Penname: Avidreadernotwriter [Contact]

Real name: Kimberly

Member Since: January 31 2016

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Betterment and Betrayal by Joelle Jax
Rated: Members ONLY:Mature Content
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[Reviews - 197]
Summary:

When Joss begins receiving anonymous letters, she has her suspicions as to who might be penning the ominous messages.  But as the list of suspects grows, will she uncover the author’s identity or stumble upon a greater truth?  *A response to the Random Letters prompt.*



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Random Letters
Series: None
Chapters: 15
Completed:Yes
Word count: 46306
Read Count: 37782
Published: August 29 2013
Updated: October 17 2013

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Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Love this story.  This is my second time reading it and I am enjoying as much as the first.



Author's Response:

Thanks avidreadernotwriter!  Joss and Eshan are near and dear to my heart, and it does said heart good to know you've enjoyed their story : ) 

 Reviewer: Avidreadernotwriter Signed
Date: February 02 2016
Retired
Save Me From Myself by Missus James
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 433]
Summary:

 

Thoroughly revised and reuploaded!

 

Willow Carter is a plus-sized girl with lots of attitude and very low self-esteem. When her mother and oler sister force her to jog to slim down for her sister's wedding, she is attacked by a madman and rescued by a savior. But just because a man saves your life doesn't mean you should trust him. Soon she throws herself into a thrilling game of cat and mouse that brings more pain than pleasure and puts everyone she loves in harm's way.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Graphic Violence, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 28
Completed:No
Word count: 90171
Read Count: 301245
Published: October 04 2015
Updated: April 17 2021

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Title: Chapter 19: Self Destruct

I do think this version of Willow is more realistic.  I don't know any sane woman that in finding out her boyfriend brutally killed her coworker would be okay with that and just keep it moving like its no big deal.  Frankly, I'd be running for the hills.  

 

I just hope in the next chapter on healing that you don't make Willow's inevitable surrender too easy or too quick.  As you said she's an ordinary girl caught up in a world of darkness and violence.  Some good loving by Nathaniel/Sebastian might help relax and relieve the tension she's experiencing, but it won't make the the situation that caused it to disappear.  Great sex does not heal mental wounds.

 

 Reviewer: Avidreadernotwriter Signed
Date: August 28 2016

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