Title: Chapter 33 Dreams Can Come True

i want to hear about the other sister too! I no she is doing well and doesnt have too many problems and is with a black man but you really dont say very much about her at all.

Reviewer: sweetrst1 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 29 2012 05:31 pm

Title: Chapter 33 Dreams Can Come True

Yay, so happy for Joseph and Seleah...oh, how I love how truly "innocent" Seleah is...it's like she experiencing a sexual reawakening...something she should have had a long time ago...but after much strife and heartache...she's finally found the one she's meant to be with...and they can explore each other together...in love and with love...I wish Dem would just be happy for his mother...I know he's hurt and he has a right to feel a bit betrayed...but his mother did what she did out of survival and to try to give him as much "nolmalcy" as she could...and Gerald is his father in every way that matters...a true gentleman who didn't take advantage of a young, vulnerable girl but be her friend when she needed one...guess this is something he will have work out for himself...I also think that knowing he was a product of rape has made him distrustful of men who supposed to be father figures in his life...

Amaris...give it up...give that man another child...yes, they both love Justine and nothing will ever change Justine being their daughter...but Julian wants that connection with his wife that only a child of their own will bring them...

Loved the update...keep 'em comin'...

Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 29 2012 12:40 am

Title: Chapter 33 Dreams Can Come True

I wonder who's going to end up pregnant first Seleah or Amaris

Reviewer: keikei2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 28 2012 04:16 pm

Title: The Cast

I loved it! SO glad Seleah and Joesph are married! Great Chapter. :)

Reviewer: Dreamingofalifetime Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 28 2012 02:21 pm

Title: Chapter 33 Dreams Can Come True

awwwww that was lovely!! im sooo glad theyre finally married. i see the sisters being pregnant together hee hee!

Reviewer: brownskingurl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 28 2012 02:15 pm

Title: Chapter 33 Dreams Can Come True

bit disappointed at the lack of mr chow mein (Daniel, his wife and baby), but overall enjoyed the progression in seleah and joseph's relationship, a baby girl would be cute, its just a shame amaris feels she cant have and child with julian because of justine. oh well great chapter, cant wait to read more.

Reviewer: chocolateorange Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 28 2012 02:14 pm

Title: Chapter 33 Dreams Can Come True

Thanks for the update. I love the two couples.

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 28 2012 11:04 am

Title: Chapter 33 Dreams Can Come True

So glad this story is back.

Love Seleah and Joseph so much. Can't wait for more updates on this story.

Reviewer: valis202 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 28 2012 09:17 am

Title: Chapter 33 Dreams Can Come True

Dem is tripping, your momma is happy and safe for the first time in your life.  Be happy for her, you are not losing her but you are gaining a man who would love to be a father to you or at least a good friend.  Give Joseph a chance Dem!!

Brenda thank you so much for another wonderful update to this story.  Seleah is enjoying her sexual awakening and it will only get better for her.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 28 2012 08:02 am

Title: Chapter 33 Dreams Can Come True

welcome back! i missed this story!

Reviewer: g Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 28 2012 05:44 am

Title: Chapter 33 Dreams Can Come True

I'm happy for Seleah and Joseph!

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 28 2012 04:28 am

Title: Chapter 33 Dreams Can Come True

Well worth the wait i am so happy that selena and joseph is finally married the wedding was awesome and loved that gerald gave seleah away... wow dem has sooo much bitterness its just sad but i am happy that he came to his mother wedding.  the honeymoon was just beautiful  joseph put it down for his lady love even though its been awhile for him and i see julian is not half stepping when it comes to his wife amaris either whooo Thank you for the wonderful update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 28 2012 03:25 am

Title: Chapter 33 Dreams Can Come True

Very sexy chapter. Both couples are happy and in love!

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 28 2012 03:23 am

Title: Chapter 33 Dreams Can Come True

Glad she is finally happy.

Reviewer: nightseer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 28 2012 03:15 am

Title: Chapter 33 Dreams Can Come True

They got married about time lol she happy with someone who lover her and treat her right witch is a very good thing. I hope they have plenty of babies. Thank for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 28 2012 02:50 am

Title: Chapter 33 Dreams Can Come True

Brenda, thanks for the update.  I haven't read this yet but just wanted to drop a line.  When I read on my Kindle I am not able to leave a message.  

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 28 2012 02:29 am

Title: The Cast

Missing this story, I hope that there will B an update soon!

Reviewer: Skip2641 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09 2012 03:48 pm

Title: Chapter 32 Tell Me This Is A Dream

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LOL.  I know...Iknow...I only have a 1/2 written chapter.  Trying to get the muse to cooperate....

Reviewer: Jamilla Signed [Report This]
Date: March 29 2012 10:11 pm

Title: Chapter 31 Changes and Choices

Wow, Darryl has no sense at all.  SMH.. Great chapter!!

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Date: March 25 2012 12:29 am

Title: Chapter 28 Reconciliation and Altercation

Wow, this was hilarious. The woman who claimed to care the most for Amaris, was the one who made a scene. She was crazy!!

Reviewer: madameblaque Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 24 2012 11:56 pm

Title: Chapter 32 Tell Me This Is A Dream

The ring is beautiful just right for Leah.  I want her to gain more confidence in herself and know that she is worth everything she is getting and more.  She sacrificed much and got her hussle on to survive. Joe has broken down the barrier around her heart this is her man and she deserves him.

I agree with Julian she doesn't have small children or a baby right now (that is until she has a baby for Joe) so she should try to take classes at the community college.  I was thinking the same thing.

Loved the chapter glad I was finally able to catch up been preoccupied as of late.

Thank you....Mpre please.

Happy writing.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 09 2012 11:35 pm

Title: Chapter 32 Tell Me This Is A Dream

Seleah has come a long way. Looking forward to them getting married.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 06 2012 04:38 am

Title: Chapter 32 Tell Me This Is A Dream

OMG!!!! LOVE!! LOVE!! LOVE!!! I'm loving Seleah and Joseph, and Amaris and Julian!! GREAT STUFF!! Update soon I hope!! :) :0

Reviewer: Dreamingofalifetime Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 06 2012 03:30 am

Title: Chapter 32 Tell Me This Is A Dream

Love this story Brenda, and thankd for the update.... Seleah please MARRY Joeseph already, I mean what size BUILDING has to fall on your heade for you to see that the man will have NO REGRETS marrying you.. its ntime to let the PAST GO and more forward, b/c you will NEVER truly be happy if you don't.

looking forward to more.

Reviewer: liberty lady Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 05 2012 09:50 pm

Title: Chapter 32 Tell Me This Is A Dream

Hey awesome story I have really enjoyed reading it so much. Joe is such an amazing man lol and I'm surprised no one has asked but....what do Trey and Jamal look like?

Reviewer: Dee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 05 2012 08:40 pm



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