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A Bygone Hour by Peachyvision Members ONLY: Most Ages
On a clear night, beneath a clear sky, she bares part of her hidden soul. 
Camp Outlook by Briella 17 and older
      Joss just knows this summer will change her life... If she can manage to tolerate her bunk leader 
Dakota's Pride by katherinemadison 17 and older
Dakota finds Hannah on one of his missions and sees the way she fights off her attacker even though there's no hope of her winning. Still her spirit impresses him and her suffering touches his heart. He takes her under his protection and what starts off as admiration and respect develops into something...
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Tina Hamilton's mother always told her to travel in style for she never knows who she could run into. Who knew her mothers words would actually prove true.
Lost Girl: The Transitional Years by virgofemme 17 and older
This story is a follow up to Lost Girl, so if you haven't read it yet, please do, as this is the sequl to that story. To those who have already read Lost Girl, yes, I know the title is unimaginative and sorta lame, but It's just a working title, so it won't be permament. :P To all of my readers who...
Reincarnation by seyajany 17 and older
During ancient times, the Korean kingdom,Gaya, finds its creation through a visitor from far-off lands descending onto the land of the morning calm. Legend has it that a young maiden princess from the distant country of “Ayuta” arrived in the kingdom and married a fabled king,Suro. He would...
Roxie and Griffin: Ever After by GeorgiaP Members ONLY: 17 and Older
She got the guy, the fairytale. But when complications of his new life come to light will she be strong enough to keep him?   ***Please do not post this story to other sites. I post all my stories here with the intention of publication. I thank you all for your attention :)***
Never Let Me Go by DramaQueenAmby Mature Content
Arianna James is a 21 year old, struggling college student with a dark past. She meets NFL superstar Colin Kaepernick at a club and the two immediately hit it off. Next thing she knows, she's in bed with the man, and has a wedding ring on her left finger.    
Unstuck* by carolinaheart Teen or Above
Formerly Fate and Coincidence (and by formerly I mean completely rewritten, my NaNoWriMo project) A year abroad did nothing to help Cassandra Mitchell heal from the earth-shattering death of her on-again-off-again boyfriend. She did not think coming home to the familiarity of the Big City would do her...
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Zoey Vance woke up in the hospital with no memory of her life before that moment. She doesn't even know her own name. Now she has to try and put the pieces of her life back together with the help of the man who hit her with his car that fateful night. As her memories start to return she wonders if she...

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Roxie and Griffin: Ever After by GeorgiaP Members ONLY: 17 and Older
She got the guy, the fairytale. But when complications of his new life come to light will she be strong enough to keep him?   ***Please do not post this story to other sites. I post all my stories here with the intention of publication. I thank you all for your attention :)***
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  Avery "Hades" Jones is the number one producer in the metal and hardcore music game. She's more talented with any instrument she lays her hands on than most of the popular bands and every record she touches turns to gold. Then why doesn't she have the respect she so rightfully deserves? When...
COLORLESS by marchpisces92 17 and older
 Camille Jackson was rejected since birth over her dark skin complexion. She has grown a tough skin and doesn’t get attached to anyone because of how some people have viewed her without even getting to know her. However Camille opens her heart to a baby in need and for the first six months...
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DJ’s life and well laid out plans for that life had fallen apart quicker than she have thought possible and now she was stuck.  Stuck back at home, living with her overbearing and always right (in her own eyes) mother in her old attic bedroom.  Working a dead in job and literally dying...

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Title: Chasing Venus by ShanniC
Rated: Mature Content starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 28]
Summary: Photobucket

 

A chance encounter on an elevator causes two people to reevaluate the meaning of love and life. Can true love be met all while Chasing Venus? Can a wallflower change? Can a savvy businessman learn that love is the riskiest deal of all? Interracial romance. What happens when cultures cross, in-laws meet, and an unconventional woman faces a very traditional family?


Category: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed: No
Word count: 6587
Read count: 3933
Published: 07/08/08
Updated: 06/20/10
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Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 06/20/10 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two

Ryochi is smooth, real smooth. I'm loving the banter between these too. My only problem is that the updates are so far between. I really like this story and have missed it. Please consider updating more often. I would love it so. *wink*

Nadia doesn't need the complication of Aoi in the mix. But it should make for some fun reading. I enjoy the internal dialog of the two main characters. Nadia is particularly fun to get a glimpse of what she's thinking. Ry won't know what hit him. I'm hoping Ms. Nadia takes him down a peg or two.



Title: Any Given Thursday by ShanniC
Rated: 17 and older starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 67]
Summary:




Celina hates Jake. Jake hates Celina. Can two people, completely opposite from one another settle their differences and find love in the process? How can you be in love with someone whom you are diametrically opposed to? An interracial romance.


Category: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Sexual Content
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed: No
Word count: 49555
Read count: 13199
Published: 07/11/08
Updated: 08/29/10
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Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 09/01/10 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Over the phone, Jake? Really? LOL   You haven't heard the last of that chick.



Title: To Be Desired by iheartng
Rated: Teen or Above starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

CSI: Miami fic.

They’re close. She staring into hazel eyes she knows so well, slightly scared of what she sees. His breath brushes her cheek as he gives her a chaste kiss and her hold loosens on the paper. “I promise, Alexx.”


Category: Primetime Television
Characters: Alexx Woods
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes
Word count: 914
Read count: 1487
Published: 08/22/08
Updated: 08/22/08
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Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 05/09/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

ahhh, the possibilities.



Title: Ki Fashions by Quania2004
Rated: 17 and older starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 185]
Summary: Retired

KiFashions-2.jpg picture by Quania2004

Serena Davis is a shy young lady that has had a crush on her boss Mr. Ki, king of jerks, for 2 years. Mr. Ki, in order to stay the head of his family company must marry. What happens when he suddenly asks her to marry him?


Category: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21
Completed: No
Word count: 82050
Read count: 43655
Published: 08/27/08
Updated: 07/13/11
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Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/05/10 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I have really missed this one, but it was so worth the wait. You did good, chica. Serena really laid it on Ki.

Hope Serena doesn't go back to the States without Ki. That Soo-Sun chick is a real bitch and evil. Wonder whether she'll succeed at bringing discord between Ki and Serena? Maybe for a while, but hopefully not permanently. Ki's brother turns out to be the fool. Ki really dodged a bullet with that skank.



Title: Hooked by rogueprinzess
Rated: 17 and older starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 45]
Summary:

Spin-off story from Bonded (not uploaded yet but will be) featuring Nolan and his search for love.


Category: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: No
Word count: 734
Read count: 807
Published: 10/23/08
Updated: 10/23/08
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Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 09/06/10 Title: Chapter 1: Preface

Sooo, ummmm.... Bonded is finished [and it was wonderfully done].... we should be seeing Nolan's story take off pretty soon, ummm... right? *crickets*



Title: Colors of love by Lizzy3218
Rated: 17 and older starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 341]
Summary:

 

Malia Johnson wanted to die, figuratively of course. Nursing school was kicking her ass, she had no job, her friends were driving her insane, her deeply buried past was starting to become unravelled, and on top of all that the hottest guy at Penn. State wouldn't leave her the hell a lone.

Michael Young was the hottest, most popular guy at Penn. State. He was a basketball, football, and tennis star. He loved sports, cheeseburgers, and women. He's labled a playboy but secretly wants a steady relationship. When he first lays eyes on Malia Johnson he thinks his prayers have been answered, but Malia has built a protective shield around her heart that not even his blue eyes and heart stopping smile can penetrate.


Category: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24
Completed: Yes
Word count: 53833
Read count: 72973
Published: 01/04/09
Updated: 10/19/10
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Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 10/19/10 Title: Chapter 24: Epilogue

Thank you for finishing this story. I enjoyed it immensely. I hope all is well with you.



Title: The Second Temptation of Alexx by iheartng
Rated: Teen or Above starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

It starts with a small favor and ends with a large regret. (Prompt 6 – Hate) Companion to To Be Desired.

 

A CSI: Miami fic.
Category: Primetime Television
Characters: Alexx Woods
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes
Word count: 1041
Read count: 1530
Published: 01/13/09
Updated: 01/13/09
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Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 05/09/10 Title: Chapter 1: The Second Temptation of Alexx

this was great. I've become addicted to the possiblity of Alexx and Ryan.



Title: A Little Persuasion by curiouslyamused
Rated: 17 and older starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 18]
Summary:

 

              A simple story: girl meets boy and they want each other.  


Category: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed: Yes
Word count: 11211
Read count: 3282
Published: 01/15/09
Updated: 01/15/09
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Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/11/10 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: The Begining & The End

well done, chica. a wonderful read.



Title: The Heart of the Matter by Reese
Rated: 17 and older starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 97]
Summary:

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Pathologist Alexx Woods has been widowed for well over two years now.  Promoted to Chief Medical Examiner, she’s flourishing professionally.   Friends and colleagues at Miami-Dade’s CSI department have been wonderfully supportive, especially bad boy CSI Ryan Wolfe, who, to the surprise of everyone, has gone above and beyond the call of friendship in his quest to ‘be there’ for the team’s favorite ‘mother’ figure. 

Yet as Valentine’s Day approaches, life is about to change once again for Alexx.  It all starts with a misunderstanding and the arrival of an unexpected visitor.  The startling revelations that ensue compel her to delve into long suppressed emotions, confront rigid societal conventions and her own deep seeded fears about loving again.

 

 

A Story Written for the 100 First Kisses Challenge

 


Category: Primetime Television
Characters: Alexx Woods
Classification: Crossover, Off Cannon
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Racism, Strong Sexual Content
Challenges: 100 First Kisses Challenge
Challenge: 100 First Kisses Challenge
Series: Rylexx: CSI Miami
Chapters: 8
Completed: Yes
Word count: 41347
Read count: 12623
Published: 02/27/09
Updated: 08/11/09
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Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/09/10 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter Seven

Looking forward to the next installment. Ryan is soooo intense and Alexx thinks way too much.



Title: Second Chance by Variety
Rated: 17 and older starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 391]
Summary:

Second chance banner 2

 

To become King of the Lycans, Ulrich has to marry. Between two of his own kind, Sabine, a human, catches his attention and his heart. except on the night of their marriage,she is murdered. 500 years later, Sabine is alive and no longer human but that is only just the beginning of their problems...

*banner by me* i was lazy on the first one and wanted to remake it...

 

All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Category: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Horror, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed: No
Word count: 45707
Read count: 53285
Published: 09/01/09
Updated: 09/17/10
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Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 06/22/10 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Yep, she's feeling things she hasn't felt since being turned. Salvatore has a lot to answer for. I'm glad you updated and though, short, very effective. So, since she never died, does that invalidate his marriage to the skank?



Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 06/20/10 Title: Chapter 15: a visit

This is my first time reading this story and boy was I missing something special. I really like this. I was so sad that Sabine was kidnapped and turned. But it makes for a very interesting story. And Ulrich ain't no joke. I'm looking forward to him destroying Salvatore. And Vanessa best watch herself. Sabine is not the scared little waif she was so long ago. I'd love to see Sabine beat that b*tch down.

You got me hooked.



Title: Into The West by brookmeade
Rated: 17 and older starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 125]
Summary:

Into The West banner

"This time and place, as I look upon your face..remember as long as you live,

                                                       it was my love  to give"   

                     -except from It Was My Love to Give by Barbara LaBarbera

       ~//~

Sally Parker had heard talk of Indian or "Injun" attacks out West, but that was just talk from around town. Right? Wrong.

Sally embarks on an enthralling, and often dangerous journey when she is kidnaped and taken into the Comanche Tribe. However, the journey isn’t easy, between battles with the increasingly, dedicated, hard-nosed, "war chief," Nakotah Quanah, and trying to fit into a strange society which she feels she doesn’t belong.

Just when things begin to look up, what happens when an enraged mistress wants her servant back and will go through all costs to get her back? Will this kick-off the beginning of many battles for the Comanche with the Texan government or can Sally defuse the situation in time?

Either way Sally is going to have make a life-altering decision that will not only affect her, but maybe for the ‘ayashe’ as well.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Category: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed: No
Word count: 8442
Read count: 6085
Published: 10/23/09
Updated: 05/29/10
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Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 05/29/10 Title: Chapter 5: July 2, 1847

Hopefullly, her "Abductor" will help her. Sally is about to learn a much needed lesson. Not sure if she thought out her escape plan.



Title: The Nichetti Family© by Chaynetv
Rated: 17 and older starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 226]
Summary: Retired

Meet the Nichetti Family: Dominick, Carmine, Chase, and Christopher.  The Nichetti Men are easy to fall for, but sometimes hard to love. Their "family" business tends to get in the way of their love lives and sometimes ruins them altogether. This is their story.

*Contains strong language, adult situations, extreme language, violence and strong sexual content*

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Thank you Minx for an incredible banner!


Category: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13
Completed: No
Word count: 93337
Read count: 90545
Published: 10/30/09
Updated: 07/28/12
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Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/29/11 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I think Chris and Carmine are my favs. Although, I'm liking Luke also. Carmine is a freak and I loves my freak. And Chris is all ALPHA. Taya is about to break him down a bit. These men are fione.

I have really missed this story. Thank you for the updates. And they ALL have skills. damn!!!



Title: Damned If I Do by Leake
Rated: 17 and older starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 108]
Summary:

         

There are people dead and alive that would love to find peace in Louisana and those people will try anything to get it. Even a very unlikely pair. A TRUE BLOOD FIC (TARA/ERIC)


Category: Primetime Television
Characters: Tara Thornton
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Horror, Romance, Science Fiction
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Strong Sexual Content
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed: No
Word count: 9940
Read count: 16702
Published: 11/12/09
Updated: 08/09/10
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Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 08/12/10 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Chapter 11 alternative

I've missed this story. Hope you update more often.



Title: Beast by Onimosity
Rated: 17 and older starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1606]
Summary:

 

 Perhaps I have a little of the monster in me after all...

How much would you sacrifice for those you love? To save her father, Sunshine must give up the life she's longed for to a powerful gangster.

Can she go with him and keep herself?

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Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Category: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Challenge: None
Series: Beastly Things
Chapters: 43
Completed: Yes
Word count: 183149
Read count: 333647
Published: 12/05/09
Updated: 03/22/10
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Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/19/10 Title: Chapter 35: Around the Kinda Misery I Find Part 3

This is sage advice and so true...  “Sometimes we revel so much in the freedom of love that we forget the responsibility.” Royce says. “When you love and are loved in return we have an obligation to take care of ourselves, better care of ourselves for those we love.”

And this..  “Unfortunately, love isn’t something you deserve"... “It just is.”

 And this... ” He says harshly. “It does not matter at all when compared to you. Not at all. I love you, Sunshine.”   gives me hope that Nikki will be willing to give up the activities that could put Sunny in so much danger. 


Nikki is a man who has known little or no love in his life; so for him to freely say those words and often say them is huge. He is a man who not only is IN love but who loves. That is probably the biggest change.

I had to read this chapter multiple times. It was chocked full of tasty goodness. Each chapter seems to show Sunny and Nikki evolving more and more to who they should be separately and together.

Even though this trip was to an unsafe place, I now understand why Sunny needed to do it. But for this trip and the distrubance, she might not have had the conversation with Royce that I think clarified a lot for her. He was the perfect person to give Sunny a much needed perspective.

Yes, Nikki.” She rolls her eyes. “you were right about many things. I’ll see you soon.”  

This had me grinning because it makes me wonder what awaits them in Paris; could it be that the words will come?

Omni, this is a story that I will read often. Just saying it's good doesn't seem to be enough. So, I'll just say, thank you for penning such an engrossing tale. You should be very proud of your child. 



Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 12/27/09 Title: Chapter 19: Even When You're Miles Away Part 1

I hope Nikki doesn't do something stupid like getting Sunny pregnant without her knowledge. I don't think Sunny will forgive him when she finds out that she gave her father money even though he didn't cause her father to relapse. He knows he's wrong in what he's done in continuing to "keep" Sunny. How can he trust any feelings that she might have for him since he is almost her "captor"? That is why I'm still not sure how she really feels about him. And Nikki knows that any proposal would be tainted by their current situation. Yet, he can not let her go. He seems afraid that she will leave with the quickness.

I am so impressed with Sunny's strength and wisdom at the tender age of 21. She has bended but not been broken. Nikki will break before she ever does. I wonder if he realizes that? ;-)

She knows Nikki a lot more than I think he even realizes. She seems to care for him; but that may be only because of her sweet nature and how she views people in general. I love the fact  there is some ambiguity regarding Sunny. She's an open book; yet she isn't. 

One of fav stories.



Title: A new.... by kellyklue
Rated: Mature Content starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 151]
Summary:

Ethan “Dax” Daxton and his wife Dr. Zaire “Zhay” Daniels have drifted apart due to tragic circumstances. Dax awakes from a coma and has a case of amnesia not remembering his wife or current life. But, the minute he looks into Zhay’s eyes he falls in love all over again. The love that Dax and Zhay once shared was honest and sweet, but of late, it proved not enough to cure the hurts of the past, that they need in an effort to move forward.  Both must learn to forgive and love each other again, and that life is to short and precious not to include those whom you hold dear.


They are given a second chance to rediscover their love and what they do with it is completely up to them.


Category: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Taking a short break from this story
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed: No
Word count: 47806
Read count: 35588
Published: 02/19/10
Updated: 01/13/11
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Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 01/14/11 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - I'll marry you, on one condition...

Glad he knows they're married, but the difficult part is coming up with the explanation of why they weren't together at the time of the accident. This could be quite sad.

Thanks for the update. I've missed this story.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing. The revelation of their seperation could be sad but it caould also bring about their reconciliation; you'll just have to keep reading to find out :-).



Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 06/26/10 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - I have nothing left to give

Zhay made a terrible mistake that resulted in the death of her children. I feel really bad for Dax. I wonder has Zhay changed. Would she be so arrogant the next time? Hopefully, she's learned something from this experience. Not sure that I want them together until it's clear that she has.

You are truly writing an emotional story. My heart really went out to  Dax.



Author's Response: Thank you so much for commenting. Yes this really is an emmotional read and you know starting out Dax was the real arrogant character but we see that Zhay can be just as head strong; but at the wrong time. We will see if they both have change over the course of the story. Stay tuned for more.



Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/04/10 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - You are spoiling me, beautiful...

kel, you are writing the hell out of this story. You evan had me feel a little sorry for Dax's mother. Now that's some feat. LOL

Dax and Zhay can't catch a break. This is so emotional. I'm looking forward to see if Dax feels a pull towards Zhay while he has amnesia. 

I'v really missed this story.



Author's Response: I am glad that you liked the update! Thanks for reading. Zhay and Dax will find their way to each other.



Title: Come Be My Lady by SeoulSinger
Rated: 17 and older starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 320]
Summary: Retired

CBML-2.png picture by kpop-love555

Sam had just left her home due to a bad break up from her boyfriend of 2 years. Young is one fifth of a popular Korean pop group, who falls for Sam the first time he sees her. However Sam is a little leery, due to her bad experiences with other men, and the 5 year age difference between them. Will Young be able to convince her that they are meant for each other?


Category: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenge: None
Series: Saranghaeyo
Chapters: 36
Completed: Yes
Word count: 83437
Read count: 77897
Published: 03/10/10
Updated: 07/15/10
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Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/17/10 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 16

Welcome back! I have really missed this story. Loved the updates. Young is not so young; he's quite mature and his advice to Samara was on point. He really laid it on her. Thank You! Thank You! Thank You!



Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 07/12/10 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 31

Glad Young beat the crap outta Paul. But he's now opened himself up to a lawsuit and also criminal charges. Someone needs to put their foot up Victoria's butt.



Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/29/10 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 23

Seoul, damn chica, you brought the angst. Paul needs to get the hell off the pipe. Young is so much more of a man than that poor excuse for a human.

I'm so glad Samara and Young have come together. I just know that Paul is about to do something devious to throw a wrench into their tenuous reconciliation. But with Young's support group who won't let him go too far off the reservation, I have hope. The guys were a hoot. Kibum is wise beyond his years and he kills me when he breaks it down for them. I love these guys, they are too funny.

5 chappies! You're spoiling us and I for one could get use to it. Mahalo



Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/20/10 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 18

Yay! Two chapters!  No apologies needed for missing your deadline because you always deliver some fine writing and multiple updates, woohoo. Young is so cute and Samara is so sprung.

I'm looking forward to seeing who this Paul person is and what he has up his sleeves. Why is he trying to get back with Sam now? And to come all the way to Korea, he must be real serious. What's his deal? I don't trust him and I haven't even met him yet! Young is going to be pissed. If the crew member gawking at Sam made him want to commit homicide, can you imagine what his reaction will be when finds out that Paul's in town. I'm going to break out the popcorn, 'cause it's about to be on!

I'm interested in Sam's reaction when she finds out what saranghae means.



Title: Foolish by mocasoul
Rated: 17 and older starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 121]
Summary:

It’s 1993 and Cynthia Hamilton is the house keeper to one of the biggest rock stars of that year, Caleb Murphy. The trouble with him is he’s a drug addict, a drunk, and a womanizer…but she loves him.


Category: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16
Completed: Yes
Word count: 51000
Read count: 27584
Published: 03/28/10
Updated: 03/28/11
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Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 06/22/10 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

The title is so apt, 'cause Cynthia is all kinds of foolish in being around this junkie. And a manipulator at that. good that she's going to get away from him. Let's see how long that last.



Title: ~*The Zodiac*~: Book 1: Capricorn by Butterfly
Rated: Mature Content starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 55]
Summary: Adena Capricorn is a successful and highly organized 23 year old. Shes an art dealer at one of the most prestigious art galleries in Manhattan. This Capricornian has it all- a great job, great girlfriends and a loving husband. Until her world crashes down when she finds lipstick on her husbands shirt and finds help and solace in the most unexpected of places.How would a Capricorn handle this situation?
Category: Music, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Challenge: None
Series: ~*The Zodiac*~
Chapters: 21
Completed: Yes
Word count: 55413
Read count: 43227
Published: 04/02/10
Updated: 05/09/10
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Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 05/06/10 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Missy needs to slap that back-stabbing skank. Kim feels no shame in what she's doing. What a bitch. She never was a friend to Adena. She and Taye deserve each other. Adena needs to drop her like a bad habit. Im glad Adena knows. Kim is not worth the drama. So Taye has a job now, I'm it's the love of a good woman that gave him the confidence to get off his lazy ass and get a job.

Author's Response: Yea they dont really need Kim anymore now that they know where her loyalty lies. That is a good point, maybe Kim's good for him in more ways than one. Sad how they came to know that however. Thanks for reading and reviewing! I really appreciate it!!!!