I am all caught up. This is such a wonderful story I really enjoyed reading it. Everytime I thought I knew what was going to happy they are twist and bend along the way but that makes it a great story to me.
Reviewer: Cherry Signed
[Report This]Date: October 18 2011 01:21 am
God don't like ugly! Kayla paid the ultimate price too bad for her baby.
Reviewer: 100%fan Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 18 2011 12:54 am
Goodness gracious. This update was definitely interesting.
I know it's bad what happened to Kayla but it couldn't have happened to a nicer person, I know that was wrong of me to say but God don't like ugly and the ring of Hell she lives in may not be too bad maybe.
I am glad that Amaris is there for Jules you did say she wasn't going anywhere and you were so right plus I didn't think she was anyway (going anywhere that is)
The brothers named their daughter after each other that is so sweet. Now Amaris can still name their son after Jules.
I hated that daddy Amar had to go back home but they will be in touch and I hope either or can visit each other again her in Africa to see and meet the rest of her family and him and the boys to America to see her and her family and who knows the flame may kick back up between him and Paula....I can hope can't I? LOL!!
Well they say the apple doesn't fall too far from the tree and I have to say they are correct but Patsy doesn't seem as bad as Kayla now Kayla was one that flew over the coo-coo nest. Mother and daughter were estranged for a year I wonder what that was all about. I hope Patsy get's herself in check b4 she truly loses her priviledges to see Justine cause Jules has already said she has burned the bridge with him with what she said about Amaris.
Thank you so very much for updating. Until next time
Happy writing
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: October 17 2011 11:55 pm
My goodness, no wonder Kayla was so crazy she got it honestly from her mama. Damn, that woman is wicked. I was stunned that Kayla's planned backfired on her and now she is dead. Amaris is an amazing woman to stand by her man when all of these evil people keep insulting her. I can't wait to read about their wedding.Thanks for a great update.
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: October 17 2011 11:21 pm
so not rite all that evil plotting didn't even count now she's dead pitty really now let's pray her mom don't fall in same footsteps Julian& Ameris is ready 2 involve her not noing her end goal. next
Reviewer: kvgurl Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 17 2011 10:11 pm
OMG! Kayla + Patsy = Insane!!!
I'm glad that julian named the baby after his brother, such a cute gesture.
update soon!
Reviewer: vivian Anonymous
[Report This]Date: October 17 2011 10:01 pm
uh after kayla passed away the woman that she learned all her digusting and rascist way from come from under a rock uh just sicking hope julian and amaris hand this witch her ass and run her back under the rock her snake ass slithered from i know julian and amaaris will protect little justine at all cost!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Thank You for this awesome update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed [Report This]Date: October 17 2011 09:58 pm
Loved the update. Hope Amaris gives Jullian a chance to work things out with that crazy ex. If she loves him she'll be there twith him through this difficult time. Hope the truth comes out about that crazy ex!! What a scammer!! Glad Tam's mom got it together in the end.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: October 12 2011 06:29 am
Another great chapter can't wait to found out what will happen with Jillian and Amari. I hope she stand beside him and don't let that Kayla woman come between them. Oh I was so happy that Amaris was able to meet her father.Great job once again.
Reviewer: meko1975 Signed [Report This]Date: October 11 2011 03:49 am
So glad Amaris got 2 meet her real dad plus him discuss the significance of her bracelet that she has three brothers & a paper with her liniage on it that was sweet.What the heck that psycho is bk & pregnant she's sick 4 what she did. Finally they Daniel meets Tam mom & he C Y she was holdin off takin him 2 meet her but I 'm glad she changed her tune
Reviewer: kvgurl Signed [Report This]Date: October 10 2011 05:02 pm
Thanks for a great update. The meeting between Amaris and her dad Amar was so great and then to find out later that her fiancee has another woman pregnant was horrible. I hope that Amaris remembers that if she loves Julian then she will stand beside her man because that heifer got pregnant before she even knew Julian. I hope that Julian will find out what that crazy woman did but the baby is still his.
Tam's mother is a hawt ticket. I was LOL at her antics and I was LOL at Daniel and how he dealt with his future mother in law. wouldn't be nice if Daniel's dad and Tam's mother became an item..probably not, but it would be interesting. Thanks again for a great update.
Author's Response:
Amaris is still in shock. Don't worry she will come around.
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: October 10 2011 06:31 am
OMG! This was a wonderful update! This story is wonderful so you should already know that the chapter was. I just had to state it again.
Amaris met her father I wish there was some way he and her mother could be together again since he is no longer married and Paula is technically his first wife and out of all the men that she was and has been with she was in love with Amar but due to circumstances he had to leave the county because he couldn't afford to stay and he had family back home. Ameris has two sisters and 3 brothers way to go chica. She just needs to met her brothers and the rest of her family now. I am happy that Amar does not have any negativity towards Amaris marrying Julian the visit turned out well and he is there for a couple of more days for them to bond woohooooo!
Julian is about to be a father by a psycho DAMN! DAMN! DAMN! Can you say the drama just keeps coming. That heffa saved the condoms then artificually inseminated herself. WTF!? I keep hoping and praying that by some chance this is a fluke that it's not Julian's that this can't be happening but unless sista girl has been bumping uglies and fluffing the sheets with someone else it's a possiblity that it is his. I want her ass to go play in traffic and get hit by a bus...not while pregnant of course cause it's not the babies fault his mama is a looney but after she has the baby. DAMN!
Okay, Ms. Debra is truly coo-coo for cocoa puffs, but Tam is her only child and she apparently loves her with all her heart she just has been blinded by sterotype and is/was feeding off that but she should give Daniel credit he can hang in there with her with his smart mouth not many can hang in there he passed the test in that regard right along with Jules when he met Amaris family. So I hope she keeps her word and let Daniel grown on her she maybe pleasantly surprised and Daniel is not going anywhere you see he fought death just to keep his promise of not leaving Tam I know she doesn't think she will be able to get rid of him. LOL! That man is hooked no ifs ands about it. He even was ready to let his father hit the streets but like Tam's mom he changed his tune too.
Ms. Brenda you do marvelous work. Keep up the great work and thank you for sharing.
Happy writing. Hope to see more soon.
Author's Response:
Hey Kat: Amaris is in shock, but she'll recover. She loves Julian. Tam's mother has her own issues, but she does love her daughter. I am sure that Daniel will win her over. More to come soon!
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: October 10 2011 06:31 am
Daniel is crazy and hilarious!!! As for this baby mama drama with Julian ....smh
Author's Response:
Daniel is crazy. He's being a smartass like Debra says. LOL. More is coming...
Reviewer: blkamazon Signed [Report This]Date: October 10 2011 06:25 am
Tam's momma got some issues, not wonder she jumped from man to man that is what she knew. Debra wanted her daughter to remain a ho just like her. Kayla is certifiable, how sick do you have to save a man's condom and use a sypring to impregnate yourself? Amaris Julian is the man that you loved and he deserves your support in this situation. The man was honest with and you are running away. I am not liking Amaris very much right. Julian has treated you with utmost respect and you turn your back on him in his time of need. His relationship Kayla was over before he meet you, and he never treated you like a peace of ass. So what is dealio Amaris? Get it together, Amaris and stand by your man!!
Author's Response:
Amaris is still reeling from the meeting with her father and now this situation with Julian has made her head hurt. She'll be alright. She loves her man and after she thinks it over she's going to be by his side thru this. Tam's mom, well she had in her mind the kind of man she wanted for her daughter, but we can't pick for our children now can we? More to come soon!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: October 10 2011 05:29 am
I'm glad that Amaris met her dad. I know that she's hurt about Julian impending fatherhood with another woman, but she needs to assess the situation before breaking her engagement.
Tamera's mom seems to her own issues.
Author's Response:
Amaris won't leave her man. She's just reeling from all that happened to her in one day. More to come soon!
Reviewer: cookicrumb Signed
[Report This]Date: October 10 2011 05:13 am
Tamera and her mom have a crazy relationship. Kayla is one sick chick. Julian is going to have his hands full dealing with that situation. Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Tam and her mom do have a crazy relationship (don't we all) but they do love each other and she is Debra's only child and Deb doesn't want to be left out of her life. She just wanted Tam to have a tall dark and handsome man. Daniel just didn't fit that discription. Daniel is going to have his hands full dealing with Kayla. More is coming soon.
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: October 10 2011 04:59 am
wow another excellent update but how dare this homewrecking gutter trash kayla show up knocked up with Gosh know who sperm and try to ruin julian and amaris road to marriage but i know julian and amaris strong love will see them through; amaria visit with her farther went beautiful. Daniel meeting with his future mother in law was something i am glad tam got through to her mother about her love for daniel weather she accepted or not whoo absolutly love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Amaris will recover. She just was hit with a lot in one day. More to come soon!
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed [Report This]Date: October 10 2011 04:38 am
Thank you for the update! Who is this Kayla chick??? Amaris should go easy on Julius....granted he doesn't know Kayla is lying, he really loves Amaris and he would do anything for her.
Author's Response:
Kayla was just a girl that Julian was dating on and off before he met Amaris. He was never in love with her and at the beginning of this story he told his secretary that he wouldn't accept any more calls from her because he had broken it off. More to come soon!
Reviewer: MEGAN Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 10 2011 04:26 am
ok Mrs.Branda this story is so amazing I'm so happy that I run across your stories by accident and now I hook what an amazing writing you are. Through your writing you teach us so much about having a relationship what God.So from the bottom of my heart I would like to said thank you for sharing your gift with us.
Reviewer: meko1975 Signed [Report This]Date: October 09 2011 07:12 pm
It's been 3 days. I need my fix.
Reviewer: cookicrumb Signed [Report This]Date: October 08 2011 02:03 am
Loved the update. Glad all seem to be headed in the right direction. Hope Amaris is excited about meeting her dad.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: October 06 2011 06:47 am
Amaris' father is in town. I wonder if the reunion (or 1st meeting because they have never met) will be all that Julian hoped it will be.
Reviewer: Serena Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 05 2011 07:03 pm
So Seleah and Joseph are going to be platonic in their relationship. I wonder how that will work?
Reviewer: Novak Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 05 2011 07:00 pm
I missed a couple of chapters and I needed to catch up. A lot happen in those chapters. What a way for Dem to find out about his real father. Going to church seem to help Amaris and Seleah too! It's great that Joseph wants to wait and become friends with Seleah first. NIce work with this story!
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: October 05 2011 04:02 pm
What an exciting turn of events!
Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed [Report This]Date: October 05 2011 11:06 am