The ring so nice and they right they need to hurry up and get married so they want feel so bad been all touchy feeling with someone. thank for the update.

Perfect ring for the true Seleah!  Get married already!

Thanks for a great update.  I think that Jo and Seleah need to just get married.  It makes no sense for them to wait.  They love each other.  Thanks

I must admit I am feeling a bit more sympathetic towards Seleah now,  Her her choice to allow her self to raped to save her a Amaris has poisoned her mind against herself.  Seleah has so much self-hate and I want her to become whole and and no one can help her  heal but herself.

Hi, I just wanted to say please publish this story!!!! love the way you put the real life shit happens in it. 

Paula Manning gives me laughs but she's really just Trash and a Slut, the more so for birthing kids and keeping them in a trashy environment.  Amaris was just lucky to have the hand of God on her not to have been raped  by any of the numerous men going through her mothers house and God helped Amaris to raise herself toward a better life.

Now, Paula gives these cheap trinkets to Amaris from her sporadic sexual communication with Amaris father who has never paid child support and evidently never concerned about the child he spermed back in America to even make any visits.

I'm very happy that Daniel has lived thru his near fatal shooting!

I continue to like the choice of cast, what affects me most is that each is realistically representational of their role in this story.

Great upsate!

Good that Julian has faced the sorrows of the past in his family relationship and that mending can be done before its too late.

Amaris is strong, she faced the racial intensity against her from a few family members and did not fold, also Loved Julian's unquestionable love for Amaris despite his mother's opposition.

That's what I love about this story, how it continues to speak in life's realities.

Also, hope Julian can help the poverty of his family he was not previously aware of but now wants very much to help them.

OMG!!!  Those were beautiful love making scenes of both couples!

I absolutely ADORED the love poems that Tamera and Daniel said to each other before their final consummation.  Tamera's recitation of the Song of Solomon to Daniel was so beautifully appropriate.  And his answering poem to her so lovingly possessive.

Loved the HOT SEX of Amaris and Julian's love making; and like Ameris's sisters have always told her, she did have a hidden freak in her and she really laid it on Julian.  Glad she did because he earned it after adoring her body all night yet he still has not required intercourse from her, he's respecting her innocence, taking it slow!  YAYY! Julian!

And Hooray Amaris you are delightfully learning that sexuality can be really nice with the right MAN!  Many of us ladies never get that true gift!!

Great writing especially the juxtaposition of the poetic lovemaking with the more physical of Amaris and Julian.  Although, immediately after their dinner but before their love making when Julian told Amaris of his love for chocolate especially her chocolate and dropped to his knees kissing her sex through her dress before pulling her panties down; that really touched me!!!

AHhh!  I really like Daniel Wong; he is truly THE MAN!  He wants Tamera sexually but is determined to also have her heart and that she truly want him as a person, not just sexually.  Daniel is very wise in knowing that relationships and eventually love can only truly be acquired by temporarily foregoing immediate sex and building friendship first.  Unless its some kinda Soulmate at first sight and that's rare to happen!

Yayyy!! Daniel!

DAMN!  That was a REALLY HOT! date with Julian and Amaris!  Amaris got herself a Real stud, he sure don't have to be real tall to qualify!  Julian laid some love making on her with just a Kiss and slight finger fuckin!  Had Amaris in a total wet swoon!  YAYYyy!! Julian!!

I'm sure enjoying this story ever since from it's beginning and it just keeps getting better!

I like Amaris, i'm so proud of her tenacity to work her way out of the projects and the immoral life of her family and i also credit her with still loving them and respecting them without real condemnation.  Also, credit mom and sisters for always protecting Amaris virginal innocence regardless of their promiscuousness, especially mom's.

I like Julian, he's a good boy, remarkable that he gives up one of his kidney's to save the life of a father whose never loved him and always showed he did not.  But, Julian, God Bless him!... has still been able to sustain his self esteem even with the constant bullying of his jock superior brothers that he is inferior due to his comparably small size.  That takes a lot of character.  Very happy for him to be so successful in college academia, at least he has that that he is proud of and which he is happy in.

Hee-Hee Darrell got the break stole off his fool behind and it was so good, but I have to agree with Seleah slippery eels have a way of slithering out of a situation.  She still needs to file that restraining order there and in Fredericksburg. Darrell is going to be angrier then ever when he wakes up in jail.

He has some nerve though trying to make claim on a son he didn't want anything to do with and a woman that he didn't want until he found out she had moved on and didn't want his trifling ass.  I think it is going to take Darrell going to hell to get him off of Seleah's scent before it's all over.

Great updat as always.  Thank you for sharing.

Happy writing!