Title: Chapter 30 Honesty and Understanding

Glad that  those two had a talked and let each other know how the feel. Like she said if she haves a baby will her husband still love that little girl? So it best if they wait. Thank for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 19 2011 06:35 pm

Title: Chapter 29 Disaster and Decisions

It's good to be back! this chapter was absolutely awesome!!!!

Reviewer: chatty504 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 19 2011 10:44 am

Title: Chapter 29 Disaster and Decisions

“I need time with my husband!” don't blame Amaris at all, in her position I'd likely be feeling the same exact way.



Author's Response:

Exactly!  More is coming soon.

Reviewer: Mel Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 18 2011 05:29 am

Title: Chapter 29 Disaster and Decisions

Lol I love how you ended this chapter.

Author's Response:

Thanks!  I'm working on the next chapter and it will be coming up real soon!

Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 17 2011 01:01 pm

Title: Chapter 29 Disaster and Decisions

I am glad that Seleah and the boys will be moving to Frederickson soon and that she will stay with her mother until the boys finish school.  I really hope that she doesn't go back to that apartment by herself because her criminal ex will be waiting.  As for Amaris what bee got into her bonnet? I guess not having a honey moon really pissed her off.  Thanks for a great update.



Author's Response:

Nothing went the way Amaris had planned and then the fight and no honeymoon was just too much!  She'll be alright though.  More is coming soon.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 17 2011 10:11 am

Title: Chapter 29 Disaster and Decisions

Wow, I believe that's the worse honeymoon in history~~~~Please bring the joy and good loving back for this couple.  They deserve it.



Author's Response:

LOL  You are right and Amaris is feeling some kinda way about it.  More is coming soon!

Reviewer: LadyeT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 17 2011 07:31 am

Title: Chapter 29 Disaster and Decisions

Great update as always.Glad Seleah agree to move out of harm way.I can't help but fall more in love with Joseph, Seleah denfinitely have a keeper.

And I can understand where Amaris is coming from,their live is already complicated with Justine and to bring another baby in right now will only make things worse for them.However waiting too long to have another child when she already know how much Julian want another child can't be good either.Don't know who will win in this little disagreement but I'm hoping they will be able to come to an agreement about the time fame of having another child. I will be sitting on pins and needles waiting for the next update on this one.LOL



Author's Response:

My muse won't let me move so I'll be updating with the next chapter real soon.  

Reviewer: meko1975 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 17 2011 05:11 am

Title: Chapter 29 Disaster and Decisions

Amaris and Julian need to sit down and have a real conversation about what's going on.  Amaris is overwhelmed and while she loves Julian and Justine, life really threw her for a loop because of Justine's scheming mother and she needs time to adjust.  Julian is being insensitive to what Amaris is going through and I hope he sees it before Amaris walks out of the door.  Joseph was right about Darrell and his nonsense.  Seleah and the boys needs to move up near Joseph.  I hope when he goes down there that weekend, he kicks Darrell's ass for vandalizing Seleah and the boys' home.  



Author's Response:

The conversation is comingup in the next chapter I'm working on.  As for Darrell more of him is coming up in the next chapter~!

Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 17 2011 05:01 am

Title: Chapter 29 Disaster and Decisions

Great Chapter. A lot going on.

Reviewer: Andrea Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 17 2011 02:38 am

Title: Chapter 29 Disaster and Decisions

I wonder how Paula is going to feel when 2 of her daughters living in another state?



Author's Response:

They aren't really in another state.  Paula is in Norfolk, Va and Amaris and Seleah will be in Fredricksburg, VA.  They are about 200 miles apart.  She will miss them, but she knows that they are just a couple hours drive away.  Jaylyn and her boys are still in Hampton.  More to come soon.

Reviewer: Venus Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 17 2011 02:36 am

Title: Chapter 29 Disaster and Decisions

Darrell is a class A idiot. Not only did he vandalize Seleah's home, but he left his fingerprints all over the home. That's like a trail of breadcrumbs being led to him because he's a convict and his fingerprints are in the police data. I can't wait til he's busted!



Author's Response:

Oh he is going to get his, but it's not going to turn out like you think.  MOre to come soon!

Reviewer: Novak Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 17 2011 02:33 am

Title: Chapter 29 Disaster and Decisions

I totally understand Amaris. She didn't ask for this. She didn't want things to be this way. She pictured everything different. A wedding, honeymoon and just her and Julian for a while. But now they have a baby which takes most of their time. I do think that Amaris loves Justine. But I also believe that sometimes she can't help but feel a little resentment towards Justine. We are all human and we have feelings. It must hurts when your husband or boyfriend has a child with another woman. It hurts that your not the one who will give him his first child. This totally ruined all their plans. I really feel for Amaris. I don't think I would have been able to deal with all this. It may sound selfish, but if I was in her place I would have probably call things quits between me and Julian.



Author's Response:

Thanks.  You hit the nail on the head.  Amaris is upset even though she's trying to adjust.  More is coming real soon.

Reviewer: Anon Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 17 2011 02:02 am

Title: Chapter 29 Disaster and Decisions

wow these two are crazy but can understand where she coming from. She wasn't going to have a kid until she enjoy being married for year that little girl change things and she upsest about it.  Hope things work out for them thank for the update



Author's Response:

Thanks.  Yes Amaris is upset, but she's not the only one.  More is coming...

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 17 2011 12:54 am

Title: Chapter 29 Disaster and Decisions

i'm on amaris's side with that particular argument.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  More is coming.  My muse won't let me leave this story just yet.

Reviewer: grumpirah Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 16 2011 11:13 pm

Title: Chapter 29 Disaster and Decisions

Men! What did Julian expect. Amaris is feeling overwhelmed and wants a honeymoon like any just married couple. She didn't say she never wants children just not right now. Also why didn't he consult with her before he made that promise to Joseph. Your fight scene at the wedding was priceless! Both women were ridiculous! Amar was smart to get out of the way! So glad Tam made it through the wedding. I hope Selah doesn't change her mind about marrying Joseph. She shouldn't let other people get in the way of her happiness. Great job!!!!



Author's Response:

Julian feels that he has the money for nanny's or whatever she needs.  He doesnt see what the big deal is.  You are right.  Men!  Money can't solve all of their problems.  She didn't even get a wedding night for god's sake.   thanks.  More is coming soon.

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 16 2011 10:43 pm

Title: Chapter 29 Disaster and Decisions

Joseph is the man, Seleah let the man take care of yoi but do more for yourself. Take classes to learn a skill. Amaris you are tripping! Talk to Julian, don't shut him out. If you didn't want to coparent with Julian then tell him and move on. But if you love him like you say you do suck if you love him like you say you do then suck it up! There is a child involve now, make it work. Amarris you are making my teeth itch! Julian don't let het push you away! Brenda, I need more! Greedy, I know!



Author's Response:

Amaris has mixed feelings right now. She loves Julian and Justine, but she longs for time with just Julian and she feels that she can't have that. A baby only makes matters worse in her eyes.  They didn't even have a wedding night and she's feeling some kind of way right now, but she'll be alright.  LOl

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 16 2011 06:00 pm

Title: Chapter 29 Disaster and Decisions

oh damn trouble brewing for julian and maris already i know it will get better they just need to sit down and really talk to each other amaris needs to tell julian all her feeling of being thrown into a mother roll and just let it all out so they can continue to build a loving relationship...Joseph wants his woman and boys with him pronto i am sooo glad julian reigned his ass in when he started talkin about quitting school and shit i was like hold up and again i am loving julian he is for family 100% i mean he is getting his new ister n law an apartment and paying rent for  year so seleah and kids can move up where joseph is and dont have to worry about being attacked, harrased or robbed by any lowlifes agin whoo thank you for another wonderful update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Amaris is a little upset.  No wedding nite and no honeymoon.  Things do not always go as planned.  Yes, Joseph is right on insisting that Seleah relocate.  More is coming soon!

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 16 2011 05:09 pm

Title: Chapter 1 The Size of Things

"Hello Amaris" Julian replied. "You may think that I'm just talking out of my ass or something, but I must say you are the most beautiful black woman I've ever laid my eyes on."

Amaris was surprised, but pleased. "Well if you were talking out of your ass, your lips wouldn't be moving." She said laughing.

What a thing to say! LMAO...Lord...I wouldn't know how to reply to that one, either. My mind would have gone blank too. LOL

Julian seems very vindictive about his family now that he's very successful. His personality has seriously changed from the sweet, quiet man he was before. Now he's become a big playa, sleeping with all these women and leaving them afterwards. He better be careful with Amaris. The beautiful amazon may just step on his short self if he pisses her off. HAHA!

And wow the mouth on Tam, someone needs to throw her down and pour hand sanitizer down her throat. She is quite the character. LOL

So it almost seems like love at first sight with Julian and Amaris, although I'm thinking Julian is just seeing Amaris as another conquest I'm sure. He'll realize soon she's not.

Even though they are way beyond their usual standards of what they find attractive, they are no doubt attracted to each other. That's the type of romance I like, the kind you weren't looking for that hits you out of nowhere. Cupid at his best!

 



Author's Response:

LOL Kat.  I'm glad you're working my stories into your busy schedule.  I had forgotten about that comment.  Yes, Mr. Jules has met his match!  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: katherinemadison Signed [Report This]
Date: December 05 2011 08:19 am

Title: Chapter 28 Reconciliation and Altercation

I glad that Demaris found his way back home. He dealt with his problems by doing some soul searching, regrouping and talking with his mother. Good to also see Seleah dealing with her past so well.

Their conversation was very therapeutic.

Reviewer: Juan Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 03 2011 06:03 pm

Title: Chapter 27 More Ignorance, More Stress

How trifling is Darrell to steal his son's toy. He's one sick person.

Reviewer: Novak Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 03 2011 05:55 pm

Title: Chapter 28 Reconciliation and Altercation

Thanks for a great update.  I was so happy that Amaris and Julian got married.  Glad that Damaris came back to the family. It was so nice that Amar was able to give his daughter away.  To bad about Ms. Wilmington turning out to be such a racist crazy woman.  The way that she attacked Paula was shocking. I can't wiat to read what happens when Seleah returns home.  I hope that Joseph goes with her to protect her and her children from the crazy ex. 

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 03 2011 05:11 pm

Title: Chapter 28 Reconciliation and Altercation

"Daniel and his father were there as well. The five men sat around the table"..... “Yeah, and my father is more nervous than I am. He’s already called me three times. He’ll be here for the wedding" This is a contradiction of the events. The old lady was trying to make Amaris into the African Queen she dreamt of being. She stopped Paula from getting her groove on...lol

loved that they are finally married, now Seleah's wedding is next. Glad to see Dem back.

Author's Response:

I will rephrase that.  I meant that Julian's father was there and not Daniels.  I said it wrong and I will correct.  Thanks for the look out!

Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 03 2011 12:34 pm

Title: Chapter 28 Reconciliation and Altercation

Awwwww absolutely lovely!! Wheres little Justine??! And that Mrs wilmington needs to goo home!! Can we have more Joseph and Seleah?xx



Author's Response:

Justine was with Cathy, Justin's wife.  More Seleah and Joseph is coming soon. 

Reviewer: chatty504 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 03 2011 11:18 am

Title: Chapter 28 Reconciliation and Altercation

That was a good chapter. I can't believe that lady came to her wedding to cause some mess. Amaris and Julian are sweet but my favorite couple is Seleah and Joseph. Their story has so much potential like it could be separated from this one. I'm looking forward to your next update. I wanna see what happens when Seleah and her sons get home and find out their stuff has been stolen and what Joseph does in response to it. Oh, its gonna be good!

Author's Response:

More Seleah and Joseph in the next update!

Reviewer: JessiMae Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 03 2011 08:43 am

Title: Chapter 28 Reconciliation and Altercation

You are so mean to leave it here please dont make anything bad happen to seleah and her boys i was so upset about the kayla situation i dont think in amaris position i would have been able to raise that child you are a wonderful writer and I look forward to more



Author's Response:

Nothing bad will happen to Seleah and the boys.  More is coming soon!

Reviewer: Felicia Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 03 2011 07:08 am



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