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Title: Maybe Not

In my best cockney accent, (clearing my throat) 'thank you, gov'nah! Bless you!'

 Reviewer: islandlass Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26 2011 07:36 am
Title: Maybe Not

This whole story is great, love people are real and Molli is your avery black women,,,thank you

 

update soon

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]
Date: May 26 2011 07:14 am
Title: Maybe Not

so glad you're back.  missed this one.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 26 2011 06:36 am
Title: Maybe Not

I need more!!!

But looove the update IT!!

 Reviewer: mustang_writer Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 26 2011 06:21 am
Title: Maybe Not

hey i.t.!!!!!! sooo glad youre back!!!! im sooo glad the ice has been broken so to speak. still not sure whats up with coop. did i miss something? gonna go back and reread. more please!!

 Reviewer: brownskingurl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 26 2011 06:06 am
Title: In Dreams

we want more we wantmore we want more as you can see we are chantting here please preaty please with cherry on top will you be updating this story soon

 Reviewer: leahcar Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 21 2011 02:03 am
Title: In Dreams

This is awesome ...I love Aunt Mae-she's a hoot. I can't wait to find out what happens next. 

 

 Reviewer: mizgardenia Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19 2011 06:37 am
Title: The Cast

Hey have started reading a few chapters into this and am loving it so far. The premise of it is so interesting, especially the dreams, especially as I am someone who has really vivid dreams as well...none like molli's though lol.

I love the characters, I love the dialogue, Aunty Mae and Cooper are hilarious they make me lmao! Especially aunt mae, she is a character!

Im intrigued as to what will happen between mollie and simon, especially since simon is engaged.

PS you write AMAZING sex scenes! Teach me! Teach me! I wish I  could write like you!!

I look forward to reading all of your work!

 Reviewer: dissociative_identity Signed [Report This]
Date: May 01 2011 12:43 am
Title: In Dreams

OMG!!!! This is sooooo good.

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Date: April 29 2011 02:41 am
Title: In Dreams

Oh man please don't leave us hanging for tooo longg for the update!!  What a cliffhanger!

 Reviewer: Proudly African Signed [Report This]
Date: April 26 2011 06:54 pm
Title: In Dreams

Ah! I'm glad that big reveal was less painful and drawn out than I thought it would be. I was half afraid Moliere would run away or something. Nice update, thanks!

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 25 2011 04:41 am
Title: In Dreams

ty for the update

 Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 25 2011 04:22 am
Title: In Dreams

is this a dream?? a lot happen rather fast.... and whatchu mean you wanna wrap this baby up1?! its coming to an end soon???

 Reviewer: rosey_pink Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 24 2011 07:27 pm
Title: In Dreams

Holy Crap!

 Reviewer: puertaobierta Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 24 2011 04:37 pm
Title: Limit to Your Love

What the hell is going on? Could Simon and Mollie be more self-obsorbed? It is so funny, cause I know people like this, how the world can revolves around the wished desires and stupidesas or one or two people. The rest of us just trailing behind like flotsom and getsom dealing with whatever drama they dictate.

However, this is a fictional story and has to revolve around one or two characters, which is different, but it doesn't stop the general feeling of GAWWD! one feels.

These last two were very touching. Thanks!

 Reviewer: puertaobierta Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 24 2011 03:59 pm
Title: Ch-Ch-Ch-Changes!

Cool line: "strange voodoo mix of old wise woman and jazz-handed creepiness"

Simons a bit of a freak, ain't he?

 Reviewer: puertaobierta Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 24 2011 03:23 pm
Title: Oops Upside Yo' Head

OMG! Charley and the Chocolate Factory!!!

Aunt Mae is the best character ever penned. These two are getting on may nerves. Cooper is lewd, but real. Have yet to meet Amber...saving opinions. 

Excellent!

 Reviewer: puertaobierta Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 24 2011 02:54 pm
Title: Déjà vu

Great line: "singing along with her as she yodeled Madonna's Borderline at the top of her lungs."

Also, LOVE 'Bed' by J Holiday!

:)

 Reviewer: puertaobierta Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 24 2011 02:22 pm
Title: In Dreams

Hot diggity damn!!! The cat is out the bag!!! Can't wait to see Amber's response.

What is Amber up to??? She should have had an idea that something was up after Simon left her a message but she's trying to hold onto him. Wonder what's her motive and what's Cooper's secret???!!

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 24 2011 08:20 am
Title: In Dreams

Well, that's one way to shut Amber up!

 Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 24 2011 06:53 am
Title: In Dreams

Well, killed two birds with one stone.

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Date: April 24 2011 06:49 am
Title: In Dreams

You are having way to much fun writing Aunt Mae. I know you have to be cracking up while reading this. I love this story so much!

 Reviewer: brightnova01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 24 2011 05:52 am
Title: In Dreams

There is somethin off with Amber. Your "husband" calls you and you don't get back to him for two weeks, you a damn cheat. Glad everyone is fonding out this way, get it all out in the open, hahahaha

 Reviewer: Alixermixer Signed [Report This]
Date: April 24 2011 05:08 am
Title: In Dreams

Yes! It's out and everybody knows. Aunt Mae had me lmao! Cooper was no help.

Amber got stole on and why the hell hadn't she been answering and returning Simon's calls about needing to talk trick ho.

Molli knows that Simon loves her and I hope he knows what dreaming about fish mean now.  LOL

Great update I need more.  I was hoping all thru the story that at the end you didn't pull the okie doke and say it was a dream. 

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 24 2011 04:11 am
Title: In Dreams

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

I need an update now :)

 Reviewer: TheSouthernScribe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 24 2011 02:45 am


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