was finished so I took the day and read the entire story and I don't think I reviewed as much so I promised myself that this time would be different. I love the wolf stories on this site ESPECIALLY yours. You have this ability to make your story seem so realistic that in my mind somewhere in New Jersey sexy werewolves are lurking. It gets a little tiring reading stories about wolves who don't have jobs but manage to have all the monetary resources in the world. So the fact that your characters not only work but shop at walmart is refreshing. (No shade to those whose wolves are ballin out of control) I love how you delve into Eris' story and I really empathise with her. I was that litte sister minus the part where I would shape shift into a wolf but I KNOW where she's coming from. I hope that they bring Emily back and make her apart of their pact because it's not fun running alone. I'm glad Kevin is okay and the baby shower scenes were awesome. I still don't trust Kara, like at all but I do like that she's being civil. For a second when she felt Solana's stomach I thought she was going to put a curse on it. BTW Solana can sure eat she is a woman after my own heart.



Author's Response:

Ohhh my goodness, this is one of the best reviews I have gotten so far! Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to review! I love hearing from people who'm I don't normally hear from.  Yeah, I know what you mean it gets really boring when people don't make their supernatural characters seem normal. So I try to make my characters seem like normal people so it won't be a flat story. I love all my characters and I want them to have lives too. 

Thanks for reading and reviewing! I love you <3 

Nsablo 

Reviewer: Nita Roberts Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 22 2014

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[Reviews - 266]
Summary:

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Response to the Made to Order challenge!

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Character Death
Challenges: Made to Order
Series: None
Chapters: 19
Completed:Yes
Word count: 54406
Read Count: 48851
Published: September 11 2013
Updated: December 18 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Hello, My name is Alfred

Good start...I really enjoy Selena's character. 

Reviewer: JacqueseGabrielle Signed
Date: September 12 2013

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 The Rules

This is gonna be your best one yet! Comedy speaking you are sitting on a jackpot I just cannot wait to see what you do with it? Does she have any friends that knows she bought a life sized ken doll?

Reviewer: JacqueseGabrielle Signed
Date: September 12 2013

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 21]
Summary:

 "All the years we've been together was a lie. The I love yous we told each other meant nothing to him. The promises we made to each other would never happen. All of our hopes and dreams would never come true. I felt like I was in a bad dream that I couldn't wake up from."

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 1709
Read Count: 3551
Published: September 21 2013
Updated: September 21 2013


Title: Chapter 1: A fool in love.

Keep going I need a resolution for Bailey...I need some type of extensive background on all the characters because the phrase "I havent been happy in four years isn't working for me" 



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading!! They are coming back!! :)

Reviewer: JacqueseGabrielle Signed
Date: September 21 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 223]
Summary:

This is the sequel to Tess and Jay; they have been married for two years now, and are happy. However with Tess being very busy all of the time and Jay trying to make a name for himself in the company, sometimes they just don't have the time to be as close as they use to be. Combined with this and Jay's new beautifual assistant, Tess' old insecurities are beginning to creep in. Can this marriage survive the strain?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:Yes
Word count: 52947
Read Count: 27482
Published: November 29 2013
Updated: January 18 2014


Title: Chapter 18: Obey...

You have really taken your readers on the journey of a lifetime. In the beginning I wasn't trying to receive the message or the characters. I couldn't fathom anyone fictional or not making these choices in a marriage but then I thought this is real for someone out here. One thing you have accomplished that is hard to show over time is visible growth in your characters. In the beginning all I could think was how immature and bad communicators but all I can do is cheer them on. If nothing else I just wish for everyone to stay out of their marriage. I know this isn't te end of your journey with this story but I really wanted to say that. 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: JacqueseGabrielle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 14 2014

Title: Chapter 6: Bow down...

This is the Tess I like to see! Go Girl!!! No does mean no that could be considered attempted rape so Honi just needs to bow down.

Reviewer: JacqueseGabrielle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 02 2013

Title: Chapter 5: Bitter Cold...

I strongly feel like communication is the key. You cannot dictate your way through a marriage like its a business deal. Tess is still the dumbest smart I've ever read about. She is on the fast track to losing her man and I see it now. Jay really can't be this simple minded, he had better transfer her ass to  the mailroom quick fast and in a hurry before this shit spirals out of control.

Reviewer: JacqueseGabrielle Signed
Date: December 02 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Brown Eyes of Green...

I just want to say that I think you've grown from Tess and Jay. The sequel was well done and I feel like you're taking your time allowing both characters to have some breathing room. I can't stress enough how excited I am for you to update. I like how you played around with character reaction this time around. What about Jay's dad? When is the baby coming? It's been two years! They need a little Jada or Jason, maybe???? Can you also tell the story from "Ho-ni's" point of view? Is she gonna be like single white female and try to replace Tess? I saw that on lifetime today. Or maybe she could try to turn Jay against Tess I don't know I'm just throwing that out there no pressure lol.



Author's Response:

Thank You! I am really trying to make these all better than the last. And yes...you will be hearing from Toni aka "Ho-ni" lol...love that by the way! 

Reviewer: JacqueseGabrielle Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: November 30 2013

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 17]
Summary:

Some things are better left unsaid.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Psychological
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 11637
Read Count: 5627
Published: December 13 2013
Updated: April 23 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I'm interested hook, line and sinker now you have to tell us her side of the story. How does April feel about the letter? What was her vantage point of the down fall?

Reviewer: JacqueseGabrielle Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 13 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 178]
Summary:

Welcome to the city of Baltimore, Maryland and into the life of Elise Roberts. Elise lives the life of a pampered princess. Designer clothes, expensive cars and fancy parties are the center of her world. She is a woman who has everything she ever wanted until she meets Lukas Weiss. Faced for the first time in her life with rejection, Elise hatches a plan designed to heal her wounded pride. A game of seduction and the ultimate rejection. Funny thing, though, about the game of love....it is always unpredictable.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: Journey
Chapters: 19
Completed:No
Word count: 55134
Read Count: 39382
Published: January 08 2014
Updated: October 16 2016


Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

I like the pace you set for this story. Elise and Lukas are moving a painfully slow pace filled with sexual tension. I'm having a praise moment that Elise is embracing work ethic and all that comes along with it. I still want her to get rid of the kitten heels but Rome wasn't built in a day. Update when you can 

Reviewer: Nita Roberts Signed
Date: March 04 2014

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 27]
Summary:

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Elizabeth Brant promises her life to wealthy Ira Goldman, a much older man. Ira promises to do whatever it takes to make her happy. Whatever.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Series: A Sandwich, A Soda, A Snippet
Chapters: 6
Completed:Yes
Word count: 5535
Read Count: 4969
Published: January 11 2014
Updated: January 11 2014


Title: Chapter 3: You Rang? Pt. 3

Been reading so far you have a great thing going! I don't know why you don't have more reviews! I'm so excited there's more!

Reviewer: JacqueseGabrielle Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 11 2014

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.