I love this story! Its one of my favorites here.
Reviewer: SexySilk Signed [Report This]Date: May 28 2018 02:38 pm
I enjoyed this read because although it started out sad it ended with a very very happy ending
Reviewer: kimyso Signed [Report This]Date: March 19 2017 11:57 am
Really good
Reviewer: altoider Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 14 2015 09:57 am
That was so good. I love it. And the pictures were perfect. I'm so glad I found this story. I was just searching through the archives, reading summaries and this story caught my eye. So good!!!
Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed [Report This]Date: October 12 2014 04:33 pm
Great chapter!!
Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed [Report This]Date: October 12 2014 07:23 am
That was so good! I love me a sexy Asian man!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: June 24 2014 03:58 pm
Sure wish you would finish this one. Re-read it and it is still good.
Author's Response:
I'm planning on it. I'm having a bit of a hard time with this one however. But fear not, Heather and Beck will be making their intense return soon. I hope.
Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 16 2014 06:19 am
Great Story!
Reviewer: MissTruth Signed [Report This]Date: February 01 2014 05:57 am
Love this story. Please continue! Do you need a beta?
Author's Response:
actually yes i do need a beta lol
Reviewer: WrittenC Signed [Report This]Date: December 08 2013 06:01 am
Cute story, I wish it was longer.
Reviewer: MONTEY7877 Signed [Report This]Date: November 28 2013 06:24 am
When u gonna add moree
Reviewer: Vonniiiboo Signed [Report This]Date: November 02 2013 09:54 am
Love this, love this, love this
Reviewer: Cora Jay Signed [Report This]Date: September 11 2013 01:18 pm
What a cute little story. Loved it! Hope to see these characters again.
Reviewer: adt2700 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 08 2013 02:39 am
I liked this read and I hope you do bring these characters back. I really would like to know where this nite took Nicky & Richie.
Reviewer: kimyso Signed [Report This]Date: August 26 2013 12:58 am
gimme moreee i love ittt
Reviewer: Vonniiiboo Signed [Report This]Date: August 22 2013 07:55 pm
ohhh loved it
Reviewer: Vonniiiboo Signed [Report This]Date: August 22 2013 07:02 pm
Mayte show them busters who is the boss bitch!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: August 19 2013 02:41 am
I Love it!! This was so cute and funny. Their daughter is so cute!! Can't wait for Monntae story! I don't think I spelled her name right!!
Reviewer: Treale Signed [Report This]Date: August 18 2013 11:37 pm
very good epilogue--she should sent Montana a picture of the ring on her finger :-).
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: August 18 2013 07:56 pm
Yay, Derek asked Mayte to marry him and she sad yes! Their little girl was beautiful and she had her daddy wrapped around her little finger. Fabulous!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: August 18 2013 07:01 pm
Aww! Very nice epilogue!
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: August 18 2013 04:12 pm
Awww.. A perfect ending with the fighting and cursing to show the love. LOL!! Love it :D
Please make a new story soon, great work!
Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed [Report This]Date: August 18 2013 03:47 pm
Great Ending! I love it :D
Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed [Report This]Date: August 17 2013 01:43 am
I thought this would be a typical forgiving the bully, but i really like how u handled how Mayte got to exact her revenge, I was a bullied kid and i wished i could have had sweet revenge on the bullies, but this is real life and it didn't happened, so i live vicariously thru Mayte, thankyou.
Author's Response:
Thank you honey for all the love. But I know exactly how you feel,I was bullied as well, it sucks and kids can be mean as hell sometimes, so I had to share Mayte's story, which may or may not been based off of an experience I had with a high school bully myself. Hehe. But again thanks for reading and I'm glad you liked it.
Reviewer: dounome Signed [Report This]Date: August 16 2013 11:03 pm
Awww okay and yayyyyyyyyyyyyy!!! And no thank you for writing such an awesome story!!!!
Reviewer: Treale Signed [Report This]Date: August 16 2013 06:11 pm