Penname: Divsionred [Contact]

Real name: Sharon

Member Since: July 10 2008

Membership status: Member

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I am not a writer but I love reading all the stories that have been posted on TST and FanFiction.



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Summary:

 

A Special Thank You to MINX for the AMAZING banner.

Alicia meets Nick and they begin a Journey full of love, forgiveness and Passion. From two different worlds their love bridges the culture gap and emotional walls come crashing down. This is a Story of faith and love in its purest forms.

Alicia is in her third year of nursing school, at 23 she is more than ready to take on the real world after moving to New York far away from her overprotective family where she is learning to depend more on herself and taking big steps to her independance.

Nick is a first generation Chinese-American living in New York, at 25 he is done pleasing everyone but himself, he was to be a doctor like his father and for most of his life he spent his days and nights studying and working at that goal... In the last year before his graduation from medical school Nick decides to take a break and
somehow how ended up buying a club with his bestfriend Sean. one year later Nick is conflicted though he loves his life the one he made for himself he misses his family and he even misses medical school. After his little detour from the path his father wanted him to take his family relationships are strained at best. Alicia teaches him the meaning of forgiveness and shows him that its time to let go of the past to embrace the future. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 16
Completed:No
Word count: 15038
Read Count: 39261
Published: May 29 2009
Updated: November 19 2013


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Oh Kandice is a bitch my goodness to treat her own cousin like that.  How awful.  Good for Alicia for kicking her cousin out of her house...with her for a cousin Alicia doesn't have to worry about other enemies because her cousin is her biggest enemy.  The person that will get what they deserve is Kandice the idiot jealous heifer.  Thanks

Author's Response:

Im glad you like it, thank you for the review.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 31 2009

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Thanks for a great update.

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 05 2009

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Thanks for a great update.  I just want to make sure that the mother believed Kandice because she is skinny?  WTF?  Her mother had a lot of nerve to blame her daughter for stealing a man that didn't want Kandice.  My goodness the nerve of that skanky heifer.  I likeNick...he has been very clear into who he is attracted too.  So now comes to her cousins apartment with a black eye.  Will she tell her aunt that he cousin gave her the black eye?  What will Kandice do when she finds out that Nick stayed the night with Alicia..this brings to mind that saying that you can't pick your family  Because if there was a soul that needed a new family it would be Alicia.  Thanks

Author's Response: Glad you like it, Alicia's mother has some issues..none of them Alicia's fault and Kandice will get hers...remember that Alicia is a very giving person even when it comes to people who dont mean well, some people dont deserve forgiveness especially when they dont plan on changing their ways, but our girl will try her best.

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Date: June 07 2009

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Yes you need to complete the story and give Alicia a slapping hand so that she can slap the shit out of her conniving bitch of a cousin.  What trifling ho that cousin is.

 I thought that the fact that Nick shared a plate with Alicia was so cute and very romantic.  They make such a sweet couple.

I hope that she that shall not be named get her comeuppance soon.

 Thanks for a great read.



Author's Response: Thanks for a great review, Kandice will get hers soon enough.

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Date: June 27 2009

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Why does her being a virgin frightened him?  I thought that he would be excited that he would be her first and last.  Thanks

Author's Response:

I dont think he was scared per se more shocked than anything else. Thanks for the review~

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Date: June 27 2009

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Great update.  They are so cute together.  Thanks

Author's Response: Thank you for the review.

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Date: September 04 2009

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Thanks for a great update...I wonder what that skank did to get arrested...couldn't have happened to a better person.  Hopefully she will be there for awhile.

Author's Response: Kill em with kindness Alicia will try to save the day as usual but I think Nick will have a say in how this all goes down.

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Date: January 25 2010

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Thanks for a great update.  It has been awhile since you last updated the story.  I hope that his father will be ok.  I am glad that her grandmother is excepting their relationship.  Please update on a reguar basis.  Take vare and Happy Holidays.

Author's Response: Thank you, I will hopefully update them all soon, Im glad you enjoyed the chapter, sorry for the long wait.

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Date: December 20 2009

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Thanks for a great update.  I am glad that Nick defended his girlfriend.  He will be doing that alot.  I hope that Alicia continues to get stronger and stand up for hersself.  Stunned that dear old dad was in love with a black woman and that dear old mom sent her away which is understandable.  Happy New Year.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review.

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Date: December 31 2009

Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

 A Special Thank You to TokenBlackGirl for the AMAZING banner.

 One night in Vegas changes the luck of two strangers.

Grace is a good girl to the bone, though she loves her job as a teacher she wants some excitement and for her twenty-fifth birthday she wants to shed that good girl image. Not be predictable Grace but a sexy wanton vixen,so her friends take her to Las Vegas, where her life is changed forever.

Kevin is an NFL all star and all around player. He is in Vegas because he was told to lay low after sleeping with the wife of one of his team mates, he has to figure out a way to change his image and quick.

 Sometimes what happens in Vegas shouldn't stay in Vegas and in Kevin and Grace's case it wont.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 14
Completed:No
Word count: 14996
Read Count: 61672
Published: June 07 2009
Updated: April 27 2013


Title: Chapter 1: What happens in Vegas!

Yes you need to continue.  I liked the start of the story.  I was LOL at some parts of the story.  So they are married?  Thanks

Author's Response: Yep they are, Im glad you got some laughs and Im glad you are enjoying it.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 27 2009

Title: Chapter 2: The morning after and well into the evening.

Did he really think that he didn't have to tell her that he was a famous football player?  WTF?  Also, how come her friends didn't know that he was a football player?  Especially her friend that was a reporter and then another friend was a model? I hope that she tells him off for not being honest with her about who he is.   Thanks

Author's Response: I think the Alcohol played a factor in the whole lapse in memory....or did it? Sometimes a friend knows best and Im sure at least one of them knew exactally who he was but who would want someones status in the world to take love away from their friend....Being a small town girl I think Grace would have shied away from sharing herself with an international Icon, not wanting to draw attention to herself..This way she has to face the music and hopefully would want to continue her relationship with him. If he had approached her by saying "Hey Im a NFL player, lets get married and have all our business as front page news." I think Grace would have tucked tail and ran, and I think he would have used the dinner date to tell her more about himself...To bad the vultures got to her first. 

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 27 2009

Title: Chapter 3: The Date!

Thanks for a great update...they moved fast.

Author's Response: Thanks for the Review~

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Date: July 13 2009

Title: Chapter 4: Meet the Family

Thanks for a great update.  OH man, now some woman is saying that she is pregnant.  So what does she expect him to do drop his current wife and marry her.  Life doesn't work that way anymore ask Tom Brady's ex.  Thanks

Author's Response:

lol no problem, Thank you for the review.

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Date: September 02 2009

Title: Chapter 8: Oh no she didn't...

Oh my, Sara is an evil bitch trying to steal him away from Grace.  I hope that Sara gets the beat down that she deserves...silly ho. Thanks

Author's Response: lol@ Silly ho <3 thanks so much for the review.

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Date: January 30 2010

Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

Although Andre and Cindy grew up together as next door neighbors, they treated each other more like brother and sister. Years later when Cindy comes home fresh from a painful divorce, Andre suddenly discovers that his feelings for her have changed. Unfortunately, he has to hide his new feelings in order to help facilitate emotional healing in her life.

 

Just when Cindy begins to see Andre in a different light, a woman from his past returns and tries to sabotage their happiness. Will this ideal couple’s union ever materialize now?

 

 

My Lover, My Friend © 2002-2009 by Suprina Frazier

 

Latest revision completed: January 2009.

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Inspirational, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 25
Completed:Yes
Word count: 44927
Read Count: 14383
Published: June 20 2009
Updated: June 20 2009


Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

What a sad thing to happen to Cindy for her husband to tell her some mess like that and demand that she sign the divorce papers so he can be with another woman without feeling guilty...what the heck?  Thanks

Author's Response:

Yes, that was sad and so very, very wicked of her husband to do that.

You're welcome. And thank you for leaving a comment.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 21 2009

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

I like Andre.  I think that he will be good for Cindy.  Thanks

Author's Response: Love me some Dre, too. He's the man!

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Date: June 21 2009

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Mavis is to funny and her children are adorable.  I can't wait for Cindy and Andre to get together it seems that they both are seeing each other with a different perspective or view.  As for the woman that Andre was dating this Julia person good riddance to bad garbage...I am not saying that she is a gold digger but if the shoe fits than she needs to be wearing those gold digger shoes.  Thanks

Author's Response: LOL! The gold digger shoes definitely fits Julia. I like Mavis and the kids, too.

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Date: June 21 2009

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

What a shame that her husband...what did Mavis call him the fair-skinned, wavy-haired beast.  What an idiot dude was and his family to make so many racist remarks to her it is a miracle that she stayed with the  fair-skinned, wavy-haired beast for so long.  She is a better woman that I am because he would have had to pay for what he did in some way.  Thanks

Author's Response: Mavis and you got Charles pegged right on the money. I personally would have left him a lonnnnnnng time ago. And believe me, Charles is gonna pay in this story.

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Date: June 21 2009

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Great update and the fact that her parents apologized for not being there for her was great.  Every time the ex's name is mentioned there is more disturbing information about him revealed...what an idiot this guy was my goodness. 

 

I really hope that Mavis ' husband is a good husband I would hate for him to turn out to be a dog as well. 

 

 Thanks



Author's Response: Charles = idiot. Sounds plausible to me. :) You'll meet Mavis' husband and also the idiot Charles soon enough.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 21 2009

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

That was a really nice update.  What a smart little girl/  As for ANdre's parents they seem to want Andre to be with Cindy.  Sounds like a good plan. Thanks

Author's Response: Everybody in town wants Andre and Cindy to be together. They're a great match! I'm routing for them, too.

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Date: June 21 2009

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Cindy and Andre make such a good team.  I loved the story line about Mavis and her husband that was beautifully written.  Thanks

Author's Response: I agree with everything you said. It warms my heart to know that you're digging the subplot of Mavis and her hubby.

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Date: June 21 2009

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

An event planner, that is a nice career for Cindy.  Thanks

Author's Response: Yep!

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Date: June 21 2009

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

That party sounded like it would be a lot of fun...great idea.  The adults had as much fun as the children did, especially Andre...the fact that he finally admitted that he was in love with his best friend...the big other question is does she feel the same way?  Thanks

Author's Response: Andre is truly smitten. You'll see how Cindy feels soon enough. Thanks for keeping the comments rolling in.

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Date: June 21 2009

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

I like the way that they keep falling a sleep together and the fact that they are so supportive to each other.  I was surprised by the fact that Andre's bother eloped with his girlfriend.  Thanks

Author's Response: Tim couldn't wait any longer. tee-hee.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 21 2009

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Oh Cindy how blind can you be?  Thanks

Author's Response:

Her eyes will be open after while. They have to be.

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Date: June 21 2009

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