Forgiveness is a powerful thing. I felt the chemistry between these two. I don't think it was too quick for them to expressed their feeling physically they had all those years in between now to fantasize, now it's time for action. Great update honey!Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 03 2017 05:08 pm
Ummm, *clears throat*, do we have a plan B pill or something because there was no condom involved and she is just starting her career. Think they need some more time before babies pop up and everything.
Thanks for the update.Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 03 2017 01:14 am
Ahh I can't believe you're back. I was so surprised that you added another chapter haha. I re-read everything and it's still as good. Glad Rick an Marva met up after so long...Can't wait to read more, thank you 😊
Sorry it took soooo long for me to update lol, but I knew I had to eventually make a return! Thanks for supporting this story after all these years <3Reviewer: Loop Signed [Report This]
Date: March 31 2017 08:10 pm
Good to return after 5 years...Marva should apolgize...she chose popularity and fake friends over true love...Rick seems ready to listen...sweet story...
Thank you! It's good to be back :)
Marva will apologize soon, she knows how much she's hurt Rick. Thanks for reading!Reviewer: jahchannah Signed [Report This]
Date: March 24 2017 04:04 am
I really like this story and I really do hope that you pick up this story again!Reviewer: Faith Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 20 2012 04:58 am
I'm now tracking this because I'd forgotten how good this story is.
Wow..this just puts me in that whole HS frame of mind. Its a blip on the radar in reality, but some folks can use it to make the lives of others a living hell because they think its the end all, be all. It matters how you treat people. It matters who you surround yourself with. Your overall walk matters because in the end, its all that people remember. Not all that HS bulls**t.
Marva was just an awful human being in HS, and she probably can't even believe she behaved that way. Now, she can't even stand to be around people like she used to be. Now, all she remembers is what a creep Ronnie was, how kind Lamar was, how fake Amber was, and how genuine Rick was. Even Rick; only recalled how Lamar never bothered him. But again, the people you surround yourself with. Thats not what Lamar wanted Rick to remember, or hold against him. Life is teaching Marva what is really important, and not in the best way either. But hey, you have to reap what you sow. However hard that may be. She's not completely innocent either. Now, she knows the importance of how you treat others, and she's extremely careful about who she surrounds herself with these days.
I wonder what its going to be like when she and Rick meet up again. I think Rick is still Rick. Marva might surprise him, though.
This is such a good story, with so many levels and nuances. Not a simple HS story at all. Its gritty, real and its a pleasure to read.
High school....what a trip!
P.S. I would love to know what happened to Amber and Staci.
Loving it!!Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: March 09 2012 03:43 am
I don't know how I missed this gem. I like the fact that it wasn't a typical high school romance story. I wonder if she's going to see the book on shelves and contact him or whether it will be an accidental meeting. Either way, fantastic story and I can't wait for more.Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 09 2012 02:54 am
Nice, so how are they going to meet back up again.
Will it be on this book tour. They need each other.Reviewer: Moni Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 09 2012 12:15 am
WELCOME BACK, after reading this chapter I see how much I missed this story.
I'm very glad that Marva is finally getting some help and talking to someone about what she went through with Ronnie, and hopelfully she will MOVE ON.
As for Rick, its a good think that that GOLDDIGGER Terri showed her true colors to ghim and that he kicked her to the CURB... i NHOPE THAT HE ANDE Marva will finally reunite.Reviewer: liberty lady Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 08 2012 11:21 pm
I don't feel the least bit sorry for Ronnie. I so want a reunion with Marva and her man. Something good has to come out of this.
Author's Response: I dont feel bad for him either. I couldn't let what he did to Marva slide. Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 30 2012 07:46 pm
This is a great story to read. Your writing style is real and straight to the point. I like the way you make your characters accountable for their actions. So keep it real as you are now and next chapter please.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! That really means a lot. Stay tuned for more. Reviewer: skriver Signed [Report This]
Date: January 30 2012 07:06 pm