Please finish this story!!!lReviewer: Pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 03 2016 02:26 pm
Marco is insane and she shoukd feel guilty brcause Blake warned her bout Marco but you didn't listen. The has a pathological hate of Blake and dated accepted his ring anyway. Dumb, dumb ditty!Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: December 31 2013 02:02 pm
Hiw could you end it right there? Did the detectives put a wire on Leslie? Why didn't they tail her to the mansion? Do these cops know what they hell they are doing? Marco is pycho, I am glad that she is asking herself,"how could she have been so stupid?" I am wondering that myself but when you use people to hurt someone you get burned that way. It was her stupidity that lead to Kimho to being killed!!
I need another chapter asap, please don't make us wait as long for anther update. I still love this story!Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: December 31 2013 01:55 pm
i KNEW it!!!! DAYUM DAYUM DAYUM!
this is hurting my heart! my girl Les has her career and future set, white chocolate walks in steals half her soul AND breaks her heart! Imported Italian nutella struts up stirs her lust with his torn brooding dominant alpha ass and damn near wrecks ms kitty! now we find white chocolate about to have a mini me with a woman he cannot stand!
My girl I am sending you my therapy bills after the next chapter!
Keep it up!!! HOOKED!Reviewer: Aleta Signed [Report This]
Date: August 30 2013 04:00 am
Great start! Leslie seems really young and we don't know much about her. Why would she fall into bed with Blake one day and be considering getting with Marco the next?
I mean, when you find out the man you slept with was married...I'm not sure I'd pursue a relationship rotflReviewer: msjonsy Signed [Report This]
Date: July 04 2013 02:55 am
Leslie is working my last nerve, she is some timey. Marco is crazy and Blake is going to be frame and all because both Kim and her were stupid. Leslie this is all your fault. I wish that Blake had recorded that conversation with Marco though. This is going to be bad!Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: January 28 2012 03:11 am
Marco is definitely a piece of work! Loved it!!!Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 27 2012 08:45 pm
That is not the same woman in your introduction or on that page when a woman of fair color with long brown hair when your introduction picture is chocoale i'm not getting it.Reviewer: kimyso Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 31 2011 06:43 pm
What the hell...Marco is crazy!!! Leslie should not have put any credence to a rumor being spread by the one person who would not want to see Blake and her together and who had an extramarital affair with her current fiance's ex-wife. Marco spreading that rumor had everything to gain from Leslie's mistrust of Blake and she just fell into that. I know Blake did her wrong, but she did agree to marry him, and if she's going to do that, she has to learn to trust him instead of believing ol' boy Marco. I can't wait for the next chapter!! Happy New Year!!!Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 31 2011 06:09 pm