She pointed Pocj v with spores and don't feel bad for her
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: November 08 2021 12:31 pm
Stay away from Spock ho's.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: November 07 2021 06:10 pm
Awesome sauce!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: November 07 2021 05:59 pm
I enjoyed this story. I am a hopeless romantic that loves a happy ending. Nice
Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed [Report This]Date: June 22 2021 07:18 pm
Hilarious!!! Pavel will keep his promise after this
Reviewer: Pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 21 2021 10:58 am
Nice update
Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed [Report This]Date: May 15 2021 10:35 am
Thank you for the update. It does explain her behaviour. It truly is unsettling to realise that you were holding on to a past destructive relationship whilst in another, as well as realising one was being held to impossible standards because of a past destructive relationship. I hope that she and Sulu can forward in their relationship.
P.S. I don't think Pavel really meant any harm. I think he just hasn't accepted the reality that Sulu has matured and isn't the same man he was when they had their adventures.
Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 14 2021 02:28 pm
Progress!!!! Communication leads to progress. Char, NY had already told you about yourself and Karu has too so please keep it together.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: May 14 2021 10:23 am
Those hoes was a whole fruit basket wasn't they🤣🤣 Apple, Cherry and Orange got the juice beat out of them🤣🤣 and Charlene is not mad she's hurt...there's a difference. She should let Karu sweat it out a little longer 🤣🤣 Nice update
Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed [Report This]Date: May 03 2021 08:40 pm
The beat down was awesome, Char talk to Karu please
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: May 03 2021 11:03 am
Thank you for the update. I personally don't see why there needed to be a fight in the first place. Couldn't Charlene just pull Sulu away from the party and ask for an explanation, did it need to turn into an all out brawl? Spock's disappointment in Nyota is understandable and justifiable. Their behaviour wasn't just tasteless and uncalled for, but it drew unnecessary attention to their superiors and cost them all.
Sulu needs new mates and Uhara needs to understand helping a friend does not mean you have to roll around in the trash with them.
Can't wait for the next update. Have a wonderful week.
Author's Response:
LOL Thank you for your review, I have sort of a cavewoman mentality that a woman should fight over her man. It demonstrate seriousness of the relationship and set boundaries. "Baby don't go there." type mode. Plus it is made up with humor and part reality. I wanted to show comradie with shipmates 'I got your back scenerio.' I listed episodes where that happened in the show. Take a look! Did you read Repercussions? I wanted Uhura as a strong type woman that is not a push over and she's not. She's smart and capable of handling herself "mirror, mirror" watch that episode. Well thanks again and wait until the next chapter it explains alot.
Uhura the 9th : 0 )
Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 02 2021 07:39 pm
Wipe the floor with them hooked Char!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: April 27 2021 01:37 am
The ending though 🤣🤣🤣 Was Charlene kicking Karu butt or Cherry and Apple Blossoms butt!!🤣🤣🤣 Nice update
Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed [Report This]Date: April 26 2021 11:21 am
Charlene, Nyota, Eve and Tina should swap places with the trollops and give the guys a show their eyes won't believe 😂😂😂 Nice update
Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed [Report This]Date: April 13 2021 01:10 pm
It's about to be on and popping.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: April 13 2021 12:20 am
Thank you for the update.
Somebody's going to get it, lol. I'm liking Sulu and Char, fingers crossed that everything goes as planned.
You're a great writer, keep it coming.
Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 12 2021 04:04 am
Shit is about to hit the fan.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: April 08 2021 12:28 am
I hope Spock get knowledge of the freaky party too😂😂 Nice update
Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed [Report This]Date: April 07 2021 09:02 pm
Nice update
Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed [Report This]Date: February 16 2021 06:52 pm
Janice woman'd up and apologize.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: February 12 2021 03:35 am
Nice update
Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed [Report This]Date: December 02 2020 01:29 pm
Nice read. Thnx.
Reviewer: magensby Signed [Report This]Date: September 04 2020 02:08 am
I enjoyed them. Looking forward to more of your work.
Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed [Report This]Date: August 01 2020 08:55 pm
You are talented and zi ,ove where you have taken thiese characters.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: July 26 2020 11:16 am