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Real name: Keiondra Sanders

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Summary:

Welcome to the city of Baltimore, MD and into the life of Devyn McKnight. Jewelry designer and entrepreneur, Devyn McKnight, thought she was secure in the shell she built around her life, made of family, friends and her jewelry business but an unexpected encounter challenges all that she is and all that she believes she wants to be.  

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Series: Journey
Chapters: 32
Completed:Yes
Word count: 91963
Read Count: 104070
Published: December 11 2011
Updated: January 07 2014


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Oh okay... So this Erin girl was who Devyn met earlier. Interesting... If she comes from money then it becomes even more suspicious as to why she was on the other side of town. It would be different if she grew up there and now her family has money. But it's clear that's not the case. I kind of like this Jason character. There's nothing wrong with being cautious, but he is a bit too cautious for his age. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: August 31 2016

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 2

That little trick. Coming to the bad side of town for some black loving. LOl. I should have figured. I hope Jason finds out what's going on, for his brother and family's sake. She's just looking for a payday, you can always teach a man how you want to be fucked. At least try to. She doesn't deserve a love like that. She isn't willing to give up a piece of dick for her filthy rich husband? She's dick-whipped. I can see Jason and Devyn getting together. LOl. I'm calling it already! 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: August 31 2016

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 3

Wow.... How classy. In a nightclub, you allowing this man to finger you? I don't need no loving that bad. At least now Devyn should be able to piece why Jason was there asking questions now. Or maybe not.. She is under the influence after all. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: August 31 2016

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 4

Interesting... I'm glad that he was able to help her with her hangover. Lol. I think she was in too much pain to wonder how in the hell he found her place of residence. I really feel bad for Christopher. He is really going to be hurt by the news. I hope he doesn't get that witch pregnant. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: August 31 2016

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 5

So they keep thinking about each other??? I knew it! It was really nice of Elise to buy those things for her. A true friend. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: August 31 2016

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 6

Interesting... He saw the damn picture. LOl. At least now he knows that she isn't just invading his thoughts. It's the opposite too. She needs to just tell him so that he can leave her alone like she claims she wants. But I think deep down she doesn't want him to go. Lol. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: August 31 2016

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 7

Ohh.. So what was said about her father by some rich people that ruined her life as a child? She does need to let that go though. You can't blame the masses for what a select group of people did. It's just like calling all people of one race ignorant because of the actions of a select group of them. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: August 31 2016

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 8

LOl. Hehe. You just met the fiance girl!!!! She better stop being a punk and just tell the damn man already. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: August 31 2016

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 9

I think he needs to hunt her down and make her face it as well. It's time to stop playing damn games and deal with it. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: August 31 2016

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 10

LOl. The family is already starting to accept her! She's off to a great start!!! Haha

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: August 31 2016

Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 11

Really Devyn?? How can you leave him like that? After he looked out for you when you had a hangover. Not cool at all. Really low actually. That man poured out his heart to you and you just dismissed him. Who's the bully now? Sidenote: He told her that he thought she was beautiful!!!!!! 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: August 31 2016

Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 12

Awww man... Just when they were getting somewhere. If only she would sit still long enough to talk to the damn man she would have learned that Erin is not his fiance but his brother's. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: August 31 2016

Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 13

Yes she does. I hope that she is able to tell at least one of the brothers what's going on with ole girl. I don't know if she will tell Christopher directly but at least tell Jason so he can have it verfied and then he can tell his brother with the evidence that he has. Or she can tell Chris with the help of Jason. I think that route will be best. And she better do it soon. It's getting the best of her and Jason. Not good. 



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Thank you for reading and taking the time to leave all of your wonderful reviews

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: August 31 2016

Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 14

She just can't get enough of the black penis!! Shame. Now it's going to ruin everything she and her family had hoped for. Hehe. I'm glad that Devyn finally told Jason about the affair. She shouldn't feel guilty, it's not like she hooked them up or anything. She didn't even know the damn girl. And now they are going on a date!!! I'm excited for her. I wonder what he could possibly have planned? 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: September 01 2016

Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 15

That was awesome. It looks like she had pure fun. Truly enjoyed herself. That's a good sign. And she kissed him!!!! Look at you! 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: September 01 2016

Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 16

Yay!!!!! She said it. Finally. Nice house by the way. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: September 01 2016

Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 17

Yes he did!!!!! Girl they got down honey!! Multiple times. Hehe

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: September 01 2016

Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 18

Yeah... He wants her long term. I think I hear wedding bells!! 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: September 01 2016

Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 19

Girl let it go. He just told you that you will never be anything more to him than friends. Even if the relationship doesn't pan out like the others, he has never made a move on you. Just accept that and move on. Be thankful for the friendship. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: September 01 2016

Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 20

Wait... So Jason and Devyn are going to the party. Christopher and Erin are going to the party... This is going to be good as all hell. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: September 01 2016

Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 21

That's right. I'm glad that Devyn didn't beat that girl's ass for saying those things at the party but she more than deserves it. And he said the L word!!! Now don't think we didn't notice that you didn't say anything back Devyn, stop playing and tell the man that you love him too. We all know you do. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: September 01 2016

Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 22

This chick is for the damn birds. She better not come after Devyn if she knows what's good for her. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: September 01 2016

Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 23

Are you fucking serious? Because your damn daughter can't keep her damn legs closed you are going to attempt to destroy a man from a more powerful and wealthier family than yours just so that you can have a piece of that wealth? Do you really think that is going to work chick? I can't wait for Jason to get both of y'all asses. You're just as fucked up as your whoring daughter. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: September 01 2016

Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 24

Damn... I must say, Erin's mom is cutthroat but someone seriously needs to cut her ass all the way down. I hope Jason and his father are the ones to do it. And extremely soon. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: September 01 2016

Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 25

His dad is truly fucked up for that. It was not the time nor the place to have a discussion like that. I understand his intentions but that shit could have waited. If anything, you're looking into the wrong damn girl. You need to check that bitch and her mom that Christopher is about to marry. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed
Date: September 01 2016

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