This doctor situation is just getting more and more ridiculous! Like, seriously, WHAT is the point???? URGH !
welp, prepare to be more disappointed. i understand what you're saying, but this is my project and i'm looking to have a little fun with it. i'm sorry it doesn't fulfill your desires or some contemporary literary requirements or rules, but, again, i'm the author, this is my project, this is what i'm writing FOR FREE ON A FREE WEBSITE. i find nothing wrong with Moliere being desired by multiple men at the same time because, hey, it happens. and frankly, that's how i want it to happen in this version of this story. but thanks for the feedback!Reviewer: RedHobo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03 2016 02:18 pm
I get Cooper being in love with Molière, even though I found it a bit annoying...At leats, I know and care about Cooper. But adding that doctor too feeling insta-attraction" is really too much. I don't see the point except that it adds drama to an already drama filled situation. I detracts from the main plots and characters we actualy care about (aunt Mae and Cooper). It's a bit disappointing.Reviewer: RedHobo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03 2016 02:08 pm
Yay! You're back! Great!
I am very curious about how their talk will go.... As far as I can see Moliere is not at fault/ or to blame for Dr. Richards' interest. She doesn't strike me as flirty, on the one hand.
On the other hand, she has three of the men in the story jonesing for her. So, what is it about her that makes a Mark Richards think he can walk in and snatch her up?Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed [Report This]
Date: May 01 2016 02:39 pm
very good story. more pleaseReviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 19 2014 01:21 am
I just read the story from chapter 1 to 17! It is a beautifull relationship that's evolving between Simon and Molière! Aunt Mae is so drama, I laugh and cried when ever she appears! Her for Molière is so palpable and at the same time, she tries to hide it from her! Cooper is a good person who needs to find his own Molière, his friendship with Simon is to important (lifelong friendships are not easy to find). Hopefully, is infatuation with Molière will end soon. What I want to know is why Dr. Richard is part of this story? What will he do that would make Molière to completely fall in love instead of Simon and their baby?
Please, update!Reviewer: Katt Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 21 2014 05:30 am
I feel bad for Coop but Moliere has always loved Simon and Simon has always loved her. Moliere was just being herself hut Coop overstepped his bounds, Simon is going to beat him! Why won't Amber just go away? Her presence isn't wanted, she's like a boil on Simon's ass! I have missed thos story!!Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: February 15 2014 12:42 pm
Well, that is sad...loving your best friends woman.Reviewer: Moni Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 14 2014 07:20 pm
It's funny how this story is turning out. Obviously, it a tale of love for Simon and Mo, hopefully, with the expectant HEA. But the complexity of Cooper does pull at one's attention. His flaws (lord...his damn FLAWS!!!!) are infuriating but quite realistic. Does it draw one away enough from Simon and Mo? That's for each reader to answer.
I feel for the guy, I really do. He needs help. He needs to find himself and maybe a woman could be an extension of that. I think a separate search for himself and love story would be hard to do but ultimately, it would make a very rich character study and possibly, a more addictive tale to consume? Hm?Reviewer: islandlass Signed [Report This]
Date: February 14 2014 07:00 pm
Why are you doing this, lol! I HATE when their are two guys, (not counting the Dr, but I should) who could potentially be good for Moliere. I love Simon, but I also like Cooper alot. He has to find someone. I would hate to be him. To love someone who loves you only as a friend and has made it known there will never be anything else. I could not stay there. I would respect Moli and Simon. I would still want to be Simon's friend, but I could not stay there knowing how I felt about Moli, nothing against her, it's just too much. That has to be torture for Cooper. Anyway, I loved the update, but you have way too many good dudes in one story with only ONE woman who his not available, lol.Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 14 2014 06:40 pm
Wow... In it soo weird how characters take on a larger than life persona in stories. Honestly I really do hope Mollie and Simon make it down the aisle... But Cooper is causing this unnecessary drama.
Thank you for the long awaited updates.
Date: February 14 2014 06:02 pm