Great Chapter!! That Frances is a crazy something something.
Author's Response:
LOL!!! Frances is crazy. A fight has been brewing between Paula and Frances for years and now it has finally come to pass. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: kena08 Signed
[Report This]Date: December 03 2011 05:47 am
wow loved it damn amaris wedding recetion ended with a bang and pow whoo love how paula handle that deranged bitch francis whoo i absolutly love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
LOL Paula did handle her business and I think she came out of the fight better than Frances did! More is coming soon!
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed [Report This]Date: December 03 2011 05:40 am
Wow I can't belive she started a fight at Amaris wedding that chick is truly crazy lol. I'm glad Dem is back and he understands his mom point of view. Good chapter and thank for the update
Author's Response:
Hey WWE" LOL at Paula and Frances!!! My muse is pure evil sometimes!
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: December 03 2011 04:53 am
Great update,I can't beleive Mrs.Wilmington got int a fight with Paula. That was just too funny and sad at the same time. I'm glad Amaris and Jilian finally got married, now it's time for Joesph and Seleah wedding :).Great update as always,looking forward to the next one.
Author's Response:
LOL!! That fight was something else! Frances needs to sit in jail and think about what happened! More is coming soon.
Reviewer: meko1975 Signed [Report This]Date: December 03 2011 04:34 am
Why did Amaris invite that woman to her wedding? After Mrs. Wilmington's reaction when she introduced her to Julian you would think that she would know that she was worthy of the invite. Why is Selah acting like she doesn't want to marry Joseph? You will change your tune when you get home and find that your house has been burgularized. The woman is trying to sabotage her happiness. Brenda is chapter is awesome as usual!!!!
Author's Response:
Frances Wilmington had done a lot for Amaris when she was growing up. She had been a good mentor. Amaris had no idea that she felt that way about white people. She never dreamed that the woman would come and start a fight with her mother. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: December 03 2011 04:24 am
What an a$$. He needs to leave Seleah and her son alone. Why steal from them and now he's jealous about Joseph! Seleah may not be able to handle Darrell! Terrific job on this chapter.
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed
[Report This]Date: December 02 2011 10:03 pm
This chapter saddened and angered me...it angers me to no end that TRIFLING guys like Darrell exist.
Author's Response:
Don't worry. Darrell is gonna get his!
Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed [Report This]Date: December 01 2011 09:09 pm
That bra thing was embarrassing! I can't believe Joseph insisted she take her shirt off! I will say that GOOD bras can be EXPENSIVE. Lol. I love Joseph so much. He really is a good man. I can't wait to see their relationship progress...even further.
Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed [Report This]Date: December 01 2011 08:09 pm
im loving these two so far!!! what an original idea brenda! cant wait to see what happens next!
Reviewer: brownskingurl Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 01 2011 12:31 pm
Parts of this chapter was heartbreaking! I actually shed a a tear or two...I'm catching up and I must say that I am really enjoying the way you are telling this story.
Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed [Report This]Date: December 01 2011 10:42 am
C-I-L-L Darrell!!! That punk ass mf is sponging off his mom, having sex with woman with no regard for the possiblity of creating a child. He doesn't care, as he can't take care of the said children anyway!! He stole from his from own son, what an ahole!!! I want something bad to happen to him!! Thank you Brenda!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: November 30 2011 04:06 am
WOW, lol its about time Amaris gave her cookies up to Julian. That was a hot chapter! I feel bad for Tam though, I hope things get better for her and Daniel.
Lovely chapter Brenda! :)
I need to catch up, I feel like I'm missing out lol
Reviewer: Nsablo Signed [Report This]Date: November 29 2011 06:49 pm
Thanks for the great update. Darrell is just messed up stilling from your own child. The sad part is as he was going through her house he was talking about how she had nothing and then he takes the one thing that her children had which was the 360 xbox. What a despicable ass wipe Darrell is. How in the world did Selma get mixed up with such a low life. I am sure he hasn't changed at all.
Patsy and Darrell belong together to crazy demented fools together wreaking havoc.
I hope that the wedding goes well for Amaria and Julian.
Thanks
Author's Response:
Seleah hooked up with Darrell when they were both in high school. Seems like she's the only one that grew up.
thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: November 29 2011 01:02 pm
Wow, Julian have some very positive and supporting brothers doesn't he? *sarcasm* That's a shame, really...what are they trying to prove, well I know what they are trying to prove, but all they are doing is making themselves look like the jerks they are. Their treatment of him is not very far from bullying.
Julian has a lot of anguish inside of him after going through all the trouble of being mistreated by his family and listening to his mother be accused of cheating and doubting he was related to them at all. Can't say I blame him for the way he reacted at the end, but I was proud of him for being the bigger man and doing what was right.
Damn, Amaris at the age of 14 got her very first lesson about sex in the most offending manner. That's just sick, so sick, but it's sad because things happen like that every day in real life. Women bring so many different men around their daughters, sisters, so forth, that bad things tend to happen. Luckily, it didn't reach the crucial level with Amaris, but it was still bad.
Wow...just wow, this story is just too real. The short conversation Amaris had with her sister Jaylyn managed to wrap an entire generation of ignorant people together in a couple of sentences. Jaylyn is what "the man" wants black people to think about themselves. The typical get pregnant, live off of welfare, keep the blacks where they belong in the projects and teach their kids and younger family to grow up thinking that way is a mentality that seriously pisses me off, mostly because this story is universally realistic.
Those words Jaylyn said were also said to me growing up so I can relate to this on a personal level and like Amaris I wanted better for myself and got it. And how ignorant is it to ask a 14yrs old if she's gay just because she's not running around whoring with every guy that smiles at her?
I love the way you set the prologue up, showing us the reasons why Amaris is reserved when it comes to sex and Julian is so promiscuous.
Beautifully written, well done, and I'm so glad I finally get a chance to read and review your stories.
Reviewer: katherinemadison Signed
[Report This]Date: November 29 2011 08:24 am
Man that was a great update!!!! I can't believe that no good Darrell stole from his own son.Joseph was right to worry,I just hope when Seleah return with the boys and see that her house was broken in she will pick up and move out of harm way.I love how Julian told Pasty off,but I know we haven't heard the last for her.I'm wondering will she try to do something to stop wedding or since Amaris nor Julian will not have the baby for night will she try to steal her grandchild? And I will so proud of Jamal how he stood up to his no good father.He can teach his father a thing or two about being a man. Great job with this update,I'm really looking forward to the next one.
Author's Response:
Patsy hasn't given up yet. Yes, Darrell is a piece of work. They both are going to get what's coming to them. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: meko1975 Signed [Report This]Date: November 29 2011 06:58 am
Damn low life...what an f'ed up mentality.
Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed [Report This]Date: November 29 2011 03:56 am
He a shady dude to steal from your own dam son how sorry are you. I hope she listen to Joe because darrell is no good and have feeling something bad going down. thank for the update
Author's Response:
Darrell is just no good. He's going to get his real soon. thanks for the review.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: November 29 2011 03:36 am
love the update
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: November 29 2011 03:20 am
darell is a loser. the end.
Reviewer: grumpirah Signed [Report This]Date: November 29 2011 02:33 am
Oh Lord, ghetto just can't let people be. smh Hope you update soon so we can see whats what.
Author's Response:
There are always people who want to bring you down. Darrell is jealous that Seleah has moved on and isn't interested in him. she's left that 'high schhol' stuff behind her. Darrell needs to grow up!
Reviewer: blkamazon Signed [Report This]Date: November 29 2011 01:32 am
It appears that the restraining order is going to have to come sooner then later for Seleah on Darrell. How he figure he going to force Jamal to learn something he does not want to and you would think that you would want your child to be better then you but that is ignorance for you and that mofo is past ignorant he just down right dumb as hell.
How you going to break into someone's house and get upset because they have moved on and trying to live their life the best way they can you aint about nothing and have never tried to be about anything. All that has matter to Darrell is making babies that he does not take care and slanging dong....just ridiculous then he steals from his son that he so much want to teach how to survive in the streets.
I want to be written in the story just to take a bat after his trifling behind and send him back to his home behind prison but then I think he will be just getting a free meal ticket and living off the tax payers.
Patsy I am so tired of her behind too. I hope she does not comeback and when Justine get's older he just has a talk with her about why she was not allowed to be part of her life...teach her about racist pigs such as Patsy and be cautious of them but to over look their ignorance.
Thank you Ms. B as always for a wonderful update.
Happy writing.
Author's Response:
LOL Kat: You want to be written in the story so you can beat his ass huh? Well that's a thought! LOL
Yes, the world is full of ignorant people and Mr. Darrell is one of them. More to come soon!
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: November 29 2011 01:27 am
Thanks so much for the update!!! I must say I hate Darrell is so dispicable and I wish you had use a different person to characterize him then "Naveen" from "Lost" because he is one of my favorite actors and he is so fine!
Author's Response:
sorry about that. Think of it as Naveen's evil twin. LOL. I had to find someone to match the description I gave and his photo was the closest I could find. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: BossLady Signed [Report This]Date: November 29 2011 12:44 am
There is also someone out there who want to knock you down, when you're trying to do right. I hate to think what Darrel going look like when Joseph get a hole of him.
Author's Response:
Trouble is always lurking around. Darrell will get his. More to come soon.
Reviewer: Cherry Signed [Report This]Date: November 29 2011 12:23 am
Another long drought? Please write another chapter.
Author's Response:
HOpefully not...I'm juggling these stories plus the holidays have not made it easy.
Reviewer: Novak Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 16 2011 02:16 am
HOT...nuf said!
Date: November 12 2011 04:40 pm