Well Well it would seem that we have a married man that is not longer if ever is happy with his marriage and Ms. Leslie has caught Mr. Blake's attention.
Lesile on the other hand has found Mr. Blake interesting and does not know he is married and did not pay attention to the interest mother when she was tell her about her family.
Like the start can't wait to see what you have for us.
Thank you for sharing.
Happy writing.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed
[Report This]Date: August 24 2011 03:59 pm
Marco slept with Kim. so why is he so hostile to Blake? Marco did Blake dirty not the other way around. I knew that that baby wasn't Blake's, Kim you are such a ho!! Leslie, this ain't nunya bitness, let Blake handle his business!!!! I still don't know Leslie is still wearing that ring, she should have never said yes in the first place. I can't wait for the next chapter, awesome!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: August 24 2011 07:38 am
OMG I hope leslie can prove that kim is lying. Btw I don't like the way Marco treats Leslie, other than that i love this story :D
Reviewer: Vivian Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 24 2011 06:48 am
Such a big tease....More please
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed
[Report This]Date: August 24 2011 06:46 am
SHIT! Well. I wasn't expecting THAT
Reviewer: Bryleigh Fan Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 24 2011 06:39 am
Why is Leslie so dumb?? Why make things more complicated. She knows she doesn't love Marco. She's using him and will make him miserable. She's so wrong for that. Still not trusting Kim. I'm abit suspicious about that pregnancy. Blake better get that DNA before Kim messes him up.
Author's Response:
she's a lost child in the city
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: August 24 2011 06:00 am
Why is Blake so convinced that the child or children that Kim is carrying is his? He has doubts and yet he is willing to stay. They need to have a paternity test done, because I know that the ho was cheating. I am so disappointed in Leslie right now, why did she say yes to Marco? She had sex Blake again and professed her love. Leslie is acting out in hurt, but she is hurting Marco and he doesn't deserve that. He deserves a woman that will love him with her entire being like she loves Blake. Leslie you are all kinds of wrong and I have lost all respect for you.
Please straighten this mess, I want my HEA. I want Blake and Leslie to have that HEA. Kim deserves to be off somewhere by herself struggling like the ho that she is. Marco deserves to have a love all his own. I can help him deal with his pain!!! LOL
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: August 23 2011 03:14 pm
i have to admit , i kinda like your story, at least at the begining, but now it's just a mess, sorry to say that like that, i really really love your story, but we have two people who cheated on others people, i mean u described leslie as a sweet & simple girl, hell now she's almost like a sl""t, i mean she loves another man, but she sleep with marco, blake was like that at begining but now at least he try to do the right thing, whereas leslie try to hurt him just because she's jealous, now she accept to married marco. I mean even if she refuses after, she did the wrong thing, maybe im too harsh with the character but both of two are wrong but more leslie than blake now.Continue to update i want to know how u gonna fix that, maybe it 's leslie who gonna be pregnant with marco's since he didn't use condom
Reviewer: mdpierrette Signed [Report This]Date: August 23 2011 09:05 am
Hmm, I don't know if I trust Kim with this baby issue. They don't seem to have a good marriage. With all the travelling she's been doing , is it really his??? I have some doubts but I could be wrong. Hope Marco didn't make Leslie preggers. Sorry is getting complicated now. Can't wait to see what happens now.What a mess!!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: August 23 2011 05:37 am
Hell no, another complications. Blake will definately not divorce Kim now that she is pregnant. It breaks my hear to see both Leslie and him not being able to be together despite their love for each other. Love this story!
Reviewer: Dreamer Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 23 2011 05:19 am
How convenient for her to get pregnant? I don't like Kim, please don't let her really be pregnant. How long as she known that she was pregnant? I need to say it again, I don't like Kim!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: August 23 2011 03:53 am
Leslie may be hurt but she has feelings for Blake. I don't want Marco to get hurt, and he will.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: August 23 2011 03:42 am
Poor Blake! He has to stay!
Reviewer: Bryleigh Fan Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 23 2011 03:24 am
oops sorry i meant that Kim is pregnant not Leslie, lol
Reviewer: Vivian Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 21 2011 09:00 am
Oh, i love this story! I don't know why, but something tells me that Leslie is pregnant.
Reviewer: Vivian Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 21 2011 08:59 am
I love your style of writing
Reviewer: BryleighFan Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 20 2011 11:42 pm
So Leslie can't have Blake so she takes Marco instead. Bad idea. Can't wait til Kim gets home and sees what's happened.
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: August 20 2011 11:01 pm
good job
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: August 20 2011 08:23 pm
Marco is fine. but Leslie's in love with Blake!!! Marco's father is crazy!!! Blake destroyed the trust that Leslie had put in him, he will have to work hard to earn that back. His father told him to start divorce proceedings, This is going to get ugly, I know it. I love this story!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: August 20 2011 07:33 am
Wow, this love triangle is about to get more intense. I feel the drama is coming.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: August 20 2011 06:35 am
This was an update worth the wait! She's in love with Blake but is with Marco. Leslie get it together!
Reviewer: Reader Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 20 2011 05:57 am
I hope Leslie has learnt her lesson and refrain from bedding any of the two hunks till she is sure who has a lasting place in her heart. Love to see Blake and Marco's frustrations in vying for her love.
Reviewer: Amelia Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 18 2011 06:43 am
Hmm, love the update but those two men in her life seem full of drama/issues. It would be interesting to see which one she ended up with if any.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: August 18 2011 05:52 am
Is Black on something..lol! He' dead wrong here. No matter if Kim is horroble, she's his wife. Get that business straight first before anything else happens.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: August 17 2011 09:30 pm
Blake has a lot of nerve!! He is crazy!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: August 17 2011 07:25 pm