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Title: FINALE

The wedding, the honeymoon, the babies???

 Reviewer: epilogue please Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 16 2014 06:20 pm
Title: FINALE

Good Story, Heather was really cray cray.  I really would have loved to see Ben's reaction to his ideal woman for his brother getting arrested for trying to kill someone.  They should have knocked him (Ben) out again.  Loved Carey!

 Reviewer: d3stin2l0v3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 23 2014 11:19 pm
Title: Lunch with the McKenzies

i love them they are so cute i like the relationship building cant wait to read the rest

 Reviewer: septembernights01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 24 2012 08:04 am
Title: FINALE

love this story.. it was great.. cant wait to read Carey story

 Reviewer: fanfictionfantasy Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 11 2012 01:56 am
Title: FINALE

Loved it...you are an awesome writer



Author's Response:

Thank you. I appreciate the patience everyone gave me to finish this.

 Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 06 2012 03:27 pm
Title: FINALE

Thanks for answering my challenge and finishing this story it was a wonderful ending!!!! If this was not in response to my challenge in the shout out box, Thanks anyway!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for calling me out. I always intended to finish it.

 Reviewer: BossLady Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 04 2012 12:39 am
Title: FINALE

I read the enire 25 chapters in one evening!(today).  And I am sorry it had to end!!!



Author's Response:

I hope you enjoyed it. Did you read the other two before it?

 Reviewer: Sandra Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 03 2012 06:29 am
Title: FINALE

Absolutely loved this story!!! Thanks for sharing.

Author's Response:

thank you for reading

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 03 2012 04:41 am
Title: The Introductions

I am going to be honest.  This story ended with breakneck speed.  I would have liked for you to have taken your time instead of rushing through an ending.  That way you could have showed us what happened instead of just telling the readers that Dani and Chad ended up happily ever after.  That being said, thank you for this story.  It was one of my favorites.  



Author's Response:

Oh, I'm sorry you felt that way. Thank you for reading though. I appreciate your honesty and will definitely remember that with my next one. Again thank you.

 Reviewer: Lucky Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 03 2012 03:54 am
Title: The Introductions

Thank you for such an amazing ending to a wonderful story.  I was wondering if you were to finish it and I am so glad that you did.  Chad and Dani got there happy ending and that evil vile heifer Heather went to the hoosgau.  I hope that she has plenty of cigs because Bertha is gonna like her!!  LOL!! 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  Its been so hard to finish due to work and school. Thanks so much for being a loyal reader...

 

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 03 2012 03:03 am
Title: FINALE

i havnt checked the stories here in a while. But lucky for me this was one i read a few chapters on when it just started and what an amazing story. loved every chapter and chad and  carry was awesomeness itself. you are an amazing writer!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much....

 

 Reviewer: Leila7 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 03 2012 02:06 am
Title: FINALE

I loved it, can't wait to read about Carey. She will have to be one hell of a lady for Carey to fall in love.

Author's Response:

Thanks.  Oh she's gonna have to be special for sure...

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 02 2012 11:24 pm
Title: FINALE

I just reread this entire story the other day, glad to read the finished product. Thanks for writing and sharing this, I truly enjoyed reading it. Looking forward to Carey's story, I'm sure it'll be just as pleasureable as the rest in the series :D



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for sticking around and reading it. I will try not to disappoint.

 Reviewer: got2luvmel Signed [Report This]
Date: April 02 2012 08:27 pm
Title: FINALE

Yes!  Enjoyed the happy ending.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading

 Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 02 2012 07:57 pm
Title: FINALE

Glad they getting married and that sicko is going to jail. I enjoy the story from the first chapter to last thank you for writing your story. Thank for the update.



Author's Response:

thanks for reading

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 02 2012 07:49 pm
Title: FINALE

Glad that Chad and Dani had their happy ever after and that crazy Heather is in jail. Hope you write a story about Carey next.



Author's Response:

That is the plan. Thank you for reading.

 Reviewer: jai03 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 02 2012 07:43 pm
Title: FINALE

Thnank yu. Beautiful wedding proposal. Bring on Carey.



Author's Response:

He's up to bat... I'm feeling inspired again which means constant updates... LOL

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 02 2012 05:24 pm
Title: Moving On...

Thanks so much for updating this story. It's been several months since I looked for an update. Imagine my surprise when I discovered the update(s)! Please tell me that you have an epilogue planned? Everytime I watch "White Collar" and see Matt Bomer, I think of Dani and wonder if she accepted his proposal, how is she doing running the company, is Heather still making threats, how are Chad's brothers, what is his mother's reaction to Heather's treachery, etc. I could go on and one with the questions. I like the relationship that Dani and Chad developed. You can't go wrong with falling in love with your friend. What's next? I hope that Carey remains a constant in their life. Thanks again!

Author's Response:

Did you get the epilogue?

 Reviewer: Traci Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 05 2012 09:42 pm
Title: Moving On...

I can't wait till this is updated and complete, I love it and the series as a whole. Thanks for writing and sharing.

 Reviewer: Mel Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 19 2011 06:48 pm
Title: Moving On...

What! NO MORE CHAPTERS? 



Author's Response:

One more to go...

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Date: December 05 2011 08:02 am
Title: The Clause Can't Be Ignored

Whoooa!

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Date: December 05 2011 07:00 am
Title: Meet My Brothers

I can't stop reading this story!!!!

 Reviewer: flgurleygrl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 05 2011 05:07 am
Title: Uh-Oh...

Wow! Great chapter!

 Reviewer: flgurleygrl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 05 2011 04:47 am
Title: Lunch with the big dog

Great chapter. I'm smiling with Mr. K!

 Reviewer: flgurleygrl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 05 2011 04:16 am
Title: Moving On...

Hi glad to have you and the story back.  It was worth the wait and I love the updates.

 Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 03 2011 01:57 am


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