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If you don’t stick to your values when they’re being tested, they’re not values: they’re hobbies.


~Jon Stewart




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Summary: Photobucket

 

A chance encounter on an elevator causes two people to reevaluate the meaning of love and life. Can true love be met all while Chasing Venus? Can a wallflower change? Can a savvy businessman learn that love is the riskiest deal of all? Interracial romance. What happens when cultures cross, in-laws meet, and an unconventional woman faces a very traditional family?



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 6587
Read Count: 3198
Published: 07/08/08
Updated: 06/20/10




Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two

Ryochi is smooth, real smooth. I'm loving the banter between these too. My only problem is that the updates are so far between. I really like this story and have missed it. Please consider updating more often. I would love it so. *wink*

Nadia doesn't need the complication of Aoi in the mix. But it should make for some fun reading. I enjoy the internal dialog of the two main characters. Nadia is particularly fun to get a glimpse of what she's thinking. Ry won't know what hit him. I'm hoping Ms. Nadia takes him down a peg or two.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 06/20/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 66]
Summary:




Celina hates Jake. Jake hates Celina. Can two people, completely opposite from one another settle their differences and find love in the process? How can you be in love with someone whom you are diametrically opposed to? An interracial romance.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 49555
Read Count: 11514
Published: 07/11/08
Updated: 08/28/10




Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Over the phone, Jake? Really? LOL   You haven't heard the last of that chick.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 08/31/10

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 7]
Summary:

CSI: Miami fic.

They’re close. She staring into hazel eyes she knows so well, slightly scared of what she sees. His breath brushes her cheek as he gives her a chaste kiss and her hold loosens on the paper. “I promise, Alexx.”



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Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Alexx Woods
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 914
Read Count: 1209
Published: 08/22/08
Updated: 08/22/08




Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

ahhh, the possibilities.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 05/09/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 172]
Summary:

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Serena Davis is a shy young lady that has had a crush on her boss Mr. Ki, king of jerks, for 2 years. Mr. Ki, in order to stay the head of his family company must marry. What happens when he suddenly asks her to marry him?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 21
Completed:No
Word count: 82050
Read Count: 32128
Published: 08/26/08
Updated: 07/12/11
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Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I have really missed this one, but it was so worth the wait. You did good, chica. Serena really laid it on Ki.

Hope Serena doesn't go back to the States without Ki. That Soo-Sun chick is a real bitch and evil. Wonder whether she'll succeed at bringing discord between Ki and Serena? Maybe for a while, but hopefully not permanently. Ki's brother turns out to be the fool. Ki really dodged a bullet with that skank.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/05/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 45]
Summary:

Spin-off story from Bonded (not uploaded yet but will be) featuring Nolan and his search for love.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 734
Read Count: 692
Published: 10/22/08
Updated: 10/22/08




Title: Chapter 1: Preface

Sooo, ummmm.... Bonded is finished [and it was wonderfully done].... we should be seeing Nolan's story take off pretty soon, ummm... right? *crickets*

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 09/05/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 340]
Summary:

 

Malia Johnson wanted to die, figuratively of course. Nursing school was kicking her ass, she had no job, her friends were driving her insane, her deeply buried past was starting to become unravelled, and on top of all that the hottest guy at Penn. State wouldn't leave her the hell a lone.

Michael Young was the hottest, most popular guy at Penn. State. He was a basketball, football, and tennis star. He loved sports, cheeseburgers, and women. He's labled a playboy but secretly wants a steady relationship. When he first lays eyes on Malia Johnson he thinks his prayers have been answered, but Malia has built a protective shield around her heart that not even his blue eyes and heart stopping smile can penetrate.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 24
Completed:Yes
Word count: 53735
Read Count: 64250
Published: 01/03/09
Updated: 10/19/10




Title: Chapter 24: Epilogue

Thank you for finishing this story. I enjoyed it immensely. I hope all is well with you.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 10/19/10

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 8]
Summary:

It starts with a small favor and ends with a large regret. (Prompt 6 – Hate) Companion to To Be Desired.

 

A CSI: Miami fic.

Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Alexx Woods
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1041
Read Count: 1273
Published: 01/13/09
Updated: 01/13/09




Title: Chapter 1: The Second Temptation of Alexx

this was great. I've become addicted to the possiblity of Alexx and Ryan.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 05/09/10

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[Reviews - 17]
Summary:

 

              A simple story: girl meets boy and they want each other.  



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 11360
Read Count: 2833
Published: 01/14/09
Updated: 01/14/09




Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: The Begining & The End

well done, chica. a wonderful read.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/11/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 97]
Summary:

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Pathologist Alexx Woods has been widowed for well over two years now.  Promoted to Chief Medical Examiner, she’s flourishing professionally.   Friends and colleagues at Miami-Dade’s CSI department have been wonderfully supportive, especially bad boy CSI Ryan Wolfe, who, to the surprise of everyone, has gone above and beyond the call of friendship in his quest to ‘be there’ for the team’s favorite ‘mother’ figure. 

Yet as Valentine’s Day approaches, life is about to change once again for Alexx.  It all starts with a misunderstanding and the arrival of an unexpected visitor.  The startling revelations that ensue compel her to delve into long suppressed emotions, confront rigid societal conventions and her own deep seeded fears about loving again.

 

 

A Story Written for the 100 First Kisses Challenge

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Alexx Woods
Classification: Crossover, Off Cannon
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Racism, Strong Sexual Content
Challenges: 100 First Kisses Challenge
Series: Rylexx: CSI Miami
Chapters: 8
Completed:Yes
Word count: 41347
Read Count: 10904
Published: 02/27/09
Updated: 08/11/09




Title: Chapter 8: Chapter Seven

Looking forward to the next installment. Ryan is soooo intense and Alexx thinks way too much.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/09/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 389]
Summary:

Second chance banner 2

 

To become King of the Lycans, Ulrich has to marry. Between two of his own kind, Sabine, a human, catches his attention and his heart. except on the night of their marriage,she is murdered. 500 years later, Sabine is alive and no longer human but that is only just the beginning of their problems...

*banner by me* i was lazy on the first one and wanted to remake it...

 

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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Horror, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:No
Word count: 45707
Read Count: 46989
Published: 08/31/09
Updated: 09/16/10




Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Yep, she's feeling things she hasn't felt since being turned. Salvatore has a lot to answer for. I'm glad you updated and though, short, very effective. So, since she never died, does that invalidate his marriage to the skank?

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 06/21/10

Title: Chapter 15: a visit

This is my first time reading this story and boy was I missing something special. I really like this. I was so sad that Sabine was kidnapped and turned. But it makes for a very interesting story. And Ulrich ain't no joke. I'm looking forward to him destroying Salvatore. And Vanessa best watch herself. Sabine is not the scared little waif she was so long ago. I'd love to see Sabine beat that b*tch down.

You got me hooked.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 06/20/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 125]
Summary:

Into The West banner

"This time and place, as I look upon your face..remember as long as you live,

                                                       it was my love  to give"   

                     -except from It Was My Love to Give by Barbara LaBarbera

       ~//~

Sally Parker had heard talk of Indian or "Injun" attacks out West, but that was just talk from around town. Right? Wrong.

Sally embarks on an enthralling, and often dangerous journey when she is kidnaped and taken into the Comanche Tribe. However, the journey isn’t easy, between battles with the increasingly, dedicated, hard-nosed, "war chief," Nakotah Quanah, and trying to fit into a strange society which she feels she doesn’t belong.

Just when things begin to look up, what happens when an enraged mistress wants her servant back and will go through all costs to get her back? Will this kick-off the beginning of many battles for the Comanche with the Texan government or can Sally defuse the situation in time?

Either way Sally is going to have make a life-altering decision that will not only affect her, but maybe for the ‘ayashe’ as well.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 8442
Read Count: 5548
Published: 10/23/09
Updated: 05/29/10




Title: Chapter 5: July 2, 1847

Hopefullly, her "Abductor" will help her. Sally is about to learn a much needed lesson. Not sure if she thought out her escape plan.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 05/29/10

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 209]
Summary:

Meet the Nichetti Family: Dominick, Carmine, Chase, and Christopher.  The Nichetti Men are easy to fall for, but sometimes hard to love. Their "family" business tends to get in the way of their love lives and sometimes ruins them altogether. This is their story.

*Contains strong language, adult situations, extreme language, violence and strong sexual content*

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Thank you Minx for an incredible banner!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 13
Completed:No
Word count: 93337
Read Count: 71946
Published: 10/29/09
Updated: 07/28/12




Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I think Chris and Carmine are my favs. Although, I'm liking Luke also. Carmine is a freak and I loves my freak. And Chris is all ALPHA. Taya is about to break him down a bit. These men are fione.

I have really missed this story. Thank you for the updates. And they ALL have skills. damn!!!

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/28/11

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[Reviews - 108]
Summary:

         

There are people dead and alive that would love to find peace in Louisana and those people will try anything to get it. Even a very unlikely pair. A TRUE BLOOD FIC (TARA/ERIC)



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Tara Thornton
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Horror, Romance, Science Fiction
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 9940
Read Count: 15120
Published: 11/11/09
Updated: 08/09/10




Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Chapter 11 alternative

I've missed this story. Hope you update more often.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 08/11/10

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 1579]
Summary:

 

 Perhaps I have a little of the monster in me after all...

How much would you sacrifice for those you love? To save her father, Sunshine must give up the life she's longed for to a powerful gangster.

Can she go with him and keep herself?

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Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: Beastly Things
Chapters: 43
Completed:Yes
Word count: 183149
Read Count: 263457
Published: 12/04/09
Updated: 03/21/10




Title: Chapter 35: Around the Kinda Misery I Find Part 3

This is sage advice and so true...  “Sometimes we revel so much in the freedom of love that we forget the responsibility.” Royce says. “When you love and are loved in return we have an obligation to take care of ourselves, better care of ourselves for those we love.”

And this..  “Unfortunately, love isn’t something you deserve"... “It just is.”

 And this... ” He says harshly. “It does not matter at all when compared to you. Not at all. I love you, Sunshine.”   gives me hope that Nikki will be willing to give up the activities that could put Sunny in so much danger. 


Nikki is a man who has known little or no love in his life; so for him to freely say those words and often say them is huge. He is a man who not only is IN love but who loves. That is probably the biggest change.

I had to read this chapter multiple times. It was chocked full of tasty goodness. Each chapter seems to show Sunny and Nikki evolving more and more to who they should be separately and together.

Even though this trip was to an unsafe place, I now understand why Sunny needed to do it. But for this trip and the distrubance, she might not have had the conversation with Royce that I think clarified a lot for her. He was the perfect person to give Sunny a much needed perspective.

Yes, Nikki.” She rolls her eyes. “you were right about many things. I’ll see you soon.”  

This had me grinning because it makes me wonder what awaits them in Paris; could it be that the words will come?

Omni, this is a story that I will read often. Just saying it's good doesn't seem to be enough. So, I'll just say, thank you for penning such an engrossing tale. You should be very proud of your child. 

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/18/10

Title: Chapter 19: Even When You're Miles Away Part 1

I hope Nikki doesn't do something stupid like getting Sunny pregnant without her knowledge. I don't think Sunny will forgive him when she finds out that she gave her father money even though he didn't cause her father to relapse. He knows he's wrong in what he's done in continuing to "keep" Sunny. How can he trust any feelings that she might have for him since he is almost her "captor"? That is why I'm still not sure how she really feels about him. And Nikki knows that any proposal would be tainted by their current situation. Yet, he can not let her go. He seems afraid that she will leave with the quickness.

I am so impressed with Sunny's strength and wisdom at the tender age of 21. She has bended but not been broken. Nikki will break before she ever does. I wonder if he realizes that? ;-)

She knows Nikki a lot more than I think he even realizes. She seems to care for him; but that may be only because of her sweet nature and how she views people in general. I love the fact  there is some ambiguity regarding Sunny. She's an open book; yet she isn't. 

One of fav stories.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 12/26/09

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 145]
Summary:

Ethan “Dax” Daxton and his wife Dr. Zaire “Zhay” Daniels have drifted apart due to tragic circumstances. Dax awakes from a coma and has a case of amnesia not remembering his wife or current life. But, the minute he looks into Zhay’s eyes he falls in love all over again. The love that Dax and Zhay once shared was honest and sweet, but of late, it proved not enough to cure the hurts of the past, that they need in an effort to move forward.  Both must learn to forgive and love each other again, and that life is to short and precious not to include those whom you hold dear.


They are given a second chance to rediscover their love and what they do with it is completely up to them.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Taking a short break from this story
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 47788
Read Count: 28698
Published: 02/19/10
Updated: 01/13/11




Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - I'll marry you, on one condition...

Glad he knows they're married, but the difficult part is coming up with the explanation of why they weren't together at the time of the accident. This could be quite sad.

Thanks for the update. I've missed this story.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing. The revelation of their seperation could be sad but it caould also bring about their reconciliation; you'll just have to keep reading to find out :-).

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 01/13/11

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - I have nothing left to give

Zhay made a terrible mistake that resulted in the death of her children. I feel really bad for Dax. I wonder has Zhay changed. Would she be so arrogant the next time? Hopefully, she's learned something from this experience. Not sure that I want them together until it's clear that she has.

You are truly writing an emotional story. My heart really went out to  Dax.



Author's Response: Thank you so much for commenting. Yes this really is an emmotional read and you know starting out Dax was the real arrogant character but we see that Zhay can be just as head strong; but at the wrong time. We will see if they both have change over the course of the story. Stay tuned for more.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 06/26/10

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - You are spoiling me, beautiful...

kel, you are writing the hell out of this story. You evan had me feel a little sorry for Dax's mother. Now that's some feat. LOL

Dax and Zhay can't catch a break. This is so emotional. I'm looking forward to see if Dax feels a pull towards Zhay while he has amnesia. 

I'v really missed this story.



Author's Response: I am glad that you liked the update! Thanks for reading. Zhay and Dax will find their way to each other.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/04/10

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Summary:

Spiral

When life closes a door somewhere it opens a window....in through that window comes light to shine on the darkness of our heart.

An unexpected night of loneliness bounds Kamea Smith and Joshua Trent through a maze of deception, the clarity of the truth and the struggle of happily ever after.  



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Incest , Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 40
Completed:Yes
Word count: 113462
Read Count: 144307
Published: 03/05/10
Updated: 11/18/11




Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

David was one sick f*ck. And I'm not sorry that he bought the farm. And cruel as it seems, that Dana needs to know she had sex with her "brother". Bloody git. She's as depraved as he was; even if he's not her brother and she had no clue that he was; she really debased herself with him. 

During that fight scene, I couldn't help screaming, get to Kamea! Yeah, you wanted to subdue David, but damn, Kam was in distress and she didn't even know if anyone had been called to help her. Josh could've at least told her help was on the way.

Knew that the baby was going to have Josh's green eyes! HA! And what a way to find out you're a Dad. Josh has some growing to do and I'm glad you're writing more of this story. 

For a "short" chapter, it surely delivered.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/15/11

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Well now, what will Kamea do? If she doesn't tell Josh, what's she goona do when that baby comes out with those gorgeous green eyes? I really enjoy reading about these two. And can't wait to hear what Sarah has to say about her date with Peter. And that skank ex-girlfriend of Josh still poses a threat. Hope Kamea has a uneventful pregnancy.

I'm lovin' me some Josh; that man is all kinds of hottt. *growl*



Author's Response: Hi Bella...what makes you think that baby's gonna have green eyes? LOL!!!....Thanks for reading.  :)

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/09/10

Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Mark can be cold-blooded. That's some kinda sexy. I wonder who his love is? Interesting. Dana is a ho and a stupid one at that. Elise actually birthed this chick?

"She didn’t now why but she felt jealous as if she wasn’t going to be included…once again she was not wanted."

This made me sad.

They're going on a date? woohoo! Can't wait for that.

 

 



Author's Response:

Hi BellaChica,

Mark is good guy but not so nice when he's crossed.  Kamea is so afraid of losing Andrew in anyway. It is going to take her a while to get over feeling abandoned.  Thanks for reading. Only two chapters to go. :)

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/05/11

Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

ah hell naw... you mean to tell me that bitch rolled up in there and took that innocent child. As I said before, that Dana is a dumb ho. How does she think she's going to get away with this when Kamea knows she's the one who took the baby?  That was genuis. 

I can't wait for Josh to find her. David almost hurt the baby. Dana has crossed a line that she has no idea what kind of wrath will be rained down on her spasmic ass.

Please update soon. I'm on the edge of my seat.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 11/13/11

Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Josh needs to understand that life is messy and imperfect. So what if he imagined a different scenario in terms of having a child. This is the reality. Now is he going to put on his boy draws and man up or is he going to whine like a little punk about how things have turned out. As I've said before, he has a lot of growing to do.

The scene between Kam and her baby boy was so touching. But it also made me angry. Kam should name him whatever she wants. Who gives a flying flip whether Josh approves or not.

Thanks Sarah for laying it out there for Perry. Kam didn't tell. Bad move, now deal with it.

And Dana needs to shut.the.f*ck.up... Unlike you, Dana, Kam is not the kind of person to be so underhanded to trick your precious brother.

Finally, some sign of growth from Josh.

CF, I've enjoyed the story so far. So, I'll be here when you return. Good luck with your school work. Real life is so much more important.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/29/11

Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Josh is acting like an idiot. that is all.

Author's Response: Hi BellaChica, yes he is isn't he...but then again he's not perfect... Thank you for reading and responding...have a great weekend. :)

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 10/17/10