Interesting & cute... Can't wait to see where you take this journey..
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading and your comment :)
I have thought about taking this a little further, but for now this story is finished. Glad that you enjoyed it!
Date: May 26 2013 07:43 pm
Oh how I love the darker side of the Chamber. I think this is one of those stories where it's best to leave the ending unanswered. Fuck, that was good. I hope you continue to write dark fiction.
Author's Response:
Oh my gosh, I am seriously cheezing right now!
Thanks so much for your comments, I am glad that you enjoyed reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it :)
Date: May 26 2013 11:05 am
Boo hiss, Xander!! It would serve you right if Susan told you to keep it moving!!! You have proving yourself to be a rotten friend.
Author's Response:
Ha ha!
It's funny, the hopless romantic in me want him to have another chance, but the part of me that's guarded makes me wonder if he will do the same thing when they get into college. Will he be that star player who pushes her aside once again or will he redeem himself. *shrugs* Thanks pmgayles!
Date: May 26 2013 05:52 am
Really? Tease
Author's Response:
Lol Yea. I know.
Reviewer: nikol Signed [Report This]Date: May 26 2013 04:26 am
He was just plain nasty and an asshole!
Author's Response:
You are so right. And dare I add, cheap! I really wanted to wring his neck...
Thanks for reading!
Date: May 26 2013 03:42 am
My goodness she had an out of body exoerience and killed her cheating husband. What a bastard he was. Does she get away with his murderer? Thanks
Author's Response:
XD
Thanks for the review. Yeah, I would say that was an out of body experience... it wasn't supposed to end like that! He should have signed those papers... But I really don't know if she gets away. A part of me wants her to, she could claim self defense but then there is excitement to be had if she's running from the law. I will think about it.
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: May 20 2013 02:41 pm
Apparently, nobody puts Nelly in a corner, either. This was good.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Glad that you enjoyed :)
Reviewer: Fantasque Signed [Report This]Date: May 20 2013 03:26 am
OMG, that was intense! I felt her pain, poor thing. How the heck can she escape this?! Waiting patiently for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks for you review.
I feel kinda bad saying this, but I don't know if this is going to be longer :(
I may revisit this one along with my other short stories, but for right now this is it.
Thanks again!
Date: May 19 2013 08:48 pm
Not saying she should have killed him. But I understand. Once she heard the word "Years" and he was going away with "her". I would have snapped too.
Author's Response:
Thanks. I honestly don't know how I'd react... I mean, rape alone makes me want to get a bat and fly someone's head. And at the same time, she loves this guy, he was supposed to be her protector and he just slowly turned into a rotten dude...
I just don't know. I'm gonna stop talking now lol
Thanks again for the input!
Date: May 19 2013 08:34 pm
Their mother is an evil, narcissist, money hungry shrew. She needs loose everything including her other daughters.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: May 05 2013 06:23 pm
The only thing she has left of her daughter is the flowers she hated so.
Author's Response:
Yep. So sad. *shake head* Thanks for reading :)
Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed [Report This]Date: May 05 2013 02:10 pm
Loved it - wish it was longer. In her own way she loves and misses her daughter - she expresses it through the hydrangeas she now wants in the house.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much <3
If only she had let go of her pride... then she would be sitting with her daughter and not just thinking about her.
Date: May 05 2013 06:52 am
Since she likes money and status so much, I hope what she got from her late husband will keep her old and cold heart warm. Beastly woman. There's driven, and then there's...well, THIS.
Author's Response:
Ha ha ha! I know! It blows my mind to know that there are actual people who are like Mrs. Davila. So concerned with how they are perceived that they forget that it is what's on the inside that counts.
Thanks for reading!
Date: May 05 2013 06:11 am
what a very shallow woman. Her daughters are lucky to escape her.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: May 05 2013 04:44 am