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Title: Chapter 38 Family in Full

i loved it

 Reviewer: minxie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 05 2017 10:05 am
Title: Chapter 38 Family in Full

This was a wonderful and amazing story.  I loved reading it every step of the way.  You are very gifted at telling a story and making the characters come to life.  Thank you for sharing your gift with all the readers. 

 Reviewer: Treecie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 04 2016 12:21 am
Title: Chapter 38 Family in Full

I really enjoyed the various relationships. Great writing.

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Date: September 01 2015 02:24 am
Title: Chapter 2 Leaving Your Comfort Zone

Sweet Odin Daniel the inmer workings of that man's mind...smoking

 Reviewer: LetMeDream Signed [Report This]
Date: March 15 2015 09:22 pm
Title: Chapter 38 Family in Full

An epilogue would be great!!!!

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Date: December 31 2014 02:07 pm
Title: Chapter 38 Family in Full

wonderful

 Reviewer: minxie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 05 2014 10:45 am
Title: Chapter 38 Family in Full

Please do. I loved this story.

 Reviewer: MrsWifeyS Signed [Report This]
Date: September 02 2014 03:52 am
Title: Chapter 38 Family in Full

Loved the update! Enjoyed reading this story! Sad to see it come to an end but glad things worked out for everyone. Will look forward to the epilogue if you do decide to do one. Thanks for sharing!!

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 01 2014 10:23 pm
Title: Chapter 38 Family in Full

Love the story...  Justine a trip lol

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Date: August 30 2014 10:37 pm
Title: The Cast

Please say there will be more! I read this entire story last night. It was so good! It pulled me in from the start and kept me there until the end!  Thank you for this wonderful story!

 Reviewer: Belladonna400 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 30 2014 07:41 pm
Title: Chapter 38 Family in Full

Thanks for a great conclusion to this fantastic story.  The ending felt more of Selah's story than Amaris though.  I want to read about Danielle and Danny and how they survide the delivery of their bundle of joy,  Thanks again for a fantastic story.

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 30 2014 05:37 am
Title: Chapter 38 Family in Full

I neeeeeeed an epilogue!

 Reviewer: Madi Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 30 2014 12:04 am
Title: Chapter 38 Family in Full

Well done. This story was crazy. Justine has a mouth on her. And Tam's son being named Jun David, I did see that coming. As for Dem, I see so much pent up frustration. I hope our boy okay.

 Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 29 2014 10:51 am
Title: Chapter 38 Family in Full

Sooooo thankful you completed this...an epilogue would be awesome!

 Reviewer: LadyeT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 29 2014 05:33 am
Title: Chapter 38 Family in Full

lovely story!! thanks brenda!!

 Reviewer: brownskingurl Signed [Report This]
Date: August 29 2014 04:39 am
Title: Chapter 38 Family in Full

Loved IT!!!!! you have to do an epilogue Amaris is the only one who didn't have her baby. We want to know about that and what he looks like and what his name is going to be. And I want to know what happens with Demaris and if he ever discover who he truly is regardless of how he came to be and if he ever finds his place in this new family that has been built.

 Reviewer: BossLady Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 29 2014 03:59 am
Title: Chapter 38 Family in Full

Supreb!!!!

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Date: August 29 2014 02:24 am
Title: Chapter 2 Leaving Your Comfort Zone

Woo!

 Reviewer: SunnySideDown Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 29 2014 01:27 am
Title: Chapter 38 Family in Full

I was already having a good day but Ms. Brenda you have now made it outstanding!!  Epilogue please! !  Demaris is such a sweetheart and I want him to get some to deal with finding out that he waa a child of rape.  His existence may have started off as pain but his life has been nothing but love. Amaris loved her nephew like he was her own. Give Joseph a chance, he loves your momma and his love has made her a better woman and human being.  I actually like her now! I am so excited about this update that I will read the whole story again. 

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 28 2014 10:54 pm
Title: Chapter 38 Family in Full

Wonderful update...

 Reviewer: mustang_writer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 28 2014 09:53 pm
Title: Chapter 38 Family in Full

Please do the epilogue, this story needs it. I'd love to see a mini series o what happens with Den.



Author's Response:

I thought about giving Dem a separate story.

 

 Reviewer: jovanfan4evr Signed [Report This]
Date: August 28 2014 07:58 pm
Title: Chapter 35 Conquering Evil with Good

I love this story!

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Date: February 10 2014 02:59 am
Title: Chapter 17 The Truth Will Make You Free II

I've read this story before and thoroughly enjoyed it so I thought I'd read it again. Lately I've been discouraged about relationships and reading Joseph's prayer and him asking God for a sign, reminded me about a similar prayer that I made. Reading this chapter was like having a mini-revival and it reminded me to have faith in my faith.

Thank you :). 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed it.  I have to get back and finish it.  Hopefully it won't be too long.

 Reviewer: A_Girl_Called_T Signed [Report This]
Date: January 02 2014 08:50 am
Title: Chapter 35 Conquering Evil with Good

Hi Brenda1257, I hope that you will complete this story soon. Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 10 2013 02:15 am
Title: The Cast

Please respond to all our questions are u going to finish this story? I cheeking to see if it's updated. I keep praying that your muse gives you the creativity to complete this story. Please respond. - Viv

 

 

 Reviewer: Viv Anonymous starhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 15 2013 07:19 am


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