Charles is letting jealousy steer down the wrong path. I don't think that Jau understands the seriousness of his nwck injury. Tanya is punking out, she is letting her fear overwhelm herlove for Jay. This is some sugady!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: November 05 2014 05:29 pm
I can assist you if you like.
Author's Response:
I think about it. Thanks.
Reviewer: d3stin2lov3 Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 10 2014 10:05 am
The cliffhanger...I hope you come back to complete this story. I would like to see what happens and I especially want to see what happens to Charles and whoever it was that he was talking too.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. The person who was helping me edit my chapters got super busy and been looking for someone to help me out. I haven't found that person yet and when I do I will make sure to finished the story.
Reviewer: d3stin2l0v3 Signed [Report This]Date: April 05 2014 09:06 pm
have u forgotten us :(
Author's Response:
No I haven't. My muse has died little on the story. I'm trying my best to get it back. When that happens I make sure to update.
Reviewer: mel Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 07 2013 09:30 pm
Aw. This was getting interesting. You should definately finish. I wanna know what his brother is up to. MORE TRINA AND TONY FTW!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review I'm trying my best to finish the story and hopeful i can have new chapter posted real soon
Reviewer: TheDoll Signed [Report This]Date: July 05 2013 09:57 pm
At least give us a hint..cant wait to see how this story will develop
Author's Response:
I'm working on the next chapter to make sure it perfect. I hope to update soon
Reviewer: lilly Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 17 2013 03:13 am
waiting "patiently" for the update lolol
Author's Response:
I will try my best to update a.s.a.p but this thing call life keeps getting in the way lol. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: lilly Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 30 2013 10:31 pm
Holy moley that was good!!! Hurry back with more ...
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review.
Reviewer: ashbyfan Signed [Report This]Date: February 18 2013 05:40 am
First off, I'm soooooo thrilled that you decided to continue the story. Woot!
Secondly, I'm even more thrilled that Jay is not paralyzed. He's bone-headed for sure, especially about even THINKING about getting back in the ring, but not paralyzed.
Tanya did what she had to do. It was painful, but necessary. Especially since I suspect she's pregnant and thus don't need to see her baby-daddy get hurt again. I mean, she is pregnant, right? If not, what's with all the throwing up? Hmmmm? ROFL!
Thanks for the GREAT chapter!
Author's Response:
Girl you and babies lol. Yes Jay is bone headed big time. He thinks he super man and nothing can touch him. Hopeful he listen to Tanya words. Thank you for the review.
Reviewer: Suprina Frazier Signed [Report This]Date: January 16 2013 04:54 am
What girl, this is a good story!! Love it!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 02 2013 09:05 pm
I think they bothed are stressed but they will work it out. I love this story and glad you are back. Please update soon.
Author's Response:
I hope they able to work out too. Who knows thank you for the review.
Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]Date: January 01 2013 07:59 pm
I really hope that Jay is okay, update please!!!
Author's Response:
I would try to update soon and thanks for the review.
Reviewer: keikei2 Signed [Report This]Date: November 12 2012 01:15 am
I'm glad everything went great on Tony's date, but...OMG, I hope he didn't kill or paralyze Jay!
Great post!
Author's Response:
Yes this time tony didnt' harm or try to kill anyone on their date lol. You have to wait to see if Jay alive on paralyze. Thank for the review.
Reviewer: Suprina Frazier Signed [Report This]Date: May 28 2012 02:48 am
"...the last time we went out my life flashed before my eyes. Twice."
I love that line and she's so right. ROFL!
Thx for the update!
Author's Response:
Lol yeah I think why she proably updated her will before she went out on another date with him lol. Thank for the review.
Reviewer: Suprina Frazier Signed [Report This]Date: May 28 2012 02:42 am
Great post! Tanya was sooooo wrong for telling the fib about Trina. Got Tony all upset and bothered over nothing. lol. Even so, it might help him step his game up.
Thanks!
Author's Response:
Yeah Tony boy need to step up his game other wise he lose her. thank for the review means alot that someone reading this story.
Reviewer: Suprina Frazier Signed [Report This]Date: May 28 2012 02:36 am
Tony won!! I don't know how I feel about that but sense those men are both fine we are all winners!! Yummy!!
Author's Response:
Yes Tony won new champ and yes both men are very sexy. thank for the review
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: April 01 2012 05:37 pm
hey :) Just thought I'd leave a review after reading this chapter. All and all it's good except for some minor sentence structure errors, but other than that, I love these characters. They are so engaging.
Author's Response:
Ok thanks for the review and will look over the chapter agian.
Reviewer: JLeshay Signed [Report This]Date: January 22 2012 01:48 am
That Charles is trouble with a capital T. I don't like him at all. Hating on his brother for nothing. smh
Thanks for the update...and for keeping it good!
Author's Response:
Yes Charles is a big jerk and trouble for sure. It is a shame when family can't support family. Thank for the review.
Reviewer: Suprina Frazier Signed [Report This]Date: November 19 2011 05:36 am
So sorry that Tony and Trina haven't quite worked out the way we thought...yet. Perhaps there's still hope for them? Pretty please....lol!
Thanks for the update!
Author's Response:
Who knows if there hope for those two lol. Thank you for the review
Reviewer: Suprina Frazier Signed [Report This]Date: November 19 2011 05:16 am
reallllyyy!!! how can you wait so long for an update & leave us on such a short clift hanger?!?!?! :( pleasee hurry back i really love this story
Author's Response:
I know I left you with clift hanger but I will try my best to update soon glad you love the story thank for the update.
Reviewer: ashbyfan Signed [Report This]Date: October 18 2011 08:13 am
That was sweet of Jay to want to make her smile always. As for the love scene, it was HAWTT!!! Definitely a 9 1/2 on a scale of 1 - 10.
Thanks for the read!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review yeah Jay loves Tanya alot.
Reviewer: Suprina Frazier Signed [Report This]Date: October 16 2011 07:13 am
So what is up with this brother??? Jealousy is a terrible thing....
Author's Response:
Yeah it seems Jay's brother is a huge jerk and I'm being nice about it lol. thank you for the review.
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: October 14 2011 03:40 am
Oh this is getting good...
Author's Response:
glad that you like it. Thank you for the review
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: October 14 2011 03:39 am
This was hot!! Well worth the wait!
Author's Response:
Thank you glad you thought it was hot and enjoy it. Thank you for review
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: October 11 2011 02:01 pm
LOL at Mom and Dad! I think Jay won them over though
Author's Response:
Yeah her folks are a trip lol but Dad has to look out for his baby girl make sure Jay treating her right. thank you for the review
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: October 11 2011 01:44 pm