Title: Intro

please update soon!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 17 2013 07:04 pm

Title: Chapter 13

Of course, DeLeon...its always been DeLeon for me. Dax is too young, too fresh-faced and eager to please. Though I loved it when he was drunk the night he saved Kendra. That was too funny.

Reviewer: amlaamar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 08 2013 02:05 pm

Title: Chapter 10

I personally prefer to do without the pictures...I like my imagination just fine....there's always a fifty/fifty chance of the pictures ruining the the mental image I have in mind for how the characters look like...so if you dont like posting them, fine by me...I agree with you wholeheartedly. And Im loving your story...so loving your story.

Reviewer: amlaamar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 08 2013 07:28 am

Title: Chapter 2

lol! Men after my own heart. Especially Pa...Hehehe....

Reviewer: amlaamar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 08 2013 04:38 am

Title: Intro

I love her already.

Looking forward to reading the rest.

Reviewer: amlaamar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 08 2013 03:58 am

Title: Chapter 42

i need some closure...lol.

Reviewer: dreamama Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 31 2012 07:01 pm

Title: Intro

please update soon!

Reviewer: Skip2641 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 01 2012 10:40 pm

Title: Intro

Please please please in my James brown voice could you post us a little something to tide us over

Reviewer: Nyah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 27 2012 11:32 pm

Title: Intro

PLEASE come back. This story puts you on another level compared to other stories on this website. I keep coming back to hopefully see this story finished as I am a fan of your writing. You have direction with not just your main characters but the supporting characters as well. Thank you!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 06 2012 07:40 am

Title: Chapter 42

I'll just sit here and smile

 

Reviewer: TheSouthernScribe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 28 2012 03:22 pm

Title: Chapter 42

I just want to say 2 things. This is a great freaking story and I can't wait for the next update!!!

Reviewer: SoccergirlBianca Signed [Report This]
Date: July 21 2012 08:29 am

Title: Chapter 42

Whoa! This story is so epic and addictive, can't wait for the continuation.

Reviewer: Mlisa Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 17 2012 09:03 am

Title: Chapter 27

I don't even think I can begin to describe how much I am LOVING this story, you have me utterly captivated. I love the back and forth banter in this family, you have me in stitches cracking up every other line, DeLeon's family keeps it 100% with eachother and I love the way they've fallen for eachother, you sure built up the tension to a fever pitch for them to finally consummate lol but I'm just loving seeing them fall for eachother. I almost feel like her real life family and friends are intruders lol. This is an absolutely wonderful story and I am thoroughly enthusiastically enjoying it. Thank you!

Reviewer: Mlisa Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 17 2012 06:03 am

Title: Chapter 42

can't wait for the next installment!

Reviewer: alexp696 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 13 2012 06:48 am

Title: Chapter 42

Great chapter

Reviewer: nightseer Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 12 2012 09:49 pm

Title: Chapter 42

I'm typing, smiling and crying! This was excellent - cant wait for the continuation. You are definitely the bomb.com

Reviewer: katie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 12 2012 03:34 am

Title: Chapter 42

I love these two together, but Kendra lose the attitude with DeLeon.  You left remember!!!  Yay, they worked it out but damn it was painful to read.  Excellent!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 11 2012 09:32 pm

Title: Chapter 42

They're goinna make a baby on the Redwood table. Miracles do happen!

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 11 2012 03:54 pm

Title: Intro

Damn, I just realized that I said exceptable instead of acceptable. See that? Too early in the morning to be reviewing work--even exceptionable work such as Penny.

Reviewer: islandlass Signed [Report This]
Date: July 11 2012 01:24 pm

Title: Chapter 42

I.T., I.T., I.T., I can't sufficiently tell you how much I love this story. I was SCREAMING at DeLeon to open his damn mouth and put that child outta her misery.

I didn't realize I wasn't breathing until he said ""I missed you!"

I was like, about damn time. Can't wait for the continuation. It's a good thing that the table is made outta redwood. I hope all the furniture in his new home is made out of it. Something tells me it'll need to be.

And yeah, the doctor said makes it hard to get pregnant, not that she couldn't. And if anyone can get her pregnant, it's DeLeon.

Chica, you are a master at the written word. Thanks for sharing your considerable gifts with us.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 11 2012 09:52 am

Title: Chapter 42

Ah, this is how I love to wake up: with an email alert telling me that there's an update from I.T.

You know I loves me some DeLeon but that torture he just put her through was over the top and (at first) didn't make any sense. But thankfully, he explained:

"This whole time I was thinkin' you was here for Pa an' that's it-" he said, breathless, his lips against hers.

Well played, I.T. I almost lost love for DeLeon. I didn't want to keep caring if he was just going to be a sadist asshole for the rest of their relationship. But his response was exceptable. However, *now* that he has heard and made declarations of love, I hope he's ready to fully embrace it and *show* it so that there is never be another doubt in Kendra's head again. It's time for her bounty. She's really gone through too much and done so much for the Halperns.

Reviewer: islandlass Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 11 2012 07:24 am

Title: Chapter 41

YAY!!! Thanks for an update!! I will kill DeLeon if he lets her walk leaves again...I love love love this story!!!

Patiently (not really, lol) waiting an update!!

LOVE YOU GIRL!

Reviewer: Leogina Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 10 2012 08:23 pm

Title: Chapter 41

Yessssss:)

Reviewer: xiaomei21 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 10 2012 06:35 am

Title: Chapter 41

Excellent

Reviewer: urtrippin2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 10 2012 06:17 am

Title: Chapter 41

Oh loved that you updated this story! I missed reading it, yes please post another chapter soon.

Reviewer: Pris Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 09 2012 08:42 pm



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