Is she finally going to seek her freedom her Shon? I am not getting the feeling that Dove is really in love with SHon, why did marry that fool? Did her brother's force her to marry Shon? Shon is most certainly not in love with her, he can't even fake the funk!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
[Report This]Date: January 29 2012 03:33 am
I like how Xavier's getting Dove to focus on how she's being treated instead of the way she treats others. This is a good learning experience for her. I hope they get more time together but Xavier still has some explaining to do!
I don't understand how Shon could not feel any passion toward a woman like Dove. Something about him must want to make her a miserable and stifled as he is, whether it's conscious or not. Can't wait for Dove to be free of these folks. They're only bringing her down. I can relate to that.
Great story. Thanks for continuing with it!
Reviewer: dustdaughter Signed
[Report This]Date: January 23 2012 03:09 am
love this story! I'm a Dove myself.....more please :)
Reviewer: IRJunkie Signed [Report This]Date: January 21 2012 11:11 pm
Please, I beg of you, give Xavier and Dove a HEA. I don't want Dove to have to look back on this time nostaglically.
I'm waiting with bated breath for the next installment.
Reviewer: londongirl Signed [Report This]Date: January 20 2012 03:26 pm
This story is WONDERFUL!!! Can't wait to read more!!!!
Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 20 2012 02:15 am
Lovely and far too short! More please...and thank you for sharing your gift:)
Reviewer: Nodrivel99 Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 20 2012 01:42 am
Ahhh Love it!
Reviewer: chatty504 Signed [Report This]Date: January 20 2012 12:35 am
I really love these two together. Unlike her husband, he really seems to appriciate her and her body for what it really is, which is beautiful. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: helloWORLD Signed [Report This]Date: January 20 2012 12:24 am
wow, great chapter. So glad Dove is getting the attention she deserves. Xavier has no hesitation in kissing Dove in front of others and I love that about him.
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: January 19 2012 10:31 pm
So jealous. Dove really is a Lucky girl. Sad she'll have to go home soon. Totally loving this story . Can't wait for the next update.
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 19 2012 08:51 pm
Xavier is so intuitive about Dove, I need an Xavier in my life. I don't see Dove searching her soul for understanding why she has allowed the in her life to treat her like she doesn't matter. Xavier respects her Shon and for that matter her brothers don't respect her. Please wake Dove up!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: January 19 2012 07:25 pm
Why am I smiling like I was in the store receiving the bounty of new undergarments...I want one...can you send me an Xavier. You're building to something and I am in quiet anticipation.
Reviewer: Scribe Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 19 2012 06:14 pm
nice update...to short
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: January 19 2012 09:18 am
Some of the best writing by far, even in this all too short chapter. Really quite good.
Symph
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 19 2012 04:53 am
I so want Dove to wake up after this experience with Xavier and realize that she deserves so much more than what she accepts. Shon doesn't love her and her brothers just want to use her for a babysitting purposes. I don't like any of those people!!! Team Xavier!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: January 19 2012 01:04 am
Love this story and Dove and Xavier. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
Reviewer: londongirl Signed [Report This]Date: January 19 2012 12:15 am
Love, love, love this couple.
Please write quickly!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 19 2012 12:05 am
Welcome back!!!!! What a morning for Dove. Please give us more soon. My winter night just got more cheerful:)
Reviewer: Nodrivel99 Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 18 2012 11:29 pm
*le sigh*
You've been away too long and I am still addicted to this couple.
Reviewer: Scribe Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 18 2012 09:48 pm
Oh you tease! Now I'm dying to know what the heck is in those chapters. :D
Of COURSE I look forward to more!!!
Reviewer: Kristine Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 09 2012 02:19 am
I'm really glad Dove got some really hot, sexy lovin'. Her stupid husband doesn't need to ever know. Great chapters!
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: December 24 2011 04:39 am
As always, a pleasure to read. Looking forward to next update!
Reviewer: ammalicious Signed [Report This]Date: December 22 2011 10:53 am
Love this story! im addicted! I'm usually not for cheating, but gosh! I don't blame her! what a useless husband, and her family....pfft, they do say you don't appreciate things till they're gone! x
Reviewer: chatty504 Signed [Report This]Date: December 21 2011 10:21 pm
nice update...update soon
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: December 21 2011 08:39 pm
Oh, I'm so happy to have this story back even if it's a short chapter. I've already read it several times! Hope to read some more soon.
Reviewer: peaches Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 21 2011 05:13 pm