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Real name: Sharon

Member Since: July 10 2008

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I am not a writer but I love reading all the stories that have been posted on TST and FanFiction.



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Penny with a Hole in It by intellectual titmouse
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Summary:

*** This story will be removed for editing in preparation for publication. ***

Kendra Dentaris is scared of her luck. At twenty-nine, she's the head graphic designer of a popular gaming website, the brand-new owner of a gorgeous downtown condo, and independent to the bone. And she may be in a relationship that's actually going somewhere. That's if Chase McGuire would stop cheating on her.

According to her best friend Prince, he's totally going to propose. That had to be why he invited her out to a remote village out in western Pennsylvania for the weekend. But Kendra takes a wrong turn and the life she knew before literally disappears.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Friendship, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 48
Completed:No
Word count: 51365
Read Count: 168992
Published: September 28 2010
Updated: August 25 2014

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Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

Oh alright, I did feel bad for Tabbi.  Dax still loves her.  Now their is another woman in this jacked up town that hates Kendra. Thanks

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Date: March 22 2011
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Poor Trixie...what I don't understand is why the woman in this town allow Deleon to treat them like that.  It seems that they don't have any respect for themselves.

I was LOL at Dax and his conversation with his grandfather.  Dax is feeling real good.  Go Dax.  I hope that he will find a real love and it isn't Kendra.

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Date: March 19 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Intro

Poor Kendra lost and now she is hurt.  Good start to the story.  Thanks

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Date: October 03 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

Thanks for a great update.

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Date: January 12 2011
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Grandpa is a mess.  Dax seems dense.  A guest poor Negro-gal has landed herself in a right pickle of a mess.  Thanks

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Date: October 03 2010
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

Tabbi has a nerve to come to Dax and tell him that she is pregnant.  The question is who be the baby daddy...ho?

Kendra, why you getting mad at Deleon when you told him you had a man and that his brother had a crush on you.  Shame on you.

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Date: March 22 2011
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Chase is a conceited ass wipe.  The fact that he was seen with woman that looked better on his arms than her is just nauseating.  What a creep.  I like Dax and I hope that he wins her heart not his brother Deleon.  Who sounds like Chase.  Thanks

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Date: October 11 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

The plot thickens.  Thanks

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Date: October 11 2010
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

I hope that Dax and Deleon and Grandpa all are romantically interested in the Negro-gal.  Thanks

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Date: October 03 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Oh no now she has amnesia...stuck in the back woods of West Virginia and she doesn't remember who she is and why she was in this neck of the woods.  I am looking forward to reading more.  Thanks

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Date: October 03 2010
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Thanks for a great update.  Can't believe that Chase left...what an asswipe.  I hope that theyPrince finds her soon before all hell breaks loose in this little town of almost 1000 residents. 

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Date: October 11 2010
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

I like Prince's parents.  I so like Dax and I would prefer that Kendra be attracted to him than his crazy brother Deleon.  However, I can't see her living in this backwards town.  I enjoy reading how the boys grandfather is so tough with them but also he seems very kind and genuine in his affections for his grandsons.  Thanks for a great update.

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Date: March 19 2011
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27

Thanks

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Date: March 22 2011
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

So is there hope for Prince?  Kendra and Prince...I was wondering why they never got together.  It seems that they are really close and as Prince's mother stated they acted liked a married couple.  Maybe once she is found they will get together.  Thanks

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Date: March 19 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Intro

I think I posted a comment before but I am not sure.  Off to a good start.  Thanks

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Date: January 12 2011
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

I vote for Prince.  Thanks

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Date: March 19 2011
Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32

Thanks for the update.

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Date: June 18 2011
Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31

I hate these next few chapters as well...what happened to her being with Prince....damn. 

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Date: March 20 2011
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

Poor Dax.  Yeah Prince and his family is off to find their girl.  I hope Betsy report that the three witches are plotting against Kendra.  Thanks

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Date: March 22 2011
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

Thanks for a great update.  I am glad that they are talking and connecting on some levels but he can't have her.  The woman in this town are crazy as hell.  Where was psycho Cat nekkid?  I think I missed that part.  I was LOL when Caroline finally got her husband to f..k her and he called another womans name a black woman at that.  Oh DAMN, Kendra you have so many enemies.  I hope that your Prince find you soon before you are lynched.

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Date: March 21 2011
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Oh hell no the town ho and her drunk ass mother are going to make Kendra leave because they think that Deleon is interested in her.  See Pa's words are coming to fruition this is what happens when one sleeps with trash.  Thanks

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Date: March 19 2011
Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31

Damn

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Date: March 22 2011
Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26

Poor Prince :(  I like Amy and I think that she would be good for Deleon.

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Date: March 22 2011
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

I wonder to what is going to happen.  I hope that she doesn't fall for Deleon because she belongs with  Prince.  Thanks

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Date: March 20 2011
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

LOL thanks for a great update.

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Date: March 19 2011

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