I'm not really sure how long I've been writing. I write poetry, songs, fan fiction, and I'm trying to write fiction itself. If someone would be willing to give me help with my writing, I'd appreciate it. I'm still trying to learn. I'm also trying to get new themes into my writing besides just romance.
I listen to many differnt music artists. I think I might be inspired by the music I listen to in a way.
Born to an African-American mother, Kendra’s sandy hair and fair skin suggested that the black man listed on her birth certificate may not be her real father. If so, then who was? Read on to find out…
This is really good. It is written well.
Author's Response: Thanks so much, Flicker and Sparkle. :)
Grace Bullock takes nothing from no one. A woman in her mid-thirties, Grace faces many battles. She must deal with being a single woman in an traditionally-based small town in Alabama. Living in a place that is behind the times, she is the co-owner of a flower shop along with her friend and mother figure Dorothy-Mae. She constantly deals with the town’s known racist sheriff, Holland. Her life seem to go nowhere until she received a phone call from her longtime friend Miriam, a foreign exchange student from France. This phone call leads Grace to visit Miriam in Paris, France which changes everything in her life.
Now with corrected French and translations!
That was well written I liked it. This seems as though it could be very interesting.
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Danielle Roberts affectionately known as Dani to everyone, has what everyone else seems to want, money, power and respect. But she doesn't have the one thing that she wants, love.Chad Collins is everybody's All-American. He's got the career, the money and the chicks throwing themselves at him, but he doesn't have the one he wants, Dani.
They've both signed the contract with "the clause". Will they be able to overcome it and find the true love they've both been waiting on?
Another Installment of Kerrington & Associates
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This seems interesting. You're writing stlye is pretty good.
That was really nice. I liked it.
That was good. I wonder what is going happen next.
That was pretty good. I liked it. I don't think you're punctuating your dialogue correctly.
Commas are used with speaking verbs.
Ex: "That was nice," he said.
Periods are used with actions.
Ex: "That was nice." She smiled up at him.
I'm not trying to offend you if you think I am. I'm just trying to help. You can ignore what I say if you want.
I forgot to add to my review that for dialogue, you still use exclamation points, question marks, and other forms of punctuation.
Author's Response: Thanks for the constructive criticisms... I appreciate it...
Wow. I didn't see that coming. I do wonder when exactly Ben got his ideas from if it wasn't from the rest of his family. That kind of makes me wonder. I am glad that he didn't though; it's good that the rest of the family is supportive of their relationship.
This chapter was fairly good. It was fairly written too. It looks like your formating thing got fixed, which is really good. Good job.
:)
Reviewer: Flicker and Sparkle Signed That was really interesting. I enjoyed it. I wonder if his parents are going to approve?
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it.
That was interesting. Your formating does seem to be a little different at times and places, but I think it's okay.
Author's Response: I don't understand what you mean by that. I normally just cut and paste. Was it difficult to follow?
At the Chicago Day Times, columnist Maxine Baker goes through the same routine everyday and wants a change. She really wasn't expecting murder. New shoes or a cute guy sure, but not murder....
This seems interesting. I like the idea.
Reviewer: Flicker and Sparkle Signed That was interesting. I wasn't expecting actually.
Zora McQueen only wanted one thing... to go to Hogwarts. It wasn't until she got there that she found out she would be in for the adventure of a lifetime. Who knew meeting a messy haired boy with a scar on his head would lead to so much trouble?
That was really good. I liked it. I believe that's saying something considering that I don't really venture into Harry Potter fan fiction. (However, that's moostly because I hold it so dearly, and the fan fiction I've come across wasn't that....good.) Anyway, keep writing, and keep up the good work.(And Hyde's look is very intense. Haha)
Thanks so much for your vote of confidence. Honestly what got me started was just the fact that the poc characters hardly got any action time in the book and even less in the movies. I even read some where JK Rowling wrote a bigger role for Dean Thomas but it was cut out in editing by publishers (ain't that a...) but i digress. Like you I love/adore/ cherish the Harry Potter universe and I would never want to anything that would wreck it. I hope make you proud with the next chapter I'm cooking up as i write this response.
Thanks for the review Flicker and Sparkle :)
PS. About Hyde, yeah he's look is very intense I was surprised when I was able to find a picture to reflect him. lol
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Sora is eighteen years old and already one of the top female artists in Japan, well known for creating orignal music that blends together both her black caribbean heritage with her japaenese. But the loss of her mother, being brought up in a culture that is not always accepting and a broken heart are holding her back from being the person she wants to be. What happens when she travels to London to work with a group called ICONIC and meets a guy called YungJi?
I really like this story. It's really good. Keep up the good work!
Thank u, glad ur enjoying it!!
-PurpleChocolate
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Will they...
Won't they...
Three months in and Lulu and Dennison haven't moved beyond first base...
Will they...
Won't they...
This is another great story. I like this so much. I'm not even kidding. It's great. I look forward to the update.
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There's no book on this. But there should be
This was really cute. I liked it. The only problem that I saw was that dialogue tags were ocassionally left out.
Reviewer: Flicker and Sparkle Signed Kwon Jae Hwa had been prepared to succeed. He had worked hard for everything he had earned all of his life, and that resulted in getting him to great places in life.
One day, his life is interrupted by a vibrant, young, aspiring dancer. She's carefree, and the complete opposite of what he is used to, but something tells him that she is exactly what he wants.
He has no reason to doubt that she feels the same about him, until she is offered the opportunity of a lifetime that puts a halt on everything they have, and Jae Hwa is left with a great responsibility to handle on his own.
Jae Hwa must face the one hardship he never thought he would have to go through with his first love.
Seems really interesting.
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