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Title: Man Eater

UH Oh....I think I really like Dr. Mark.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: November 24 2011 08:38 pm

Title: Man Eater

I. T. 

I'm happy to see you back! this is a wonderful story and I look forward to many more from you.

* cyberhug*



Author's Response:

aw! thanks, Caligirl!

Reviewer: Caligirl65 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 24 2011 08:25 pm

Title: Keep Holding On

That was an intense chapter. Poor Aunt Mae. Cooper finally tells the truth. I know more shocks are to come. Great chapter!

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 24 2011 07:17 pm

Title: Keep Holding On

Jaysus... what a story!

Reviewer: caramia_darling Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 24 2011 03:56 pm

Title: Keep Holding On

I know that I shouldn't be surprised that Cooper is in love with Moliere but I am.  To bad he allowed Amber to use him.  Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 24 2011 10:38 am

Title: And It All Falls Down

Cooper has 9 lives.  Thank goodness he made it to Aunt Mae's and took her to the hospital.  Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 24 2011 10:36 am

Title: Keep Holding On

Not sure it was your intent to make Cooper a sympathetic character, but that's what he is for me. I really hope he and Simon can reconcile. He really needs Simon.



Author's Response:

it most certainly was my intent. no person is black and white, so i'm glad i was able to convey that with Cooper. he's a complicated and deeply hurt man. thank you so much for seeing just a little bit more of him.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 24 2011 06:28 am

Title: Keep Holding On

Cooper's confession was freaking awesome writing, right down to the gesture...even his voice inflection! Fantastic scene! And so heartbreaking for both of them.  My heart breaks for Cooper...even though he did some dumb things...you can't help who you fall in love with - ya just can't!  What he did was wrong, no doubt, but how can he fix this?   Please, please, puhleeze tell me Amber doesn't own shares in Simon's prototype?  It doesn't sound like she does...her name isn't on anything...just Cooper's, right? *crossing fingers hoping it's not true*  You're tricky with that plot twist Miss Thang...you're still a little vague on the minute details of his deception, Simon didn't give him a chance to complete his revelations before he joked his arse! Which was well-deserved I might add.  Cooper never hated his best friend...actually, he loves him dearly...he was just full of self hate. 

The first time Cooper was at their place to pick up Simon for the now defunct wedding luncheon, i KNEW something was up with his reaction to Molli!! DAMN, that's all kinds of jacked up...and SO damn good!

Now we have to find out what's wrong with Mae, and then start healing what's broken between the two brothers.

Fantastic update lady!  You rock!



Author's Response:

i love you. that is all.

oh, and thank you. lol

Reviewer: JV4ME Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 24 2011 03:21 am

Title: Keep Holding On

OH. MY. DAMN!  I gotta read this shit (affectionately referenced - you know this!) again...make sure I'm getting the full understanding b/c this is all kinds of effed up!  I can't BELIEVE Cooper!!!!

 brb...lol!

Reviewer: JV4ME Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 24 2011 02:28 am

Title: Keep Holding On

Poor Cooper...I want to know what else he had to say...

Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 23 2011 05:51 pm

Title: Keep Holding On

I did not see that coming... Cooper in love with Molly.. NO WAY. I was sure he was in love with Amber. PLEASE PLEASE update soon!

Reviewer: mustang_writer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 23 2011 05:12 pm

Title: Keep Holding On

wow wow wow ..that was intense!! Why did Cooper decide to come clean now...is it because of Amber's threats?? Whatever the reason..it is going to be hard for him to be friends with Simon again...if that is possiblee...maybe after all is said and done..all skeletons out the closet , they may be able to regain some of the friendship they had before...I don't know...I am happy Cooper told Simon the truth but I am afraid it may have done permanent damage tp their friendship.

I wanted to reach out and hug Moliere....this is going to be hard for her and aunt mae!

Excellent writing as usual sweetie..intense and emotional....you always leave us wanting more!!

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 23 2011 04:25 pm

Title: Keep Holding On

Good stuff!!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 23 2011 12:48 pm

Title: Keep Holding On

I hope they can make it over this hurdle, but the truth is finally out. What is Amber going to do...her scheme is busted?

Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed [Report This]
Date: November 23 2011 11:40 am

Title: Keep Holding On

WOW!! Did not see that coming Amazing update... keep em rolling :-)

Reviewer: Kaci Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 23 2011 11:38 am

Title: Keep Holding On

aww poor coop. i dont like these coop and simon being upset with each other. fix it! lol

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 23 2011 06:18 am

Title: Keep Holding On

Wow, that is a long time to carry that guilt around as well as that jealousy.  Amber is a piece of work and Cooper allowed that ho to use him to get her hooks into Simon.  I am so glad that Simon and Molliere finally admitted their feelings for one another.  I so love this story.  How much longer will have Mae around to make us laugh?  Awesome!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 23 2011 06:08 am

Title: Keep Holding On

WooooooW!! Cooper is a TERRIBLE friend!!! Hope things look up soon for Simon and Moliere!

Reviewer: anne Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 23 2011 06:07 am

Title: And It All Falls Down

YAYYYY!  You're back!  Thank you for re-posting this story, waiting for you to post others and yes...i'm being greedy.  You've been gone too long and I'm fiending for my updates!

Still wondering what the world Cooper did!  Loved his backstory...it explains a lot about him, and his friendship with Simon.  Mae can't leave now...Molli needs her more than ever plus she can't miss the birth of her first grandchild!

So...when's the next installment...soon I hope!  hehehe

Reviewer: JV4ME Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 23 2011 05:45 am

Title: And It All Falls Down

Poor Coop...my heart ache for him. I hope he gets through this.

Aunt Mae is not going to make it; is she? I am so glad Coop found her.

Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 22 2011 11:33 am

Title: Teenage Love Affair

Loved it thanks for the update. Why did Coop make a pack with that she-devil? I hope he can get out of it.

Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 22 2011 11:15 am

Title: And It All Falls Down

Oh, No! Aunt Mae!! She reminds me of Madea lol loving the story! I'm a first time reader, you are doing fabulous!!

Reviewer: Megan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 22 2011 10:29 am

Title: And It All Falls Down

Thank reposting this... PLEASE update soon

Reviewer: mustang_writer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 22 2011 05:42 am

Title: And It All Falls Down

dang, how long was mae sitting there alone?! if i was Mo, i'd be to scared after this,to leave Mae home alone anymore.  I am also curious as to Cooper's secret. i'm thinking it involves a woman. update soon!

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 22 2011 02:45 am

Title: And It All Falls Down

Please I need more!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: November 22 2011 02:04 am



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