I like it, but I wonder when is the real fun going to begin? When is going to go to Hogwarts? Remember you have at least one person waiting.
Reviewer: guitarlovechild Signed
[Report This]Date: September 04 2011 09:25 pm
Aw come on, you just left it right there lol. Great update I'm curious to know what's gonna happen next and I have a feeling Zora is gonna get the shock of a life time lol. I'm liking her character development a bit more because she seems to be leaning towards being a tomboy instead of a girly girl and I'm glad she's not into the damsel in distress thing. It can get annoying :)
Reviewer: JLeshay Signed
[Report This]Date: September 04 2011 04:27 am
zora's life appears to become more complicated with each chapter but that is what i like about it. Draco's fascination with Zora is the cherry on top of the sunday. I am on pins and needles with the distance of everyone on the secret of Zora's mom. I can hardly wait for more.
Reviewer: reader101 Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 03 2011 02:14 am
Another brilliant chapter and i loved the mystery of what happen to zora's ribbon
Reviewer: reader 101 Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 20 2011 08:48 pm
I cannot believe I haven't left a review yet *shocked*
I thought I did but I will leave one now :)
As a someone who has been reading the harry potter books since grade 3, I can definitely say you are doing the books justice. I am drawn in again as I'm finding myself lost in Zora's tale. The new characters are love and the original ones seem the same to me. <---That's hard to do. I find myself excited once again for a another adventure that will unfold in 'Potter' universe. Thank you so much for sharing this <3
P.S It is a great pick-me up from recently seeing the last movie *cries*
Reviewer: Treehuggingsmartarse Anonymous
[Report This]Date: August 19 2011 10:34 am
Hey girl sorry it took so long for me to review :) I'm liking this a lot and normally I don't do supernatural stories but you changed my mind lol. I liked how your OC's fit in well with the other characters of Harry Potter and I know that has got to be the hardest when writing fanfiction P.S Love your cast pics ;)
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot JL,
Wow, haven't responded in a long time...sorry about that. lol Glad I brought you over to the dark side. Working on Chapter 10 now hopefully I'll get something out soon...
Thanks a lot for the awesome review,
Reckless
Reviewer: JLeshay Signed [Report This]Date: August 15 2011 06:23 am
Once again a great attention to detail. i liked the twist of when zora became a tiny cat. all in all a chapter of twists and turns. i really loved the way how the two girls are becoming friends. keep up the brilliant work.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much reader101, sorry that I am getting back to you so late.
Thanks for the awesome review, Reader101
Reviewer: reader 101 Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 14 2011 10:17 pm
My gosh, Ando is so cute, and I can see why Zora is crushing on Hyde!
Author's Response:
Well my characters are competing with the Harry Potter cast, so they have to bring it lol. Oh Hyde, a man of few words....
Reviewer: DarkDecember Signed [Report This]Date: August 01 2011 02:53 am
Me likey very much! Very well written - can't wait for next chapter!
Author's Response:
I'm glad that you liked it Aprilfool. Hope you enjoy the latest as well :)
Thanks for the awesome review Aprilfool :)
Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 01 2011 01:13 am
Yay, Draco sighing! Another great chapter, and fascinating development with Zora. Thanks for brightening my Sunday! :-)
Author's Response:
Aw DarkDecember your so presh. I so happy that brightened up your Sunday. That honestly means a lot to me. Sorry I got to this so late, I read it and I actually teared up a little. (A little silly but w/e). Hope you enjoy the lastest chapter.
Thanks for the awesome review DarkDecember. :)
Reviewer: DarkDecember Signed [Report This]Date: July 31 2011 10:18 pm
I love HP, and your take on it is wonderful! Zora is strong, charming, and likable. Great work!
Author's Response:
YESS, another Potterhead. Aw, thanks for the sweet words DarkDecemeber. I just try to do my best and if people like it then...YAY ME lol
Thanks for the awesome review DarkDecemeber :)
Reviewer: DarkDecember Signed [Report This]Date: July 31 2011 10:01 pm
Loved the update and the fact that the two girls are friends now. I think Hermione has some latent tendencies she's unaware of, if what Zora said was true in reference to not handling the erasers.
Author's Response:
I'm so happy that you liked it Baha :) Hermione...no...i can't spoil it...you're just gonna have stay tuned lol
Thanks for the awesome review Baha :)
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: July 19 2011 04:10 am
Loving the story so far, update soon please!!!
Author's Response:
ANON, I'm so glad you likei it and hopefully you like the chapter i just posted.
Thanks for the awesome review :)
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 18 2011 12:55 pm
i really love your attention to detail and the hint of mystery that is in each chapter. Zora continues to fasinate me as well as the characters in this tale. i am looking forward to the next installment
Author's Response:
I'm so glad that you like it. :) Harry Potter means the world to me and I just want to do the story that J.K.Rowling painstakingly wrote out justice. I always want to leave a little hint of WTF in each chapter...it keeps people reading and me writing. LOL.
Thanks for the awesome review reader101 :)
Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]Date: July 07 2011 08:17 pm
Thanks for a great update. That Lucius Malfoy is such a spitefil individual. To taunt Sampson the way he did was just evil. As for his son Draco I would like him more if he wasn't so mean to those around him. The way that this family treats their house elves is just obscene.
It was interesting reading about Hermione Granger before she knew that she was a witch. So she suspects that Zora is different. I can't wait to read when Hermione realizes that she is different too.
Thanks
Author's Response:
Yeah, the Malfoys aren't going to be the winners of the perfect family dynamic award or the nicest-people-you'll-ever-meet award but that's just life lol. It's also why they make awesome baddies. Hermione I thought was always a very scientific, practical child before she knew about magic. My head-canon says that if it wasn't in a textbook/journal/or easily proven or seen Hermione Granger wouldn't give it second glance. Also, for the people that think that she had friends, um no lol...just no...not the way that she was following Ron and Harry around at Hogwarts. Her friendship with Zora is a new experience and its going mellow her out...a smidge..like a very tiny smidge. The aspect of friendship in general and magic are going to hit Hermione hard, but she will adapt and thrive.
Thanks for the awesome review Divisonred :)
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: July 05 2011 02:59 pm
The people that you have cast for your story look so familiar, but I can't remember their names.
Author's Response:
One's just a model I found, the male is a british actor, the "mom" is kenya moore....I honestly can't remember names...Thank you so much for your interest and hope you like the latest chapter :)
Reviewer: LadyK Signed [Report This]Date: June 25 2011 04:08 am
I love her transformation through the years! Zora is very beautiful, who is she? Are Cecelia and Samson her folks? They look like they could be.
∞ Peace.
Author's Response:
Why yes they are:) She's just a model I found somewhere. Thanks for the review :)
Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed [Report This]Date: June 24 2011 10:38 am
Wow. I'm really enjoying your rendition of the Harry Potter Series. You really have tied the new characters into the original very well. I love it and can't stop reading it over and over again.
Please continue!!
Cheers.
Author's Response:
Aw thanks so much for the positive review and I hope that you like the newest chapter :)
Reviewer: Fabiola4 Signed [Report This]Date: June 21 2011 06:38 pm
Zora and Samson have such a nice father/daughter relationship. He's so patient with her. I actually like seeing Draco's crush on Zora even though his dad is really creepy. Even though he probably has good reason, I want to know why Samson seem to hate Lucius?
Author's Response:
Thanks so much dcphoenix1 for the thoughtful review. Samson loves his daughter very much and he wants to do what is best for her, like any good father would. He's working at half-mass since Cecile's murder so that's why he is so extra when it comes to Zora. Now... about Draco what can I say about him....Nothing much without spoilers...so you'll just have to see what's up with him. Oh Lucius you creepy snake-like man you....All i can say is that you just have to wait and see :)
Thanks for again for the review.
Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed [Report This]Date: June 15 2011 03:58 pm
Thanks for a great update.
Author's Response:
Awww :) Thanks for an awesome review
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: June 14 2011 01:46 pm
Thanks for the explanation. I forgot about Tonks abilities.
Author's Response:
No prob :)
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: June 14 2011 03:29 am
Loved the update!! I am wondering if both father and son knew Zora's mother?
Author's Response:
Yay, I'm glad that you liked it :)...I don't know I guess your going to have read and find out...lol
Reviewer: Tempestsunshine Signed [Report This]Date: June 13 2011 05:43 pm
I love it!!! Continue!!!
Author's Response:
Will do! And thanks for the review
Reviewer: JB_Shawty143 Signed [Report This]Date: June 09 2011 12:20 am
I've recently discoverd HP fanfics (Dramione mostly). I've been devouring them and rarelly reading anything else. It's nice to see a hp fanfic on VC. I think you're off to a good start.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the review Cholyn :)
Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]Date: June 04 2011 10:29 am
That was really good. I liked it. I believe that's saying something considering that I don't really venture into Harry Potter fan fiction. (However, that's moostly because I hold it so dearly, and the fan fiction I've come across wasn't that....good.) Anyway, keep writing, and keep up the good work.(And Hyde's look is very intense. Haha)
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for your vote of confidence. Honestly what got me started was just the fact that the poc characters hardly got any action time in the book and even less in the movies. I even read some where JK Rowling wrote a bigger role for Dean Thomas but it was cut out in editing by publishers (ain't that a...) but i digress. Like you I love/adore/ cherish the Harry Potter universe and I would never want to anything that would wreck it. I hope make you proud with the next chapter I'm cooking up as i write this response.
Thanks for the review Flicker and Sparkle :)
PS. About Hyde, yeah he's look is very intense I was surprised when I was able to find a picture to reflect him. lol
Reviewer: Flicker and Sparkle Signed [Report This]Date: June 04 2011 04:22 am