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Four Walls, For Love, Forever by tpeezy22
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Summary: Mackenzie Armstrong moves from Arkansas to Chicago to start her job at an advertising agency. She meets new people while she deals with being far from home and the people she love. On her first day, she has an altercation with a fellow coworker, Scott Ross, a man of many quirks. It sparks tension and a war of words between the two, but what will happen when a business trip to New York forces them to stay in the same room?

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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Racism, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 30
Completed:No
Word count: 35118
Read Count: 49398
Published: August 29 2009
Updated: January 24 2010

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Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Thanks for the update.  I thought that they were in a suite with separate bedrooms.  If they are then how she is sitting on her bed and talking to Scott who is at a desk in their room? Also, don't they have separate bathrooms too.  As for the wager that Mackenzie made with Carol that wasn't very nice of her.  I am not surprised that Scott and Mackenzie are attracted to each other.  But what will he say when he over hears the conversation that Mackenzie is having with Carol? I hope that he doesn't go out with them.  I like Scott and I don't like the way that they treat him.  I don't think that is very nice.  Granted he is not the most social person there is but my goodness he is still is a person.  And persecution of someone because you don't like them is unacceptable.

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Date: September 07 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Thanks for a great update.  Glad that Mackenzie is starting see Scott as a person rather than the butt of everyone's jokes.  Thanks

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Date: September 09 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Thanks for a great update.  It will be interesting to see how this all plays out.  Thanks

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Date: September 20 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

To bad Carol is determined to embarrass them all.  Thanks

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Date: September 22 2009
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Thanks for a great update.  I hope that they can become a couple without interference from their coworkers.

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Date: September 28 2009
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I don't like the fact that Mackenzie told Carol about her budding relationship with Scott.  The next thing that she knows that ho is going to try and get her some of Scott because she said that he had a big dick.  As for Mackenzie doesn't she know that you don't tell your friends about how good your man  is because then they will want him too.

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Date: October 04 2009
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

They seem to be hitting it off ok.  Glad that she invited him up to her apartment. Thanks

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Date: October 04 2009
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Thanks for a great update....these two are like teenagers.

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Date: October 09 2009
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Thanks for a great read and I winder why she is still friends with Carol too.  And for Carol to state that Sean is mad at her because she slept with his friend WTF?  Is she crazy or just a ho 24/7?  I hope that Mackenzie uses the blindfold wisely LOL.  Thanks

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Date: October 09 2009
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

An unlikely couple but they work.  Thanks for a great update.  Can't believe that she will be meeting his parents soon.  Thanks

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Date: October 12 2009
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

That dinner was more than awkward...his parents are nice but a little quirky just what I expected.  When she told Scott that she loved him and he almost crashed I couldn't help but laugh.  Thanks for a great read.

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Date: October 19 2009
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

That was cute...they really are becoming more like Carol all the time.  Thanks

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Date: October 25 2009
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Thanks for a great update.

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Date: December 14 2009
Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Thanks for a great read.  WOW to bathroom sex at a Gay Bar...go Scott.

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Date: January 25 2010
Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Go Scott, show Jared that you are not the punk ass that he thinks that you are.  I hope nothing happens to Scott at this party that they are planning to go to.  Thanks for a great update.

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Date: December 19 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Cast

Good cast. Thanks

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Date: July 20 2012
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Poor Mackenzie her male coworkers are rude. Thanks

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Date: July 20 2012
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I felt bad for Scott that he over heard them talking about him. Thanks

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Date: July 20 2012
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Damn Mackenzie kind of lost it on poor Scott. Thanks

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Date: July 20 2012
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Carol is a mess. She might end up being a bad influence on Mackenzie. Thanks

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Date: July 20 2012
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I can't wait to see what happens at the conference. Thanks

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Date: July 20 2012
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

That was nice if Carol to call Mackenzie's grandmother and Scott allowing her ti lean over him to see the NY skyline. Thanks

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Date: July 20 2012
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Mackenzie is wrong for betting whether or not Scott would attend the party.

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Date: July 20 2012
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Scott really let loose good for him. Thanks

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Date: July 20 2012
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Wow Scott and Mackenzie. I hope that she doesn't kiss and tell. Thanks

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Date: July 20 2012

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