Reviews For To Last a Lifetime
Title: Another Man's Treasure

Oookay. So Moliere has Simon, Cooper, and now Dr. Richards sniffing her panties. Her pheremones are working overtime. I guess we'll just go wherever you're taking us with this story.

Reviewer: islandlass Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 11 2012 10:49 am

Title: Another Man's Treasure

Thank you so much for trying hard to keep ur muse on this story. i absolutely adore it along with ur others (tho' personally this is my fave). Loved the many beautiful personalities of ur stories characters, esp Cooper and Aunt Mae. Also am still rooting for Molli and Simon all the way...hopefully it will end that way...thanks again for sharing ur creation :)

Reviewer: crimsonred Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 11 2012 08:44 am

Title: Another Man's Treasure

Ok, I'm really loving Mark, so that has me conflicted with this story and I don't know where you're headed with it. Where does Mark fit in at here?

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 11 2012 07:47 am

Title: Another Man's Treasure

Please dont take soo long again... I love this story and I am ready for Simon and Molly to work it out and get married and have their riches baby....

Reviewer: mustang_writer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 11 2012 05:02 am

Title: Another Man's Treasure

i love moliere. i really love simon. i really really love cooper.  and i flove aunt mae!  this update made my week.  i know you are doing the best you can, you do have a life, but i wanted you to know that i really appreciate this update (hell any update of yours!)   thank you.

Reviewer: idriveavitz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 11 2012 04:54 am

Title: Another Man's Treasure

Great update! Loved it!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 11 2012 04:46 am

Title: Another Man's Treasure

Great update.

Why are you bringing the dr into their relationship. I think they have enough troubles.

However, I know Molieri is in love with Simon.

Thanks for a wonderful update.

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 11 2012 04:45 am

Title: Another Man's Treasure

love the update...please, please update soon

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 11 2012 04:42 am

Title: Another Man's Treasure

Molli got the mojo power to have men wrapped around her little fingers with just a look, a sigh, a smile.

You go girl...Simon no baby you not paranoid Dr. Richards has a hard on for your girl, but I am still team Simon all the way you guys have gone thru to much to loose each other now and you have a little one on the way which Molli needs to go to the doctor and check on.

I lover Cooper too but he need to drop the skank and find his own chocolate woman that makes him feel good about himself.

Thank you so much for the update...it was great.

More please

Happy writing

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 11 2012 03:31 am

Title: Another Man's Treasure

Yeah my story is back,, Dr. Mark bears watching.  Simon remember to keep your enemies close.  Moliere doesn't seem to be award of Dr. Mark's admiration and that concerns me.  But Mae will put the good doctor in check and I am looking forward to it.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 11 2012 02:58 am

Title: Another Man's Treasure

Loved the update!!! I still do not know how Dr. Mark Richards will fit in this story; he seems like such a sweetheart, damn if only Moliere were not with Simon. I swear, if I did not love Simon and Moliere together so much, I would want Moliere with Dr. Richards. Then there is Cooper, poor guy. I know you have a lot of stories, but you have to make two more stories. One for Cooper and one for Dr. Richards, lol. And please can you update 'Do You Feel Me.' I love that story so freakin much, you don't even know!



Author's Response:

oh, wow! thank you! yes, Dude is pushing the Dr. Richards idea so i had to go with it. otherwise he wouldn't have let me write at all. i know for sure Cooper is getting his own story, but i'm on the fence with Dr. Richards. i do think he's adorable, so we'll see how things play out.

Reviewer: oHH Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 11 2012 02:49 am

Title: Pale White

Please update when life gives u a moment or your muse beats u upon the head until u do so. :0)

Thank u!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 10 2012 10:12 pm

Title: Pale White

OMG!  This story is beyond amazing!

Reviewer: urtrippin2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 10 2012 09:14 am

Title: Pale White

PLEASE TRY!!! COME BAK- I'M HOOKED!

Reviewer: alexp696 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 18 2012 06:50 am

Title: The Cast

Thank you!!! This was worth waiting for I love your style.  Also  can you have someoe anyone slap Amber? Anybody will do :)



Author's Response:

thank you! and that sounds like a plan! i'll dedicate that to you, Mya!

Reviewer: Mya Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 13 2012 02:02 am

Title: Pale White

Amber is lucky she's a woman because Simon would have knocked the crap out of her ass!

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 11 2012 09:56 am

Title: Pale White

Soooo worth the wait!  Thx IT!!!!!!

Reviewer: LadyeT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07 2012 03:29 am

Title: Pale White

I am just happy that she can sense when Simone is on the edge and she knows that it has something to do with Cooper.  and really man, can you not go one night without making another awful decision?  I really hope that they can work through it in time.  I think they are good for each other as friends, but they are going to need to work on boundaries.

Reviewer: letitia Signed [Report This]
Date: June 06 2012 05:11 am

Title: Pale White

Ok....Simon is one scary *MF* I don't even know what to say to that.

Coop screwing Amber...yuck!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 06 2012 02:55 am

Title: Pale White

Well. I was glad that Simon was finally able to shut Amber up.  AS for Cooper, what is his problem.  Why would he allow that ho to continue to blackmail him? Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2012 09:58 pm

Title: Pale White

Ok, I had to read a couple of chapters over because I'm a bit confused about Cooper. He's clearly obsessed with Simon's life. He wants Simon's parents to be his own. He wants Simon's life. He wants Simon's girl. And he just screwed Simon's ex, Amber.

It's more like he's in love with Simon's life. And years ago, he had the opportunity to get with Moliere while she was drunk and vulnerable. But he chose to not manipulate the situation because 'he's not hardwired for permanency...or a lifetime'. So, how is it that he's 'in love' with Moliere? Does his love mean something totally different than forever?

And also, if he dated/fucked a slew of Moliere copies, how is it that Simon nor Moliere caught on to it? Your best friend dating a lot of black women that have 'that' much in common with Moliere would be easy to read.

 

Riddle me that, IT!

Reviewer: islandlass Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2012 05:36 pm

Title: Pale White

YOUR BACK YAY........ lol another good chapter like always, and i was just thinking the same thing that i was going to go back and reread this story. i hope that its not a long time again before we hear from you but, i love your work

Reviewer: keikei2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2012 03:03 pm

Title: Pale White

Yay! So glad you are back! Love the update!

Reviewer: Monique Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2012 02:25 pm

Title: Pale White

amazing, i have no idea how you manage to get into and verbalise the male characters thoughts so flawlessly. its a great storyline filled with  realistic complicated characters, that mixed with your admirable writing ability has us all hooked. cant wait for more.

Reviewer: chocolateorange Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 05 2012 11:07 am

Title: Pale White

Loved this chapter!  I am so glad to see this story is back!!  :)

Reviewer: Redbird Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2012 08:49 am



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