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If you don’t stick to your values when they’re being tested, they’re not values: they’re hobbies.


~Jon Stewart




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Lorilei Riley is a large black girl who was uprooted at age five when her mother marries and relocates to the small mostly white mining town of Appalachia.  She is the object of ridicule and scorn.  She immediately bonds with Micah Hamilton a young classmate who is also an outsider because of a large growth on his face.

Micah gets a chance at a normal life by having a surgery to remove the growth and Lorilei wonders as they both reach adulthood if Micah has remained with her out of friendship and loyalty or if a guy like him, could really come to  love a plus size girl like her.

 

In The Eyes of the Beholder is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2011 BRAnderson

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: Ugly Girls Need Love Too
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 84367
Read Count: 80845
Published: September 29 2011
Updated: June 15 2012


Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

This...

You don’t know this woman well enough to be putting your mouth on her like that! It’s disgusting!”

and this ...

you just don’t do that kind of thing with any old woman!  I’ve never done it, not even with Jill for god sake! I certainly wouldn’t do it with some strange woman!”

 

Teddy Lee is going to eat those words, so to speak. *snerk*

And Miriam is about to start plotting. I love this story.

 



Author's Response:

Ha Ha!  Teddy Lee is going to eat those words...and a lot more!  LOL.  I'm working on the next chapter as we speak.  My muse is flowing!  More t come soon.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 06 2011

Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

Teddy Lee is ready to learn. Sabrina better jump on that. Aunt and niece have some of the same insecurities stemming from different issues. I hope Sabrina will give Teddy Lee a chance. At some point, the alpha is going to rear his head.

And Micah, he's turning into a right proper alpha. Lei needs to be careful about continually pushing him away. I knew that little witch Jessica would start sniffing after Micah, now that he's "acceptable". I'd be really disappointed in Micah if he fell for that wench. He seems to see her for the horrible creature she is. Let's hope it stays that way.

I so enjoy when you update.



Author's Response:

Don't worry.  Micah don't want no Jessica!  She was one of his main torturers when he was little and he hasn't forgotten it.  No matter how good she looks, she'll always be ugly in his eyes, hence the title of this story!  LOL.   More is coming...

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 07 2011

Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

that skinny-azz b!tch still don't get it, and probably never will. Micah really has his head screwed on right. Teddy Lee, Teddy Lee, Beanie didn't stand a chance.



Author's Response:

No, Jessica doesn't get it and she probably never will.  Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 11 2011

Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

I'm so impressed at how insightful Micah is. Lei better get her act together. Micah has been so understanding, but it's draining on a person to have to constantly reassure someone.

Brenda, this is a wonderful story and you should tell it in however you want. I enjoy your fleshing out of all of the characters. It makes for a more enriching story. Great job, Chica.



Author's Response:

Thaks so much for our review.  Micah is horny and frustrated.  What's wrong with that girl? She's known him since they were five! She doesn't want to lose him, so she'd better get her act together.  More to come soon.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 16 2011

Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

Miriam and her "girls" are a mess. I cracked up when Amy Lee told Lei to stop the madness girlfriend. And when Miriam said that Micah was an ass man, I was just through.

This was too funny. I'm glad Lei got to see a different side of her grandmother.



Author's Response:

LOL  Those ladies were a trip!  Lei got some good advice though.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 17 2011

Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

I can't say that I'm sad for him. I am sad for Lei's grief.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: November 26 2011

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Tyler could count on one hand the number of attempted, but failed relationships that he had; had. It was getting to the point that he just was ready to give up on finding love or the right person he could give his entire self to. Most of the women he had a relationship with didn't last long not because they didn't want it, they just couldn't handle his faults or flaws. Tyler Hollis had a secret an extremely large secret that over the years, he had learned how to control to an extent, but at some point in the relationship, it would become the topic of conversation and downhill the relationships would go. He was looking for that one special woman that wouldn't mind them; he wasn't sure if she was the one, but the way he was feeling about her he wanted to make her the one. It wasn't very many women he had wanted in his thirty-eight years, but her he felt he couldn't live without.

♥ ஒ Love ஒ ♥...

Kayla had only had two real relationships in her life, okay let's be honest one and she wasn't even sure that was the real thing. It had been over seven years ago. She had always focused on her career, she was what they called a workaholic, her best friends India and Traci would tell her she was sexually deprived, that she needed to started living before she woke up one morning and life had passed her bye. However, never in her right mind did she think she would be in a predicament like this, it was totally out of her character to let something like this happen, and to let it happen like this. It was overwhelming more like surreal an impulsive act, or so she thought. Could it have been a calculating move on his part or was it just something that happened to happen. But if they both were completely honest with themselves it had been building ever since that faithful snowy morning.

♥ ஒ Love ஒ ♥...

Disclaimer: There is no Copyright Infringement intended. The names and characters in this story are of my own creation, so any similarities to any person or person's in this story dead or alive fictional or non-fictional is purely coincidental. Any and all recognizable characters involved in the images are solely owned and the property of their respective owners or by an unknown developer THAT IS NOT ME!! I do not own it/them and will not make money on them. The author of this story is in no way associated with the franchise/franchises of any creators, producer, owner or any media that may be used along with this story.

© Kaleah, 2011.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female, Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 47
Completed:Yes
Word count: 218680
Read Count: 114533
Published: October 03 2011
Updated: January 01 2013


Title: Chapter 5: Born To Give My Love To You

Tyler is impulsive in a controlled kind of way, if that makes sense. :)

He is so going over to see Kayla. What will happen, there's no telling. The way he's feeling and the way she's feeling, ANYTHING, and I do ANYTHING can happen. I just want to be there to see it. great story and great storytelling, Chica.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 15 2011

Title: Chapter 6: Blame it on the Snow

ooooh, there's going to be trouble. No protection?

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 17 2011

Rated: Mature Content
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Summary:

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Here is the deepest secret nobody knows
Here is the root of the root and the bud of the bud
and the sky of the sky of a tree called life
Which grows higher than soul can hope or mind can hide
and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart
i carry your heart(i carry it in my heart)

A story about what it is to love that which you cannot keep.



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies, Books, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 32843
Read Count: 66292
Published: November 17 2011
Updated: June 13 2012


Title: Chapter 3: Proposition

Andrew might want to think about why he got so pissed with convo with Rafe. Interesting. Very.

Author''s Response:

lol i agree,  althoug rafael is a jerk :P Thank you Bella!

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Me likey! More please.



Author''s Response:

Hope you enjoy the next update then, thank you baha!

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 24 2011

Title: Chapter 1: Flock of Birds

The Prologue has peaked my interest and I have somany questions. Just gonna sit back and watch this unfold. Hope you update often. *look at me, you just got started and I'm already demanding*

Author's Response: I'm glad you are being demanding, Im going to need it so I can stay on track. Thank you Bella!

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 23 2011

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Eve and A.J. Winters had a life most people dreamed of and a love only a handful ever experienced. But one seeming mistake will test everything they hold dear. Can love truly survive on Broken Vows?

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All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are all MINE. I am is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 10759
Read Count: 9636
Published: November 22 2011
Updated: February 23 2012


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1:It all came crashing down

This smells like a set-up. He knew Eve was coming, so either he's dumb as a stump or that skank orchestrated this. I'm going with the latter.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: November 23 2011

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

At least they're talking. But dang, not enough. I'm suspicioning that we haven't seen the last of Eric. Wonder if what he's done has anything to do with Eve?

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: February 26 2012

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Summary:

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 15877
Read Count: 12321
Published: December 04 2011
Updated: August 02 2015


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 2

There's a bit of melancholy that I feel when reading about Janet. It makes wish for a better life for her. I hope she finds someone that will be her support system. Even though she has family, it just seems asif she's all alone in the world and that just makes me sad. You've drawn me into the story, Chica.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!

I'm glad I drew you in. Hopefully the next chapter doesn't disappoint! :)

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 12 2011

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Summary:

All is fair in love and war?

That's the way the story goes until Nita Floyd's promotion is handed to the son of her firm's managing partner. Fifteen years on the job, two failed marriages, and a son and daughter who hate her more than life itself, what's Nita's next move. How far will she go to right the wrong especially when her rival re-acquaints her with a little thing called fun.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 11731
Read Count: 48380
Published: December 12 2011
Updated: March 05 2012


Title: Chapter 3: Introduction - Russ the Glutton for Punishment

Damn if this ain't the funniest. Nita will eat him alive. Chica, you had me rolling. I can't wait to see how these two very disimilar people get together, if they do.



Author's Response:

It's definitely going to be a challenge...a definite challenge and so far oh so fun to write...more characters to introduce with quirks and funny personalities of his own

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 13 2011

Title: Chapter 4: The Apple Doesn't Fall Too Far...

Oh, this should be interesting. Deja is a "mini" Nita. She's just getting back what she put her floks thru. I like her brother. At least the kids are being watched by family.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 15 2011

Title: Chapter 9: A Step Forward...A Mile Back

I really don't know what to say about Nita. All I can do is shake my head. Russ is really going to need a healthy ego on this one. She runs hot and cold. And when she's cold, she's damn cold. If Russ continues to hang around her, he'll need brass balls, 'cause ole girl is going to have them in a vise grip. I feel bad for him. Nita, on the other hand, I vascilate. One minute I feel a bit sorry for her and at other times, I want to hit her in the throat. Her latest whiplash with Russ made me want to knock her ass into next week. There's really no excuse in mistreating another human being, no matter how screwed up you are. And my girl Nita is one f*cked up chica. Nita, get thee to a therapist and quick.

SS, I'm enjoying the hell out of this one. Good job.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 20 2012

Title: Chapter 10: My Own Worst Enemy

Please tell me that Nash is not Mr Perfect and Nita is not Miss Perfect. PLEASSSSSE! I'll feel so bad for Russ if true. Poor Russ. He must really like Nita to take another hit to the gut.

I so hopen you continue to feel inspired. I really like this story.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: February 29 2012

Title: Love and War

Scribe! Chica! Whut Happen?!?! I enjoy this one even though Nita is making me want to smack her right now. I'm here for the long haul and hate to think that you might not continue this one. Just because some of us might not be getting Nita right now doesn't mean she isn't a very interesting and intriguing character. I say, let the muse speak. We'll get it soon enough. Some of us might not get it at all, but hey, so what. Be true to the Nita in your head. Continue, please. I hope nothing I've said has made you come to this point.  I think you're very talented and if I didn't like reading about Nita, I wouldn't. And we all come to a story with our own shadings and experiences. So, let it flow, Chica.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 03 2012

Title: Chapter 11: Awkward Indiscretions...

oh boy. this just got real complicated for Russ and Nash.

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Date: March 07 2012

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Sometimes when it comes to family and their issues, a lie is more acceptable than reality.

 

Acceptable Lies is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2011 BRAnderson



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 93404
Read Count: 94665
Published: December 23 2011
Updated: January 19 2013


Title: Acceptable Lies

Sydney. I don't know what to say about this chick. Yeah, she loves Trevon, but evidently not enough. And he deserves someone who does. So, yeah, I'm glad he bounced. There's nothing he can do, it's up to her to actually grow a spine and face her father. If she can't do that, then Trevon is better off. How can she think that Trevon would be OK with the termination of their baby? And the statement that she was going to do it without him even knowing about the baby is just low. Just because he wouldn't know doesn't mean it didn't happen. Trevon really needs to re-think whether he knows who this person is. She really pisses me off.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 15 2012

Title: Acceptable Lies

I must admit that I thought very little of Sugar in the beginning. But damn if she didn't deliver. I hope she continues to thwart Albert at every turn. Ole girl didn't just fall off the turnip truck. And yes, she might be ghetto fabulous, but that don't mean she's not a clever cookie.

Gabe really has a few issues. When he finds out what his father is up to, he's going to lose it. And that sister of his is just creepy.

 

Really enjoying this one, Chica.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 23 2012

Title: Acceptable Lies

How many lies. How many liars. How many will be caught. Sydney resorts to lying first. And now will have to tell more to cover the initial lie. She'll eventually get caught up in her own web. And what will happen when the potential baby daddy finds out?

 

No man has a good enough memory to make a successful liar.  ~Abraham Lincoln

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Date: February 29 2012

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Summary:

 

Adina Rush and Ant Bianchi are back...

 

There's a complication...

 

How far will Ant go to win the girl?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: The Ties that Bind
Chapters: 4
Completed:Yes
Word count: 5354
Read Count: 19257
Published: January 03 2012
Updated: February 19 2012


Title: Chapter 3: The Makings of You

wow. enjoying this.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: February 18 2012

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Summary:

 

We Shall Overcome Someday

by Brenda 1257

Henry McDermont wants to establish a relationship with his former girlfriend and his daughter, but each has baggage from their past that is influencing their decisions today.  Each family has racial issues that they need to deal with.  Can Henry and Vanessa overcome their past in order to make a new future?

We Shall Overcome Someday is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2012 BRAnderson

 

 

 



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Racism
Series: New Beginnings
Chapters: 3
Completed:Yes
Word count: 16498
Read Count: 6618
Published: January 06 2012
Updated: January 16 2012


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Vanessa's Dilemma

It's interesting that in the beginning one could come down hard on Henry for how he treated Vanessa. But I've learned with your stories that things are not always as they seem. Your characters are given so many layers and you paint a full picture of who those characters are and that takes time. So, while the initial reaction may be, how could he do that? With each installment you get a better idea of the circumstances and human flaws an frailities involved. I love that about your storytelling.

On a more humorus note, when I'm reading about the grandmother and Uncle, I get a Madea and that brother of hers picture. I don't know why that popped into my head. Can't wait to see the Uncle after all these years and his wrong-headed notions. Henry is no longer that naive little kid that he was. I'm thinking he'll be able to hold his own.



Author's Response:

Thank you BellaChica:  I do that because there is always a reason why people are the way they are.  Every character I write will not always be redeemable, because all people cannot recover and move on from their pain, so they continue to hurt others.  As a minister I've learned that.

For example, Henry's parents are still the same even though the child they wanted to get rid of ended up saving their only child's life.  They pushed that fact out of their minds.  Howvever, they are going to come face to face with Henrietta and that will be interesting.

I guess it's the minister in me coming out.l All babies are born innocent.  Negative behavior is learned and pain that is inflicted is repeated.  I love redemption.  It is always somewhere hidden in my stories.  LOL  Howver, as I said, everyone cannot be redeemed, I know that.

LOL at Madea.  I hadn't thought about that, but now I can't get those two out of my mind.  If it looks like Madea and her brother in the next installment, it's your fault.  LOL 

Thank you for reviewing.  We all are a work in progress and only God's grace can help us to move closer to what our LORD really wants us to become.

 

Brenda

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 08 2012

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Summary:

 

Dr Vanessa Sharpe has just been offered the job of a lifetime, to work for a Japanese owned pharmaceutical company joining a successful research team headed up her former mentor.  This is her chance for a new start and to rebuild her confidence, she just needs to ignore her intense attraction to her sexy boss Takeshi and focus on her work that should be easy right?

 

Takeshi Yaguchi is the CEO of PharmaChem and heir to Yaguchi enterprises, he values Family and Honour and with his good looks, money and power he has dated many beautiful women but always ones that his family approves of and are considered acceptable for his position and has never deviated from this so why does he find himself drawn to Vanessa?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 2742
Read Count: 11126
Published: January 18 2012
Updated: January 18 2012


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh, I'm really going to enjoy this one.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: January 20 2012

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.