I actually liked the short chapter. :) Yes, Justin should do the chasing now. He needs to meet Jalena half way. I'm confident he'll do the right thing!
Thanks for the update! Can't wait for more!!
Reviewer: Megan Anonymous
[Report This]Date: November 13 2011 07:53 am
I'm so happy Jalena didn't give into Justin and stay.
Justin needs to make up his mind and quick if he doen't want to keep getting the evil eye from his boys and beaten up by Krista. Hahaha!
Thanks for the update and update again soon.
Reviewer: juleah Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 13 2011 04:38 am
Good chapter. I wish Justin wasn't such a jerk and would just dump Stacey already because he clearly wants to be with his "J girl."
Reviewer: annie Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 13 2011 03:51 am
Dayuum! Justin is messing up everybody's relationship. Krista is blowing off Niko and whatever progress Caleb made with Becca is gone. I'm proud of Jalena for staying strong and telling him he needs to man up. Baby boy can't have his cake and eat it too. Still loving this story. UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!
Reviewer: NaeNae1495 Signed [Report This]Date: November 13 2011 03:39 am
I am still trying to understand why Justin is dating a girl that no one in his family likes also that none of his friends like. The little girl doesn't seem to really love or care about you, she cared more about the those than the injury to your face. Stacey or as I like to call Hocey is a selfish little girl, you need to rid of the zero and get with Jalena is more woman now then Stacey will ever be. I can't to chapter 22, you rock!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: November 13 2011 03:26 am
First off, I'm mad at hell. At myself. I'm trying to figure out how I missed this update? Stupid me.
Anyway, damn. Why my baby's song gotta cause so much heartache? I get Justin's trying to do the right thing, but it sucks. Stacy has GOT.TO.GO. Like she needs to seriously disappear. I can say I'm proud of Justin for manning up and knowing he can't keep playing this game. UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
LOL! I'm sorry must have snuck up on you.
Yes he has some more manning up to do... wasn't this song perfect for them? I know that Stacey needs to go she just will not get out of mind yet.. hehe Updated will be up tonight! Thanks for leaving me a review. :)
Reviewer: NaeNae1495 Signed [Report This]Date: November 09 2011 03:40 pm
How's the writing coming along?
Author's Response:
LOL! I'm writting away.... this chapter is hard to write. I'm about only 10 pages in and thats nothing I usually get up to 25-30 so I've got a ways to go I'm trying though thanks for keeping me on my toes Megan. :)
Reviewer: Megan Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 07 2011 09:23 pm
please give us another chapter please
Author's Response:
Its coming! Update tonight! :)
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 31 2011 05:33 am
This story is AMAZING!!! Justin and Jalena love conflict is so addicting. I don;t think you under stabd how much I love this story... and I;m sorry for not reviewing but you are doing a great job. Keep it up and can;t wait for the next update! :)
Author's Response:
THANK YOU!!!! I love hearing that! I feel Blessed from all my reviewers I really appreciate the love its a good feeling to have reviews like this being my very first time doing something like this... This builds up the confidence. So I thank you sooo very much for taking the time to leave a review. Update will be up tonight! Oh and thanks for the rating too. :)
Reviewer: crazykeely429 Signed [Report This]Date: October 31 2011 12:14 am
Another great chapter. Maybe by Justin being away from her he will realize what he is missing and finally get his act together. If he does try to get back with Jalena she shouldn't make it easy.
Author's Response:
Thank you jmary_84,
She will not make it easy for him.. :) I promise thanks for the rating too your awesome!
Reviewer: jmary_84 Signed
[Report This]Date: October 30 2011 08:42 pm
AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME UPDATE CHICA!!!!
Author's Response:
THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU! *shaking it zumba style* :)
Reviewer: 1booneyb Signed [Report This]Date: October 30 2011 09:22 am
Great update,I didn't excepted Lena to forgive Justin so easily and how can Justin make out with her to just walk out of her life. And he say he don't want to hurt Stacy or Lena,but it's like his second time hurting Lena.Justin have to man up and stop playing emotions games with Lena and I can't wait until he find out Stacy not what she seem to be.Please don't allow Lena to forgive him so fast I want Justin to have to hard for her forgivings.Looking forward to the next update.
Author's Response:
She is so weak for him, its this way he looks at her that has her so weak for him and that damn butter voice. LOL! Dont worry they have issues they have to sort out and things to find out! he,he*smiling evily* Thank you Meko for the review and the rating cant wait to hear from you on the next chapter which will be up tonight. :)
Reviewer: meko1975 Signed [Report This]Date: October 30 2011 07:11 am
Is there anymore? I want more!!!!!
Author's Response:
Yes there is more its coming tonight! lol! :) thanks you for reviewing and rating!
Reviewer: kimyso Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 30 2011 04:55 am
hey I had to reread again. I love the update. Oh my heart is breaking. Danm get rid of that danm stacey. I know she cheating on him. Well please don let jalena give her heart to anyone else. I m so glad you didnt let them have sex. That woud have definitly complicated matters. I want them both to be phyically and emotionally availabe to each other when they get to getter, I m looking forward to your next update. Awesome update.
Author's Response:
You have said it all my dear! This was an emotional chapter for me I was sad at the time when I wrote it... I hope you enjoy my next update! Thank you so much for being my faithful reviewer I enjoy reading what you think about it. I am so glad you are still enjoying my story. Thanks for the rating too. :)
Reviewer: pokerdiva01 Signed
[Report This]Date: October 29 2011 08:19 pm
Can Stacey just drop off the face of the planet or something???! She is a pain in the neck, even when she's not around!
I think it's a good thing for Jalena and Justin to get some space from each other, give them time, especially Justin, to put things into perspective. He needs to realize that he is not responsible for Stacey. Yes what she went through with her dad is unfortunate, but it doesn't give her a right to use it to manipulate Justin.
I am all for them not being friends. It'll give them time to clear their heads, probably won't be easy, but it needs to be done.
Great update meme!!
Author's Response:
Ha, Ha, could she? I wish she would too but she it a thorn in my mind that won't go away yet.... Yes space is what they need......
Thank you for reviewing I really appreciate that you take the time to give me one its really a good felling to get one... see with the next update. :)
Reviewer: JazziePassion Signed [Report This]Date: October 29 2011 10:17 am
OMG...I really can't wait for Justin to wake up and smell the coffee. Obviously he is not in love with Stacey...what is it going to take to get him to realise this! Stacy is such a manipulative ho; I can't believe Justin can't see through her...
Jalena needs to give him some space so he can come to his senses and choose her like he knows he wants to...I don't know why he is so determined to punish himself. Hopefully Justin'll catch Stacy cheating on him or something and have no choice but to end things (laughs evily)...I can only hope)
Love the story; more please...you're making me channel my inner Oliver Twist:)
Author's Response:
You said it! I love this review its filled with so much passion break it down for me girl break it down go ahead bring out your inner Oliver Twist I love it!... :) Justin needs to fix this and he will...
Thank you for reviewing and rating me... update up tonight!
Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed [Report This]Date: October 29 2011 09:51 am
wow she a good one to forgive him because if it was me I would had knee him in his special place lol like twice lol. I wonder where they go from here? thank for the update.
Author's Response:
LOL you have me laughing at that.. yes I agree with you she is soft for him. Thanks again for reviewing I love hearing from you! Oh thanks for the rating too! update up tonight!
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: October 29 2011 05:26 am
What a lovely update. Justin needs to sort himself out though! Thank you!
Author's Response:
Thank you ammalicious,
Yes Justin does need to sort himself out maybe his friends will help him out.;)
thank you so much for reviewing and rating.
Reviewer: ammalicious Signed [Report This]Date: October 29 2011 03:22 am
I need more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
More is comming!!!!!!!!! LOL update up tonight :)
Reviewer: nsimone Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 29 2011 02:54 am
Justin, you are a dingle berry!!! It is obvious that you are not in love the that little ho Stacey. You need to let that troll go, she is not good enough for you. Jalena please forget about the ahole, he is not worth your tears. He does not know what he wants, he will end up hurting Stacey more pretending that he still loves her. I was hoping that this eveing would work out in her favor. I love this story!!
Author's Response:
LOL! dingle berry I love it... Yes he is being one he has to get his issues straight with hostacey. I am Loving that you love this story thank you so much for sticking with me. It's nice to see the same names pop on my reviews I really appreciate the support... thanks again and for the rating too. :) Update will be up tonight!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: October 29 2011 02:15 am
This chapter was so sweet!
it was like Justin and Jalena were in their own world for a few hours.
I hope they will try to really be just friends and Justin will see how sorry Stacey is on his own.
Considering Justin's brother and Jalena's sister are now an item, the families might be seeing a lot more of each other.
Great update and I can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response:
Thank you Juleah,
This was a bitter sweet chapter I love writing them together it does give you a feeling like they are in their own world... They have some things to sort out and yes it will be hard for them to avoid the other.
I thank you again for reviewing and rating hope to hear from you again after the next chapter which will be up tonight!
Reviewer: juleah Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 29 2011 02:05 am
Usually I don't comment until the last page, but i have to, I love that u give us the chance to know what everyone is thinking. Please keep it up.
Reviewer: kimyso Anonymous
[Report This]Date: October 29 2011 01:59 am
When is Justin going to come to his senses? I love jaleena and I want her and justin together. I am glad they did not have sex. Justin will learn Stacy is trash. Jaleena should get her someone and to show him what he is missing. I hate that Jaleena has to be hurt. Jaleena cannot keep being used. Make justin see how evil Stacy is before it is to late. Please another update
Author's Response:
Hi trina mase,
He is an idiot right now but he will be working on getting some sense..lol Yeah it wasn't he right time for them to get it on all the way need to build up to it.. hehe... Jalena will show him what he his missing when we get to chapter 22 plus we will see whats really up with Stacey....Chapter 21 will be up tonight!
I truly thank you so much for your review I love how you are in to it and understand what they all feel.. I also thank you for leaving a rating to. :) makes me all bubbly inside.
Reviewer: trina mase Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 29 2011 01:49 am
great chapter looking 4ward 2 the next 1 hopefuli u will b kind an give us chapter 21 2mrrw
Author's Response:
I apologize for the wait busy kids at home.... Loving that you are liking this story and hope you enjoy the next chapter I will be up tonight! :)
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 29 2011 01:08 am
please update asap i love it bt i dnt want 2 wait 4 next week :(
Author's Response:
Hi there Anonymous,
I am so sorry for the wait I'm trying to write as much as possible its getting tougher with my busy kids. but I am so glad you enjoy reading my story. I hope not to keep you waiting to long and I really appreciate you taking the time to leave a comment for me... :) there will be an update tonight!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 29 2011 01:05 am