Penname: BellaChica [Contact]

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Member Since: December 26 2009

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If you don’t stick to your values when they’re being tested, they’re not values: they’re hobbies.


~Jon Stewart




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Summary:

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Victoria and Brian Collins are planning to start their dream family, but someone else has other plans...



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Psychological, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 1861
Read Count: 3641
Published: April 17 2012
Updated: April 17 2012


Title: Chapter 2: One

“Yeah, well his job was to do me last night.”

This had me rolling.

You mean he couldn't take an hour for some baby makin'?  Oh wait, he's too busy sticking "litle" Brian where he shouldn't.  Brian is a damn fool and I can't wait for Victoria to find out and dump his ass. He has proven he can't be trusted. That chick didn't force him to drop trou. And all that deep sighing on his part doesn't make me feel a lick of sympathy for his ass.  He has a supposed committment to his wife, that chick doesn't. yeah, she's a ho, but nobody made his ass sleep with her and now he's so chicken shit that he'll continue because he supposedly has so much to lose. Funny how cheaters only think about what they have to lose after the fact. gah.

I can tell I'm going to enjoy this immensely, even though I want to knock the hell out of Brian. Poor Vicky.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 19 2012

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Leaving well enough alone should've been a saying Darren Hayes lived by. Unfortunately for him, her leaving him was never an option.



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Categories: Music, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Work in Progress
Challenges: Love Me I’m Crazy
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:Yes
Word count: 12451
Read Count: 17298
Published: April 26 2012
Updated: June 02 2013


Title: Chapter 1: The Cast

Yep, Fallon is crazy as a sh*thouse rat. Darren is oblivious and Janice might be in a world of danger if Darren ever leaves Fallon.

This is deliciously disturbing and I love it. :)



Author's Response:

lol! Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 27 2012

Title: Chapter 7: No Turning Back...

Darren brought this craziness on himself. I just hope Janice doesn't have to suffer because of his stupidity. What an idiot. Next time, pay attention to those little hints that something might be off.

Perfect story for the challenge, 'cause sista girrl is coo coo



Author's Response:

beyond coo coo. thanks for reading.

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Date: June 16 2012

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Shonti Brown, Chicago socialite and events/party blogger, is stuck in Hohenwald, TN due to her late grandfather’s, a man she barely knew, unusual stipulation of her having to stay two weeks on her newly inherited farm if she wanted to keep the farm in the family or the other partner, Richard Vaughn, would get full ownership of the farm.  Shonti goes through an emotional roller coaster as she tries to cope with living in the shadow of her late grandfather and falling in love, reluctantly, with Richard.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 29
Completed:No
Word count: 39734
Read Count: 67996
Published: June 08 2012
Updated: June 25 2018


Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

This is bound to happen again no matter how much regret. The interesting thing will be how long they're be able to resist.

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Date: July 03 2012

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

yep, it'll happen again. :)

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Date: July 08 2012

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Summary:

make it nasty

 

Emery Johnson has been crushing on her older brothers best friend for years, too bad in his eyes, she will only ever be recognized as 'Darrell's sister'. Ready to change that, Emery enlists the help of a single book to snare her dream man, but along the way someone else steps into the picture, shaking up the feelings that Emery thought were tightly secured and forever stable.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 19
Completed:No
Word count: 116446
Read Count: 148598
Published: June 08 2012
Updated: September 08 2013


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Emery is playing with fire, but I'm really interested in this story. The more the merrier.

Emery has a crush on Logan and it goes back to way before he got fine. The flashback about the paper heart might provide a clue as to how Logan feels about her.  I think the only reason he doesn't pursue her is because of his relationship with Darrell. She might not be in love with him, but he is her first crush and she sees him every day and that has not died down. Maybe, she does need a distraction as he seems to be the only guy she's ever thought about.

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Date: June 10 2012

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Summary:

Just another day in the GLEE Rehearsal Room or is it?



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Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Mercedes Jones
Classification: Drabbles , General, Off Cannon
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 21
Completed:No
Word count: 16668
Read Count: 12931
Published: June 08 2012
Updated: January 28 2015


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I never liked Finn on the show, but I'm loving this Finn. A LOT

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Date: December 21 2012

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Esther Hendrickson has loved teaching young children, mainly because she cannot have children of her own. What was once society's trophy wife, her abusive past has led her deep into dementia, but the love of hardened FBI agent A.J. Thomas may be just what she needs to heal her torn heart.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:No
Word count: 46765
Read Count: 75327
Published: June 14 2012
Updated: January 03 2015


Title: Chapter 6: C is for Compromise

Your wirting is so real. You're making me feel what Esther is experiencing. You make me want her to become whole. Those parents of hers are completely toxic, no wonder the poor woman's internal dialogue is so soul destroying. She needs A. J. and badly.

Keep up the good work, Chica.

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Date: July 02 2012

Title: Chapter 7: D is for Determination

A.J., DAMN! He had my mouth on the floor. He is all MAN. And Esther has already gone there in her mind. I don't think she'll be able to resist him. Glad he's come into her life.

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Date: July 03 2012

Title: Chapter 8: E is for Eager

That was one helluva filler chapter as you call it.  A. J. is quite blunt, but I think Esther needs that. She really does live too much in her head. It is quite clear that she has never experience any passion. But she's about to get it with A. J. and in spades.

This

"...made him want to drop to his knees right in this alley and give her a licking she’d never forget"

and this

"...but I will certainly turn you over my knee and spank your hot little ass red."

had me rolling. You really know how to turn a phrase.

 

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 05 2012

Title: Chapter 9: F is for Family

Esther is broken because of the woman that birthed her. gah, what a bitch who never should've had one child. She's f'd them all up. Some more than others.

I'd like to see what you can do with Avery next. She seems the one most under her bio-unit's control. Esther and Rosario both left, even though Mommie Dearest is causing havoc in their lives, at least they've gone. Avery is probably seething with unexpressed anger. And that so-called "man" she married screams all kind of drama.

I'm loving A. J. I didn't realize that Esther was still married. A. J. will not like that.

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Date: July 08 2012

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Summary:

Carmen Shelly preyed on married men and usually won her sought after prize. Business is booming until her partner sets his sights on her single sister.

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:Yes
Word count: 41535
Read Count: 39601
Published: July 29 2012
Updated: February 28 2016


Title: Chapter 11: Ten~ A wanted woman

"Get your ass out of this house before I drop you again."

This made me cackle. Richard is not the one.

Carmen is all kinds of crazy. Dang.

It's everybody's fault but her own. She needs to never see the light of day again.

Whew, Richard was out of control. Nic, you need some rest, girl. :)

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 01 2016

Title: Chapter 12: Eleven ~Rest for the Wicked

cue the loony tunes music. I can't see how this crazy heifer was even able to function with all that crap going on in her head. She belongs on the ID channel. If she ever gets out...

This was really good.

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Date: March 01 2016

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[Reviews - 282]
Summary:

 

Cara Nightingale had made the same mistake twice.  Could she recover from past mistakes and get her life in order?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:Yes
Word count: 66737
Read Count: 81055
Published: August 07 2012
Updated: October 15 2012


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Why Do Fools Fall in Love?

oh my. Stephan is going to bust a gut when Cara delivers the news. This is going to be really good. Brenda, I just love your stories. You have a way of engaging the reader and writing something that makes sense. Love it, just love it. Cara's real fertile, isn't she?

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Date: August 08 2012

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Summary:

Playboy and U.S. gold metal swimmer, Ryan Lochte had everything he wanted until he saw the one woman he couldn’t live without in teammate and arch rival Michael Phelps’ arms.  Friday Jones was not his type but he wasn’t going to leave London without making her his girl Friday.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 1771
Read Count: 718
Published: August 10 2012
Updated: August 10 2012


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I was hoping someone would write a story about Ryan. Especially after his mother's interview. Game On!!!

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Date: August 11 2012

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Summary:

This story is the sequel of Illusions: The End.

Emma is on the brink of depression and she has lost herself. George finds it incredibly hard to cope with the guilt he feels for causing her to lose her psychological equilibrium. Will they be able to get back together, or will Taylor be the best person to pick Emma up and make her feel herself again?

© Adi Milano, 2012.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Illusions
Chapters: 11
Completed:Yes
Word count: 19016
Read Count: 36440
Published: October 13 2012
Updated: December 26 2012


Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: George

George seems to be going thru the motions. Emma is absolutely correct. George needs to back up his words with actions that shows he's growing and changing. He seems to want a quick fix and there isn't one.



Author's Response:

He always wants the quick fix because it is easy. For once, he'll understand that he has to be patient in life. :D

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 21 2012

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In desperate need to be loved, Camille Sullivan was willing to do anything... even if it meant sleeping with the devil.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Psychological, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 3430
Read Count: 49946
Published: December 12 2012
Updated: July 18 2019


Title: Chapter 3: Betrayal

See, I think that when your significant other brings another to your bed and have sexy times, on some level, they WANT to get caught. This was a big FU to Xavier. Xavier doesn't need either one of these people in his life.

I'm all in. Nice update. Looking forward to the next chapter(s).

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 18 2019

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Summary:

Terri Lawson, a middle-aged modeling agent had one job to do: find someone totally different then what the agency usually picks. When she runs into a young man way out of anything she'd ever consider...both of their lives change for the better.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back, On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: The Cougars
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 43892
Read Count: 64371
Published: January 04 2013
Updated: February 04 2014


Title: Chapter 9: Stay

I  really like Daniel. He may be young in  years but he's definitely more mature than Terri when it comes to being in touch with who he is. Love their "relationship". So glad he took her to see her folks. I still don't understand why she shut them out of her life. But, they're back and that's all that counts.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 22 2013

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Summary:

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Could she not comprehend that he had a reckoning to deliver?

The Fire Rises



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies
Characters: None
Classification: General, Off Cannon
Genre: Action-Adventure
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 15
Completed:No
Word count: 39404
Read Count: 34837
Published: April 09 2013
Updated: August 26 2016


Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

My Next button doesn't seem to be working. :)

 

Thanks so much for the update.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 16 2015

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Summary:

Everyone has that someone who made them feel perfect and brilliant. How do we lose sight of those great loves and what happens when they come back into your orbit? Amelia and David were college sweethearts who run into each other 2 decades later-after marriages, divorces, kids, and careers--can they still be crazy in love?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:Yes
Word count: 9837
Read Count: 16836
Published: April 17 2013
Updated: June 12 2013


Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7 I Wonder If I Take You Home...

Time for that baby. This was so romantic. Lovely.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 10 2013

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Summary:

 

Hydrangeas

Although she has "best intentions" for her daughter, a mother's obsession with social status threatens to tear her family apart.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Family
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: How Does Her Garden Grow?
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3235
Read Count: 5868
Published: May 05 2013
Updated: May 05 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Hydrangeas

what a very shallow woman. Her daughters are lucky to escape her.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 05 2013

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Summary:

At some point, you'll have to eventually let your guard down.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:No
Word count: 192818
Read Count: 287694
Published: May 08 2013
Updated: October 03 2015


Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 17

Really nice. Great update.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 02 2014

Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Very well done, Chica. You are truly gifted.

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Date: October 12 2013

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

DAMN! Henry! Wow!

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Date: July 22 2013

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[Reviews - 417]
Summary:

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Benjamin Cunningham III decided to finally open the box that his adopted parents had given him which would reveal his past.  Little did he know that its contents would change his life forever.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Rape
Challenges: Through His Eyes
Series: None
Chapters: 16
Completed:No
Word count: 82948
Read Count: 53952
Published: May 15 2013
Updated: September 05 2014


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Learning and Coping

oh man. DAMN. I want Bennie to take that bastid down.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 17 2013

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.