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Title: Chapter 25 A Lesson in Intimacy

Love it!!

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 28 2011 08:22 am
Title: Chapter 25 A Lesson in Intimacy

“Intimacy…Into-me-see” he said. “That’s what intimacy is…seeing into the other person…seeing the parts they try to hide…seeing the real you.”

Never heard anyon eput this quite like this well said and a eye opener.  Great job enjoyed the update.

 Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 28 2011 04:11 am
Title: Chapter 25 A Lesson in Intimacy

Awesome chapter as usual!!

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Date: October 28 2011 03:50 am
Title: Chapter 25 A Lesson in Intimacy

I'm glad that he brought her some clothes and things that she needs. She put her kids need first witch a good parent does but sometimes you just have to spoil your self every now and then. I like joe he cool cat thank for the update.

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Date: October 28 2011 03:47 am
Title: Chapter 25 A Lesson in Intimacy

this whole family needs some prayer. too many emotional blows striking at once.

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Date: October 28 2011 03:27 am
Title: Chapter 25 A Lesson in Intimacy

Brenda thanks for a great update.  I was LOL at Joseph and the way he dealt with Seleah's old boyfriend and her son, Jamal.  Tre is a little sneaky. I hope that Amaris and Julian will be able to survive adding an unexpected new additio to their relationship.  Not looking to well for them right now.  Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 28 2011 03:20 am
Title: Chapter 25 A Lesson in Intimacy

Wow another lovely chapter. Joseph and seleah are just wonderful he is such a great role model for her and her sons he shows them that love and care does exist..oh my amaris and julian life together just became a little more complicated with a new baby waiting to see what happens next with those two!!! Thank you for update.......

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Date: October 28 2011 02:40 am
Title: Chapter 25 A Lesson in Intimacy

That was sweet, Joseph is the man!!  Amaris, Julian and Justine are a beautiful family!!!  I am so glad that Joseph showed to help Seleah get rid of that fool Terrance.  I love Joseph's intereaction with Tre and Jamal, they need Joseph and Joseph needs them.  Maybe Seleah can pop out a couple more children!!! Thanks for the new chapter, Brenda!!!

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Date: October 28 2011 02:40 am
Title: Chapter 25 A Lesson in Intimacy

lol...I really enjoy your chapters

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Date: October 28 2011 02:33 am
Title: Chapter 24 My Past, Your Past, Our Future II

Great update. I hope the old bat gets hers. Glad Kayla is gone.

 Reviewer: DRESSA Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 23 2011 12:52 am
Title: Chapter 24 My Past, Your Past, Our Future II

Great Chap! Need More!

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Date: October 20 2011 02:07 pm
Title: Chapter 24 My Past, Your Past, Our Future II

It's better for Julian to raise his own daughter. Kayla and her mom has racial prejudices and they would have passed own to Justine.

 

 Reviewer: Andreas Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 18 2011 10:57 pm
Title: Chapter 24 My Past, Your Past, Our Future II

I glad that Amaris was able to talk to Tam about her problems. Sometimes it help venting or talking to somone else.

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Date: October 18 2011 10:54 pm
Title: Chapter 24 My Past, Your Past, Our Future II

Good luck with that, Patsy! Patsy has no idea what she's up against with both Julian and Amaris. As usual a lot of drama in this chapter but it was fun reading it.

 Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 18 2011 04:44 pm
Title: Chapter 24 My Past, Your Past, Our Future II

Call me cold-blooded, but good riddance. Too bad Moms doesn't drop dead. Now we see where Kayla got her scary craziness from.

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Date: October 18 2011 09:50 am
Title: Chapter 24 My Past, Your Past, Our Future II

absolutely love this story

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Date: October 18 2011 07:13 am
Title: Chapter 24 My Past, Your Past, Our Future II

Wow, no wonder Kayla was screwed up!! Her mom is a mess!! I hope she shows her evil hand and trip up herself, the schemer!! Glad Amaris sticking with Julian.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 18 2011 06:48 am
Title: Chapter 24 My Past, Your Past, Our Future II

wow the crazy gene is UBER strong in that family. geez.

 Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 18 2011 05:34 am
Title: Chapter 24 My Past, Your Past, Our Future II

Oh that was a sad update :( i didn't like Kayla but I didn't wanted her to die. I love how supported Amaris is being,if she and Julian can stand through this they will be able to get through anything.Please don't let Julian fall for Pasty bull crap let him be able to see clear through her.Great update looking forward for the next one.

 Reviewer: meko1975 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 18 2011 05:19 am
Title: Chapter 24 My Past, Your Past, Our Future II

Wow talked about crazy kalya dies julian becomes a father and kalya mom is a huge nut case. thank for the update

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 18 2011 04:57 am
Title: Chapter 22 My Past, Your Past, Our Future

LOL omg Tam mom is a trip and daniel acting they way he did lol to funny. So julian got a crazy ex saying that baby is his omg crazy woonder what going to happen next thank for the update.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 18 2011 04:49 am
Title: Chapter 24 My Past, Your Past, Our Future II

Oh mercy! I can't believe Julian has a baby now. smh Maybe the DNA test will come back saying something different.

 Reviewer: blkamazon Signed [Report This]
Date: October 18 2011 04:11 am
Title: Chapter 24 My Past, Your Past, Our Future II

Great update, I hope the baby is not Juliians, then they can be free of the racist idiots!

 Reviewer: jovanfan4evr Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 18 2011 03:55 am
Title: Chapter 24 My Past, Your Past, Our Future II

Talk about reaping what you sow! Kayla tried to be vindictive and now she's dead. Looks like Amaris won't have to deal with baby mama drama. Kayla's mother seemed to be much like her daughter.

I loved the update! Keep them coming.

 Reviewer: cookicrumb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 18 2011 03:26 am
Title: Chapter 24 My Past, Your Past, Our Future II

No wonder Kayla was bat crazy that apple didn't fall too far from the tree.!! Karma is a bitch, Kayla got exactly what she deserved.  Now I want her momma to feel the pain for messing with Julian, Amaris, and Justine.    I am glad that he is still going to do the DNA test.  This was awesome!!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: October 18 2011 02:51 am


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