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The Warrior's Bride by Spiderbite
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 219]
Summary:

Lieutenant Brady Sloane was a good man, but always seemed to finish last with women, until now.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Love Is Blind
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 16076
Read Count: 24538
Published: March 03 2012
Updated: May 06 2016

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Title: Chapter 4: Four

I love this story. I love Brady and Pen and I cannot wait for you to update again. I love thier lust and thier passion for each other. I just love it. Please update this is just awesome

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Date: May 06 2016
Title: Chapter 2: Two

the conversation between Pen and her momma OMG I was laughing. The Sands genes are LETHAL! Its not like other men have walked itno the bank before itis just that Brady had some connection with her and they both know it. She is dangerous and flirty as HELL! Brady needs that and OH MAN what will happen with this Harvey Gordon. He sounds entitled to me. Hate him already for even thinking of messing with HOTT ASS BRADY!!!!

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Date: April 04 2016
Title: Chapter 1: One

I am so into this it aint even funny. love the beginning

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Date: April 04 2016
Title: Chapter 3: Three

Harvey is an AS$$$$. He is that kind of man that if he can't have her noone can have her. BRady has shut you don't so many times that you look stupid. Even your own friends make you look stupid at dinner especially Clint(LOL) so what does Harvey do....LIE and sayd that he thinks Brady is blessed. What an ASS$$$$!

I LOVE me some Brady! What a good man. He does not want Pen to give him anything untilhe is sure that she wants him. I love me that man and PEn love her that man too! These two together OH LAWD!! LOL. girl they are SOMKIN HOTT! LOVE THIS STORY! What an AWESOME JOB!

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Date: April 04 2016
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Will and Ana by SafeHaven
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 450]
Summary:

 

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William Lucas Kapori was a self-made millionaire. At 40 he had everything he ever wanted, a beautiful twenty something girlfriend, a luxurious mansion, and a job that he loved. His life was perfect, so why was he pursuing Ana Kay.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 13
Completed:No
Word count: 52745
Read Count: 78020
Published: March 29 2012
Updated: April 10 2014

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Title: Chapter 12: {Twelve}

I love this story. I can't wait for you to update again. This story is just too amazing not to complet. I would buy it! Awesome update!

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Date: April 08 2014
Title: Chapter 11: {Eleven}

I love Will and Ana but please oh please do a story about Nathan and El LOL they are SEXY and FUNNY!!

monica needs a hard punch to the gut then a bitch slap. You can not let her hurt EL!!!!!!

i love this story. UPDATE PLEASE

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Date: April 02 2014
Transcendence by DarkandLovely
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 404]
Summary:

The prison had been confined within their hearts but when... when would they truly be set free?

 

 

 

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Transcendence is a original work by CM and is intended for publication so please do not upload, distort, edit, or remove and place on any other site. Respectfully yours, thank you. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Inspirational, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Spritualism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 49
Completed:Yes
Word count: 291391
Read Count: 260243
Published: September 13 2015
Updated: May 01 2020

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Title: Chapter 26: Explosion

This is a great story. Please continue

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Date: March 28 2016
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Knight In Shining Armor by AntiVenom
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 71]
Summary:

A knight in shining armor is not always the righteous and kind-hearted man. Sometimes, he's the one that speaks his mind and uses his fists. He is not perfect but if he loves you....he loves you



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Family, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: The only thing that matters
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 17229
Read Count: 11382
Published: March 01 2016
Updated: December 29 2017

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Title: Chapter 3: ~Chapter Three...~

I absolutely love the interactions of your characters! Norvi is going to get his ass beat and James ass beat. James told him not to do it. Kelsey even removed his hand from her body. She does not want him. She even told him that she was just trying to get information from him. Now he is going to break up the team before they get to rescuing Lauren and Trace. I love me some Norvi but that boy sometimes got to know he ain't always the sh$$ (LOL) Nickolas is the man! Loving this

 

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Date: March 28 2016
Title: Chapter 1: ~Chapter One...~

Oh YES they are connected!!  Love it! i hate Randall! Update  please

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Date: March 06 2016
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Domestic by AntiVenom
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 154]
Summary:

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He wasn't anyone's choice for a companion. His crippled psyche made him ruthless not better. However, to one man he was perfect....a perfect weapon to control.

 



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Categories: Movies
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Romance, Science Fiction
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Graphic Violence, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 24932
Read Count: 12827
Published: December 20 2017
Updated: February 22 2021

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Title: Chapter 7: VII

Oh my how I love this story you went way back with the Andorians! Lol. I love how Nyota is feeling hurt that Khan will not show that he at least likes her outside the bedroom. She wants more from him and he is still resisting somewhat. love all the drama and suspense surrounding them, trying to pull them apart....UPDATE!

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Date: January 05 2018
Title: Chapter 3: III

This chapter was amazing. They have become my favorite because of what you have done here!

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Date: December 21 2017
Title: Chapter 4: IV

Omg.......THE F. E. E. L. S! 

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Date: December 21 2017
Title: Chapter 5: V

What's a word stronger than addicted....obsessed? Well whatever it is I am that over these two! Please give me more!!! Excellent story

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Date: December 21 2017
Title: Chapter 2: II

I love the tension between them....I love this couple already. Khan is losing the fight with himself about Nyota and she is not far behind. Carol is a real piece of work just lie her father. Excellent story

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Date: December 21 2017
Title: Chapter 1: I

I am loving this so far...Khan and Nyota....the feels..... love the situation you have them in...tension sexual tension..lol

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Date: December 21 2017
Title: Chapter 6: VI

I love how Khan is slowly coming to terms with his unnatural feelings but not Falling to his knees and spilling his guts. He's doing it Khan's way! I love this this chapter was awesome thank you!

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Date: December 29 2017
Title: Chapter 8: VIII

Te amo AntiVenom 

I so love this story. You write is full of passion and mystery and love and (sighs) I cannot wait for the next update.

 Reviewer: Water Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 13 2018

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