Totally awesome. A favorite.Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 03 2015 06:35 am
Good story!Reviewer: Russian Sunflower Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 09 2014 05:33 pm
WOW! Sabrina was absolutely LETHAL! Audrey will probably resign her job and seek work elsewhere now...away from Jack and Sabrina. And her father, Heller, will just have to deal with and accept the loss of a potential son-in-law. Man,..Sabrina had Guts! VERY NICE UPDATE!
NyeeshaReviewer: Nyeesha Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09 2014 09:37 am
Damn!!! Cold blooded, cold as ice (Rick James voice), LOL!! Wow, I almost feel bad for her but that's what happens when you are a rebound, jump off. SMH!
Well done, please post soon. I hope Sabrina and Jack are next up :DReviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09 2014 06:44 am
The more I read about Sabrina the more annoyed she makes me. She has abandonment issues becuase Celeste allowed Victoe to move her out of her child's life. Sabrina will alone by choice vecause she won't allow a man to man in their relationship. She will give up on love because she's scared. Dumb!!Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09 2014 04:51 am
Is it wromv fo want Jack to leave that shrew of a woman Audrey at the altar? Audrey makes my teefh itch and my left eye twitch! Jack Audrey will not make you happy, with her you will only exist. Don't marry that woman, she is intimidated by a real woman who is confident in her womanhood and her capabilities. Sabrina makes her doubt herself, whick in my mind is correct as she is not as accomplished as Sabrina. Can you tell that I don't like Audrey?Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06 2014 09:58 pm
This is in response to MrsWifeyS' question: Is there going to be a Keesha and Jax story?
(For some reason my initial reply didn't post)
In this universe? No. I just thought that would be a nice way/place to end Jax's "journey" in this particular arc. Plus, I've always been intrigued by the possibility of such a pairing.
Check back in a few days; I'll have something posted that I do believe you'll find of interest... ;-) Thanks for reading.Reviewer: DarkDiva Signed [Report This]
Date: May 05 2014 07:55 pm
Lol teasingly hotReviewer: Kvgurl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 30 2014 04:25 pm
Interesting, Morgan is Jax's son with Dara and not Sonny's. Is Michael in your version? Liked the background information provided. I must admit that I am loving your mixing of these two shows. Keep them coming!!
Morgan is still Carly's son with Sonny (I think that's how it goes on GH); Jack has custody of Josslyn, his child with Carly, but wants sole custody of Morgan as well. Michael still exists he just isn't explored in this universe. Thanks for reading.Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: October 29 2013 03:31 am
I love it, I can't wait for the next series. I really love the way you connected every chapter, I just wish there was more lovin , the baby story and longer chapters. Please post soon, great job with this story :DReviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 27 2013 10:25 am
This is one shot, how painful. In the next story Jack and Sabrina got hitched, but how did that happen? Inquiring minds want know.
I got ahead of myself when posting last nite; the plan was to post all of NJC but the hour was late and sleep was rapidly overtaking me, lol. This is actually an "alternate universe" piece from the series. By the time you finish NJC, this piece will actually make more sense. Thanks for reading.Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: October 26 2013 07:40 pm
I love the song playing in the background however at the end you shoukd have had Nelly's song playing. " It's getting hot in here". Are you going to explain how Bri is a Cassadine?
I'm a bit of a Sam Cooke fan, I must admit. As for Sabrina's being a Cassadine, all will be explained in the forthcoming installments. Thanks for reading.Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: October 26 2013 07:32 pm